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jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#31
Part-11....Gauri is in a serious condition.i don't
think
I can save both gauri& the
baby.shiv,listen carefully.u
can hav more children.but ur
wife is sum1 who shud b
there till the end of ur
life.now choose whom do u want?

Shiv:save my baby.
Abhay-kusum r shocked. T:r u
sure? S:sure,no doubt.
A-K cry.S goes out.t becomes
upset.

Kusum sits near G with
sad eyes. G:mama,shiv is
loving & caring.
Kusum becomes sad.she
thinks:poor gauri does'nt no whats
there in shiv's mind.
G:tho he knows about my past
he loves me so much
Kusum bursts into tears. G:why
r u crying mama?
Ku:I'm sorry gauri.i lied 2
u that v hav told shiv
everything about u. we did'nt
tell him anything.
G is shocked:what?shiv
does'nt no anything.he married me
without knowing my dark past?u
cheated on me &
shiv.unknowingly I cheated on
that nice person.
G cries:god wil never 4giv me.

Ku:its 4 ur gud future I lied
2 u.
G:what future mama?4 cheating
that innocent person,do u
think god wil giv me a gud
future?my life is finished.
Ku:gauri! G turns
back:mama,u plz go now. Ku:Gauri!
G:plz go..
Ku goes with tears.

S cums.G looks at him with
tears. S:what happened?
G holds his hand & cries. S
did'nt understand anything.
G:my parents cheated on me.
S is wondered:what?
G:shiv,I've a dark past.i
want 2 tell u
everything .otherwise my heart
wil break & I'll die.
S is stunned.

G:when we were in Us,I was
alone.he came 2 comfort me
with a cheerful face.like me
he was also emotional.very
soft.he gave me valuable
frienship.He supported me in
everything .he is….
S listens carefully 2 no his
name.

WHO IS HE?
Cytherea thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
who is it??not shashank rite??GOd how cls shiv b soo callulous nd cold hearted??make him change his mindd
natasha kumar thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
who is he, who i she?????? 😕 That was excellent. shiv wants to save teh babay and not gauri 😡 how mean. Plz cont. soon! 😃
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#34
PART-12

Gauri weeps:the person
who came as a gud friend 2 my
life is shashank.he was very
sweet 2 me.i even wondered
whether a Us born boy can b
like this.tho I liked him
very much,it never turned
into luv.but shashank thought
differently about me.
Once G,S were under a tree.
G:what do u want 2
tell me?
S:I want 2 tell u that…
Unexpectedly S hugs her
tightly.G was
shocked:shashank,wha ts
this?leave me plz
S looses his hand. G
becomes angry & slaps him:how dare
u?
S:don't u luv me?
G:no,u r my friend.
S:I 'm sorry gauri.i thot
u luv me.
S kneels down:plz
gauri,don't b angry & break our
frienship.
G:ok

G goes 2 his house.she gets
inside the open door &
enters S' room.she sees
drugs in his room:shashank takes
drug?
S cums.his eyes were dim. S:u take drugs?
S :ya,so what?
G :I never thot that u r
this sort of a guy.
G was angry & she begins 2
go out.S grabs her hand:u
can't go out wounding my
heart.
G :leave my hand.
S :2 leave ur hand? S
laughs:I won't leave u.
G gets scared seeing S'
eyes.G faints.

