Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91 - Page 25

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

wonderment update Maria!! it was lovely and emotional at the same time 😳. Shiv is soo concerned for her that he doesn't even care about having kids, all he wants is his gauri to be ok and stay with him. He is soo guilty for what he's done to gauri and is determinedly repenting for it. I liked the way shiv showed his concern and claimed his rights upon her by slapping her for not informing him of her illness, he sure has a different way of showing his anger n concern. The kiss was damn hottt, they both want eachother soo badly but won't admit it, ego problem i guess 😆 .
How does he know she herself will bring the coffee for him, i say over confidence is not good 😉 , he's being naughty already!!
The thing i liked most in this part was that there was no nikky scene! Looking forward to see shiv stand against nikhila for gauri's sake 😳
continue soon 😃

thanks jiya. yaar kum likha karo. i know poor shiv and gauri. so much happened they needed eachother for support. i know so sweet of shiv. well i am writing hot scenes now a days. well i don't think he realised till yet that he loves her. she loves him alright. but it wil take time for him to realise. well she will. she is sacred of him so much . hmm it was no niki day. hmm well this is going to be nice. thanks i will😉😉😉

Originally posted by: shivgauri

awesome part!!!! 👏 pls continue soon!!!

thanks 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: soniayk6

hi freind iam new to this forum but read ur ff.in the begining i hated shiv's 🤢 charecter a lot but he is so adorable 😳 ,the way u moulded the story was simply superb 👏 n to be frank no words to explain .
Nikki 😡 becareful this time u should face ur son 😆

thanks. welcome. nice to see you replying. hey don't say anything about him 😕 i liked him when he was bad. thank you. 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: lovefaz

it was really good
plz continue soon

thanks i wil 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

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jus tooooo good........ that kiss 😳 😳 was so intense.......
i jus love the way they have started realisin each other's importance..
the last part where shiv says he will stand up against his mom for Gauri was excellent!!!!!!
waitin for more....

thank you. hmmmm thanks again. yeah after what seems forever. hmm lets see what will he do to his mom if he caught her insulting gauri.😉😉😉

Originally posted by: amneet89

that was touching,emotional and wonderful.i was just about to cry.plz cont soon 👏 👏

thank you. hmmm was it this sad. sorry i don't cry easily. and the emotional scenes to me are funny. i will😉😉😉

Originally posted by: sum2005

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omg the kiss was toooooooooooooohooooootttttttt.

poor nikki she have to be carefull with gauri this time 😳 .

thank you sumi di. every body seems to finding it hot. yes she does i wonder what shiv wil do if he caught niki😉😉😉

Originally posted by: srk1

wow..go shiv!!!..really good..cont soon.. 😊 😊 😊

thanks. 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

wow, very touching, and getting intense, pls. don't make us wait.

thanks. don't worry i will not make you wait its only mondays and tuesdays. 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

what adorable update, boy oh boy, shiv has totally changed he don't even want kids all he wants is aguri to be well, I loved the kiss part, they r so sweet when together, hope shiv makes his mum suffer, and really hope Gauri gets better, 👏

cthanx Maria for a wonderful update.

thank you. well he had to change someday in order to se gauri's innocence. well wo sudher gaya hai. abb us ko gauri ki jan se ziyada kuch pyara nahi hai. well like before thank you. i too want to se her pay for her deeds.😉😉😉