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Posted: 16 years ago
#11

im sorry guys

i wont be able to post the ist chaptewr today...

i have tons of homework, which i still hvae to finish,

im realli srry

😭

-esha

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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
it is ok
we will wait
we understand ...
anyways update soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
Please continue this FF I am a big fan of Rishi and Ganga
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx guys for understnding!
i'm going to try to update today, becuase i have less homework today [thank god!]

-luv esha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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update coming in a bit..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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One nice evening in India, at the Walia mansion, just turned upside down…….
Papa! Mein aab aur choti nahi hoon, mujhe Seattle Jaane hain! Please
Mr.Walia: Nahi Ganga! No means No, mein tumhe 7,000 miles ghar se jaane nahi doonga!
Ganga: Mama! Aap hi papa ko samjha dijye
Bani: Mr.Walia, Ganga teekh hi tho kheri hain, jaan dijye naa usse…….
Mr.Walia: tum bhi Ganga ke saath dere ho Bani?
Ganga: Papa please, mujhe jaana hain, please, next week mera flight, mein jaa re hoon,
Mr.walia: par Gan---
Ganga stormed out of the room…………
Bani: Dekh liya apne, uska mood kharab kar diya…….
Mr.Walia: Mein kya karoon Bani…
Bani: mr.walia: Ganga aab aur choti nahi hain, jaane dijye, phone pet oh baat hoti rehangi
Mr.Walia: Shayad tum teekh khere ho, mein usse abhi baat karke aare hoon…
Bani: aab nahi, gussa hain, aur raat bhi ho chuki hain, usko soone dijye, aur aap bhi sojaye……..
Mr.Walia: teekh hain…..
Next Morning:
Mr.walia got up, freshened up, and went straight to Ganga's room.
"knock-Knock"
Ganga looked up from her laptop, "Jee?"
Mr.Walia: Ganaga, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to yell at you yesterday……
Ganga: its okay papa, no need to say sorry……
Mr.Walia: Mei n sirf tumhari, matlab meri princess ko 7,00 miles door naihi bhej sakthi thi, issliye
Ganga: nahi papa, its okay, ………
Mr.Walia: tumne packing start ki?
Ganga: nahi, abhi tak nahi, kaal start karoongi, mujhe kuch cheez khareedna hain………..
Mr.walia: okay, mein jaa re hoon, neech aajao, breakfast is ready……..
Ganga, Looking back down at her laptop "okay"

Seattle:
[You will hear somef twilight charcters here, I'm sorry if you're not a twilight fan, I'm srry, but I luv it!]
"Hey wassup Rishi!"
Rishi: Hey Jake [Jacob], nothing much, just got a 70 in that old, weird teacher's class………
Jake: She's very weird, where we got English?
Rishi: umm I'm not sure; takes his book bag and puts it over his shoulder……..
Jake: let's go to lunch first………..
Rishi: yeah I'm starving
They head downstairs towards the Cafeteria…….
Rishi sits down and takes his laptop out………..
Jake: dude aren't you genna eat…..
Rishi: ill pass…..
Jake: you just said…… nevermind….
Rishi opened his laptop and started to search through some stuff, and emailed his friends who still might be in class right now……….
After that , he closed his Mac ntbook and put it to the side……..
Rishi: Jake, u know where Alice, her boyfriend are?
Jake: no not really, why… oh luk here she comes know……. She brought her brother too, and his girlfriend……..hmph……….
Rishi kicked him under the table…….
Jake: ow what was that for?
Alice[Al: hey guys…….
Jasper: hi……
Bella: hey……..
Edward: Hey everyone…………….
Jake glared at him…………
" You stuill mad bout the bike… I said I was sorry……."
J: no, maybe……
Rishi: it's a bike, and it was an accident, and please Jake you have a much better bike now, a cooler one too……….
Jake: yo I'm off….. gotta go see someone……..
Rishi: yea sure you do. Who is it………
Jake: shut up……. Bye……….
Jake leaves, Al, jasper, ed, and bells, plus riashi are left now……….
Japer whispers to Ed: Nessie obviously……..
Ed: laghing.. ……yea
Alice: me and bells gotta to like share our sorm with someone else…….. like 3 roommates sounds so …
Bells: crowded………..
Alice: yea, i need my space, but now i cant go and talk to that coordinator, she's super creepy......*shivers
Ed: woah………. Me and jasper share a dorm, and Rishi, I think you and Jake do rite……..
Rishi luked up from his laptop again, which he turned back on………." Yea"
Ed: no point Talking TO him now…… he's lost in his computer world………..
Bells: its genna be next period almost, we shud get going………
Al: yea we shud……..
Jasper: yo, Rishi, we're going to the next class…….
Rishi: k, im going to the library rite now anyways, got a free period
Al, Jasper, Ed, Bells: Lucky!
Rishi smirked



This was a very slow and a bit boring update, I had to write this so you guys would get a hint of the charcters….. the next chapter is genna be different, more of Ganga……………..
I hope you guys liked it, I didn't,
I think I'm loosing my touch on writing FFs..lol

-Luv esha


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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice one..& thnx a lotz for adding twilight charactor..m crazy abt twilight
😍edward😍
plz update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ Irika -Thanx a lot!

@ simren18- thankyou so much for liking it

@ hkhosa- Thankyou, and your welcome......lolz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I'm not sure if i'll be able to update today, if i can i'll post a short one....

I'm sorry

- I've got to do a five page report, i'm only on the first page..............

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey esha that was a gr88 part
so ab hogi ganag and rishi ki mulakat
plz cont soon

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