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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok this is my little story 😃


Theres party going on in walia's house (as usual) Bani is standing all alone and jai comes upto her and ask her why does she always does this, whenever there is party she is always standing alone, he grabs her arm and tells her ill introduce u to some people. While they are talking, bani gets phone call and she goes and attend her call. Few minutes later she comes back and while she is walking she bumps into someone, bani and that person are keep saying sorry to each other and when they look at each other for the first time they have this supprise on there face. While they are keep staring at each other bani finally say's Karan what are u doin here, Karan looks at Bani and says bani is that u. While they are starring at each other in shock jai comes with his friend and bani takes her eyes off karan but karan is still starring at bani. Jai ask them two do u two know each other, Bani say's yeh we known each other since college, Jai tells karan so i guess u know my wife bani then. Karan in supprise say's wife..erm...yeh ..i know bani pretty well they both smile each other and then bani walks away. Next morning bunch of flowers arrive, jai see's bunch of flowers and he ask tony, whos these flowers for, tony say's they have arrived for bani, for second jai's face expression changes into confusse and bit of jealousy.... tony goes and gives flowers to bani and bani reads the card and see's that karan has send those flowers for her and has talled her to meet him at somewhere. Bani thinks for while if she should go or not, jai comes in the room and starts teasing her about the flowers... in the end bani decideds she will go and meet karan. Later in the office jai cant concertrate becoz he's keep thinking about who send those flowers to bani, he tries to get his mind off about the flowers but he cant (oooooo he's feeling jealousy) so he puts his pen down and takes break, he looks outside and he closes his eyes for bit and he see's bani's face, he opens his eyes quickly and he wounders why did bani's face come in his mind, he closes his eyes again and he see's bani's face again he opens them and he ask himselve what is wrong with e why am i so botherd about those flowers and why is bani's face keep coming in my mind.

ok this all i can think of lol sorry for dragging this story hope u like it 😊
evalastingsmile thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
awww we have die hard romantics in this forum1!! keep it up ;)
eran thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
nice stories!
we should continue with some more so get your thinking hats on!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
WOW u guys... well done ... 👏
great job....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
wow guys!!1 soem great romantic parts! all of these should be submitted in the contest!!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16

what about this:

Bani is sitting with Mausi while she tells her about Jai. Jai turns up and looks at bani with a smile and continues to make eye contact. Mausi asks bani what she liked about jai, for her to get married to him. Bani replies that she liked his kind nature and his toughts and feeling towards life. Mausi asks bani if she really loves Jai. Bani looks towards jai and says this while looking straight at him that yes she loves jai with all her heart, but it is also true she loves mausi as well. All laugh! Mausi says she is tired and is going to bed and says she will talk to them in the morning.

They are alone and the wind is blowing again. Jai looks towards bani and bani looks towards him, Jai then says he is sorry for misunderstanding her and hopes she can forgive him. Bani then smiles and says i forgive you, then gets up and leaves and jai is left looking while she leaves and is confused with bani reaction.

evalastingsmile thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
Anti-climax when bani gets up and leaves :P
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Posted: 19 years ago
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lolz... loved all of themm... can mi friend who rite the one wit KARAN and Flowers Continue the Story! LOLZ... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
😆 😆 😆 oh i wrote the karan one 😆 i stopped becoz i couldnt think of anything else lol
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
Great job you guys...very creative. I think they should use all your stories and make "Love Stories" again. "Love Stories" was my fav. show back in the days...it was about love stories like this, showed different love stories each time.

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