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Posted: 6 years ago
#71
Both listen a romantic song...n mesmerized...their first meeting...their fights...their dance..n their friendship..
N suddenly tanu says
Tanu- stop stop!!!
Rishi stops the car..
Rishi- kya hua???
Tanu- tum mujhe kh le ja rh ho??
Rishi- ghar...
Tanu- per ghar to piche nikl gaya... dhayan kh h tumahara???
Rishi- ohh sorry..
Rishi reverse his car...
Tanu- (laughs) sach batao kh dhayan th tumhara...
Rishi- khai nahi yaar...kabhi kabhi ho jata h aisa...
Tanu- ohhh..
That time ahana calling tanu...
Ahana- dii...tu kh th..itni der kyu laga di..me kb se tujhe call kr rhi th..tera phone band kyu h..
Tanu- mera phone switched off h..kya hua tu itni tension me kyu h???
Ahana- dii..wo bauji ka accident ho gaya h..
Tanu- kya..kh h wo..
Ahana- ghar pe...
Tanu runs very fast into the house..
Rishi n ahana also goes behind him..
Tanu- bauji..aap kaise h..kh chot lagi...ahana ne jb mujhse kh to meri jaan hi nikl gayi...n she's crying..
Virendra- (he swipes her tears) beta..me bilkul thik hu..
Tanu- kya hua th.. accident kaise ho gaya...
Virendra- beta..me to sabzi le rh th ki achanak se ek car ayi tez speed me..wo mujhe hit ki krne wali th ki ek sakhs ne mujhe bacca liya... isliye mujhe jayada chot nahi ayi...
Tanu- kon th wo??
Virendra- pta nahi..per wo hi mujhe yah le kr aya h..wo rh tumhare piche...
Tanu n rishi shocked to see that person..that is none other than pawan...
Tanu says to thanks to him...
Tanu- thanks mere bauji ki jaan bachane ke liye...
Pawan- thanks mt bolo inki jagah koi bhi hota to me yahi krta...
Rishi- konsa naya drama h..
Pawan- rishi me janta hu..mene past me galtiya ki h..per me itna bhi bura nahi hu. .
Rishi irritating with him n saying something...but tanu holds his hand..
Tanu- jane do.. shayad wo sach me sudher gaya ho...
Neha comes near to pawan..n say
Neha- me janti hu..ye sb tumhara hi game h..per tumne ye sb kiya kaise..
Pawan- ha bilkul thik pehchana.. actually aj me tumse milne rishi ke office aya th ki tabhi mene dekha ki..tanu ka accident hone se rh gaya tb rishi itna dar gaya ki rone laga...tabhi me samaz gaya ki tanu rishi ki kamjori h...or tabhi mene virendra k accident ka plan banaya...
Neha-per isse tumhe kya fayada tumhe to paisa chahiye na...
Pawan- nahi ab mujhe.. rishi ka paisa nahi pyaar chahiye..usne meri itni bezati ki h..or jb uska pyaar usse dur hoga tb mujhe chen milega..
Bani listen everything..n clapping for his plan...
Bani-wah wah...beta..kya plan h...mujhe bhi us tanu se badla lena h..aj usne meri beti pe hath uthaya th...bus tum waise waise krte jao jaisa me tumse khti hu...me bhi us tanu se aisa badla lungi ki yaad karegi..mera naam bhi bani h bani... h ki nahi...

Here rishi is doubt on pawan...

