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Posted: 15 years ago
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Is Jai blind, or chose to be blind, 😲 what a creep hurting Bani the
way he did.😭
Continue soon.
Izzie here's to feeling better real soon. 😎
Recomended cure - bed, a maid and the tv remote, can't forget peace and quite.🥱
Take care.😉
Attention readers - show the writers you care about their hard work.
Leave a comment of appreciation please.
Come on ladies and maybe guys.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter 5

JAI: Can I help you?

BANI:

Well when we picked our names I got yours so it looks like we are partners.

JAI:

What? This can't be. I was looking to get paired with Roshni or maybe a hot girl. How did I get someone like you?

Bani stood there shocked.

BANI(thinking):

How could he be so insensitive. Hello I'm right here.

JAI:

Great now I'm stuck with someone as ugly as you!

Bani didn't say a word. She was too polite to say anything back.

BANI(thinking):

What am I gonna do now. What the heck is wrong with him? Is he the guy I love?

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NANDINI:

I'm sorry but there's nothing I can do! It's all been done. Like Rohan said no moans or groans.

PUSHKAR: See Pia. I told you we are gonna have to be partners.

PIA:

Not if I have anything to do with it. Can't you talk to Rohan. Maybe another girl would want to be willing to swap partners with me.

NANDINI:

Actually before you another girl came and she wanted to swap partners. What was her name? Oh yeah, Roshni.

PIA:

Cool. I'll swap with her. Whose her partner.

NANDINI:

Her partner was a guy called Rajdeep.

PIA:

What!!!

NANDINI:

Yes. Would you like Rajdeep instead. Roshni really looked desperate to swap partners.

PIA:

Actually you know what I don't need to swap partners. Pushkar is ok.

NANDINI:

Ok. Bye.

PIA:

Bye.

PUSHKAR:

Hey you didn't want me as your partner. Don't worry I'll go call Rajdeep. We'll swap and then you'll be fine. I won't be your partner. It will be Rajdeep.

PIA:

NO!!!!!!

PUSHKAR:

Why? You wanted to swap partners. I'm agreeing with it and I'm sure Rajdeep will too.

PIA:

It's not funny. Besides I'd rather have you as my partner than him.

PUSHKAR:

So you now want me to be your partner. Well it comes at a price but you won't be able to pay that price.

PIA:

What is it?

PUSHKAR:

You have to say something very nicely without anger.

PIA:

What?

PUSHKAR:

'Pushkar, please be my partner'.

PIA:

Pushkar....................... um................................be my partner.

PUSHKAR:

Where did the 'please' go? Into thin air?

PIA:

What's wrong with what I said.

PUSHKAR:

Say it agin with the 'please' or.......................

PIA:

Or what?

PUSHKAR:

Or you can say bye to me and hello to Rajdeep.

PIA:

But..............................

PUSHKAR:

Time's ticking. Tick tock. Tick tock.

PIA:

Fine. Pushkar will you...........................please be my partner?

PUSHKAR:

Since you're requesting I will.

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RANO:

I cannot be stuck with a duffer like you.

SAHIL:

Well now you're gonna have to dance with a duffer like me jungli billi (wild cat).

RANO:

What? Me? Have you seen yourself Mr monkey.

SAHIL:

Look I'm not a monkey.

RANO:

Well I'm not a jungli billi (wild cat).

SAHIL:

It's not my fault you look like one.

RANO:

Hey you're crossing your limits.

SAHIL:

Well you already did from day 1.

RANO:

If you'd been an gentleman and gave me the chocolate ice cream sundae then maybe I didn't need to have an argument.

SAHIL:

It was mine first and you shouldn't have started an argument.

RANO:

Me? It was you and your so called man ego.

SAHIL:

Look you're so ungrateful. Shouting at me when I saved you from that thing.

RANO:

Rajdeep isn't a thing he is a guy. Just like you. So that means you're both pigs.

SAHIL:

Look I'm not a pig.

