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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
great update
i love twilight also
robert is so HOT!
love ur ff
cont soon
-raji
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: rkath

great update

i love twilight also
robert is so HOT!
love ur ff
cont soon
-raji

thanx raji.

i think taylor is hotter, werewolves rock..........srry..............

lolz........

thx again

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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
chapter 3 coming in a bit!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

Chapter 3:

I know, I took a long time to update…. I was very busy…..[homework, projects etc.]

I'm genna skip ahead like 2 weeks after Ganga comes.
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Ganga is walking from her last class, to her dorm, muttering all sorts of things.
'What does he think of himself? Stupid teacher! Doesn't know anything? Hmph'
Until she bumps into Rishi, and falls…….
G: Can't you see where you're going???????? Ugh…. Rishi?...... oh…. I'm so sorry… I thought……
R: it's okay…… you seem mad……. *picking up her books……
G: it's nothing…….. history teacvher is a real pain…… thx
R: he's just like that, don't worry……
G: yea, anyways I gtg…….. got lots of assign,ents…….
R: I'll walk you to your dorm…… it's getting a bit dark
G: thnx…..
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G: thans again Rishi…
R: no problem…. We're friends rite, and…….
Dosti mein no sorry, no thankyous!
G: smiling…. Bye…
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Ganga enters her dorm, Alice and Bella aren't there yet. She sits by the window, and does her homework, at least she trys to.

She closes her eyes for a couple minutes, when someone knocked on the door.

Ganga: who is it?
Ganga opens the door, and someone barges into her room.
Ganga: excuse me? What are you doing? Wrong dorm, get out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The someone turns around………
Somone: hello Ganga
G: you are?
S: Pratyush [ oh no!!!!....lolz]
G: okay, what the hell do you want?
P: chill….. *stepping closer* you know why I'm here… no one can resist a beautiful girl like you……
G: get away you………. *pushes him……
Pratyush grabs her arm……..
P: where you running off….. I just came here…
G: let go of me…. *struggling to get out of Pratyush's grip
Pratyush starts getting closer, and closer to Ganga.
HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rishi was still in the Hall way, Talkin to some student, who needed some help…….
R: hey, I'll talk to u later……..
Rishi runs to Ganga's dorm……
Ganga? * banging on the door
Door is obviously locked, Rishi trys to break it…….
Rishi gets in at the rite time…
Pratyush? Ganga you okay?
Ganga runs to Rishi, all crying and everything…
P: oh look, superman is here, nice boyfriend you got there….
G: so what if he's my boyfriend, he's so much better than you! just get out!!!!!!!!
P: feisty….. I'm leaving, but it don't mean im not genna come back
Leaves, turns around and winks at Ganga….
Ganga gets a hold of herself.
R: you okay?
G: I'm fine, that Pratyush.ugh….. I wanna kill him…
R: Ganga get a hold of yourself….
Bella and Alice come in.
Alice: woah…. What happened
G: pratyush happened.
Bella: pratyush?
Ganga: yea, he… oh god. I just want to kill him! Ughhh…..
Alice: Ganga, relax, what happened?
Ganga tells her story….. and Rishi stands there, looking out the window, rembering what Ganga said, and what just happened.
'so what if he's my boyfriend……..'
'he's so much better than you'
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Hope you guys liked, it's a bit short, im sorry .
It will take a bit longer to update,
I've got my Statewide exams on Wednesday, and Thursday.
Do leave a comment or two!
-Luv Esha



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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
great update esha
hopefully pratyush doesn't come back
such a jerk!
cant wait for the next update
-raji
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: rkath

great update esha

hopefully pratyush doesn't come back
such a jerk!
cant wait for the next update
-raji

thx raji!

i'll seee bout that..... hehe

lolz

thnx!

-luv esha

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Posted: 16 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Irika

Thanks for the update =)

no problem!😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
hey dear
that was a gr88 part
wow rishi ne ganga ko pratyush the snake se bachaya
loved it
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: jeenal20

hey dear

that was a gr88 part
wow rishi ne ganga ko pratyush the snake se bachaya
loved it
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

awwwwwwwwww thankyou!

will try to.....

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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
niceeeeee updateeee....keep up d gud wrk & plz update soon

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