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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey
it is just so awesome
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part 👏 i really wanna know who the stalker guy is pllzzzz continue soon !!!
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Originally posted by: kaira

great part 👏 i really wanna know who the stalker guy is pllzzzz continue soon !!!


thanks you will know i will try my best to post it today. i was busy with mahendi so i could not update
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry to keep you all waiting for soo long. here it goes

part7 last part

gauri saw him aproaching. she never liked the side of this man. she got bad vibes whenever he was around. she decided to walk away but he was alraedy two step closer to her. "hi gauri how are you doing." "hi arya i am fine wat about you" "i am fine. long time no see. what have you been upto. i saw you with a guy the other day. you going out with him" what it to you honey she thought. "yes. his name is shiv. we are dating. he is nice to me." silence. "so what brings you here arya." arya grinned. "oh i just came to pick up somethings for work. you know you don't get all the things in small towns. have to move travel to cities to get things." "yeh i know it must be quite hard to travel for little things." "no not at all gauri. at least this way i get to see you. you don't come around anymore. i liked having you around. now i have to travel to come and see you. i think its worth it. do you want to go for some coffee." "no i am sorry. i can't i have work to do." gauri did not like the guy he was her friends brother. she stopped meeting her friend beacuse of him. "that ok we can have a coffee at your office...." before he could finish she spoke. "sorry i can't do thos you know that its the company policy no friends alowed for coffee or gup shup. i am so sorry maybe another time." "sure other time than. lets make sure there is another time for both of us ok. i leave know and you take care of ypurself and shiv. bye now." "bye" as soon as he left gauri thanked god. she could not stand that guy she did not know why it always happened. she was about to go in when she hit someone. she looked up and saw ansh there. she smiled at him he smiled back. "are you ok gauri. did i hurt you." "no ansh i am ok are you ok. i am so sorry for braeking your things." "thats alright. they were no use anyway. if i need them i will buy new ones." she knew him for ages. ansh had a mental problem. he had been in a mental asylum for some time. he must be atleast 17 years older than her. he was a nice guy. "so andh what have you been upto. how is your work going." "its fine gauri tell me about yours. you enjoying yourself." "yes i am. i think these are the best days ever for me" she said thinking about shiv. and all the moments between them. "so when is your family coming back" "ohh they will be here soon." "i just found out yesterday that they are away. i came by to say hi but no one was there. neighbours told me that they were on holiday and you went away. where are you staying now a day" "oh nowhere just at one of my friends well boyfriend actually." "ohhh" "what" "ohh nothing its just that you don't seem like someone who would stay at her bf instead of her hhouse." "you know i like talking to you. do come again because right now i have to go." gauri went into the office. she felt pitty for ansh. the years had been bad on him. mental asylum one place she would not want to go. she got busy with her work that she did not realise the time. it was 5 time to go. she looked up and saw shiv standing at her office door surprised. " how did you get in here" the place where she worked was not allowed for any outsider . only staff could enter. that too with permission. "hey if i wanna go somewhere there is nothing stoppin me. darlin." she smiled she knew shiv she did not even wanted to know what he did to come in here. she picked up her bag and left. "so where are we going. i don't wanna go home yet." "honey i think i am spoilin you too much. you are so gettin used to of me" "hello thats what i am suppose to do get used to of you. its really hard you know. you are really hard on me sometime." "gauri you are not ok with me" "shiv you take jokes seriously. you should cut it down a bit. lets go to beach it will be quieter at this time of day." "ok boss whatever you say." they went to the beach. gauri took shiv into the water. she loved the site of him. fully colthed in professsional suit. and in water. she would to get it videod. they were enjoying themselves. when suddenly someoine shot gauri. it touched her arm. but not badly. she fainted.

