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pooja1_76

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

i am first
wow i like this kidneapper

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jeenal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

hey kamy

taht was really good

bani is liking here

and dose not want to go to her brothers house

poor jai and tarun

now hwat will they do?

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

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Perveen

@Heartbreak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I'm just loving this Bani rani. JW and TArun kidnappers ha ha

Who was that guy that tried to kidnap Bani from the cottage I wonder?

byebye

Love Perveen.x

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Indian_Goddess

@Indian_Goddess

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

I am loving Bani---- she is hilarious! 😆😆😆 the story is going great kamy! absolutely loving it! don't take too long in updating! 😃

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Desriee1

@Desriee1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Jai is falling for his captor, but will his captor (Bani) fall for him.

Hey Kamy, great update.

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pooks

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Oh my Gawd, Bani trusts Jai and Tarun more than her own brother...😆 she makes them sound like lambs...hehehehheeheh...now that Jai and Taurn want her out and about, let's see what Bani will do. She is one hell of a firebrand.

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btkr

@btkr

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Lord, what a setup. The kidnappers not only don't get any money, they now have a kidnapee who doesn't want to leave! Love it.

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Shamu (my brother calls me that)

@sweet_gurl61

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Bani is so funny. I wouldn't mind being kidnapped by Tarun and Jai. They are so nice. Please continue soon.

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Shreshta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

hahaah i would want jai to kidnap me :P

he's one softy, not a kidnapper

cont soon

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scifichick

@scifichick

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#40

Kamy, Just read both parts. What a great storyline 😆. You have such wonderful comedic writing skills. Poor Jai and Tarun now the hostage will force herself on her kidnappers 😆. What will they do?? I can't wait to see what drove Jai and Tarun to take this step, what Ranvijay is up to and especially how Bani will get to stay with her trusting kidnappers 😆

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