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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
Maybe Jai deserve Roshni, he is so vain,🤬 now he wants to
go out Bani seeing that she looks different.😃
Awesome update.👍🏼 Continue soon. Can't wait to see what the gang
does to Jai.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter 9

PIA

: You guys will not believe it.

BANI:

What?

Asked Bani as they were sitting in the canteen.

PIA:

Jai broke up with Roshni.

BANI:

How?

PIA:

He realized like all of us she's a big you know what

BANI:

When?

PIA:

Yesterday when she came to his house. Since morning she's been begging him to take her back.

RANO:

Now she will go after a new guy.

ANITA:

Yeah. She works fast just like she left that other guy for Jai. She's left Jai to get with someone else.

BANI:

Hey! He broke up with her. So she will have to find someone new.

PIA:

I wonder who it will be?

BANI:

Yeah. Because Jai's like the most hottest.

RANO:

Don't tell me after all that drama you still care about him.

BANI:

No. I'm talking general. Ask any girl. It's either Jai or Pushkar.

Pia's face fell at the thought of Pushkar and Roshni.

PIA:

Ugh!

ANITA:

What?

PIA:

Nothing.

ANITA

: Listen she can have any guy except my brother.

BANI

: Yeah. Pushkar's so nice and she's so………………………………...

PIA:

uuuugggghhhh!

BANI:

Exactly.

RANO:

Come on the bell has just gone. We have to get to the dance class.

ANITA:

I didn't hear it go.

PIA:

You must be getting deaf.

ANITA:

Well I'm going to be lucky as I get to dance with Rajiv.

PIA:

Whatever. It's nothing compared to the fact that Bani has to face Jai. Plus they're going to have to talk.

BANI:

Well lets hope he feels as embarrassed as I was.

RANO:

Good luck di.

BANI:

You too I know how much you hate sahil.

RANO:

Yeah well he's not that bad.

PIA:

Really?

They all looked at her and she just walked off quickly to the hall blushing.

ANITA:

OMG!

PIA:

I know. One minute you hate someone, next minute you like them.

BANI:

Think that might happen with you Pia. You hate Pushkar.

PIA:

I don't! I just find him annoying.

Bani looked at Pia.

PIA:

Ok! A lot. He annoys me a lot.

They all went to the hall and found their partners.

ROHAN:

Now today we are going to try slow dancing. Nandini is coming round with magazines. You have to make sure it doesn't fall. If it falls your task for today will fail. Good luck everybody!

SAHIL:

Great this will be really uncomfortable.

RANO:

Why?

SAHIL:

Because you being a girl won't like to get close with a guy.

RANO:

I won't. You're not a complete stranger. I trust you.

Hearing that Sahil looked towards her and they locked eyes till Nandini interrupted them.

NANDINI:

Here you go.

RANO:

I'm sorry, what?

Said Rano realizing that Nandidni came.

NANDINI:

Mgazine.

SAHIL:

Um thanks.

Sahil took the magazine and gestured Rano to come forward. He put the magazine in between them. He held her hand as he put his other hand on her waist. Rano just looked at him. She felt something but didn't know what. She put her hand in his hand and put her other hand on his shoulder. They began dancing and weren't arguing at all.

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Pia was wondering what was wrong. Pushkar wasn't even dancing properly. He wasn't moving or holding onto her properly.

PIA:

Ok, what's wrong?

PUSHKAR:

What?

PIA:

You tell me.

PUSHKAR:

Nothing.

PIA:

Then why are you acting annoyed.

PUSHKAR:

What's that to you?

PIA:

Look. I'm your friend and I want to know why you look so sad.

She held his chin and lifted up his head so he would look ate her. They both looked at each other.

PUSHKAR:

Just leave me alone!

PIA:

I'm sorry if I did something wrong. But can I at least know what I've done to upset you.

PUSHKAR:

Does it really matter?

PIA:

Yes!

PUSHKAR:

Why?

PIA:

Don't you like sharing your feelings with me?

