7 months later.. LAST PART..PLZ READ!

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Part 2 on page 3
Part 3 on page 8
Part 4 on page 10
Part 5 on page 12
Part 6 on page 14
Part 7 on page 16
Part 8 on page 18
Part 9 on page 20
Part 10 on page 23
Part 11 on page 25
part 12 on page 29
Part 13 and 14 on page 31
Part 15 and 16 on page 33
Part 17 on page 36

Part 18 on page 38

Part 24 on page 50


Hey all, i've read many fanfics, and they all are great. I thought i would try..and well here is my first fanfic.. I hope you all enjoy and please leave comments so that i know to continue or not.

7 months later….

The distance between Jai and Bani had remained the same as it had 7 months ago when the dreaded truth of Bani's mom's death had come out. Bani wanted to leave the Walia mansion because that was what her head told her to do but her heart, on the other hand, said something else. With help of masi, Bani decided to remain at the Walia house, at least until her child was born.

It has been 7 months since Bani's pregnancy and it was time to start planning her baby shower.

Masi: It has been 7 months and now we must plan for Bani's baby shower

Rano: Of course masi. Di deserves the best baby shower and Raashi and I will plan the whole event, right Raashi?

Raashi: Ofcourse, Bani mami deserves the best

Ranveer: Whats going on here? Raashi you will do no such thing. This Bani mami of yours has done enough to bring trouble to this family and there is no way you will help plan this baby shower. Go inside!

Raashi: NO! I've had enough of your demands. If you don't want to participate in the baby shower then please be my guest and don't come, besides I don't believe your bhagwan wants you going to a party anyways (😉😆)

Ranveer: RAASHI!!!!

Everyone was amazed at Raashi's courage and were proud that she finally learned to speak up against her 'saintly' husband.

Ranveer gave his wicked look and walked off as the baby shower preparations continued

Jai is shown in his study busy at work. During these past months Jai has decided to concentrate on his work and making sure that Bani and his child are safe even though Bani kept aloof of him. While busy on the phone planning a meeting his eyes falls on a picture of him and Bani on his desck that Masi had forced them to take. He remembers the beautiful times between him and Bani and his eyes fill up with tears. He knew that what he did with Bani was wrong but now he truly loved her but was scared to tell her because of the anger she had towards him. He thought that with this baby on the way, it would bring him and Bani closer together but nothing of that sort has happened so far. He so desperately wanted to hold Bani and tell her how much he needed her, but he knew that he would have to give her time even if it took his whole life, he would wait for her.

Bani is shown in her room, where she has spent most of the last 7 months. She knew she cared for Mr. Walia but felt that she should have anger towards him because of what he did to her mother. But she couldn't help wonder at times that what a perfect family she, her baby and Mr. Walia would make. She so did love him and these past 7 months has allowed her to think hard about her feelings. As she continue to think about her relationship with Mr. Walia, there was a knock on the door

Bani: Masi, aap?

Masi: how are you Bani? Well I thought I give my dear bahu a present!

Bani: a present?

Masi then pulls out a picture of Jai and places it on the table near Bani's bed.

Masi: Bani this picture is so that my dear grand child turns out to look like his dad, though a little slimmer would be nice (masi laughs)

Just as Masi said this Jai was walking outside and heard what Masi said. Bani saw Jai and starred at him while trying to hold back her tears. Jai stood still and gave his most loving look to Bani and was about to leave when Masi saw him

Masi: Arre Jai beta. Please come inside

Masi knew the problem between Jai and Bani still existed but had made it her goal to clear the misunderstanding between them. She knew that both loved each other a great deal and could not live without each other.

Jai: Nahi masi, you carry on.

Jai didn't want to make Bani feel uncomfortable.

Masi: Please Jai come inside. Did you know that Bani has not been feeling well lately, she really needs you right now

Jai: Kya? Bani are you okay? Whats wrong? Lets go to the Doctor, right now!

Bani: Nahi me tik hu. I'll be fine.

As she said this, she started to walk to the opposite side of the room and all of a sudden she felt a sharp pain in her stomach and fell immediately on the floor screaming.

Jai: BANI!!!



Thank you for reading I hope i didn't bore you guys and that you enjoyed my first attempt at a fanfic😉 sorry my hindi isn't that good but please do comment
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WoW 👏 Great Job yaar!!!! Plz continue soon. Can't wait for the next part. 👏
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Wow!! Gr8 Job!!! Do continue soon, plz!! 👏
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omggggg that was gr88888.. plz cont soon.. luveddddd it
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Originally posted by: Princess

WoW 👏 Great Job yaar!!!! Plz continue soon. Can't wait for the next part. 👏



thank you for the encouragement... it's really sweet of you and i'm glad you enjoyed it!
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i'm sorry you didn't enjoy it.
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keep ur rude comments to ur self.. before this goes a bit too far

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Originally posted by: bollywoodcrazed

Wow!! Gr8 Job!!! Do continue soon, plz!! 👏



thank you soooo much for reading...and thank you for the sweet comment 😃
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Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

omggggg that was gr88888.. plz cont soon.. luveddddd it



thank you soooo much it means alot... and i love your sigs... your awsome at them
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Originally posted by: live_life

nice start pls. continue




thank you so much for reading😃 and your sweet comment

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