New man in Bani's Life (END on pg 22) - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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pleaseee continueee it was jusstt fabulouss ur fiction...how jai is jealouss ohh godd..plleasee continnueee .....!!!waitiingg 4 it eagerrlyy!!
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oh plz continue it's gr8 👏 👏
cnt wait for next part!!! 😃
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👏 👏
pls continue!
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brilliant part....plz cont soon 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thank you all so much for the encouragement. Ok here is the next part:

NOTE: Due the Jigayasa always taunting Rano due to Sahil Bani, Rano and Pia decide it would be best if Rano went and stayed with Pia and Pushkar for a few days till Jigayasa cools down. However, Rano comes and visits Bani and Dadi before going to college or after college sometimes.

Ok so a few days have passed since Sid arrived it is morning time and everyone is downstairs as it is Jai birthday.

Jigs: Jai Bhaiya we must do something big for your birthday.

Just then Mohan Khandewal arrives

Mohan: Hello everyone...guess what I have planned a great day for my best friend's birthday. We are going to go to my resort for a private picnic with a few other friends and at Night there is going to be a Grand party with everyone invited including the press.

Everyone is excited and leaves to go get ready

Roshni: O Jai this is great...just like old times!

Bani sees this and does not like Roshni flirting with Jai and decides to leave to get ready too. Just then

Jai: Bani agar tum chaho to apni behno ko bhi bhula sakti ho.

Bani (a bright smile appearing on her face): Really Mr. Walia....

But Jai is busy talking with Roshni and Mohan

Bani rushes upstairs to her room to call Pia

Bani (on the phone with Pia): Hello Pia, you, Rano and Pushkar are invited to Mr. Walia's Birthday at Mohan's new resort.

Pia (sounding dissapointing): O didi, but how can we come you know pushkar is busy with his new job so without him how can Rano and I get there?

Sid who is just standing outside Jai and Bani's room hears this.

Bani: O no Pia...

Sid comes in..

Sid: Bani if you want I could take Pia and Rano with me in my car?? I will have some company too!

Bani: O Sid you are so nice. Bani tells Pia that Sid will pick them up and keeps the phone. She then turns to Sid. Sid you are such a good friend to me thank you so much!!!

Sid: cracks some joke and Banis starts to laugh.

Jai comes in and see them laughing AGAIN!! Suddenly his mood changes and he is angry.

Jai (sarcastically): Sid if you are forgetting This is my room AND THAT IS MY WIFE! so if you don't mind please GET OUT!!

Sid leaves.

BAni: Mr. Walia you didn't have to be so rude to Sid.

Jai (sarcastically): Wah, you only know him a few days. Don't you think you are getting too friendly with him??

Bani is annoyed and confused at Jai reaction but more annoyed due to his rude behaviour towards Sid. Without saying anything she leaves the room.

What will happen at the resort? Will Roshni constantly flirting with Jai Drive Bani away and make Jai realize Bani's importance? Will Jai ever act kindly towards Bani?

Edited by Saregama_fan - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwww woah jai is getting jealous 😆
get roshini 😡 away from jai and bani
please write soon
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i love the story... cool plz plz plz continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gossh...dat was really brilliantly written....gud work n gr8 efforts 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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GREAT JOB!!! PLZ CON'T THIS FF!!!It's really good!!!
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Everyone has arrived at the resort. The whole entire Walia family is there as well as some friends of Jai. As it is close to lunch time everyone is told to go into the garden where the lunch has been set up. There are 4 to 5 round table set up which seat 6-7 ppl each. Bani who is helping mausi and dadi come out of the car is unable to keep up with Jai and Jai along with Roshini, Jigyasa etc goes ahead. When Bani arrives at the garden she sees a chair beside Jai empty and goes and sits there. Just as Bani sits down Roshini comes from behind.

Roshini: Bani you are in my seat.

Bani(dissapointed looks at Jai for him to say something but he doesnt): O I am sorry I will move.

Sid (who is also at that table): Bani come sit beside me this seat is empty.

Just as bani is about to get up

Jai: Roshni why don't you just go sit there since Bani is already sitting here.

Bani: Nahi its ok, this was her seat. I will move.
Jai (a bit annoyed): Bani maine kaha na let roshni sit beside Sid.

Everyone is soon enjoying lunch and Jai's friends at his table are talking about some art gallery they visited. When Roshni, knowing Bani would know nothing about this artist asks her

Roshni: So Bani what do you think about Ravi kumar's paintings??

Bani (thinking to herself): uff...i don't even know who this Ravi Kumar is...what should I say?...this Roshni!! (Bani speaks) O i think the colour he uses are great.

Everyone starts to laugh

Roshni: His paintings are all black and white.

Bani is turning red with embarrassment and tries to laugh with them to hide this. Jai looks at Bani and upon seeing her embarrassed laugh can't help but smile and think how cute she looks 😳 .

After lunch it is decided that Jai should open the presents he has received.

Jai opens Roshni's present

A few people together: O wow a laptop. Nice and expensive present Roshini.

Roshni: Nothing but the best for my Jai.

Jai doesn't say anything

After all presents are opened. Only one is left. It is Bani's gift to Jai. Jai opens the present it is his leather jacket that bani had spilt tea on, except she has fixed it and now it has the symbol of his fav. sports team on it as well.

Aditiya: Wah Bani what a thoughtful present.
Roshni (not liking the attention Bani is getting, sarcastically): O how cute...aise fake symbols to bade cheap mein mil jate hai.

Bani has tears in her eyes


Sid (seeing bani hurt, sarcastically): lekin roshni ji aap to hamesha badi shops mein jati hai aapko kaise pata kitne ka milta hai?
Roshni (mad): Come on Jai lets go to the beach.
Jai: Actually I want to go up to my room and rest for awhile before the party.
Jai goes up to his room locks the door and quickly tries on the jacket and starts admiring his gift in the mirror he has a smile on his face.

Edited by Saregama_fan - 19 years ago

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