RANO:

Well you obviously don't know the difference between you and pigs. There are none.

Suddenly they stopped arguing because Nandini was walking by.

NANDINI:

Any problem?

SAHIL:

No we're fine.

RANO:

Just talking.

NANDINI:

Then why were you shouting at each other.

RANO:

Us shouting. No!

SAHIL:

The thing is we were just talking about which colour is better. Blue or green? Obviously blue is better but she was insisting on green. That's it.

NANDINI: Ok. Bye.

RANO + SAHIL:

Bye.

SAHIL:

Thank God she's gone. We would have been in trouble.

RANO:

Yeah. By the way green is better.

SAHIL:

No it's not. Blue is clearly the winner.

RANO:

No it isn't!

SAHIL:

Yes it is!

RANO:

No it's not.!

SAHIL:

It is!

RANO:

Not!

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ROHAN:

Now guys, listen. Today was an introductory session. Now you know who your partners are and you've talked to them. Next week we will begin the training and make sure you're prepared. Ok guys. You can go now.

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IN CANTEEN

RANO:

I can't believe I'm stuck with that duffer.

PIA:

Believe me I know how you feel I am as well.

PUSHKAR:

Come on Pia that's not fair. I bet you'd rather have me then other guys. Such as Rajdeep.

Pushkar winked at Pia but she just sighed.

PIA:

Di are you ok? You seem a little quiet.

BANI:

I'm fine.

Bani continued eating her sandwich.

RANO:

Di you were with Jai. How can you not talk about it? How'd it go? What did he say?

BANI:

Nothing. Just hi.

PIA:

That's it.

BANI:

Yep.

RANO:

So you didn't lock eyes together and go away on a unicorn?

BANI:

Rano that was when I was small. We were kids now we are all grown up.

PIA:

But di you love him.

BANI:

Will you just let me eat.

RANO:

Di calm down.

PUSHKAR:

Yeah Bani. Why are you so angry?

BANI:

Nothing I'm sorry.

RANO:

Di look there's Rajdeep he's been following Roshni around all day.

PIA:

More like stalking and harassing.

PUSHKAR:

Yeah well it could have been someone else he would be chasing. If you know what I mean?

PIA:

Shut up Pushkar.

RANO:

What do you mean by that?

PIA:

Nothing. He meant nothing.

RANO

: Where's Anita.

PUSHKAR:

Probably taking any chance she can get to stay with the guy of her dreams. Rajiv.

They were continuing with their conversation when Roshni interrupted them.

ROSHNI:

Hey guys mind if I sit with you for a while because Rajdeep won't leave me.

BANI:

Good. Maybe he'll take you away forever and you won't come back.

ROSHNI:

Excuse me?

RAJDEEP:

There you are sweetheart. I've been looking for you everywhere. You disappeared.

ROSHNI:

Or I could've just walked up here and sat down.

RAJDEEP:

Come on let's go practice for next week.

ROSHNI:

Why?

RAJDEEP:

Because the instructor said to be prepared.

ROSHNI:

Guys I'm out of here. Bye.

RAJDEEP:

Where are you going my teddy bear? Come back. At least wait for me.

He went off chasing after Roshni. Bani couldn't help but burst out laughing.

RANO:

At least now you're laughing.

BANI:

How could I not. It's so funny.

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PIA:

Right spill. What did Jai do this time?

BANI:

What?

RANO:

Di we're not stupid. Since we've came back you haven't eaten anything. You're looking lost all the time and you've been lying on your bed day dreaming for the past three hours. So what's up?

BANI:

Ok fine I'll tell you. As soon as I went to Jai..................................

Bani told her sisters everything sparing no detail.

RANO:

See di. This is why all men are pigs.

PIA:

I saw this coming.

BANI:

I never knew he was so shallow.

PIA:

Accept it. He's always been like that. You just never saw it.

RANO:

You've helped him to learn and he got good marks in the class assessment. He never thanked you.

BANI:

I can't believe I was so stupid.

