Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91 - Page 23

Originally posted by: nandini90

it was a gr8 fan fic, loved it all the way....keep up the gud work...waiting for ur update.....

LUV NANDINI

thanks. i will 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: shivgauri

great part!!!i hope shiv atleast use his brains now before trustin his mom again. pls continue soon!!!

thanks me too lets see what is yet to come😉😉😉

Originally posted by: kaira

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thanks kaira for your huge applause😉😉😉

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

magnificient.......................
that kiss was soooooooooooo hotttttttt 😳
Shiv is becomin more adorable as the days go by.... his concern is finally evident......
finally i no wat is wrong with gauri.......

brilliant work!!!!! keep it up!!!!!

thank you. thanks i trie my best to make it hmm i liked him better before. hahaha well i had to tell you someday😉😉😉

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

Oh Maria!! u left me speechless with ur wonderful, astonishing and incredible update. 😍
OMG!! the kiss was damn sizzling and sweltering, it literally made me sweat.Man!! shiv surely knows how to seduce her and make her go weak in her knees 😳 , although he kissed her to get the file but he seems to loose himself in the kiss, he sure felt something a desire building inside him 😉. Poor gauri , shiv has so much over her that he can seduce whenever he wishes and she can't do anything about it. Wonder when she would have such a power over him then we'll see how he would resist(i m sure he won't be able to 😳 ).
The part where dadi slipped in the washroom was way too funny and i was laughing my heads off 🤣 . Shiv n Gauri's scene in the washroom was also hot, poor fellow slipped in a trance 😆 thank god dadi called him otherwise he would have stayed there in the same position 4 the whole day thinking that gauri was still in his arms .
thanks goodness atleast now we know what is wrong with gauri otherwise u would have driven me mad with ur suspense 😆 . By the way how did u come up with such a medical problem, u must have done some research 😉 isn't it!!
awaiting ur next update continue soon 😃

omg jiya. thanks. well i worked my best on that scene. you lot wanted it i gave you it. well hold on to your seats because there are more to come yet. i thought it was rather funny. but if you find it hot that is ok by me. actually i was thinking of doing that. but they had the appointment. well everybody had been saying that. i had to tell. you wee asking me in every update what was wring with gauri. research no way. mera pas itna time kahan ke research karon. i will thanks😉😉😉

Originally posted by: sadsunzarsum

wicked 👏

thank you😉😉😉

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

dat was awesome!!!!!!! 👏 but i feel srry for gauri 😭 😭 😭 cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

thank you for your huge applauseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee yeah me too. i will😉😉😉

Originally posted by: sum2005

maria egerly waiting for the update ,please do it soon,cant wait 😳 please update it as soon as possible.

i wil today. thanks for waiting. 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: fida-cute

omg omg shiv kissing gauri waaaaaaaaaaas really hottttttttt 😳 😳 😳 gauri is suffering from such a disease wat will he do know 😭