shiv saw gauri in blood he was looking for the shooter no one was around. it was not the time to go after the shooter he had to take her to the hospital. he picked her up and put her in the back seat of his car. he took her to the hospital worried about her. he felt as if his life was getting taken away. he took out his cell and called joey and lucky told them everything. they told him to stay with gauri and they would looka round and try to find out who the shooter was. shiv started walking up and down the corridoor. he saw the doctor coming out of the ot ran to him. "doc is she alright." "yes she is fine. goli lag ke chli gayi. just a small cutt thats all nothing to worry about. she fainted out of fear. that all . you can tae her home. after 3 hours." shiv went inside and sat down next to her bed. he looked at her her eyes closed her breathe achoed in the room. she looked do innocent he would have died if something had happened to her. she was his world. it took him so long to realise that. she was the only precious thing he had. the only realtion other than friends. he had never admitted how much he loved her. he promised himself to let it all out once she awkes once the culprit's in jail. he would propose to her. if she says no. he would force her but he will make her his. 2 hours passed her eyes started to open. he smiled. "how are you feelin darilin." "how do you think shiv. it hurts" "don worry it will be ok. joey and his men are out looking for the stalker. we are sure he is the one who shot you." "he did not shot me he shot you shiv." "what" "yes when i was in police we had training about this his motive was you not me. you moved when he shot so it missed and hit me instead. thank goodness. i would rather die than let anything ahppen to you. you are my whoile sorld i can't let anyone hurt you noone." shiv kept slient he got up and kissed her on the head. right then he got a call. the culprit was caught . his name was arya. that what he heard. " shiv i got bad news he is not the one who shot. he is not the satlker. we got the wrong man. can you come down to the police station." "ok" "gauri i have to go. joey called. but how are you going to get home." "i will leave her home" shiv turned around to find a guy standing at the door way. "ansh" "i heard what happend are you ok." "yes i am fine. shiv you sould go i will go with ansh." she told him in his ear that he was mental. he will not hurt her so he was satisfied. shiv let her go. he shaked hands with ansh and made his way towards the police station. he reached the police station. "joey whats the news." "he is not the shooter. nor the stalker. he knew gauri before she is his sisters friend. we made him tell everything and i don't think he is lying we checked the place and found a neck chain. with a name printed on it." joey handed him the chain. he saw the name and got a shock of his life he had heard the name before infact he just met him the while ago. ansh "oh my god." he sweared "what happened shiv " "he has her. gauri is with him. i handed her to him. i have to go." "what are you talking about and where are you going." "i was in the hospital when you called her friend named ansh came to meet her. she told me he was mental. and that she is secure. se i let her go with him where would he have taken her." "i know the place he took her last time i was the one who investigated that case is well. he would have takne her to the old building outside the city. where we found her unconsiuos the last time we have to hurry up." they moved towards their cars. driving as fast as they could.

she felt a hand on her mouth covering her nose that smell. it is the same one as she smelt the time she was abducted. oh no. she wished that she had gone with shiv. she never thought it could be ansh. her eyes started to feel heavy. she closed them. when she woke up she was in a familer place the one in her dreams. she had seen it before and knew what was going to happen next. that play again. ansh was mad and he was going to make her suffer.

he saw her lyiong on the bed. chained up. she looked beautifull. as if god had give so much in making her. pretty in all ways. he saw her waking up. "its been long time honey too long. remeber the last time you were here." the voice made gauri shudder. she heard the movement then saw ansh standing beside the bed and staring down at her. "ansh you i though....." "you thought i was mental. you pittied me. never let me love you never loved me." he raeched out and brushed her hair out of her eyes. "you look good, honey real good." his hand drifted to her cheek, and she tried to turn her face away. but his rough fingers dug in an pinched hard. fauri gasped and closed her eyes. "i could sanp your neck. but you know i won't" he threatened and bent forward and brushed his lips over her mouth. suddenly he let go of her cheek. she turned her face the other way only too find her large pics everywhere on the wall. she drew in a shaky breath and exhaled slowly. and thats when he struck again. closing one hand over her nose and the other over her mouth. the sick game slammed gauri back into the nightmares of her past. and her eyes widened out of the knowledge of what comes next. she knew better than to struggle but her lungs were almost out of air. just when she felt she would pass out he let her go. "you are out of practice you used to be able to last longer than this." suddenly he was back, leaning over her, pinching her mouth together, squeezing hard enough to force gauri to whimper. he played that game twice gauri passed out on the second time. he waited for her to gain consiousness. he started playing with her clothes. he ripped them from here and there. just enough to see her beautifull body.