PUSHKAR:

I've never done it before.

PIA:

Look. Remember when we were small, you used to share everything with me. We were so close till you left to go to America. We can still be that close. Only please lose the attitude.

PUSHKAR:

What attitude?

PIA:

That attitude. Just forget your anger.

Pia grabbed his hand and put it on her waist and held his other hand.

PUSHKAR:

I don't want to dance. Just leave me.

PIA:

It's fun dancing!

PUSHKAR:

No I don't like it. Let go of me!

Pia jumped a little hearing him shout. She stepped away from him and went out of the hall.

PUSHKAR:

Shit! Pia wait!

But Pia didn't listen and just went.

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JAI:

Hi Bani.

Bani just looked at him.

JAI:

Sorry I'm late I had to get rid of a cockroach that was after me.

ROSHNI:

Jai. Please agree na.

JAI:

Just go to Rajdeep he's your partner not me.

ROSHNI:

But…………………..

JAI:

Just go and leave me alone!

Roshni went to not be embarrassed further because Bani was standing right there watching her.

JAI:

Shall we dance?

BANI:

Obviously.

Jai sensed a bitter feeling coming from her.

JAI:

Ok.

They held each others hands and she put her and on his shoulder and he on her waist.

JAI:

This is awkward.

BANI:

I don't think it is for you since you've probably had your hands on a lot of girls before. Why would I make a difference.

JAI:

Look. I'm sorry I said those mean things to you. I shouldn't have said those things but why be so harsh on me?

BANI:

Believe me I'm not giving you enough credit for saying all those things.

JAI:

Why can't you forgive me and we let this go?

BANI:

Well I don't want to and no.

The bell went and with that Bani went. Bani rushed home as she knew that Pia and Rano were going to Anita's. Bani logged onto the computer and went onto the internet into a chat room and started to private message Handsome246. She was logged on as Cutie 342.

CUTIE342:

How are you?

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Jai received a private message and answered it.

HANDSOME246:

Hey, I'm fine u?

ON THE COMPUTER

CUTIE342:

OK. You know I just gave left and right punches to that guy.

HANDSOME246:

Cool. You're fun to talk to how could he turn you down.

CUTIE342:

Thank you.

HANDSOME246:

Well I took your advice and broke up with my idiotic girlfriend.

CUTIE342:

Is she clingy?

HANDSOME246:

A LOT!

CUTIE342:

If she's anything like a girl in my college then she will never let go!

HANDSOME246:

Which college is that by the way?

CUTIE342:

I won't tell. You promised that we won't tell names of anything or any people otherwise we will figure out who the other person is and lose interest.

HANDSOME246:

Well, I don't know how any guy would lose interest in you. You're fun to talk to.

CUTIE342:

Awwwwwwwwwwww thank you J

HANDSOME246:

Believe me I would definitely go for you if I knew who you were.

CUTIE342:

Would you really?

HANDSOME246:

Yes! Ever cince I started to talk to you in the weekend my point of view has totally changed and I couldn't care less about looks otherwise I wouldn't have broken up with my ex.

CUTIE342:

Well got to go my sisters are have arrived and they probably want to talk to me.

HANDSOME246:

OK bye! J

CUTIE342

: Bye. Take care J

Bani logged off to find her sisters right behind her.

Edited by lizzie786 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Can't wait for Jai and Bani to find out they were giving

advise to each other.

Awesome chapter, update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
Hi
Jai and Bani they are so dumb. They chat and talk about all the stuff happening and in college they are enimies now. And whats with Pai and Pushkar now. They too have started a war. Only Rano and Sahil seems to be progressing. So now waiting to see will ther ebe any porgress int eh rest of teh relationships.
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
hey, i'm a new reader and i like your ff.
So, i'm kind a impatient to know how the things will going on between Pia and Pushkar.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Great update.😃
Bani and Jai are both nuts giving advise to each other.😆😆😆
Continue soon.😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
omg only rano-sahil are progressing
cont soon
SA
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
Chapter 10

PIA: Hello, di.

