SS The Captor and The Captive the end pg 13.1stmay

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hiya guysi was thinking about Jai and Bani and what to do with them in before the storm somehting clicked quite funny acutally i thought why not give it a try? he the captor and she the captive <br>with little humor... taking some one as a prosiner is a seriuos matter but i wanted the captive to make their life hell. i dont know how it has turned about, like always i thought of sharing it with you guys.. here excerpts from the coming soon ss...<br><br>
ch1 pg 3 , ch2 pg 5<br>


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<font face="Cambria">Jai looked at them in exasperation. What the hell were they doing here? kidnapped a girl whom they cannot control and'</font>


<font face="Cambria">His thoughts were interrupted as she stood before him glaring at him.</font>


<font face="Cambria">'what is it?' barked Jai.</font>


<font face="Cambria">'I need something.'</font>


<font face="Cambria">'what?'</font>


<font face="Cambria">She looked at Tarun and then back to Jai. She took a step forward, jai took a step back.</font>


<font face="Cambria">'What is it?' he barked again.</font>


<font face="Cambria">'You need not have to shout I can hear well, this is personal ..'</font>


<font face="Cambria">'Personal?' Tarun looked at them. It's been only matters of hours they have been alone and she wants to talk to him personal stuff'' what the hell.</font>


<font face="Cambria">'I don't want to hear anything personal.' Jai shouted back.</font>


<font face="Cambria">Bani looked at him exasperated. 'Look kidnapper this is urgent and I can't shout this to the world as it is, its embarrassing to tell you and .. she reached for his hand and pulled him towards her.</font>


<font face="Cambria">Jai's eyes widened in shock. What could be so embarrassing? And he did not want to hear it. But her hand was on his elbow. Before he could even react she leaned towards him tapping his masked face to reach his ears she whispered. ' I need sanitary napkins.'</font>


<font face="Cambria">'what?' he looked horrified. </font>


<font face="Cambria">'Don't shout, I need them. now..' she whispered again.</font>


<font face="Cambria">Jai thanked god the mask covered his face, the blood had rushed to his face reddening his cheeks and ears.</font>


<font face="Cambria">She shook him for attention. 'Do something.' She whispered.</font>


<font face="Cambria">'What? I don't know what you are talking about?' he whispered back making sure Tarun won't hear them, this embarrassing talk between them.</font>


<font face="Cambria">'you should know about them, who told you to kidnap a girl, girls carry lots of problems with them. you should have kidnapped a boy. You wouldn't have to go through all this embarrassing situations.'</font>


<font face="Cambria">Jai cursed Tarun loudly glaring at him. </font>


<font face="Cambria">'do something now.' Said Bani leaving his hand.</font>


<font face="Cambria">'Isn't there any other alternative?' he almost choked on his words. </font>


<font face="Cambria">'Yes there is.' She looked squarely at him.</font>


<font face="Cambria">'what?'</font>


<font face="Cambria">'Kill me.. and now!!!!' her eyes widened giving him a piercing look. </font>


<font face="Cambria">Jai looked at Tarun pathetically.</font>


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want to read??????????? tell me....................

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kamy<br><br>
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jeenal20 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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HEY KAMY
TAHT WAS TOO GOOD
gr88 start dear
bani has put jai and tarun in really embarrasing situation
just cant wait to see what jai will do now?
plzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Kamy, this is so hilarious. Poor Jai is feeling so mortified at what Bani had asked from him. He's so embarrassed. I found the whole scenario cute. Plz continue.....and do continue with ur other FF - Before the Storm too. Waiting to know whats going to happen next.
Ramya / ILS
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Kamy, couldn't stop laughing. Fabulous way to start a new day.

Thank you, take care.
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just too hilarious😆
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OMG that was hilarious

plz. do continue soon as in like really really soon


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Posted: 15 years ago
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hehe that was just too hilarious.
do cont soon.
I wonder how will Jai get it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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😆 Bani is so right----they should have kidnapped a boy. Girls come with too many problems! 😆 Bechara Jai turned red! Oh i'm loving this already, Kamy. You HAVE to continue with the story! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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That was so hilarious. I can't stop laughing. Please do write the SS. I could do with a little laughter. Please write soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Kamy... !!!

This is hilarious...!! wonderful start dear...!!

Can't wait to see how Bani Rani troubles poor jai.. :)

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