Ps: wo word cotton candy...n lovely update urs...tanu teasing rishi...n rishi is on silent mode... fabulous update...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#72
Rishi says in his mind:kuch to gadbad h... I want to find it... N I will...
Tanu sees Rishi lost in somewhere she goes bear to him n taps him...
T:rishi kya hua??? Kya soch rahe ho???
R:Tanu...ab tum mujhe samajhne ki koshish karo... Pawan is planning something...
T:Rishi... Par...us ne hi bauji ko bachaya...
R:haan par yeh sab uska drama h...
T:Rishi I'm not getting u... Kya drama???
R:he himself planned d accident n saved uncle...
T:Rishi tum kuch aur hi soch rahe ho...
R:Tanu please believe me...
T:Rishi...why u r not believing him...
R:kyunki wo Pawan h...
Tanu holds her head with hands n looks outside... Just then she sees Neha... She remembered the whole incident that happened at office... Something strikes in her mind...
T(in her mind):ek baar I didn't listen to Rishi...but he was right... Now I should believe him...
By thinking this she goes to rishi n takes him someother place...
R:Tanu tum mujhe kaha lekar jaa rhi ho??
T:ab mere sath aao...
TanShi comes to a secret room...
T:pehle mn tumse bharosa nahin kiya...par tab tum hi sahi the... So without any doubt this time I am trusting u as u should be right... N not be wrong...
R:thank God... Meri Tanu meri baat pe bharosa ki...
Tanu looks rishi shockingly... Just then rishi realize what he had said...
R:wo mn...
T(in her mind):mujhe achcha lagta hai Rishi jab tum mujhe apni samajhte...
T:ab yeh chodo...
Rishi shockingly looks her...
Tanu continues...
T:I will trust u but it will remain secret... Matlab hum dono ke alawa koi aur nhii janne ki I am with u... Ok???
R:ok!!! It will be a good idea... Hamara pehla spie work...
By saying this rishi forwards his hand for promise Tanu promises...
Both leave from the room...
Tanu sees Neha coming there...suddenly Tanu turns to Rishi's side n says...
T:rishi what ever u want to do... Do it... But I will not trust u... I'm trusting Pawan...
Rishi looks shockingly... Tabu signals him about Neha... Rishi understands n says
R:Tanu please...

PS:superb update lemon... Bauji ka accident!! Pawan in next mission... U rocked it dear... Hats off u...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#73
Rishi (acts angry)- tum mujhpe nahi us pawan pe biswas krti ho...
Rishi going outside of house..
Neha happy to see...
Neha- yippie...n she is dancing n singing also...
Bani sees neha...
Bani- ye pagal to nahi ho gayi..kya hogaya tujhe..kahi ese pagalpan ka dora to nahi pada.
Neha holds bani hands n twirls...
Bani- are pagal ho gayi h kya..she hits neha..
Neha- aahhh mamma..apne mujhe kyu mara...
Bani- ek pagalpan kr rhi h...or puch rhi hu to bta bhi nahi rhi h...aisa kya hogaya jo tu ese behave kr rhi h...
Neha- are mamma..baat hi kuch aisi h...agar aap hote na to aap bhi aise hi krte...
Bani- to bta na kya baat h...
Neha says rishi n tanu conversation...
Bani- acha yani ki unme foot dal hi gayi...ye to bahut khusi ki baat h...
Pawan hears all the things...
Pawan-to akhirkar hamara success hogaya..or ab age bhi hamara plan success jarur hoga...

Here Ahana asked to tanu...
Ahana- dii...tera rishi se jhagda hua h kya??
Tanu-nahi to.. tune aise kyu pucha??
Ahana- mene rishi ko gusse ne ghar se bhar jate hue dekha th.. agar tera usse jagda nahi hua to phir wo aise kyu gaya...kahi us neha ne to kuch nahi kiya...
Tanu- are nahi meri tufanmail.. rishi gusse me nahi gaya th..
Ahana-dii.. tu to wah th bhi nahi..tu us neha ko bachane ke liye aisa kh rhi h na..per aj me uska muh tod dungi...
Tanu- nahi..rishi acting kr rh th...
Ahana- rishi acting kr rh th..per kyu??
Tanu says everything...
Ahana- ohhh..to tum dono us pawan ki pol kholna chahte ho...per dii..agar wo pawan ka koi plan hua na to me uska muh tod dungi...or mujhe bhi tumhari team me samil hona h...
Tanu- ok..tu bhi hamari team me h...
Here rishi is thinking about pawan...
Rishi- kya chahta h ye pawan...
That time yuvi and manpreet comes...
Manpreet- bhai kh khoe hue ho...tanu ke sapno me...
Yuvraj- ha khoya hua h tanu ke khawabon me..tabhi to kuch nahi bol rh h...
Both claps n laugh...
Rishi- yah me itna tension me hu or tumhe hasi aa rhi h...
Manpreet- kyu kya hua bhai...
Rishi says all the incidence...
Manpreet- aap tension mt lo bhai..hum apke sath h..dekhna us pawan chavan ka pardafash kardenge...
Yuvraj- ha rishi hum bedi bros se koi nahi jeet sakta...
Trio hugs...
Manpreet- per bhai..wo pawan to hamesha paise ke liye hi hame pareshan krta h..to phir tanu ki family se uska kya fayeda...
Rishi- yahi baat to mujhe bhi samaz nahi aa rhi h. .

