mujhe pyar do - part 25 added pg 36 - Page 5

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PART 6:

Bani had left Walia mansion quietly weeping....she had walked slowly down the long, dark driveway seeing flashes of her life since she had first left Mt. Abu.....so much had happened....she had changed......her sisters had changed.....where could she go now....she felt guilty for not saying bye to Rano or Pia...neither to Adi uncle, Mausi and Dadi...but she knew in her heart that they wouldn't have let her leave...she wouldn't have had the strength to leave....but she had to....

She had suffered too much....she was tired.....her trust in others broken too many times...her character questioned on too many occasions...how much more could she endure?...how many more times would she have to prove herself worthy?...

She refused to dwell on her feelings for Mr Walia...refused to shed anymore tears...tears that noone could see....tears that noone felt pain for....tears that noone wanted to wipe away....why then could she not stop thinking about how Jai had made her feel that night?...how he had kissed these same tears away?...how he...NO...she couldn't...she had to stay strong...she was on her own now....


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Bani walked silently passed the watchman standing at the foot of the driveway....he saluted her....he had liked her and respected her always....

"Ma'am aap..?" he questioned.....but from the look of her, he knew that she was leaving....

he walked up to her and took her bag..

"ITs ok i'll man..."

"No ma'am...its my job"

Bani smiled at him and let him lead her out of the mansion gateway....her heart felt tight....emotions welled inside her chest fighting for release....but bani held them back....not now....she said to herself....not yet....

The watchman didn't need explanations as to why Bani was going....he had seen the way she had been treated....always he felt bad for her....her innocence and naivety always taken advantage of....he didn't like what her sisters had done...what his own bosses had done....but....

"Kaha jaa rahe ho aap?" He asked her quietly...

"Pata nahin.."

"Aap chahe to humare saath humare parivaar ke saath re sagti hai...ghar chotta hai magar..."

"Nahin main waha....Mr Walia...mujhe jaana chaheye..."

He understood...walked her to a taxi and bid her farewell...

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Bani didn't know where to go, but knew that her staying at the watchman's house would hurt Jai's izzat if anyone found out....it would also be easy for them to find her.....

She told the driver to drop her at the mandir....she would leave her destination and journey in the hands of god....her fate....destiny.....

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😭 that was soo sad...hun this part was very well written ...cann't waii to see what happens next

awwwwwwwwwwwww.. then?!?!?! 😭 when is jai gonna find her.... plz cont soon that was gr88 👏

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ots good & sad 😭......... plzz cont soon 😊

oh itss soo good.. but soo sad... 😭

please make it a little happier..

but do continue it...!! 👏 👏

continue soon.. need to see jai and bani unite!!

WOW!!! I just read all 6 now. That is just brilliant. 👏 👏 👏 You're really talented!!! Can't wait 2 read more!!! 😳 😃

PART 7:

Jai walked out of the house...the desolation he felt shone through his eyes...he had tried so hard to hide his feelings...but the pain was becoming unbearable...he had to hold them just a little while longer....just until he cleared the guests that were still entering his house...

he reached his car and slowly started the engine and began to drive out.....he saw the watchman...at first he didn't think...then it hit him...the watchman...he would have seen bani..he would know which way she had gone....he had to ask...he got out of the car and began to walk towards him...

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The watchman watched Mr Walia approach him...he had always respected this man...his employer...always thought him to be fair...but then he saw how bani and her sisters were treated....now he knew that in the eyes of the rich...there was no value for the poor man...

But today something about Mr Walia was different...he seemed lost..desperate...despaired?....

"Hello Mr Walia."

"Hello....kya tumne bani...bani yaha se...tumne bani ko..?"

The watchman saw the pain in Jai's eyes...saw the glimmer of unshed tears reflecting at him....and realised that Mr Walia had true feelings for Mrs Bani Walia...that he had realised his mistake...he wanted to repent...

He had to tell Mr Walia the truth....

"Ji...Bani ma'am kal raat ko yaha se jaa rahi thi...i told her to stay with me and my family but...so...i put her in a taxi....she was quite upset sir..."

"Do you know where she went?"

"I think she said the Mandir...lekin...woh to kal raat tha...ab...i don't know....please sir...aap oose dhoondiye...bring her back..."

"Thank you...tum nahin jante ke tumne aaj.....thank you..." Jai turned away from the watchman and walked briskly towards his car...he wiped his eyes with his sleeve...allowing the tears to fall now...they were tears of regret...anger...joy...and ...hope?...

he jumped in his car and began to drive out of the driveway...hooting his horn to the watchman on his way out...he prayed silently that he could find Bani....that she was still at the Mandir...that God gives him courage to declare his feelings for her....