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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey all!!!

Thank you all for your guesses.. sorry i won't be able to update today... but will soon!

thanks for your encouraging comments they are really very sweet!



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Posted: 19 years ago
YAY!!!Vaidehi!!! I finally caught up!!! I think that this whole ff is going great!! Please continue soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thank you all for your sweet comments! please forgive me on my Hindi!

Part 26

Jai(frantically): Hello!

Roshini(is mental): Jai..tsk…tsk… ye tumhe kya kiya…sab bharbadh kar diya…Why did you save them… Tumhe pata hai ke ye sambh tumhare or mera beech mein ek problem hai.. I have to remove them so that tum, mein or Dhruv ek saath re sakte hai..

Jai: BUS ROSHINI! Abh bhot ho chukka.. Stop this craziness and give Dhruv back to us…

Roshini: Jai why don't you understand…. We are made for each other.. ye Bani kuch be nahin hai… just let her go and come to me and our child

Jai: ROshini tum pagal hogay ho! Dhruv is mine and Bani's child…

Roshini: Enough Jai!! It's because of Dhruv that you too came together right?! Teek hai..mein Dhruv ko tumhari zindigi se remove kar dethi hu… Then you can come to me right?

Jai realizing Roshini was now in the last state of craziness.. decided that he better think of another way of talking to Roshini so that nothing happens to Dhruv!

Jai: Look Roshini! Teek hai.. teek hai..don't do anything to Dhruv… tum chathi thi ke mein Bani ko divorce de du… fine… I will…. It will be done… but where do I meet you…

Roshini: That's better Jai.. I knew you would understand soon…. Hum mandir me milenge… There we will get married… and don't worry sweetie… humara Dhruv will be there as well.

Jai: Tikh hai Roshini.. aaj hi mein Bani ko Divorce do gha… I will meet you tomorrow at the mandir

Roshini: Thank you Jaan…

Roshini kissed the phone and hung up giggling.. Jai on the other hand put the phone down feeling like his whole world had just shattered..

Bani: Jai ye tume kya kiya…

Jai: Bani… ye Roshini pagal hogay hai… woh hamare Dhruv ko…

Bani: Enough Jai.. you made the right decision… hamara Dhruv ko kuch nahin hona chaiye.. Tum Divorce ke paper tayare karo

Jigyasa: Wait Jai Bhaiya….

Everyone was shocked to see Jigyasa….

Jai: Jigyasa we have enough problems… we don't need you!

Jigyasa: Jai bhaiya ..mujhse bhool hu e.. please mujhe maf kar do… I want to help you and Bani bhabi…

Jigyasa walks up to Bani… first time..Bani sensed innocence and sincerity in Jigyasa eyes

Jigyasa: Bani bhabi You saved my Ranveer! Even after what we did too you… Me kitni bhuri hu… please (tears are flowing freely) mujhe maf kar do…

Jigyasa has got an idea as to how to save Dhruv and doesn't wait for Jai or Bani to answer and runs to Jai

Jigyasa: Bhaiya aap ko divorce nahin dena pade gha. We can make fake papers and show that you and Bani Bhabhi got a fake divorce.. I can have the papers made in an hour

Jigyasa had many connections…

Jai: Jigyasa jo tumne kiya hai… it isn't easy to forget or to forgive..it will take time.. lekin to see this change is a start… ye idea will work

Ranveer: Ji mamji this can work I will start on the papers now!
Ranveer left immediately dialing on his phone!

Bani stares at Jai with tears in her eyes

Jai: Bani abh sabh tik ho jaye gha..Dhruv kaal hamare paas ho ga…

The walia family stayed up all night planning how to put their plan in action tomorrow.. This was this one last chance to get Dhruv.. Roshini was becoming more crazy by the day, and more violent as well.. It was no saying what she would do
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The next day..

Hardly anyone got any sleep. Everyone was ready to pull this plan off successfully… Dhruv had to come home today.. OPERATION DHRUV was in action

k everyone i tried some hindi.. i'm not that good but i thought it would put more feeling... i hope you all liked this part.. nothing really eventfull has happened.. but the next part should be the last part.. where Operation DHRUV takes place and ends... its for you to see if it goes successfully or not...

luv you all

vaidahi
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Posted: 19 years ago
vaidahi, that was awesome part. i can't wait to read more.

i'm happy to see a change in jigs!

update soon1

cheers,
anam
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow!! didi!! rocking!! loved it!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
I am glad to see Ranveer and Jigyasa have changed. Now we can send that Roshni to the lonny bin and we'll have no more evil characters. I can't wait for the next part.

-Mindy
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part hun...do continue soon! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
aww thanks a lot guys.. such sweet encouraging comments.. i will post the next and last part of the ff tonight!
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Posted: 19 years ago
it is really good 👏
continue doing it 😊 😊
thanks 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Vaidehi!!! first of all Jai Ram Ji Ki!!! 😉 And wow that was a wonderful update, it was nice to see a change in Jigyasa!!! Please continue soon, and promise that if u end this ff soon u'll start a new one sooner??? 😉

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