Ps: wo word for u cotton candy...n nice update now rishi n tanu is on a new mission... Keep it up..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#74
Rishi breaks d hug n go to bed... ManVi follows him... Rishi says...
R:kyun Pawan ye sab kar rha h???
M:zarur uska man mein kuch aur plan hoga...
Y:haan... Rishi u don't bother about it... I will find that...
R:yes tum dono uska aim k baare m pata karne ki koshish karo... I will try to save meri Tanu aur uski family...from him...
ManVi:meri Tanu????
Just then rishi understand what he said...
R:wo to h na... Kyunki wo meri office pe kaam kar rahi h na???
M&Y:oh aise...😉... Koi aur meaning nhi???
R:tum log h na...
Trio burst into laugh... N gives hi-fi...
Khurana house
Tanu is walking here n there finally she decides to call Rishi...
Tanu takes phone n calls him. Rishi picks d phone...
R:hello Tanu koi problem to nahi hai kya???
T:nhii... Should I only call u for problems???
R:nhii nahi... Aise nhii... Bolo kya h??
T:I'm sorry...
R:sorry??? Kyun???
T:for not trusting u...
R:us m tumhari koi galti nahi... Leave it...
T:par...
R:chodiye...
T:haa chod di...
R:ab hamare plan k baare me bolo???
T:plan k???
R:hn us Pawan chawan ka...
T:hmmm... Ab ahana bhi hamari team me h...
R:sirf ahana nhii... Manpreet aur Yuvi bhi...
T:it's great!!! Ab hum paanch milke mission success karenge...
R:I want to discuss some imp things with u... If u don't mind... Hum bhar kisi aur jagah chale...
T:ok... Par saath Manpreet aur Yuvi ko bhi leke aana...
R:yes sure... Ahana bhi...
T:ok... I think some one is coming... Baad mein jagah aur time msg karo...
R:ok bye
T:bye...
Tanu cuts the call n looks outside bani was that...

PS:Superb update Lemon... Five star team!!! U rocked it dear... I'm waiting for ur update...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#75
Tanu turn n see bani..
Bani asked to tanu..
Bani- kisse baat kr rhi th???
Tanu-meri friend se..aap aise kyu puch rhi ho??
Bani-aise hi puch liya...
Tanu-kuch kaam th apko??
Bani-me sarda parjai ko dudh rhi th...shayad wo niche hongi..
Bani- pta nahi kisse baat kr rhi th..mujhe dekh ke chok gayi th..pta lagana padega...
Bani goes...
Tanu in her mind...kuch to gadbad h..ye yah mamma ko dudhne nahi ayi th..aisa laga jaise jasusi kr rh th...
A message comes in her phone...
Tanu sees...
Tanu-rishi's message..
Rishi sent place n time where they will meet...
Next day..
Khurana house...
Tanu n ahana ready for meeting...
Ahana-dii..per hum dono ek sath jayenge to kisi ko sak nahi hoga??
Tanu- nahi...hum ye kahenge ki me office ja rhi hu or tum kh dena collage ja rhi ho...
Ahana- great idea..
At the dinning table..
Sarda- are kh ja rhi ho tum dono..bina nasta kiye??
Tanu- mamma me office ja rhi hu..or ahana college...
Sarda- itni jaldi...
Ahana- ha mamma mere exams ane wale h na to extra classes h...
Sarda- or tum kyu jaldi ja rhi ho tanu??
Tanu- wo ek important meeting ke liye presentation banani h..isliye
Sarda- acha chali jana..phele nasta krlo..
Tanu-nahi mamma hum late ho rh h hum bahar hi kr lenge...ok bye..chal ahana..
Ahana n turns n collide with neha...
Neha- dekh kr nahi chal sakti moti..
Ahana- tu bhi to dekh kr chal sakti h na...
Tanu interrupt..
Tanu- chal ahana..
Neha- tum dono itni subah subah kh ja rhi ho??
Ahana- tum hamari ma ho jo sabal puch rhi ho...
Tanu- chal na yaar...
Both goes..
Neha- itni jaldi me kh ja rhi h ye dono??

