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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#141

Just read the update. This Bani really has some serious issues. I wonder how Jai and his parents are going to react to this. And Krishna was she trying to save theri marriage or trying to break it. It was kind of difficult to work out. She loves her son too much that she is blind to Bani I feel at times.

I hope Jai can bring in some love and understanding into their marraigeso that Bani feels at least confident about herself. It looks like she has got a split personality altogether. Sow aiting to know what is Jai's next step going to be.

Bye

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swati

@swatinarang

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#142

ananya read the last 2 parts together, really very emotional and sad parts, bani seems to be mental patient and requires treatment, hope she gets that soon.

loved the parts and i just want bani to get well soon and see positivity of life and not only negativity.

do continue soon

luv,

swati

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#143

hey ananya

thanx for the PM

will come back once i read the Part

back

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ohh nooo 😲

thers some serious problem with bani

how can 1 torture herself soo much

and this krishna again smells danger for me😡

good that jai came to know the truth about banis torture hope he dose something soon

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soooonnnn

Edited by jeenal20 - 16 years ago

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma
haila... what is this???? whats wrong with bani???? i think bani needs serious attention... now, i really feel sorry for jai? dont know how he is going to handle the situation....

Bani is really having some problem..Jai must attend her very carefully...I also feel sad for Jai..

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: jeenal20
hey ananya
thanx for the PM

will come back once i read the Part

back

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ohh nooo 😲

thers some serious problem with bani

how can 1 torture herself soo much ==Bani can..she can do everything..

and this krishna again smells danger for me😡==No..she is not like that..

good that jai came to know the truth about banis torture hope he dose something soon==Jai will do something..for sure..

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soooonnnn

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#146

hey ananya

do continue with this FF soon

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#147

PART 13

Jai ne faisla kar lia..ab aur nahi..Bani ko waapas laana hoga..is tarha koi zinda nahi reh sakta..Bani khud par bahut zyada zulm karne lagi hai..aisa Jai ko lagta tha..par zulm is had tak kar sakti hai..Jai ko andaza nahi tha..Jai ne socha thode dino k lia Bani ko yehan se door le jaayega..aisi jagah..jahan jaa kar Bani khush hogi..par Krishna aur Uday jab tak waapas naa aaye..ghar se jaana mumkin nahi hai..

Bani zameen par hi so gayi thi..Jai uske kareeb gaya..Doctor ko phone kia..Doctor ne kaha aadhe ghante me pahooch raha hai..Jai Bani ko bathroom le gaya..Bani khud ko chhoodane ki koshish kar rahi thi..

Bani--Tum baahar jaao..

Jai--Nahi..tum kapde badlo..fresh ho jaao..main yehi rukoonga..tumhara koi bharosa nahi..

Bani--Kyaa badtameezi hai?

Jai--Main tumhara Pati hoon..mujhse kyun sharma rahi ho?Achha..main apna muh us taraf karta hoon..tum..

Bani--Baahar jaao..

Jai--Achha..theek hai..par darwaza lock mat karna..khula rakhna..

Jai bathroom k baahar hi khada raha..15 minute k baad Bani naha kar nikli..bath robe pahen kar...

Jai ne kaha.."Kapde pahen lo..main bhi naha kar aata hoon..aur haan..kahi jaana mat.."

Bani--Office jaana hai..

Jai--Chup chaap baithogi yaa main lagaoon do jhaapad?

Bani--Kyaa?

Jai--Tum kapde pahen kar baitho..aram karo..aur tumse kyun baat kar raha hoon?

Yeh keh kar Jai ne kamre ka darwaza lock kar dia..aur chaabi le kar hi bathroom k andar chala gaya..

10 minute baad jab nikla..tab dekha Bani bistar par baithi hai..par kapde nahi pahne hai usne..bath robe me hi hai..Jai ne sar hilaya apna..cup board me se kapde nikaal kar Bani ko dia..aur bola,"Pahen lo..koi fashion show nahi hai..jahan par towel ya bathrobe pahen kar walk karna hai.kapde paheno..."

Jai ne casual wears pahen lie..aur Office me phone kar dia.."Tum log samhaal lo..main aaj aa nahi sakta..personal reason."

Darwaze par knock hua..naukar khada tha..usne kaha ,"Doctor aai hain.."

Jai--Le aao yehan..

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"Mr.Walia..woh bahut zyada upset hain..davai se kuchh nahi hoga jab tak woh khush naa rahen..aap samajh rahe hain na?Physically..she is fine..but her stress level is too high.."