gauri woke up. to find herself half naked. her clothes were ripped. she found herself freed she was not tied up anymore. her gaze went to ansh he was looking at her. like a hungry beast. who might feed upon her anytime the thought scared her. then it happened exaclty as she thought. he touched her then played his nasty littile games again. suffocating her. touching at the places she would not want to be touched. she sihed that shic figured out somehow. and come to rescue her. "why are you doing this ansh. why did you come back. did you come back to rape me again once was not enough for you." he laughed "sorry to spoil your illusion that i'm a monster. i never raped you."

shiv went in quietly without the others. he wnated them to stay out until he checks everything inside. he had hun in his hand. he heard gauri talk to ansh. he was surprised with teh question he asked. " i don't believe you" "i never wanted to hurt you. but i could not stand you with another guy." "oh really so sad i must say ansh. you do know about me and shiv don't you. you want me. you said you never raped me. never touched me. well to bad because i don't love you i love shiv. only he has the right to touch me. you can't imagine the things we did together. shiv and me." shiv felt himself smiling at that one. she had no idea how hard she was playing. did she knew that he was here. was that why she was telling such thing then again she wouldn't as she had not seen him. "you said you never raped me. i say that you couldn't imagine. inadequate!" she taunted. what the hell is she doing shiv thought. he could have said out loud you go girl. he saw ansh taking out a knife.shiv moved but stoped at the voice of gauri. "oh big man. is that the knife you used to disfigure me or the one that emasculated you." ansh moved shiv moved faster he samcked on his head. ansh turned. he thorwn couple of pucnhes at him. gauri wraped her self in a banket. he rest of the guys came in. they too took turns in beating up ansh. he nearly died when dan took him into custody. shiv ran upto gauri. " gauri are you ok. i hope he did not hurt you much. although he should by the thing you were telling. " gauri smiled shiv took her in his arms and drove back to the apartment. he put her to bed and applied cream on her bruised face and wrist. gauri looked at him in surprised. then down on her hands she saw drops of water there. she took hold of his chin and saw tears in his eyes. "shiv" shiv put a finger on her lips. "son't say anything. you have no idea. how i felt today. i anything had happened to you i would have died. i love you gauri. i can't imagine a life without you. and from now on you are going to stay in this house. for good or worse." "is that a proposel. shiv kapoor." "however you take it darlin." " shiv he said he never raped me but i don't know if he is telling the truth." "do you think that matters to me. i love you darlin. you are mine. no matter what happens. you will always be mine." he hugged her she hugged him back. life was going to be good. the seperated by the sound if cell ringing. "yeah joey" he listened. "thanks . thankls a lot. thats a really big news. we can ease off a bit knowing he will not be around. thanks again bye." gauri looked at him in surprise. "he is dead. joey maked sure of that. joey does not like anyone touching his family. you will not have to worry anymore." gauri hugged him once again. he took out a ring from his drawer. " wil you marry me gauri. i promise to love you the rest of my life. i will make a good husband and will do anything you say." "shouldn't make promises you can't keep husband." " you know i am a man of my words . i will.... what did you say." "i said i will marry you. i will be yours for rest of my life." he took her into his arms ans kissed her hard. they had a long life ahead of them they decided that teh wedding would be after one month. shiv lifted her up put her down on the bed. they had thier night. lifes was surley going to full of surprises for them. and happiness too. they would be a proud couple. and would love each other till the end


the end do tell how it was.
p.s. thanks to everyone for you wonderfull comments. and for liking my ff....
Edited by crystalclear - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg omg what a story honey very very nice 👏 i hope u will start anather ff 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was sooooo good i will miss ur ff 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg that was such an awesome story!!! i completely loved it!! it was short but GREAT!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sum2005

omg omg what a story honey very very nice 👏 i hope u will start anather ff 😳


thank you so much. i loved your comments throughout the ff. i surely will right soon. only if you keep giving me those wonderfull responses
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: amneet89

that was sooooo good i will miss ur ff 🤗


thanks i will start a new one soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Numera*

omg that was such an awesome story!!! i completely loved it!! it was short but GREAT!!!!


thanks but this one had to be short. i couldn't drag it like ekta's serials. but i will start another one soon so have patience

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