In Bedi house..
Rishi, manpreet n yuvi goes out of the house...raj sees them n call..
Raj- are itni subah subah tum tino kh ja rh ho..
Rishi- papaji important meeting h office me...
Raj- acha.. meeting h..per ye manpreet kyu ja rh h...is khote ka man to kaam me lagta nahi h...
Manpreet- papaji aap bhi na...ab me sudar gaya hu or mera kaam me man lagne laga h..
Raj- ye to bahut achi baat h..ki is khote ka man lagne laga h kaam me...
Rishi- acha..ab hum late ho rh h..bye papaji...
Trio goes...
Here ahana n tanu r waiting for trio..
Ahana- dii..dekh hume bula ke khud ab tk nahi aye..itni bhook lag rhi h..mamma ne itne pyaar se nasta banaya th or tune krne bhi nahi diya...
Tanu- to kuch order krle..
Ahana-ok..
She gives order..
Trio comes at hotel..
Rishi- kh h ye dono??
Manpreet- wo rhe bhai..dekho us moti ko humara wait bhi nahi kiya or nasta kr rhi h..bhukkar..
Trio reaches at that table...
Rishi- hii..kaisi ho??
Tanu- hi..achi hu..itni der kaise hogayi..
Ahana- ha hum kitni der se tumhara wait kr rh h..bina breakfast kiye aye th..jarur tum breakfast krke aye honge..
Manpreet- ji nahi..humne bhi subah se kuch nahi khaya h moti...
Ahana- moti kisko bola..sukde teele...
Manpreet- or kisko tujhe bola bhes...
Ahana- kya bola tu abhi batati hu...
Tanu- ahana hum yah jis kaam ke liye aye h wo krne de..plz
Ahana- ok dii..per isko bhi chup karwao..
Rishi- manpreet chup beth..
Yuvraj- guys..koi plan h mind me..
Manpreet- ek plan mere mind me h...
Rishi- acha bta...
Manpreet- simple h bhai.. us pawan chavan ka kidnap kr lete h..or uske muh se hi bulva lenge ki uska kya maksat h..hai na acha plan..
Ahana- ye tumhara plan h..itna bakwas..humhe plan k pta krna h jail nahi jana h..
Manpreet- acha tum to bahut smart ho..to tum hi koi plan bta do...
Ahana- oye sukde...
Tanu- ahana, manpreet plz chup karo...
Tanu- mere paas ek plan h..
Rishi- ha kya??
Tanu- neha..
Rishi- neha kya??
Tanu- rishi hum sb jante h ki pawan or neha mile hue h..to humein neha ke jariye pawan ke plan k pta lagayenge...
Rishi- great plan..iska matlab h humein neha pe nazar rakhni h..
Tanu- or rishi tumhe usse acha behave krna h..
Rishi- nahi yaar bahut badi chipku h..me nahi..
Tanu- rishi ye tum hi kr sakte ho..wo tumhe impress krna chahti h mujhe nahi..plz
Yuvraj- I think tanu is right rishi..tum us neha se pta laga sakte ho...
Rishi-ok
Manpreet- to guys aj se hum apna misson pawan chavan start krte h..


Ps: wow cotton candy..nice update..wo for late...plz update soon.. waiting for your update...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#76
Tanu forwards her hand to make promise from others... All others places their hands on her's.
T:Ab se hamara plan shuru hua...
All:haan...
T:aur Rishi should call Neha n say sorry to her...
R:mn??? Kya???
T:haan tum...
R:Kaise...
Y:just call her n say sorry for last day happening...
R:hn karta hun...
Rishi unwillingly takes phone n calls Neha... Neha gets surprised as rishi is calling her... Neha takes the call in hurry...
N:Hello...
R:Neha... I'm...
Neha says cutting his words...
N:Rishi... I knew that u will call me...
R:Actually I am sorry Neha as Tanu slapped u... But now only I realised ur love for me...
Tanu signals rishi to put the call in speaker... Rishi does so...
N:no need to say that darling... As I knew that u will realize my love one...
Tanu's eyes becomes red by hearing Neha's words... Rishi notices that n feels a little happy as Tanu is in jealous...
R:so shall we friends...
N:no friends...
R:then???
N:lovers!
Rishi looks Tanu... Tanu signals him to say yes... Unwillingly rishi says yes
R:haan...
N:Aise nhii... Say i will be there for u...
Rishi again looks at Tanu. Tanu signals him to say like that... He says
R:Haan .. I will be there for u...
N:ab ok... Lets go somewhere...
R:kya?? Kyu???
N:hum lovers h na... Isiliye...
R:???
Rishi doubts what to say... Just then Manpreet says
M:bhai jaldi aao ek urgent meeting h...
By getting manpreet's trick rishi says...
R:Neha I have an important meeting so I will call u later...
Neha thinks a while n says...
N:ok darling take care...
Rishi cuts the call... N takes a deep breath...
R:Oh god!!! Yeh konsi ladki h???
All laughs looking at him...
R:kyun has rhe hain??? Only I know its risk...
Tanu feels bad for him... She says by taking his hand...
T:I'm sorry Rishi... U r doing these all for us... Bhut bhut dhanyavad... I can understand ur risk...as in her cousin...
Rishi feels aww for her... He says...
R:Don't worry Tanu it all will be cleared soon... Its my duty to save our family...
All:our family???


