Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sum2005
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maria very very well scripted,i am so happy.

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it would nat have been posible with out you. so thank you 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict
wooohhoo, maria, welcome bak girl, this seems like a very good story, i'm looking forward to the next part to know what exactly was the surprise was when he got home, poor Gauri why does he hate her so seems he as a daughter so its has been a while, he's been with her,so what gives girl, can't wait. 👏 , and u mentioned my name at the end pointing u tried like me, what r u talking lovey, u done a much better job than me, i am scared to,well kinddaa go to the end but u did brilliantly, hats off to u , keep it up i love it, 😃

thanks yaar. so good to be back. i was dying to read your comments on my new ff. i like people telling me it was good. so thanks you very much. now you playing my trick on me han. you are asking me question about the ff which i would not tell. like i bug you all the time with those questions of mine on your ff. and about me putting your name at the end. i aws saying the truth. i can never be as good. but i will certainly try. i can hope is you lot like my stuff😉

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maria

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Originally posted by: JCluvs srk
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thanks for your aplause girl. aprecitaed😉

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Originally posted by: kaira
intesting fanfic 👏 👏 👏

i am glad you find it interesting i am doing my best to give you different genre on ff. i've done suspense. i think after this one i will do horror. or atleast i will try. thanks😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

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yaar i have been trying for ages that damn thing won't let me post

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if it is a short msg it will but not long ones

