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Posted: 19 years ago
Guys it's my last part 😭 i hope you all enjoy it.. thanks so much for all your sweet comments...

LAST PART!

The plan was set…everyone knew what they were doing
The 2 cars full of the Walia members drove up to the street by the mandir in hopes of Roshini not seeing them.

Jai got out and prepared to leave by himself to meet Roshini

Bani: Jai….

Jai sees the tears in Bani's eyes and walks towards her and wipes them for her with his gentle hands.😭

Jai: Bani please mat ro.. We will get our Dhruv back.. There is nothing in this world that I love more than you and my child.. Bani tumne mujhe sab kuch diya… now it's time that I get our Dhruv back… aur ye Roshini kuch bhi nahin kar sakti … her evil is nothing compared to our Love!. 😳

Jai still had his hand placed on either side of her face. Hearing Jai's last line made Bani cry even more…😭

Bani: Jai I won't be able to live without you or Dhruv.. Please be careful. Roshini kuch bhi kar sakti hai😡

Jai: Bani fikar mat karo…

With those words he kissed Bani on the forehead…[:$}

Jai: Bani tum yaad rakh na… hum dono ko koi bhi nahin judha kar sakta ..not even Roshini…

Bani felt Jai's lips on her forehead and wished that it wouldn't be the last time. Roshini was so evil…one false move in their plan could cause Roshini to do anything..

Jai started walking towards the car….

Bani: Jai tumhe laut na pade ga

Jai turned around. He stared at his beautiful wife with great intensity… He then turned around and sat in his car and drove to the mandir

Bani closed her eyes and cried some more.. Aditya went and consoled her…

Aditya: Bani now its time for you to get strong…we need to help Jai out…. We must get Dhruv

Bani stared at Aditya and nodded her head
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Jai's car pulled up to the mandir… The mandir was quiet… no one seemed to be around.. Jai knew immediately that Roshini must have kicked them all out…

Jai proceeded up the holy stairs.. He reached the top to see Roshini holding Dhruv standing infront of the idols… Roshini was all dressed up as a bride… She also had the pandit set everything up.

Roshini: Jai tum agaye… How do I look

Jai did not even look at her.. His eyes went straight to Dhruv.. He smiled seeing that Dhruv was perfect… Dhruv cried and wanted to be with his dad

Jai: Roshini./.. Dhruv mujhe de do

Roshini: Jai… all in time! Humari shaadi hai aaj.. and you didn't even say how I look (she turled for him, while holding Dhruv)

Jai: please Roshini.. Dhruv ko chakar a jaye ga

Roshini gave a evil pout to Dhruv: ALL about Dhruv! Lets go Jai

Roshini grabbed Jai and headed towards the fire…

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Bani, Aditya, Ranveer and Sahil made their way at the back of the mandir… Bani saw that Roshini had grabbed Jai… her eyes fell on Dhruv and her heart filled up with tears…

Bani: Dhruv!

Aditya: Bani…shhh… Roshini must not know yet

Roshini: Jai tumne kuch suna!

Jai knew it was Bani as he had caught a glimpse of them at the corner

Jai: ahem… nahin Roshini! Lets get this thing over with….

As Roshini sat down…Jai noticed that Roshini had a gun hidden away within her bridal wear\.
Roshini noticed the shock look on Jai's face and realized what he had seen

Roshini: Arre..Jai… sweetie this is not for you… You really thought that Bani wouldn't come?… I know you divorced her but you know how she has always come between us… I couldn't risk it this time… this is for our Protection

Jai knew that Roshini was crazy…. But didn't think that Roshini would carry a gun.. what if something happens to Dhruv…
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Bani: Aditya uncle… I can't take it anymore.. Roshini can't do this… I can't go with our plan.. we need to get my husband and my child out of there now!

Before Aditya, or anyone else could stop her.. She ran right infront of the temple while Jai and Roshini were ready to take the 7 rounds…😲

Bani: Rookh jao Roshini!

Roshini and Jai stared at Bani in shock….😲

Roshini grabbed Dhruv who was now crying bad to be with his mother who he just saw…

Roshini: Jai mane tume kaha tha. Na… Look Bani is here! Aao Bani… come witness the wedding that should have taken place if you hadn't entered… You (as Roshini points at Bani with the tip of the gun) … you are the reason for all this… Jai loved me and I almost had him… but NO you took him away and had this child with him..,.

Roshini stares at Dhruv… and moves back towards the idol… at this point Bani stands right infront of Jai, Roshini and Dhruv…Roshini now points the gun at Bani

Roshini: Bani take one last look… This is the family that was meant to be … Tum to kuch bhi nahin ho…sirf ek problem.. which I'm about to eliminate from My and my husband to be's life….

Roshini preps her gun and is about to pull the trigger when Jai pushes Roshini to the side..causing Roshini to throw the gun and Dhruv.. 😲

Jai manages to get Dhruv and roll down away from Roshini! Bani on the other hand Runs and gets the gun that had fallen closer to her…

Roshini looks shocked.. her plan was now ruined… She now stands infront of Bani and gun alone…she moves away from the mandir walking backwards as Bani, now in revenge mode, walks towards Roshini holding the gun straight at Roshini😈

Roshini: Look Bani!