PS:wo word lemon for ur waiting... N really wo for late dear... Superb part dear... Loved it to the core... Waiting eagerly for ur update...
Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#77
Rishi realised what he said...
Rishi- ha wo tumhari hamari family ek hi to h..
Ahana- wo kaise??
Rishi- tumhare papa or mere papaji dost h..to hamari family bhi ek hui..samaze ki nahi..hai na..hai na..
Tanu n ahana r not understand but say yes..
Tanu- ok rishi..aj shaam ko tum neha ko text kr dena..ki kb milna h..
Rishi- ok..but me akele nahi jaunga..uska koi bharosha nahi h..kb kya kr de..tum sb bhi mere sath aoge..
All- ok..
Ahana- to guys kl milate h..same place same time...
All- ok..
All goes...
Rishi text to neha..
Neha- excited n gives hug to bani...mamma..I am so happy..
Bani- are aisa kya hogaya??
Neha- mamma rishi k msg aya h..uska or tanu k breakup ho gaya h..isliye hamara patch up ho gaya h...
Bani- sach me..wah meri miss world..aisa kya jadu chalaya us rishi pe..ki wo tujh pe lattu hogaya..acha dekh ab ye moka chodna nahi..moke pe choka jarur lagana...
Neha- ha mamma me bilkul aisa hi karungi...
Next day..
Manpreet calling tanu...
Ahana picks the phone...
Ahana- hello...
Manpreet- hello..tum dono nikl gaye kya...
Ahana- nahi abhi niklne wale h...
Manpreet- abhi tk nahi nikli.. tumhe pta h na hume neha k pahuchne se pehle pahuchna h..
Ahana- tum nikl gaye..
Manpreet- nahi nikl rh h...
Ahana- sukde tile..jb khud nahi nikla to humhara time waste kyu kr rha h..
Manpreet- mujhe bhi koi shok nahi h tumse baat krne k moti bhes...wo to yuvi bhai ne call krne k kh th or mene tanu ko call kiya th to tumne kyu uthaya...
Ahana-kya bola tu sukde tile...phone me se aisa punch karungi ki tera muh tod dungi...
Manpreet- ha tod k to dikha moti..
Yuvi comes n cut the call...
Yuvi- koi to jagah chod diya karo.. har kahi suru ho jate ho tum dono...
Manpreet- bhai me nahi wo...
Yuvi- ha thik h chal ab der ho rhi h...
Everyone reach hotel..
Tanu- acha rishi...tumhe pta h na kya krna h..
Rishi- ha ha..no worry..
All- all the best..
Everyone sitting behind the rishi's table.
Neha comes...
Rishi- hi..come
Neha- hi..me late to nahi hogayi..
Rishi- nahi nahi.. actually neha me tum se us din k liye sorry khna chahta th..
Neha- nahi rishi isme tumhari koi galti nahi th..to sorry mt bolo...sari galti to us bhenji tanu ki th..
Rishi angry to listen this..
Rishi in his mind meri tanu ko bhenji bolti h..mn to kr rh h muh tod du..
Neha- kh kho gaye..
Rishi- kahi nahi..
Neha- acha ye sb chodo..me kaisi lag rh hu...
Rishi-( in his mind) puri cartoon..
Neha- tumne jabab nahi diya..
Rishi- aahh..ohh order aa gaya..waise phle tum mujhe achi nahi lagti th kyunki tum us pawan k sath mil gayi th..or us pawan ki wajah se hi meri or tanu ki fight ho gayi..per me us pawan ki pol kholna chahta hu..tum madad karogi..
Neha- ha wo pawan jaisa dikhta h utna sitha h nahi..per hum uski baat baad me karenge..
Neha in her mind..kahi ye mujhe pawan ki pol kholne k liye to nahi use kr rh...
Rishi- kh kho gayi tum..
Neha- khahi nahi..
She holds rishi's hand..
Neha- chalo na rishi hum khahi or chalte h..
Rishi- kh jana chahti ho tum..itni achi jagah to h ye.
Neha- ha achi h per..mujhe wah jana h..jah koi ata jata nahi..akele hum akele tum...
Rishi- (scared) dekho neha..mera hath chodo..plz chodo..
Neha- tum kitna sarmate ho..pta h me tumhe kitna pyaar krti hu..I lov u.