PIA:

Di you're not stupid. You just fell for him lat first sight like other girls. But they liked him because of his looks and money. You've never cared about that. Plus you've never spent time with the guy so how would you know him.

RANO:

It's not your fault men are ungrateful, selfish and disgusting.

PIA:

Not all men are.

RANO:

In our yes they are.

BANI:

That's not the point. He insulted and embarrassed me. I wanna do the same but don't know how.

PIA:

Rano are you thinking what I'm thinking?

RANO:

Absolutely.

PIA + RANO:

Time for a makeover!

BANI:

What?

RANO:

You want to get back at him.

PIA:

Show him how beautiful you are on the inside so he feels bad.

RANO:

But he'll only get to know you if you look SEXY.

PIA:

We've been wanting to give you a makeover for a while but we knew you wouldn't agree. Now we have a reason.

BANI:

But..............................

RANO:

If you wanna get back at him this is the only way.

PIA:

We'll transform you this weekend then get back at him.

RANO:

But along with your look you have to change your attitude towards him.

PIA:

Can you do that?

BANI:

Yes. As long as you're with me.

RANO:

Then let's take an oath.

PIA: We will do to him what he did to you.

RANO:

We will get revenge.

BANI:

We will show him what girls can do. I will make sure he get's to know what it's like to feel insulted and embarrassed.

BANI + PIA+ RANO:

Kasamh se.

They put their hand on top of each other and made a promise. Will they be able to fulfill it?

