New man in Bani's Life (END on pg 22) - Page 4

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The car rolls into the driveway.

Jai (whispering to Bani who is still sleeping): Bani...Bani we are here.

Bani wakes up. She is getting out of the car when she notices that Jai is still sitting in the car.

Bani (a bit confused): Mr. Walia aap ghar nahi....

Jai: Nahi Bani I have to go to the office.

Bani goes inside and goes to her and starts unpacking as she is unpacking she remembers how Mr. Walia yelled at her this morning. She suddenly can't hold it back anymore and starts crying. Sid who has also just arrived hom comes to say hi to Bani, when he goes into her room he finds her crying.

Sid (feeling sad for seeing Bani sad): Bani you are crying. Is it because Jai again? I just don't understand Bani why do you stay with Jai all he ever does is make you cry.

Bani (wiping her tears trying to smile): What should I do Sid? I never expected this but I have fallen for Mr. Walia. You and everyone has only seen his anger. But I have seen the lonliness in his eyes. And the more of the lonliness I saw the more I tried to understand him and the more I tried to understand him the more and more I started to fall for him.

Upon hearing this Sid gets tears in his eyes as he is totally heart broken since Sid always thought of Bani as more than a friend. Sid does not want Bani to see this and gets up to leave but Bani has noticed already

Bani: Sid wait! I am really sorry...you are always making me laugh and cheering me up and now I have made you cry too with my talk. You like halwa right? Come lets go to the kitchen and I will make you some halwa.

Both Sid and Bani go to the kitchen. Jai returns he has a box of choclates and a card in his hand. He quickly runs upstairs to give Bani hte choclates he has got for her. When he can't find her their he goes downstairs to find her. When he hears her talking in the kitchen. he goes there and finds Bani and Sid talking and cooking something. Jai suddenly feels really angry and wants to go punch Sid and take Bani upstairs. As he is about to do this...Bani who is unaware of Jai watching them starts laughing really loudly because of something Sid said.

Jai (seeing Bani laughing suddenly stops and starts thinking): I have never been able to make Bani laugh like this then what right do I have to take it away from her. (Jai sadly turns away and goes upstairs).



Bani is in love with Jai and aware of it but when will Jai realize his love for Bani and when will they admit to each other? And what about Sid who always makes Bani laugh?

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who is this sid guy?? neva heard bout him