G weeps:I don't remember
anything else shiv.i did'nt
see shashank when I opened my
eyes.he did'nt cum 2
college also.later
unexpectedly I realized that I'm
pregnant.i was shattered
when I relised what happened
when I was unconscious.i
wanted 2 die.but my parents'
tears made me not 2 do that
crime.my parents searched 4
shashank.but later was known
that he's in jail due 2 sum
drug case.i cud'nt think of
an abortion,bcoz what did
that innocent baby do?I
gave b'th 2 a baby.my parents
tried 2 giv it 2 an
orphanage.but I did'nt want my baby
2 liv as an orphan while
her mother is alive.but my
parents gave it 2 an
orphanage.but I tolerated it when a
childless cuple Vivan-kaya
in US adopted my baby.when ur
proposal came,I rejected it
as I did'nt want 2 cheat
u.but my parents told that
vivan is ur cusin,if I marry
u I 'l get a chance 2 see
my daughter.but still I cud'nt
think of a marriage.but my
parents lied 2 me that
they've told u the truth
about me.that's how I agreed 2
marry u.but now my mama
revealed that they'vent told u
anything .i was shocked 2 no
that I was cheating on my
husband who loves me more
than his life.but belive me
shiv,I did'nt cheat u
knowingly.i'm willing 2 punish
myself.my mind tells that I
won't liv after this
delivery.
S is shocked.he thinks
about tashu's words & his reply 2
save only the baby.S's eyes
get filled up with tears. S
think s:I misunderstood my
loving gauri.god,plz 4giv me.
G :but I'm not sad even if
I die as I don't deserve u.i'm
happy 2 die,bcoz I'm sure
that u'l look after our baby
well.i wanted 2 tell u
everything b4 I die.i cud.now I
can die.but tell me once
that u've 4given me.
S bursts into tears & hugs
G:u hav'nt cheated me
gauri.nothing wil happen
2 u.i won't allow anything bad
2 happen 2 u while I'm
alive


Raihena thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
Awwwwwwww...thats so swt, h8 that bloody shashank 😡
fida-cute thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
baby will be saved n even gauri will be awwrite n then they will get their daughter atleast try to mAY be vivan isnot ready to give the child
natasha kumar thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
i cant believe shashank did that 😡 atleast the good thing is that he is locked up and gauri told the whole truth. plz cont soon 😉
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#38
Part-13....Gauri:after knowing everything also u luv
me.u r gr8 shiv
Shiv tells in his mind:if u
cum 2 no how I planned 2
torture u,u'll never find me
gr8.
S's tears flow down.
S goes 2 Tashu:Dr,plz save
gauri.
Abhay-kusum r surprised 2 see
S's change.
T:what about ur baby? S:plz
save our baby too
T becomes upset:I'll try my
level best.

After sumtime Tashu cums:there
is a gud news.both gauri
& the baby r saved.
All r happy. T:it's a girl.
S:I want 2 see my daughter.
Nurse cums:Dr,plz cum fast.the
baby is….
T goes inside.All r tensed. T
cums out.
S:whats with my child?
Kusum:what happened 2 my
grandchild?
T:I'm sorry,I cud'nt save the
baby
They r shocked. Abhay
shouts:now only u told that the
baby is saved.
T:I'm sorry,everything is in
god's hands.nothing happens
as we think.
All cry.S thinks:God punished
me by taking away my baby.

S cries taking the dead baby.

S goes 2 G.G opens her eyes.G
smiles:shiv,did u see our
baby?
S keeps silent with eyes full
of tears. G:I can't wait
anymore 2 see my
baby.shiv,take me there.
S wipes his tears:yes.
S-G go 2 see the
baby.Abhay-kusum,tashu go behind them.G
stares at it.G looks at
others:whats this? Why my baby
is kept like this?what
happened?
Kusum cries. G:what
happened? tell.
S's tears r flowing. T:sorry
gauri. ur baby cud'nt b
saved.
G screams:noooooo!shiv…our
baby…
S's eyes r full of tears.he
hugs her.G was silent.
All become upset about her
abnormal condition.

Tashu calls S:I want 2 tell u
an imp matter.gauri is too
weak 2 hav a child
S:what do u mean?
T:gauri won't hav children
anymore
S is shocked:what?
T:plz don't tell gauri the
truth now.it might effect her
health.when she's perfectly
alright u can tell
S is weeping.
Raihena thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
OMG OMG that is so sad, maybe she'l get her other child back 😭
natasha kumar thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
oh no, gauri lost her baby and she cant give birth again 😭 😭 😭 while reading this, i almost cried. i hope everything will be alright. plz cont soon 😭

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