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sorry it's not long i'm not feeling well so have only done this much hope it's ok.
Edited by lizzie786 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome update Izzie.👍🏼.
Wonder what these three have up their sleeves for Jai, Kasamh Se.😆
Continue soon, can't wait.😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey...great start to ur ff...luv da story line...keep it up...luv ?❤️
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Loved the last two parts. Waiting to see how they stir jais feelings for bani and of course the rest of the gangs too. Cont soon :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i am waiting for the revenge
cont soon
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Heyy...
Lovely ff...
Jai was so rude and mean to bani...
Can't wait to see wat the girls are up to...
Plz cont.soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter 6 PIA: Di? What are you waiting for?
BANI: But Pia.........................................
PIA: No buts.
RANO: Just get inside.
PIA: Come on. Hi. We have an appointment with Julie.
RECEPTIONIST: Yeah. Go right ahead.
They walked into a room with lot's of beaty treatment products.
JULIE: Pia! How you doing?
PIA: I'm fine. Heard business is taking off.
JULIE: Yeah. But I always have time for you.
PIA: Well this might take all day or weekend.
JULIE: Ok. What's the problem.
PIA: Well this is my older sister Bani.
BANI: Hi.
JULIE: You're joking.
PIA: Do I look like I am.
JULIE: But...........................................
PIA: It will take a long time but you can do it.
JULIE: Maybe.
PIA: Please I will help.
JULIE: Well you're great with make up and outfits.
PIA: I just need her hair, eyebrows fixed. Maybe even her face, you know that skin care cream you have. It works like magic.
JULIE: Well it may take all day. I'll have to cancel all my appointments.
PIA: Thank you. By the way this is Rano. My younger sister.
JULIE: She'll take a long time as well.
RANO: No way. You're not gonna touch me.
PIA: Well...............................................
RANO: Don't even think about it!
PIA: uff! Fine. Just Bani.
JULIE: Ok let's do it. Right Bani, sit down on this chair.
PIA: We should start with her hair.
JULIE: Yeah. We need to wash it. Condition it. Straighten it.
Julie opened up Bani's hair from the plait she had.
JULIE: Oh my God! Does she use all the oil from one bottle and throw it on.
BANI: Mum says it keeps your hair together.
JULIE: No more oil from now on. Ok?
BANI: But................................................
JULIE: No!
BANI: Fine.
JULIE: Good.
Julie washed Bani's hair with shampoo then conditioner. Rano wasn't too interested instead she started to read the book she snuck in her bag.
PIA: Time to blow dry.
JULIE: Yep.
They started to blow dry when Rano got annoyed.
RANO: Keep it down.
PIA: Hey it's a necessity.
RANO: But it's too loud.
PIA: Well we have to do this. If you can't take it then leave.
RANO: Fine, bye.
BANI: Rano.................................
RANO: Di, don't worry. I'll be in the shop across the street. They have magazines, newspapers and books.
BANI: Don't be too long. I don't trust these lot.
PIA: Di!
BANI: Sorry.
RANO: I'll be back before these lot operate on you.
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Rano walked out happy because she was so bored in there as she expected. RANO: Excuse me where are the books.
MAN: Near the magazines.
RANO: Thank you.
She walked to the books but heard a very familiar voice.
SAHIL: Yeah she's hot.
SAHIL'S FRIEND: I told you. These magazines are the best. Especially the girls.
SAHIL: I know.
Rano turned around. She walked forward.
RANO: Sahil?
SAHIL: What man?
He turned to face Rano and got the shock of his life.
SAHIL: How many times have I told you I don't like these sort of magazines!
Why can't you understand that. Don't talk to me again. Take this magazine and leave. Disgusting. Oh Rano! Didn't see you there.
RANO: What are you doing here?
SAHIL: Just came to see a friend but............................. Why are you here?
RANO: Just bored. By the way i'm guessing that the magazine in your jeans belongs to that friend of yours.
SAHIL: What!
He quickly took it out and held it up.
SAHIL: Who put that there?
He quickly put it on the magazine stand.
SAHIL: People these days.
RANO: Yeah. Bye.
Rano walked off laughing. She went outside the shop and couldn't stop laughing when a hand reached out for her shoulder. She turned around.
RANO: Sahil! What do you want?
SAHIL: Well you said you were bored so do you wanna go get some ice cream.
RANO: Sure.
For the first time Rano wasn't angry at him for anything and she couldn't help but say yes.
SAHIL: Two Vanilla ice creams please.
RANO: How do you know I like Vanilla?
SAHIL: I like it myself so thought of getting it for you too.
He turned to grab them and gave one to Rano.
RANO: Um you got some on your nose.
He wiped his nose.
RANO: It's still there. Hang on, let me wipe it.
Sahil kept his eyes on Rano. She noticed a but got lost oin his eyes.
They looked in eachothers eyes for a long time till Rano's phone went off.
SAHIL: Your phone.
RANO: My what.
SAHIL: Phone.
RANO: Oh, right.
She answered it.
BANI: HELOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
RANO: Di what happened? Why are you screaming?
BANI: HELP ME!
RANO: OK. I'm coming. Gotta go. Thanks for the ice cream!
She said as she went running off.
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Rano ran into the shop.
RANO: Di, what happened?
BANI: They're killing me!
PIA: Relax di. We're only plucking you're eyebrow hairs.
BANI: It kills. Which part of that don't you understand.
RANO: You made me run all that way for nothing?
BANI: Here they're killing me and you're siding with them.OOOOOOOOOWWWWWW!
JULIE: The last one.
PIA: Yes! Now we can go. We need to buy lenses, dresses,make up,shoes and go to the orthodontist.
BANI: Oh no!
PIA: Di! Think about your revenge for your insult.
BANI: Oh believe me i'm thinking about it.
RANO: Come on. Let's go!
PIA: Thanks Julie you took 2 hours. You're a miracle worker. Bye.
JULIE: Bye.
PIA: Time to shop.
RANO: YAY! (unenthusiastically)
BANI: It's going to be a long day.
PIA: Weekend. We'll shop today and transform you tomorrow ready for monday.
BANI: I just wanna get my revenge.
Edited by lizzie786 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sorry it's short i've started to go school again becuz holidays are over. Even though it's a bit i'll try 2 update everyday.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Izzie, wonderful update.

Now that Bani is all made over by Pia and Julia, hope

her revenge is sweet and well worth it.

Update soon, can't wait to find out what happen when JW sees her.😆

Take care.

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