Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91 - Page 24

what adorable update, boy oh boy, shiv has totally changed he don't even want kids all he wants is aguri to be well, I loved the kiss part, they r so sweet when together, hope shiv makes his mum suffer, and really hope Gauri gets better, 👏

cthanx Maria for a wonderful update.

wow, very touching, and getting intense, pls. don't make us wait.

wow..go shiv!!!..really good..cont soon.. 😊 😊 😊

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omg the kiss was toooooooooooooohooooootttttttt.

poor nikki she have to be carefull with gauri this time 😳 .

that was touching,emotional and wonderful.i was just about to cry.plz cont soon 👏 👏

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jus tooooo good........ that kiss 😳 😳 was so intense.......
i jus love the way they have started realisin each other's importance..
the last part where shiv says he will stand up against his mom for Gauri was excellent!!!!!!
waitin for more....

it was really good
plz continue soon

hi freind iam new to this forum but read ur ff.in the begining i hated shiv's 🤢 charecter a lot but he is so adorable 😳 ,the way u moulded the story was simply superb 👏 n to be frank no words to explain .
Nikki 😡 becareful this time u should face ur son 😆

awesome part!!!! 👏 pls continue soon!!!

wonderment update Maria!! it was lovely and emotional at the same time 😳. Shiv is soo concerned for her that he doesn't even care about having kids, all he wants is his gauri to be ok and stay with him. He is soo guilty for what he's done to gauri and is determinedly repenting for it. I liked the way shiv showed his concern and claimed his rights upon her by slapping her for not informing him of her illness, he sure has a different way of showing his anger n concern. The kiss was damn hottt, they both want eachother soo badly but won't admit it, ego problem i guess 😆 .
How does he know she herself will bring the coffee for him, i say over confidence is not good 😉 , he's being naughty already!!
The thing i liked most in this part was that there was no nikky scene! Looking forward to see shiv stand against nikhila for gauri's sake 😳
continue soon 😃