Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91 - Page 3

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Originally posted by: sum2005

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great update maria,omg shiv left the kapoor house .

poor gauri 😭 .

shiv u r so mean and niiki also 😡

yeh he left. but i am going to make it even better not like the usuall kaa. he decides to sacrifice. he will pay for his mistakes

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

thanks yaar i will. thanks for your huge aplause

hey Maria,
i gotta ask u 1 question!! why do u have this habit of separating the lead pair n then creating such circumstances that bring together again 😕 , anyways that makes ur ff even more interesting 😳 . By the way where r ur pink dialogues man, i miss them. u better include them in ur next part 😡 .
the update was great, they (shiv, ipshy,nikki) r soo cruel to spoil gauri's life n i really feel like killing shiv 4 his behavior n disgusting things he said to gauri 😡 . Poor gauri left alone on her wedding night
continiue soon 😃

man this shiv is too much😡...dude needs to get a life he said so bad stuff to gauri...he his mom and ippy are so disgusting to play with gauri's life😡....i hope they regret what they have done 😡
awesome part 👏👏

part3

he did not need to telll anyone they all heard the conversation he did not stop. he left and went with ipshita to mumbai.
FLASHBACK

he came out of the past as he heard his daughter crying. he reached for the bottle but it was empty. it was already morning. he put a pillow beside so she would not roll and fall on the floor. (hey i am a mother of three i know how to handle them. thats what my friends said. that i know too much about handling kids) he gets of the bed. (he ran down the stairs slowly counting his steps. sorry i am in a funny moood) he went down the stairs and made his way to kitchen. he suddenly stops at the door. his expression changes to anger. he wanted to turn back but at who's expense his daughters. he could not just let her cry. he hated the site of that women and would not want to be in the same room as her. but it was neccessary because his daughter was bhooki. he stepped into the kichten. he saw gauri had her back towards him she was cooking. he sliently went to get the milk from the bowl. he was just about to pick it up when she spoke. "dadi is ko haath mat lagana yeh varni ke liye hai. she must hungry." shiv leaves the bowl there and then.he turns towards her shouting. "how dare you take varni's name. she ain't have any realtion with. you don't take of her i do. which i do pretty well. you better lay your off her B****." she got frightened by his voice. "ji me..." before she could finish speaking he thrown the bowl on teh floor. "tumhara napak hathon se choi hoi koi bhi chez me apni beti ke kareeb nahi jane doon ga. tumhe tumhare maksad main me khabhi nahi hone doon ga." "ji kiya matlab" "tum janti hon ke varni meri kamzori hai or tum us ko zariya bana ke mere kareeb ana chahti ho. gauri chattergee yeh khabhi nahi hoga." he slaps her. she hardly manage to stay on her feet. she was in shock and just stood. she never thought shiv would raise a hand on her. he quickly went to the fridge and got the milk. before he boils it he screamed at her. "don't you get the point get out i don't want to you in front of me. i don't want to see the ugly face of yours." she came out of the shock and ran outside not noticing that someone outside had seen her. moment later ramu kaka came in. "shiv baba ko madad chahiye" shiv angrily stared at her. "JAB WO DHOOD GARA KAR RAHI THI TAB KAHAN KAHAN MARE THE. AINDA SE VARNI KA DHOODH TUM GARAM KARO GE. OR AGAR US NE HAATH LAGAYA TO TUM KO KHATUM KAR DOON GA" ramu kaka just looked at him hurt. no one has ever spoken to him like that in this house. shiv left and went towards his room. he picked up varni she had fallen a sleep crying. she woke up by his touch and started crying again. he knew she was hungry. he put the bottle in her mouths and she quietened. he wiped of the tears from her eyes. her tears made his sad. he felt sad at the moment. he promised himself that he is going to be the best dad. he is going to take care of her. raise her like a princess. he made her quiet and gave her to his mom as she was awake to give her a bath. his mom wanted to take responsability of varni. but shiv did not want that to happen. but she told him that she will do most of her duties and that was an order.he agreed. he went to take shower. when he came out of the shower he saw his dad waiting for him. his expression gave away his anger. "dad app yahan koi kaam tha to mujeh bola lete." "how dare you. tumhari himat kaise hoi gauri pe haath ithane ki. kis haq se tum ne us pe haathh uthaya." "kis haq se wo meri beti ka dhayan kar rahi hai me ne app ko pehle hi kaha tha dad ke me nahi chahta ke wo us ke kareeb tak jaye. us ki haath se bani eik bhi meri beti ke liye zeher hai. is baat ke khayal ap rakhiye ke wo meri beti ke kareeb an aye. abhi to thapar mara hai. koi pata nahi agli bar zinda rahe ya nahi. agli bar me ne usko meri beti ke kareeb dekha to mujeh se bura koi na hoga." shiv left in anger. mahen just looked at the door from which his son went 2 seconds ago. trying to wonder why shiv was so angry with her. what had she ever done to him. he was the nicest person her ever knew. how could his son be so wrong. he went to gauri'r room to find gauri still crying. "gauri beta bas karo. beta me janta ho ke shiv ne galat kiya par me kya karoon wo meri baat sunene ko tayar nahi. i am so sorry beta. tum us ka dhayan nahi kiya karo. let him live his way. jab mushkil pare gi khudi tumhare pass aye ga. stop crying beta." gauri hugs him. crying with hiccups. "papa me ne kuch nahi kiya me to sirf varni ka khyala kar rahi thi. phir us ne mujeh thapar khyun mara. wo kyun mere saath aisa kar rahe hain. shadi ki raat mujeh chor ke chle gaye jate jate yeh keh gaye ke me un ki najaiz biwi hoon jisi log or kuch sirf eik rakhail kahe ge. papa app mujeh bataiye me kiya karon me jitna us se door jane ki koshish karti hoon waqt utna hi mujeh us ke kareeb le jata hai. kash papa me paida hi na hoti. agar hoi to paida hote sath hi mar jati. meri zindagi me uper wala shayad sukh likhna bhol gaya. papa sab mujeh chor ke chale jate hain. papa app to mera saath nahi chorien ge na. mera app ke siwa koi anhi hai. mujeh jaisi manhoos ko koi sahara nahi deta papa." mahen just ran his fingers through her hair. his tears dropping and getting lost in gauri's hair. she was right god had never given her happiness. he wondered what was written in her karam. he let her cry. that is all she had been doing since her dad died. he thought his son will give her happiness but all he done is give her more pain. gauri got ready for work and came out to go to school. she had some books in her hands. she came downstairs. and saw shiv there. she just wanted to leave straight away but could not. she never left the house without taking dada dadi's ashirwad. she did not look at shiv's way. went toward dada dadi took their ashirwad. then bent down to take mahen's. she left saying bye to all three of them. not daring to give a glance at shiv. her eyes were red from crying. shiv noticed that she never took his mums ashirwad or said bye to her. more hatred built in him. he could not believe she would disrespect his mother. he left from there frowning and went outside. he saw her taking a cab rather than a car. thinking to himself "what do you want me to see gauri chatergee. that you are so poor taking a cab to our office. mum told me you own cars. so why try being poor in front of me." he went inside again. he said bye to everyone and kissed varni good bye. left for the office. once he was in there he been hugly greeted by his workers. he went to his cabin. he went through some stuff. some file that his dad gave me. he found out about a lo of stuff. one being that gauri did not work for them she worked in a school. shiv kept thinking about ipshita and his daughter.
FLASHBACK