BANI:

Hi guys. Back so soon?

RANO:

Well we didn't want to leave you here all alone.

BANI:

Great, thanks. You could've stayed for longer.

PIA:

Yeah we could. Also you could've told us about your boyfriend.

BANI:

What boyfriend?

RANO:

Handsome246.

BANI:

Now that is a completely different story.

PIA

: And new. So tell us.

Bani told Pia and Rano everything about him how she found him online, how they talked and how they gave each other advice.

BANI

: But it's not THAT kind of relationship. We're just friends.

RANO:

That's what they all say.

BANI:

I'm not lying.

PIA:

That's because the feelings haven't been sparked yet.

BANI:

That's only because you watch soooooooooooooooooooooooo many movies about love.

PIA:

Well I've been waiting for my prince since forever.

RANO:

Yeah. He'll come, look at you and then go right back where he came from.

PIA:

Oi!

Bani just laughed as they argued. The phone started to ring and Rano picked it up.

RANO:

Really! Ok, don't worry it will be done.

PIA:

What happened?

RANO

: Anita wants us to sleep at her house tomorrow.

BANI:

Really?

RANO:

Yes!

BANI:

OMG! That will be so much fun. We can stay awake, eat sweets, do each others hair and talk about boys!

PIA:

Di, you're not a kid. We're grown up.

BANI:

Yeah but it will be so much fun.

PIA:

You guys go. I don't feel like it.

RANO:

Why?

PIA:

Just.

BANI:

It won't be fun without you.

PIA:

Still don't want to go.

BANI + RANO:

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

PIA:

If I go will you stop screaming.

BANI + RANO: Yes.

PIA:

Fine I'll go.

BANI + RANO:

Yay!

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The next day the girls went to college and found Anita .

ANITA:

Hey girls! Excited for tonight?

BANI:

Definitely! I can't wait!

PIA:

Oh we can tell. I'll catch up with you later.

Pia went towards her locker.

PUSHKAR:

Ok. Shout at me. Swear at me or smack me in the face like last time.

PIA:

Why would I do that?

PUSHKAR:

Because I erupted at you.

PIA:

So? I get it all the time what's different?

PUSHKAR:

What do you mean?

PIA:

Well lots of people get angry and the opposite person always feels bad but I didn't because you shouting at me meant nothing.

PUSHKAR:

Ok. So I'm forgiven.

PIA:

Yup. See you later. I'll be coming to your house to sleepover with Anita.

She walked away to lesson.

PUSHKAR:

Sleepover, eh? Well lets see what my next move will mean to you.

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ANITA:

You will not believe it.

Said Anita as they sat down for lunch.

BANI:

What?

ANITA:

My innocent brother has gone.

PIA:

What do you mean?

ANITA:

He's gotten caught in Roshni's web.

PIA:

What!

ANITA:

That's right! There's a rumor he's going around with her today.

PIA:

You must be talking about someone else. Pushkar can't have such low taste.

ANITA:

He doesn't. Till today.

BANI:

I can't believe it.

ANITA:

Well I messaged him to tell him to come here for lunch. If he comes with her it's true.

PIA:

If not it's a lie.

ANITA:

Exactly.

RANO:

There he comes now.

Pushkar walked into the canteen.

PIA:

See she's not with him.

ANITA:

Guess it was a rumor.

RANO:

Hang on. Look.

They all turned their heads to look at him but most importantly the person running behind him.

ROSHNI:

Darling wait up.

PUSHKAR:

Oh. Sorry.

ROSHNI:

Never mind. Lets go.

PUSHKAR:

Hey guys.

All four of them had their mouths wide open out of shock.

PUSHKAR:

Hello!

ANITA:

Hi. Um……sit down.

PUSHKAR:

Gladly. Hang on Roshni.

He went to her side pulled out her chair and then let her sit down.

ROSHNI:

Oh. You're such a sweetheart.

Pushkar sat down.

PUSHKAR:

So, what's new?

RANO:

You.

