New man in Bani's Life (END on pg 22)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hello everyone, I really like the show kasam se and also decided to write a fan fic of my own. However, i live in canada and since everyone knows the episodes here are a littel behind so please pardon me if somethings are not matching up. hehe

Here goes:

It is morning time Jai is sitting drinking tea when Jigs comes rushing down

Jigs: Jai bhaiya...Jai bhaiya did you see today's head lines Sid and that mother of his are coming back to india.

Jai: I know jigyasa

Jigs: Jai bhaiya par ab kyun, after papa's will was read and nothing was left to them they left right away. Why are they returning now.

Jai: Jigyasa you are forgetting the only reason papa did not leave them anything is because Papa never got a chance to change his will. Sid has the same right to the walia mansion and company as much as you and me. After all he is our Father's son even if his mother and ours is differnt.

Jigs: Par jai bhaiya...

Jai: Bas Jigyasa I don't want to hear no more. And anyways...

Just then the bell rings. Bani who has just come downstairs goes to open the door.

Bani opens the door to find a young dashing man (Sid) and an older woman (Devyani) standing at the door. Devyani and Sid enter. Devyani and Sid are greeted by Jai and Jigyasa however the tension is evident. They are not welcome Bani brings tea for them and serves Devyani and just as she is turning to serve Sid without realizing that Jai is right behind her she spills the tea on Jai Jacket. Jai is furious.

Jai: Bewakoof ladki...you ruined my favorite jacket

Jai removes the jacket gives it to Bani and walks away. Jigs leaves as well.

Bani turning to Sid and Devayani: I am really sorry about that I will bring you another cup of tea.

Bani is going to the kitchen when Sid comes to her and says, I don't know Jai that well, but I remember when i used to live in this house he sometimes got mad at me too, so don't worry about what happend ok! Sid gives Bani a smile.

Bani with tears in her eyes: Ever since I came to this place you are the first person to say that to me "Don't worry!" Thank you!!

Sid giving his hand to bani: Then friends??

Bani: (Shaking Sid's hand smiling): Yes.

Will the entry of a new man in Bani's life bring out Jai's true feelings for Bani bringing them closer or draw them further apart?? Will Sid only be Bani's friend or something more??

Please let me know what you think!!!! And if you guys and gals want me to continue!!!😃

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Ambrosia thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hmm very nice 👏 . sure u pls continue. I love reading all FFs in this forum.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey buddy! wonderful so far and ofcourse i want u to continue, and sooooon. would love to see JAI JEALOUS 😈 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Yay!!! responses!!! Thanks Apurva and princessjojo. K here is the next part:

Later that evening. Jai has just returned from his office he goes to his room. Bani makes tea and takes to him. Jai is sitting in his library and reading.

Bani: Aapki Chai (holding the tea waiting for him to take it from her hand)

Jai: (without looking up) keep it on the table.

Bani: About your Jacket from this morning I am really...

Jai: (Cuts Bani off and says) I want to be alone right now, you have already ruined my Jacket so no point in saying sorry now. You can leave.

Bani: Who is really hurt, with tears in her eyes leaves the room.

NOTE: the jacket is a lether jacket even tho i know its not really Jai's style but he was wearing it as he was going out to lunch with some young clients.

As Bani is wiping her tears and walking she bumps into Sid.

Sid (smiling): O hi Bani!! What is this TEARS!!! and just this morning i told you not to worry. i have an idea lets go and sit outside in the garden.

They both go outside. Sid sees that Bani still has tear in her eyes.

Sid: I met your sister Rano this morning. She is really sweet. I hope you don't mind but i asked her about how you and Jai bhaiya got married.

Bani looks at Sid a bit shocked thinking does he know everything?

Sid: Rano told me how you lost your father and had to come here. You know I lost my father at an early age too and then my mom took me to America. I know what its like to lose someone close to you. I just want you know that if you ever feel like you want to talk to someone I am here. Ok now too much of this serious talk ....want to hear a joke?

Bani: (looking at Sid thinking have I finally found a friend in the Walia mansion??) Yes!

A few hours later....Jai looks up from his book

Jai (thinking): Was i too harsh on Bani?? She just wanted to say sorry! Why couldn't I just say its ok?? Jai looks at his watch. Its 12:00 (midnight) wher is bani???

Jai goes out looking for Bani. He hears laughter coming fromt he garden. He goes outside to see Bani laughing with Sid. Jai does not like this. He goes to Bani

Jai: Bani do you have any idea what time it is.
(Before Bani or Sid can say anything) Jai grabs Bani's hand and takes her inside. Bani who is shocked to see Mr. Walia care about her says nothing and simply follows him.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow, now this is one fan fiction!! 😳 Ah finally getting to see a jealous jai 😉 😆 thanks so much for this F-F! 😃 Its really good!! 😊
Please continue soon! 😊

Mallika-
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great again. it didnt take much to see mr. khadoos jealous!! fry him further!! 😆 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey princessjojo...don't worry i plan to make him more jealous hehe...take out "badla" for his mistreatment towards bani hehe!! But i got to go sleep now 😕 will update soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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It was awesome 👏 👏 👏
please continue dear😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey continue dear its damn good jai getting jeolous oh man i want to see this live hehehehe

😆 smile4all2u
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏
its a very nice ff
i wish i could jai's face when he gets jealous 😆 make him suffer and he should suprise bani by taking her out somewhere
plz continue soon

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