he came up behind her. picked her up from waist.
shiv "oh god ipshita you have given me the best news ever."
ipshita "shiv yeh meri khush kismati hai ke me tumhare bache ki janam de rahi ho i am so happy shiv. me tumhe bata nahi sakti ke me kitni khush hoon. me kab se intezar kar rahi thi tumhe batane ka lakin tum kaam me busy the. you know mumbai me humara koi hai bhi nahi jis ke saath me din guzarti. me tumara intezar karti rahi or din lamba hota gaya."
shiv kissed her passionatly.
shiv "i am so sorry. lakin lets make this news wonderfull." shiv takes her in his arms carries her to the bedroom. he puts her down. kisses her again.
shiv "get ready darlin we are going out. i love you. you have given me te best gift ever. and i owe you a treat."
he says in a husky voice he takes her to a romantic dinner. they dance on a slow tune. after a romantic night out they come home. shiv picks her up and puts her on the bed.
shiv "abb se tum kuch nahi karo gi sif or sirf rest. or wasie bhi pregenent aurtien kaam nahi karti."
FLASHBACK ENDS
it was 5 already time for him to leave. he went to shop to get a toy for varni after that he went home. the house was very quiet. no one was home. he went upto his room no one there. hen he went to his mums room and stopped on the door. rage took over. he went in and pushed her she fell on the flooor. hit her head with the side if the table. "TUMAHRI SAMUJH ME NAHI ATA TUMSE ME NE KAHA THA KE MERI BETI SE DOOR REHNA TO PHIR" he picked up his daughter and left the room. gauri held her head which was bleeding. shiv came to his room and dialled a number. an hour later someone knocked on the door. mahen opened police came in. "we are here to see gauri chttergee" gauri came "yes inspecter" "mam you are underarrest." mahen "what. what did she do." "she tried to harm Mr shiv kapoor's daughter." all were shocked. gauri stood still. there was nothin in her expression. nohting. mahen "app ko kis ne kaha." "me ne" a voice came from ebhind. it was shiv. everybody shocked

Just read part 2... it was essentially WICKED.

Man, Shiv has an attitude. I love him and I hate him. I love him for his adaa, I hate him for degrading her existence, for having the guts to touch her... kiss her... touch her soul... and walk away.

You'll regret it Shiv Kapoor... You will...

Crystal jaanu, you are simply superb!!

Rock on~

Cheers,
dc

nice update.

yaar shiv is so cruel towards gauri,mahen why cant u give a slap to shiv 😡 .

gauri was injured due to him and he reported to police that she is trying to harm his daughter 😡 .

shiv omg u r such a 😡

oh god i feel like killing shiv so can be with his lovely wife ippy 😡he is so disgusting i never hated shiv character as much i hate him in your fanfic 🤬
i really hope he pays for his deeds 😡

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

hey Maria,
i gotta ask u 1 question!! why do u have this habit of separating the lead pair n then creating such circumstances that bring together again 😕 , anyways that makes ur ff even more interesting 😳 . By the way where r ur pink dialogues man, i miss them. u better include them in ur next part 😡 .
the update was great, they (shiv, ipshy,nikki) r soo cruel to spoil gauri's life n i really feel like killing shiv 4 his behavior n disgusting things he said to gauri 😡 . Poor gauri left alone on her wedding night
continiue soon 😃

hmmmm i love it. you know the love grows stronger. ahhh my pink dialougues i will try to add them in as soon as i can. dont get angry yaar me likhon gi agli bar moo laal mat karon. tamatar dikhta hai. i hate them all too for doing this to gauri. pata nahi kiya ho gaya hai sab ko