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Posted: 18 years ago

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part 2

shiv came home and got a shock. he saw everyone preparing for his wedding. he remembered his moments with ipshita. how he loved her. how she felt in his arms. god he could not marry that gauri. she was nothing to him. all his loyalty was with ipshita. he saw his mum coming upto him.
nikhila "kaise ho shiv tum logon ka waqt kaisa guzra kal tum log khush to hona."
shiv "abhi yahan anay se pehle kush tha lakin andar atay saath hi. mom kiya zarori hai. papa ko meri khushi se ziyaa us ganvar ki khusi ziyada pyari hai."
nikhila " janti hon shiv ke tumhe is waqt kaisa lag raha hoga. wo larki hai hi aisi pata nahi kiya jadoo kiya hai us ne. tumhara baap tumhara nahi raha. lakin tum worry kyun kar rahe ho. tumhari shadi ipshita se ho gayi hai yeh kon sa tumhari wife hogi. yeh sif or sirf eik najaiz rishta hoga. tumhari asal biwi to ipshita hai. tum is ke bare me mat socho. tumhe yaad hai na humara agay ka plan kiya hai."
shiv" haan mama janta hon lakin mujeh kyun aisa lagta hai ke me galat kar raha hon. me janta hon ke wo meri kuch nahi lagti. lakin phie kyun mera dil mujeh se keh raha hai ke me eik gunnah karne ja raha hon."
nikhila" kyun ke tum eik ache insan ho. is liye wo larki tum se shadi karna chahti hai. tum eik ache insan ho shiov lakin wo nahi. us jaisi besharam larki ke liye worry mat karo. abb tak wo kaun se rishte se is ghar me hai. han eik rishta ajj raat banay ga lakin sirf duniya ke nazroon me. tum apne pyar ka saath do. is ki chinta mere pe chor do. bohot jald me mahen ko yeh ehsas dila don gi ke un ka faisla galat tha yeh larki humare kabil nahi. jo kabil thi wo mere bete ki biwi ban chuki."
shiv "thanks mom agar app na hoti to me janay kiya karta. app mujeh sabse azeez ho. agar ajj app na hoti to me apne pyar ko khabhi hasil nahi kar pata. mom thank you"
saying this he hugs her. then goes to his room to get some rest he had only 2 hours sleep. he entered his room. took out his cell. dialed a number.
shiv "ipshita. kaisi ho jaan."
ipshita "tumhe miss kar rahi hon. tumhare baghair me kaisi ho sakto hon shiv."
shiv " don't worry darling ajj raat tak ki to baat hai phir hum humesha ke liye saath honge."
ipshita remaind silent.
shiv "aj aoo gi meri us shadi ko dekhne jis ka koi wajood nahi hoga jis ke me sirf apne baap ki tasali ke liye kroon ga. jo me gauri se badla lene ke liye karon ga. kyun ke us ne tumhare or mere beech anay ki koshish ki."
ipshita "shiv pata nahi kyun mujeh ajeeb lag raha hai. me tum se bohot pyar karti hon agar kuch garbar hoyi to. shiv me tumhare baghair nahi reh sakti ab to bilkul nahi. tna yaad rakhna ke now i own you. mera saath khabhi na chorna shiv."
shiv "ipshita yeh shiv jab tak zinda hai tab tak tumahara saath nahi choray ga. i was always yours and wil remain yours."
ipshita "waise shiv humare anay wale din kitne haseen honge na. jahan sirf me or tum honge."
shiv smiles. "haan ipshita humari anay wali zindagi bohot haseen hongi. i promise you that. me tumhe duniya ki har khushi donnga."
ipshita "i will take you up on that"
shiv " sure honey i love you"
ipshita "i love you tooo. ok bye"
shiv "aren't you missing something"
ipshita "nahi to kyun kiya hoa"
shiv "you sure"
ipshita "yes shiv i am sure. ok you tell me what i am missing."
shiv "my kiss"
ipshita "shiv we are on a phone. omg you so bad. i am puting the phone down"
shiv "someon iphshita i am your husband you owe me this much. so do it."
ipshita"shiv no"
shiv "ipshita"
ipshita "shiv no"
shiv "jaan"
ipshita "god shiv you are so bad"
she gave him what he asked. and put the phone down. shiv never knew that ipshita would be so shy. he liked it he liked seeing this side of her. he fell a sleep thinking about her. he woke up by a noise. someone was banging on door. he looked at the clock it stated 6.00. the time for the wedding was 7.00. he got up opened the door. he saw his cousin standing outside.
vivan "kiya bhaiya ajj app ki shadi hai or ap abhi tak so rahi hai. logon ki khushi me neendien ur jati hai or app ki neendien a rahi hain. chaliye tayar nahi hona kiya."
shiv stood seriously silent which went unnoticed by vivan. he noved a side vivan came in with a servent behind him with shiv's clothes. it was beautiful sherwani although. shiv never though of it as one. he hated everything. everything happening was wrong. including marrying gauri. shiv got ready and went with vivan. everybody was waiting downstairs. they then went to the hall booked for the wedding. shiv was feeling really incomfortable. he wanted to get it over with. it was 7.00. he saw girls bringing down gauri. she looke beautifull. if she had not been bad then who would have been friends with her. she was a beauty but wicked. he could feel only hatred for her nothing else. the urge of leaving her here was growing stronger. just to leave her at the mandap. to let her face the humiliation. she was standing in front of her they excahnged the barmala's. shiv remebered his wedding with ipshita yesterday. the sat down the pandit ji done the mantra's they stood up to take the pheras. they were n their 5th phera when the knot opened. everybody looked worried. it was a bad omen. mahen told everybody not to worry he tied it again and they took the pheras. he put sindor in her mang remembering doing it to ipshita. then put on the mangalsutra. then they took the ashirwad. he hated himself for doing that. for doing this to ipshita. he knew how hard it would be for her. he saw her standing in the crowd. he went upto her hugged her.
shiv "i am sorry. meri majbori..."
ipshita "shiv yeh ik natak hai tum fikar na karo me theek hoon"
shiv let go of her. then they talked for a while. gauri was taken to her room while shiv stayed with his mother and ipshita. 4 hours passed. since they came home. the wedding lasted three hours. it was two o clock. shiv went into his room. he saw gauri on the sage waiting for him. he remembered his night with ipshita. he knew he could not stay with gauri another instant. he went upto her. seated himself in front of her. he picked up her ghoonghat. gauri kept her eyes low. he noticed she was nervous. he wondered how could someone act so well. it was like natural. she should have tried in movies. would have been a top actress by now. he put a finger underneath her chin and slowly brought her face up. she let him. her eyes still low. "gauri" said shiv in husky voice. gauri looked at him. who now stared into her eyes. he kept thinking why was she so bad. what had he ever done to her. why did she want to ruin his life. the anger grew deeper. he let go of her. she lowered her eyes again. shiv came near her again. he lifted her face. he kissed those soft lips of her. he felt gauri melting he let go.
shiv "kiya tumhe kisi ne pehli bar choa hai gauri"
gauri looked at him in shocked.
shiv "kiya hoa is tarhan kyun dekh rahi ho gauri. me ne tum se jawab manga hai. apne pati ko jawab nahi do gi or kitne mardon ne tumhe is tarhan choa hai. or kitne mard in labon ko choom chuke hain."
he saw gauri going red.
shiv "stop blushing honey. tumhe bilkul suit nahi karta. tum jaisi besharam larki ko is tarhan sharmana yan ghabrana suit nah karta tum me to bohot gur hain. janti hon ke ameeron ko kis tarhan se apne kabze me kiya jata hai"
gauri got up from the bed and moved towrad the bathroom. before she could he pulled her into his arms. she sturggled to be free. but he was too strong.
gauri "app kiya chahte ahin mujhe se me app ki biwi hoon. app mujhe se kis kisam ke behuda sawal pooch rahe hain"
shiv laughed "behuda mere sawal nahi tum ho. or tum meri biwi nahi. tum jaisi bikaoo aurat meri biwi nahi ho sakti" he let go of her. he could see the embarassment on her face.
shiv "or raha sawal biwi honay ka to tum meri biwi nahi ho. tumhari or meri shadi tak jaiz nahi tum se pehle me ipshita se shadi kar chuka ho so legally she is my wife. i hate the sight of you honey. i can't bear to be with you.."
gauri "to phir mujhe se shadi kyun ki meri zindagi barbad kyun ki."
shiv screamed "me ne tumhari zindagi barbad ki ya tum ne meri. mere dad mujhe se iyada tumhe pyar karte hain. tumhare liye unho ne mujhe property se aak karna chaha. tumhare baap ko diye hoe wada ke karan. tumhara or mera koi rishta nahi. logon ke sawalon ke liye khud ko tayar kar lo. kyun ke ab utm sirf yehi karo gi me ja raha hon tumhe chor kar apni biwi ke pass. or keh dena mere dad ohh i mean your dad. ke mujhe un ke paise nahi chahiye me u sirf tum se badla lena chahta tha. le liya me ipshita ke saath ja raha ho tum raho mere naam ke saath. eik najaiz rishte ki tarhan. you do know aise logon ko kiya kaha jata hai gauri dont you. you will benothing but a keep. my keep. me jo tumhari shakal tak nahi dekhon ga bye gauri. best of luck." he pushed her and she fell as if the life was taken out of her.
he did not need to telll anyone they al heard the cnversation he did not stop. he left and went with ipshita to mumbai.

thats all for tonight. hope you like it sumana ur great i just love writing this one

Edited by crystalclear - 18 years ago