thanks. 😳😳😳 well he has to do something to save his wife.😉😉😉

part 15

shiv was not breathing. doctors words kept repeating in his mind. he wass gone numb. he could not believe his ears. how could that happen. why did this happen to her. she had gone through so much pain. "mr kapoor are you ok." shiv did not move he held gauri's hand tightly. "we have to undergo a surgery very soon. or i fear that it may turn into cancer. can you please think about it" shiv held her hand even tighter as if telling her that he wil not let anything happen to her. gauri crying shivering while holding varni. she was too upset with it. she did not know that her illness if not treated would turn into noncurible disease. "plz doctor me apni beti ke liye jeena chahti hon." shiv looked at her and then to doctor. "i want her treatment done fast doctor. i am ready to pay all it costs. i want the best dcotor for her treatment. and sure nothing happens to her. plz doctor. just save my wife". doctor smiled realising the love between them.
"mr shiv in ki illnes to char saal ho gaye app ne notice hi nahi liya. how could not let her get treated earlier." shiv was guilty. what could he say to the doctor. that he had misunderstood her. that he had left her on his wedding night. that he had been to busy torturing her for two years. what could he say to the doctor. "inki koi galati nahi hai doctor i hid it from him. me nahi chahti thi ke yeh meri illness ko le ke worry hon." doctor smiled. while shiv was surprised. even now she was covering up for him. and all he done was to harm her every time he saw her. never letting go of a moment in which he could hurt her. doctor looked at both of them then spoke "don't worry mr and mrs kapoor. after the surgery you wil be able to have more kids but for that to happen mrs kapoor has to get the treatment fast." shiv quickly spoke "i don't care about the kids doctor i want my wife to be ok. i want her illness to be treated as soon as possible." doctor looked at them " sure. but mrs kapoor please don't take much stress. and don't worry you wil be fine after the treatment." "doctor can you please fix a date for the surgery. i don't want any delays now." "sure mr kapoor. but before that we have to do some test. so tomorrow you will have to come for the tests. i will make an appointment for you now" "thank you doctor thanks alot" "i am here to help mr kapoor" after that they come out of the doctor's room. gauri holding varni who was sleeping. shiv looking at gauri. who was silently crying now. he was shattered to know about gauri's illness. she had suffered so much and never mentioned thsi to anybody. he was angry with her for fighting alone. for not letting anyone help her earlier. how could she put her life at risk for surviving from his mothers accusation. how could she care for someone who had acccused her all the time. how could she care for the person who was responsible for making him leave her for filling in hatred in him towards her so much. his mother accused gauri of bring pregnent and aborting the child. how could she do that when she was this ill. she came out victorious from all the accustaion that his mother put on her. she was nothing like he had been told she was pure and innocent. she was the kind of girl people pry for. people want daughters like her wife like her sisters like her. and he had her but what did he do to her. "i promise gauri i will not let anything happen to you. as long as i am alive i will not let you get away from your daughter. i wil never separate you and varni. you will be her mother she will call you mother. and you will live to hear that from her." now gauri was walking behind him. shi had not said a word since they came out of the doctor's room. they reached the car shiv opened the door. gauri sat in holding varni. they did not say a word to each pther both are quiet.hey reach home and went into the house. still not saying anything. then shiv spoke. mujeh eik coffee ka cup la do me apne room me hon" he went. gauri was scared she did not know what to say. she knewhe was angry. his voice told her this much. she went to kitchen and boiled water and went to dadi's room. "kaisi hain dadi app." "me theek hon tum kaisi hon" "me bhi theek hoon dadi. dadi me varni ko yahan chor do is ko khelna hai or mujeh kuch kaam hai" "yeh bhi koi pochne ki baat hai" gauri levaes varni on the bed and gives dadi varni's milk bottle and leaves for shiv room. as he was shouting "ramu kak meri coffee" gauri gets the coffee for him.
she walks in with teh coffee. he was working on his laptop. she couldse that he is angry. she puts the coffee on the side table and quickly turns to leave. she was near the door when shi stops her "gauri eik minute roko" she could feel the anger in his voice. he got up and walked upto her then passed her and closed the door locking it. he then turned towrds her and came upto her. gauri was shivering and sweating. she knew shiv was angry. she was scared of thinking what would happen now. shiv suddenly with force slapped her. she fell on the bed beacuse of the force of the slap. her hair on her face. shiv laid down beside her holding her by her arm making her face him. his eyes burning with anger. "why gauri why did you do this. why did you hide this from me. why did you neglected your health. why did you not get treated. why did you not let anyone help you" tears running down their eyes. noth sitting up now. gauri stood up and went near the window. "what else could i do shiv. i died the day you left. i had nothing to live for. you had given me happiness for one second and took away my lif the other. you killed me. but dadajii dadiji and mahen pap loved me alot. they wanted me. i stayed here for them. but now shiv nothing is same. i want to live shiv. me jeena chahti hon shiv apni varni ke liye. meri zindagi ki eik khushi hai. mujeh aisa lagta hai jaise yeh bhi mujh se chin jaye gi. shiv me marna nahi chahti. ap kyun aye meri zindagi me wapis shiv. kyun mere andar zinda rehne ki khuwahish jagayi. kyun le ke aye varni ko meri zindagi me. why do you always hurt me shiv." shiv goes towards her and hugs her. both crying "me tumhe kuch nahi hone don ga gauri. tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti hon ke me varni se uski ma door jane do ga. no one will take varni away from you. on one. not even me. you are her mother. you will stay with her. she will call you mother and you will be able to hear it. i will get your treatment done. i will see to it that nothing happens to you gauri. me tumhe kuch nahihone don ga. i will pay as much as this treatment needs you will live gauri.you will get the best treatment." "nahi shiv mere pass paise hain treatment ke liye me pay karon gi" "gauri keep quiet. you will not pay. i have this mcuh right on you since you are the mother of my daughter. i can do this much for you. till now all i have done is hurt you let me help you for once. tum leave ke liye apply kar do. tum jab tak kaam nahikaro gi jab tak tum recover nahi ho jati" gauri puts her head on shiv's shoulder. shiv puts her hand in her hair. thinking to himself "me tumeh kuch nahi hone don ga gauri. me bohot guilty feel kar raha hon gauri meri waja se tumhe yeh sab sehna para hai. agar me tumhare saath hota to yeh khabhi nahi hota" gauri was crying against his shirt. shiv shirt was getting wet. "shiv mujeh dar lagta hai nikhila aunty will be hurt when she comes to know about it. she will be hurt when she comes to know taht you helped me with money" shiv hearing this holds her tightly. "gauri koi kuch nahi kahe ga mujhe pe bharosa rakho" he hugs her his head in her neck. they held each other tightly never wanting to let go. as if it was now or never. letting go meaning losing each other. they let go of each other shiv brings his face near to kiss her. he removed her hair which fell on her face. gauri closed he eye. he angelic face brighten his eyes. his finger moving down to her lower lips. he played with her lip. she shivered. he touched her again her lips were warm in his touch. he bent down to taste her lips. he kissed her soft lips. tingling energy hummed through her system, ran into her limbs. she did not hold back this time. she kissed him with as much passion as him. his fingers glided over her ribcage. his other hand resting on her waist. he ravished her lips made them his in every way. then tasted her fully. kept his gaze on he face. her eyes opened as feeling his gaze. her eyes darker with passion. they parted. they stared into each other eyes. smiling. then he kissed her again. gauri melting in his touch. too week to stand. shiv helped her stand . she stood against him. broke the kiss. and just stood there hugging each other. they both came out of a trance when they heard dada ji calling "gauri gauri beta kahan ho tum" gauri pulled away in a shock. "coffee thandi ho gayi me or bejh deti hoon." she runs toward the door opens it and runs outside. he smiled to himself. he knew she will herselfbring coffe for him. he had wiped her tears and promised himself never to let her cry. "gauri tumhari ankhon me ansoo bilkul ache nahi lagte khabhi mat rona. he then thought of his mom. his smile faded. "i hate you mom for doing this to her. you have accused my wife and i can't tolerate it. if you ever accuse her again. then think about it ten times because this time you will be facing your son."