mujhe pyar do - part 25 added pg 36 - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
👏 👏 WOW this is so intense
please please continue soon
thanx 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
WOW!! i am speechless!!

keep it up..!! please dont stop ok sweetie..

u make my day as well..!! i am soo lucky to be such a good forum where everyone tries to make the other forum members happy!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 5:

Jai walked out of his bedroom and down the stairs...he had to find bani...he needed her..he was incomplete without her...this house needed her presence...this family needed her guidance and support....where could she have gone? ...Pia's house?...no not there - thats where she said to send Rano...who else does she know in this city?....

he walked through the melee in the foyer and was immediately accosted by various guests...all had one thing to ask.."Where is bani?"...what could he say? that she left him?...no he had to find her...bring her back....

....

Mausi saw the tension in Jai's face that he was trying very hard to hide...something was wrong, but what could it be?...she hadn't seen any sign of bani today either...at first she thought she may have gone to the mandir or out shopping to get things for the wedding celebrations....but now the afternoon was approaching and there was still no sign of her...no phone call...nothing...

She hoped that Jai and Bani didn't have a falling out...she had to find out...

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MAusi approached Jai..."Munna, tum teekh ho na?"

"Ji mausi, I am fine, don't worry about me.."

"Aur Bani?..."

"Ji?...uh...woh bhi teekh hai..." he said looking away...he couldn't face her, he had lied to her...he didn't know how bani was, but was sure she wasn't fine...she was hurting...terribly...and it was all his fault...he didn't want mausi to see the tumultuous emotions conflicting within his eyes...

"Kaha hai woh?"

"Ji..woh ...bas...oose hi lene jaa raha hoon..." he said quietly...then walked away...Kaha ho tum bani?...he thought to himself....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
another FF?

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


read all 5 parts!!!! 👏


please cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
That was awesome tbabhra....great that you started another one! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
thats soooooooo good.plz continue soon. 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
awww poor jai ... hes all lost without bani 😭 and bani well she is lost 😭 but five parts im spoiled ...loved it hun well done 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
awesome dear.. plzz continue cant wait for the next part..
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
omgggggg 😭 😭 then?!?!?!?!?! that was gr8888888.. plz cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i might sound like a broken record hun😉😆..........but honestly hun😊........tht was amazing, FAB n simply SUPERB😳😛👏.......it was too good👏.........n ur wayz w/ words......itz as if i cud actually picture every single scene infront of my eyes😊........luved all the 5 parts hun👏..........n now i want more....hehe😳😳😳........plzzzz continue soon hun😛......it was really beautiful......awww😳 jai is feeling restless w/ out his darling wife......he is so lost......he can't even think straight....he needs his wife's support.......poor jai😭😳........really hun....luved the way u handled the scene👏.........great job.....keep it up hun!!!!!👍🏼

luv ya,

~Lisa~

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