PUSHKAR:

Ok.

RANO:

Since when did you like Roshni.

PUSHKAR:

Since the first time we met. But I expressed my feeling today.

BANI:

Really? Roshni?

ROSHNI:

Hello? I'm right here.

BANI:

We're just asking because you were with Jai before.

ROSHNI:

Yeah. Well I broke up with him.

PIA:

No. Jai is a really good friend of mine and he broke up with you.

ROSHNI: Whatever. Shall we go?

PUSHKAR:

Hang on. Since you guys are having a sleepover, why not include Roshni?

PIA:

WHAT!

PUSHKAR:

Well I am having a guy sleepover with sahil but Roshni can't be included. So she's coming to yours.

ANITA:

Not enough space in my room.

PUSHKAR:

She won't take up much room. I'm your brother it's the least you can do.

ANITA

: Ok.

PIA:

Yeah. There will be enough room. I'm not going.

ANITA:

Why?

PIA:

Look they convinced me yesterday but now that even Roshni is coming it will be stuffy.

ANITA:

You're coming even if I have to drag you myself.

PUSHKAR:

Then it's settled. Bye.

PIA:

Why her? Why now?

RANO:

I know she's ruined our sleepover!

BANI:

I was dead excited.

ANITA:

Guys it will be fine. We could always lock her in the store room.

They all laughed while Pia's face lit up.

PIA:

I know exactly what to do.

ANITA

: What?

PIA

: Nothing. It'll be fun.

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PIA:

Come on guys. We'll be late hurry up.

BANI:

Yeah we're being as quick as we can.

PIA:

Well be quicker.

RANO:

Yeah we are we just have to double check the list.

PIA:

Oh goody, the list. (sarcastically)

BANI:

Today you didn't want to go and now you're over excited.

PIA:

Yeah, well I'm more into it now.

RANO: Sweets?

BANI:

Check.

RANO:

Chocolate?

BANI:

Check.

RANO:

Drinks?

BANI:

Check.

RANO:

Handsome246?

BANI:

Check.

Rano and Pia began laughing.

BANI:

Guys that's not funny.

They both looked at her. Bani started laughing then, too.

BANI:

Lets go. Or else we'll be late and Anita will have to put up with Roshni all by herself. Ok lets go.

They arrived to Anita's house, only to see Roshni talking to Anita about herself.

ROSHNI:

Then I decided to buy the red ones. (Laughs)

ANITA:

(Fake Laugh) ok.

PIA:

Hey Anita.

Roshni turned around to look at them.

ANITA:

Hey guys.

ROSHNI:

Hey.

ANITA:

Help me! (mouths)

BANI:

So we're all here.

ROSHNI:

Yup. Well I'm off to see my boyfriend.

PIA:

Ok bye.

ROSHNI:

Bye.

Roshni went to see Pushkar smiling on her way there.

PIA(Thinking):

Laugh all you want. That smile won't be there when I carry out what I plan to do.

ANITA:

Thanks for saving me. I was dying. Literally.

RANO:

No problem.

BANI:

Is it use five and then Pushkar with Sahil.

ANITA:

No he says he's going to bring two other friends. One's coming now and one later.

BANI:

Ok.

PIA:

Di, we forgot to pay the auto.

BANI:

Oh yes. Anita do you have some change.

ANITA:

Only about this much.

BANI:

It'll do.

Bani went, payed the auto and went back inside.

BANI:

Where have they all gone? Upstairs probably.

Bani was running up the stairs, in her flats which were extremely slippery, when she fell. But someone caught her.

JAI:

Hi.

BANI:

Jai!

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Sorry for not updating but in defence it is exam season.
Hope you like my update.
Edited by lizzie786 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
hi really nice that u updated
i know im having my exams too.
just one more week
realy like this part
cont soon
SA
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50

Hey lizzie, wonderful to have you back, hope all your exams went well.

Fabulous chapter.

Looks like Bani still doesn't know Jai is the one she is chatting with.

Update soon.

Take care.

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