Jai--Doctor..aise me ..if we have a baby..you know..ek miscarriage..hua hai..recently.

"Kaha maine..physically..no problem..but mentally..I think she is disturbed..very much disturbed..unko kahi door le jaaiye..personal life..professional life..she had a burn out.. andar ki energy khatam ho gayi hai unki..baahar le jaaiye..I am sure..achha asar hoga.. kahi bhi..jahan woh jaana chaahe.."

Jai--Meri Maa ka kehna hai..k bachcha ho jaayega..toh theek ho jaayegi..

"Mr.Walia..aap baahar ghoomne jaaiye..unko normal hone dijiye..issi beech agar woh pregnant hoti hai..then it's good..let it be in a normal way..don't impose anything..aisa karna ..aap dono k lia theek nahi hoga..naa hi us bachche k lia jisko aap is duniya me laayenge..but..don't worry..woh Maa ban sakti hain..sab theek hai..koi internal problem nahi hai."

Jai--Thanks a lot Doctor..

"Unko injection dia hai..aram se sone dijiye teen chaar ghante..main chalti hoon..agar koi aur problem ho..toh mera number hai ..just give me a call..main ab chalti hoon.."

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Bani gehri neend me thi...Jai uske paas baitha tha..kahan le jaaye...achanak se Bani k mobile par sms ka tone baja..likha tha..

"Hey..Bani..pehchana?Main Gaurav..yeh mera naya number hai..Delhi me hoon..agle maheene chal rahi hai na..reunion pe?Yaar..I still miss London..din me padhai..aur roz raat ko party..tu toh shaadi me nahi aai..main aur Mansi..dono jaa rahe hain.."

Ohh..yeh Gaurav London me tha..Bani k class me tha.Okay..Bani jaayegi,Jai k lia aasaani ho gayi..purane doston so milegi toh Bani bahut khush hogi..Jai ne Gaurav k number par phone kia..

"Hello.."

"Hii..this is Jai Walia..Bani is my wife..tum uske dost ho na?"

"Yaa..main ..Bani..aur Mansi..meri Biwi..saath hi the..London me..nice to talk with you.. Bani aa rahi hai na?Agle maheene k 12th ko hai party.."

"Main saath aaoon toh problem hai?"

"Nahi..Sir..aur bhi achhi baat hai..yeh aapki zimmedari hai..k Bani London aaye..aap ko usko laana hi hai.."

"I promise..Bani aayegi..hum dono aayenge..take care..bye..give my regards to Mansi.. bye.."

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Naukar ne darwaza khola..Uday aur Krishna aa gaye hain...

Uday--Jai ghar pe hai?

"Haan jee..Bahujee ki tabiyat kharab ho gayi thi..Doctorni dekh kar gayi hai..abhi theek hai.."

Krishna Jai k kamre ki taraf dauri..jaa kar dekha..Bani so rahi hai..Jai uska haath pakad k baitha hai..

Krishna--Kyaa hua?

Jai--Stress zyada tha..tabiyat kharab ho gayi..ghabrane ki baat nahi hai..theek hai..aap logon ne badi der kar di aane me..

Krishna--Haan..bahut din baad ghoomne nikle the na..jhagda hua..dono ka?

Jai--Nahi..Maa..kuchh nahi..well..agle maheene main Bani ko lekar London jaa raha hoon..

Krishna--London?

Jai--Bani k Law College ki reunion party hai..

Krishna--Haan...ghoomegi..toh mann bhi halka hoga..Doctor ne kyaa kaha?

Jai--Doctor ne bhi yehi kaha..Dad kahan hain?

Krishna--Fresh hone gaye hain..Ajay aaya tha is beech?

Jai--Aata tha...usko bhi jaana pada..US..kaam hai usko..main samhal loonga..

Krishna--Main aa gayi hoon..main khayal rakhoongi..

Jai--Aap ko bahut jaldi hai kya ..Pote Potion ki?

Krishna--Maine aisa kab kaha?

Jai--Bani ko nahi kaha aapne?

Krishna--Toh aur kyaa karti?Tu bata..yeh ladki kuchh kehti nahi..socha tha..ulti seedhi baat sun kar..kuchh asar hoga..gussa baahar aayega..ulta yeh maafi maangne lagi..main khud chauk gayi..iski sehat se badh kar kuchh nahi..par sach bata..tune koi gadbad toh nahi ki na?

Jai--Nahi..

Krishna--Ek minute..is k haath aur chehre par chot k nishan..taza hai..kyaa kia tune?