Rishi- (shocked ) (in his mind ye sunne se phle me bhera kyu nahi ho gaya) kya..acha mujhe jane do neha..
Tanu is jealous to see that...
Tanu- is neha to mere rishi k hath chod hi nahi rh h...abhi batati hu ise. .
Ahana- dii kh ja h tu..
All- tanu stop..
But she is very angry..she sees a waiter come near to neha..she barge into the waiter's feet...all order falls on neha...
Neha- ye kya kiya tumne??
Rishi couldn't control his laugh..n he laughs loudly...
Rishi- I am sorry..ye kya kiya tumne wo ghar se hair wash krke ayi th or tumne uske balo pe noodles gira diye..ab to tumhe ghar jana chahiye..
Neha- me wash room se ati hu..
When she comes she said to rishi..
Neha- rishi tum mujhe drop kr doge..
Rishi- mene tumhare liye cab book krdi h..bhar h..
Neha-tum nahi chaloge..
Rishi- wo meri meeting h..ok jaldi jao..acha nahi lagta..tum aisi halat me..ok bye..
Neha- ok bye..
Rishi goes near to yuvi n manpreet..
Rishi-acha hua jo iske uper khana gir gaya warna pta nahi kya krti..
Yuvi- wo gira nahi giraya gaya th..tanu ne giraya th..
Rishi- tanu tumne..per kyu
Tanu- ab bhi puch rh ho kyu..agar thodi der wo aise hi tumhara hath pakde hoti na to me pta nahi kya krti..
Rishi in her mind.. jealousy...Rishi beta ise or jala..
Rishi- are me handle kr leta..kitne ache se baat kr rhi th wo mujhse...
Tanu- acha us chipku ke pass tumhe bahut maza aa rh th..to jao us ke pass..me ja rhi hu ghar..chal ahana..
Rishi-are are..me to mazak kr rh th.. tumne to mujhe bacha liya..chalo sath me ghar chalte h..
Tanu- nahi me chali jaungi..or waise bhi kisi ne dekh liya to sak ho jayega ki hum mile hue h..
Yuvi- tanu sath me chalte h..tum dono ko ghar se thodi dur chod denge..tum pedal chali jana..
Tanu- ok..
Manpreet- to age ka kya plan h..us neha se kaise pta lagayenge..bhai ab kya karoge..
Tanu- nahi nahi..ab rishi us neha k pass nahi jayega..or agar wo iske paas ayi na to me uska muh tod dungi..hum us neha pe nazar rakhege..
Rishi smile to see tanu's jealousy..
Everyone smile..
Yuvi- chale ghar chale..
Everyone sit into the car..
Rishi drives the car n tanu,ahana n manpreet sit back seat..
Rishi sees tanu into the mirror..tanu sees that but she is very angry...

Ps: excellent part cotton candy..every time u rocked.. wonderful update..n wo for late..wo word for u.. n bahut jaldi me likha h..bahut jayada bada update ho gaya..wo for that..

Edited by Smita_rawat - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#78
As well as awesome update 👏
every part bohot bohot accha likha👍🏼
mujhe vul to nehi gayina??😉
wo meri xm start honewali hai 27th oct se
is liye daily forum per nehi aapati ho,late ho jata hai aap sabki update parne mai..
sorry dear😭

@smita & @gopika aap dono kese ho?
aur @haya kaha hai? wo kesi hai? thik to haina??
bohot dinose update nehi kiya unhone 😭
Edited by TearDrop50 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#79
Hello all...
How r u guys???😳
Sorry for not cmng to IF and not updating my story...
Actually i m tangled in some problems...
But promise i will give update whenever i will be free...
Hope u guys understand...😳
Have great day friends...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#80
@Moni...
Wo word dear for asking about me...😳
I m fine...abhi tk to...but dont know kb tk...😆
Missing tafreeyan on IF...😭
I will be active soon...😳

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