Bani: ENOUGH ROSHINI! You had your fun and play. How dare you even try to take my family away from me! Who or what give you that right! Jai is my Husband.. the man I love… Dhruv is my child… the child that was conceived from Jai and my love! … Roshini you don't even enter the picture👏 👍🏼

Roshini still continued to walk backwards. She was scared out of her wits.. now sweating like a 🐷 …. Not realizing that she was heading for the edge of the cliff..

Bani contined to walk.. not leaving her sight from Roshini.

Bani: Ye yaad rakna Roshini.. never ever mess with a wife…and more then that never mess with a mother…👍🏼

With those words Bani shot and Roshini's leg.😲👏 Roshini fell immediately and Ranveer, Aditya came and captured Roshini.. Sahil went to see if Jai and Dhruv were okay!

Roshini looked at Bani with the same evil eye.. There was no way that Roshini would change…

Roshini (laughing ): Bani you should have killed me while you had the chance… now you better watch your back forever 😡

Bani: With my husband and child by my side.. I fear not even god.. and you…(laughing).. you are not even competition. 😉

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The scene changes to everyone laughing at the Walia mansion….. Jai and Bani sat by each other holding each other hands. Jigyasa and Aditya were now happy in their marriage and sat by each other right beside Jai and Bani. Sahil and Rano were happy as ever. Jigyasa and never treated Rano better.. Every morning Jigyasa would give Rano a hug and apologize to her. Raashi loved her marriage life now… Ranveer gave her everything she ever wanted, especially her husband's love! Dadi and Masi were sitting in the middle of all the couples who surrounded them in a circle.. Dhruv was also with Dadi and Masi playing with them.. Dhruv was now 1 year old… and had just learned how to walk… it was seeing him fall that made the whole family laugh. Ranvijay had also joined the family for the evening. Jai and Bani had forgiven him as well as Ranveer and Jigyasa…

Jai: Bani tum kush ho!

Bani looks at her husband and gives him a kiss on his cheek: I've never been better! I have you, Dhruv and a wonderful family… I couldn't ask for more!
They both then look back at the Dhruv and smile!
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The scene shifts to Roshini sitting in a corner of a Jail cell wearing a white sari… She rocked back and forth…Jai and Roshini… Jai and Roshini…was all that she repeated… she had gone totally mad and the psychiatrist came in once a week to give her shocks.. but nothing helped…Roshini was a lost cause!



Alrighty there you go! i hope you all enjoyed my ff... i'm sad to end it but i hope you liked the story line.. i lost some readers in the middle but i hope this last part makes up for some boring parts😳
You all have been wonderful and applaude you for sticking around with me..luv you all ..Do leave comments.. hope you like operation Dhruv😛

Vaidahi ❤️
Edited by vaidahip - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

About to read now...wanted to get my spot first lol! i can't believe this is the last part! :(

i'll miss it.

Alright, just read the whole thing. it was awesome. I can't believe your ending it, i wish you would continue writing. you're a great writer.

I'm so happy Jai and Bani got Dhruv back. and everyone is so happy!

awesome job!

Cheers,
Anam

Edited by salmansgirl - 19 years ago
vaidahip thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Vaidehi!!! first of all Jai Ram Ji Ki!!! 😉 And wow that was a wonderful update, it was nice to see a change in Jigyasa!!! Please continue soon, and promise that if u end this ff soon u'll start a new one sooner??? 😉



aww Meera!! Jai Ram ji ki😉... just ended it... will try to start a new one... when have break from school

thanks hun!
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwwwww thank god everone's ok.. awww picture perfect family.. and roshni got wat she desereved.. but yd u finish ur ff so soon????? im a fan :( 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
aaawwww.... u ended on a happy note...I loved it...🤗
hope u write a new one sooooooooooooooooon....
Poo
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Posted: 19 years ago
it was superb ending.too good.loved every bit of it.do write more ff.👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was awesome!! 👏 i enjoyed that!

Roshni deserved that!!! 😆



awesome job!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Didi..

i loved it!! soo much! it was the happiest ending i have read for some time!!

plz do come back writing another ff!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
aww hun that waz just a Fantastic ending i wouldnt have imagined any other way...i just loved dis fanfic of yourz...plz do right another one u have sum talent to write such a great story!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: salmansgirl

About to read now...wanted to get my spot first lol! i can't believe this is the last part! :(

i'll miss it.

Alright, just read the whole thing. it was awesome. I can't believe your ending it, i wish you would continue writing. you're a great writer.

I'm so happy Jai and Bani got Dhruv back. and everyone is so happy!

awesome job!

Cheers,
Anam




awwww your such asweetheart.... thank you soo much.. i willmiss reading your comments😭 had to end it before school starts... but thank you sooo much..

luv vaidahi

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