Jai--Maine kuchh nahi kia..

Krishna--Toh?

Jai--Isko sone dijiye..baahar chaliye..batata hoon..Dad ko mat batana..chaliye..

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Dopaher k 12 baje the...Bani ki neend tooti..Jai kamre me hi tha..official papers check kar raha tha..Bani ko jaagte hue dekh kar Bani k paas aaya..

Bani aankhe ragad rahi thi..Jai ne kaha .."Maa aur Dad aa gaye hain..tum so rahi thi.."

Bani--Mera chashma do..news paper kahan hai?

Jai--Chalo..neeche chalo..

Bani--Chashma do..

Jai--Chalo toh...baad me padhna news paper..chalo...

Bani neeche aai..Krishna naukron me baant rahi thi..jo woh Amritsar se laai thi..Bani ko aate dekh khadi hui..Bani ne Krishna k pair chhooen..Krishna ne gale se lagaya...

Krishna--Kaisi ho?

Bani--Theek hoon..

Krishna--Dikh raha hai...achha..dekho..tumhare lia kyaa laai hoon..hum dono Patiala bhi ghoom aaye..wahan se..salwar suit laaye tumhare lia..pahen kar batao..naap theek hai k nahi..

Bani--Achha hai..bahut..

Krishna--Issi lia toh laai hoon..tumhare lia..achha suno..hum dono ghoom kar toh aa gaye.. ab tum Jai k saath kahin ghoom aao..honeymoon toh hua hi nahi..tum dono ka..

Bani--Abhi?

Krishna--Haan...matlab..India se baahar jaana hai toh jaao..lambi chhutti par jaao..tabiyat bhi sudhar jaayegi..aur mann bhi achha hoga..theek hai na?

Bani--Haan...

Aise me Bani ka mobile baja...

Bani--Hello..

"Hey..Gaurav bol raha hoon..agle maheene chalna hai..yaad hai na?"

Bani--Kahan?

"Gadhi !!London..college ka reunion bash hai..Mansi aur main jaa rahe hain...tujhe bhi aana hai.."

Bani--Main nahi aa rahi..

"Arre..tere Darling Husband se baat ho chuki meri toh..unhone kaha k tum dono aa rahe ho.."

Bani--KYAAAA?

"Haan..bas..tu aa rahi hai..tum dono aa rahe ho.."

Bani--Baad me baat karti hoon..haan..chal..bye..Mansi ko Hello bolna meri taraf se..hmm.. bye..

Jai baitha tha..Bani ne usko dekha..

Jai--Kiska phone tha?

Bani--Gaurav ka...

Jai--Ohh...main batana hi bhool gaya..Gaurav ka sms aaya..tab tum so rahi thi..maine baat ki..

Bani--Mujhse poochha nahi..k main jaana chaahti hoon ya nahi,..aise kaise bol dia?

Krishna--Arre..isme harj kyaa hai?Kahan jaane ki baat hai?

Bani--London..

Krishna--Jaao na..tum dono jaao..

Jai--Haan..main bhi wahi keh raha hoon..chalo na..issi bahane tumhare doston se main bhi mil loonga..main toh chal raha hoon..

Bani--Main..rahne dete hai na..please...

Krishna--Achha..theek hai..abhi toh nahi jaana hai..baad me aram se socho..bas..abhi chalo..khana khaate hain...

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Bani chhat par khadi thi..raat kaafi ho chuki thi..Jai ko sota dekh..woh chup chaap..chali aai,khoole aasmaan k neeche khadi ho kar Bani bahut kuchh soch rahi thi.Kiran ka chehra baar baar uski aankhon k saamne aa raha tha..woh chehra kabhi nahi bhoolegi Bani...ek marti hui aurat ko dekh rahi thi Bani..jo baar baar Krishna ka naam le kar maafi maang rahi thi..Bani se maafi maang rahi thi..

Kiran ko jab pata chala Bani ki shaadi Uday aur Krishna k Bete Jai se hui hai...tab unke mann ko shaanti mili..Krishna shayad ab utni nafrat nahi karti Kiran se..ek naa ek din woh Kiran ko puri tarha maaf kar dengi..kaanpte hue haathon se jab Kiran Bani ko ashirwad de rahi thi..tab ek pal k lia Bani bahut kumzor ho gayi thi..uski Maa ..usko janam denewali Maa uske aage haath jod rahi thi..

Nishikant Dixit se aamna saamna hua tha Bani ka us waqt..Bani chaahti thi..unhe bahut kuchh sunaaye..par wheel chair par baithe us insaan par gussa jata kar kyaa karti Bani? Woh insaan pahle se hi haara hua hai..usse kyaa ladhna?Wheel chair par baitha woh aadmi jisko Bani pehli baar apne hosh me dekh rahi thi..pehli baar hi dekh rahi thi..Bani k wajood par issi insaan ne sawal khada kar dia..paida hote hi.Kiran ka antim sanskar hua.. Bani thi..ajeeb baat hui..Bani ki aankhon se ek aansoon nahi geera..Nishikant se kuchh bhi nahi kaha Bani ne..

"Akeli yehan kyun aai?"

Jai k awaz se Bani ka dhyaan toota..Jai kareeb aaya..poochha,"Kyaa hua?Doctor ne aram karne k lia kaha hai tumko..itni raat ko jaagna theek nahi.."

Bani--Tum yeh sab kyun kar rahe ho?

Jai--Maine ab kyaa kar dia?

Bani--Tum apna kaam karo na..apni zindagi jeeo..mere peechhe waqt kyun barbad kar rahe ho?

Jai--Meri aur tumhari zindagi alag toh nahi hai..aur tumhara khayal rakhne ka matlab yeh toh nahi..k mera waqt barbad ho raha hai..kyaa bol rahi ho?

Bani--Mera khayal rakhne ki zaroorat nahi...main khud rakh loongi apna khayal..

Jai--Naraz ho?Kyun?Bani..tum kuchh kahogi nahi toh kaise pata chalega mujhe?Tum kuchh batati kyun nahi?Bolo Bani..kyaa baat hai?Main bahut kuchh nahi jaanta Bani... bahut kuchh hai jo jaanna mere lia bahut zyada zaroori hai..Bani ...sach kyaa hai?

Bani--Kuchh nahi..

Jai--Kuchh nahi?Main Bangalore me tha..jab tumhari Maa ki maut hui..main kuchh nahi jaan paaya..us waqt tum kis had tak pareshaan thi..main nahi pata kar paaya...tum pregnant hui..mujhe is baat ka kuchh bhi ehsaas nahi hua..sab kuchh khatam hone k baad mujhe pata chala..aisa mat karo..Bani..sach bata do..

Bani--Meri Maa ki maut ho chuki hai bahut saal pahle..jab main paanch saal ki thi..tumko toh pata hona chahie..car accident me maut hui thi unki..

Jai--Bani....!!!

Bani--Maya Juneja naam tha meri Maa ka..wahi meri Maa hain..aur koi nahi..kisi aur ko main Maa nahi maan sakti..Avinash Juneja mere Father hain..Ajay Juneja mere Bade Bhai hain..yehi meri pehchaan hai..

Jai--Ohh..aur yeh Walia khandan kuchh nahi tumhare lia?Main koi nahi?Maa..Dad..koi nahi tumhare?

Bani--Mera matlab woh nahi tha..tum kyun itne sawal kar rahe ho?

Jai--Jawab de do....aisa naa ho..kal ko tumhari khamoshi..tumhare hi khilaaf jaaye..

Bani--Gaurav ko kyun phone kia?

Jai--Uska sms aaya..

Bani--Mera sms kyun dekha?

Jai--Arre?Aise hi..tum so rahi thi..rather..tum behosh thi..maine socha kuchh urgent hoga toh..

Bani--Tumne kyun kaha k hum chal rahe hain?

Jai--Kyun?London kyun nahi jaana hai tumko?

Bani--Meri marzi..

Jai--Bani..aisa mat karo..dekho..reunion hai..tum doston se milogi..main bhi mil loonga unse..

Bani--Kyun milna hai?

Jai ne socha thoda mazak karega..toh baat itni serious nahi rahegi..usne hans kar kaha ,"Arre..Law College me tumhare kitne boy friends ..kitne admirers the..main bhi jaanna chaahta hoon..yeh bhi nahi jaan sakta kya?"

Bani--Kyaa?

Jai--Mazak kar raha tha..Bani..maine wada kia hai..please..mere lia chalogi na?

Bani--Kyun jaaoon?

Jai--Kyunki main keh raha hoon..itna kaafi nahi hai?Chalogi na?

Bani--Nahi pata..

Bani kamre ki taraf chali gayi...Jai ne dekha..Bani ne jawab dia.."Nahi pata.."..yaani k maamla positive hai..Bani chalegi..bas..aur zyada force nahi karna hai..visa k lia apply karna hai..baaki sab apne aap ho jaayega..

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago