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crystalclear thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sum2005

fentasctic ,this time i dint hold my breath ok.it was very nice very different ,they knew eachother from before and were in love,hey! what is shiv's past why did they send gauri to seduce him and who was the guy who is following gauri .
it is completely different from darr



man you've got loads of questions. they will be answered in the story. be patient. you'll know
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow... I'm speechless hun 👏👏

What's that movie with Juhi and SRK... The one where she's an undercover cop and he is a cop too who is taking care of Jackie Shroff (his buddy and more of a bro)'s kids. Juhi goes into the underworld as a seductress. Whoa... Just like Gauri... And they fell in love... *sighs*... She had a miscarriage? Oh my... Poor thing...

"Chief" eh? 😳 Dang, he's pErFeCt~...

Ok, this creepo... um... He's really creepy... *shivers*... is it that pig-head (Shanks)... I'm seriously gonna... 😡

Your story is really different hun. I'm lov'in it, so continue soon! 👏👏

Cheers,
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Posted: 18 years ago
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damn impressive hun! 👏
shiv connnected to underworld 😈 i never thought of that , adopting filmny style 😉
reminds me of the movie "kasoor" n "darr"
well! apart that whose the person following gauri?
hmmm... 🤔 don't tell me now !! got to find it myself after reading the next updates 😃
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part👏👏.... so they both already knew each other....so sad that gauri lost her baby because of her job and shiv didn't even get to know about it....i hope its not that shanky who is after gauri 😡
Edited by Rock_Star - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazing part 👏 !!so they already knew eachothr n gauri had been sent on a mission to seduce him !!!!well,thr's still a lil bit of confusion as to how they knw each othr n who's that guy who's aftr gauri !!!!awesome part n continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 4


he was holding her in his arms. it swas time to make her pay. time to get her back not for love but for revenge. he will make sure this time she stays with him. he will give her some time to back to him. thei stime forever. without any complications.(honey there were no complications before. if were not an arse she would not have left you in the first place. as long as i remember you were the one who kicked her out. how come its always a girls fault.) (woops sorry i got carried away). he let go of her. tehy sat around for a wee while then he said good bye an told her that he will meet her tomorrow. she told him that the whole family is going to a holiday tomorrow but she cannot as she have to go to work. he said ok he will se her after work. he went to joey's place. he lived on the top floor of his tower. had it all to himself no one allowed except family and friends. the guards knew him so they let him in without any checking. . he rang the bell. and joey opened up(dont ask me where they live as i have not decided yet) he was tanned half italian half american. a bad boy for sure. they had a friendly hug. they went insideshiv saw lucky standing there. he should have known that he will be here. joey was lucky's brother. lucky worked for both his brother and shiv. a kid came running to him. "shiv uncle" shiv held him in his arms "hey dude whats up" "shiv how many times have i told you not to speak in this manner in front of him. you all are spoiling him too much" shiv smiled at rhea the beautifull wife of joey. she had scars on her face. which tells one that she had been through a lot. "sorry rhea but i can't help it. i like spoiling him just as your husband spoiled me" it was the truth joey had spoiled him. all that shiv was today was beacuse of him. he taught him to survive. shiv was 20 when he came to joey he was really upset. he found out that his best friend had cheated him. he sent shiv to jail for his girlfriend murder. shashank was his name. shashank and he had known each other since he was 5 they were best of friends. everyone used to tell stories of thier friendship. but it all changed when shashank had killed his sister. he did not know why until later. he had been in jail for three years. he ran away from there and came to joey. joey helped him in his worse times. when his parents never believed. how could they even think of him murdering his own sister. when he loved her a lot. he adored her. she was the only person close to him. he told her everything the things he would never tell shashank he told her. shashank had took her away from him. because she found out about his dealing of drug. she loved shashank with her heart but when shashank found out that she knew everything he killed her and had blamed it on her. shiv did not know where shashank got all his proofs from. he faked all of them and sent him to prison his whole family had turned against him. they hated him. joey was connected to underworld. well his father held the second position. it was not good to think of him as a bad guy. as they all helped educate childern they put their money in building school. help poor country not to mention supply the weapons to the govnment its just that the gonverment nover found out about it. shiv with help of became chief. he killed shashank and cleared his name in front of police and his family. he forgave them but never went back to them. chief (shiv) had all in his hand. joey dad retired and joey and shiv took his place. joey handled the legal meetings while shiv handled the illegal it was his choice. no one knew about him not even the police. but just then gauri walked into his life. he rememered the incident. she walked in front of him askin fro help. asking him she needed money and is ready to do anythi9ng for it. he gave her a job but seeing her loyalties he became interested in her. he gave her all he had. he loved her. only when he was told that she was under cover by one of the freinds in service. he let her go instantly did not want to hurt as he loved her. he made sure she doesn't have any proof against them. he never saw her again after that. they met after almost seven years. they both had changed. he felt angry at the person who hurt her no matter what he said to her he still loved her. "so chief what brings you here" he sat there quietly drnking from his glass.then looked up at joey. joey knew there was something wrong "so are you going to tell me. did something happened". shiv nodded then with what seemed like whisper said "gauri is back" joey's expression confused "gauri who" "diya" joey stood up "what, how. why did she come back you are not connected to the underworld anymore she does not know. shiv you can't let her some to your life again she almost ruined you the last time. why do you let her come near you. its always the loved one who hurt you the most. listen to me and stay away from her." "she is not a cop any more." "so what. once a cop always a cop. what if she gives out information." shiv sighed "no joey this time she will not do such a thing. someone's after her." right then a guy walks in. "who's after who. hey shiv long time no see." they hug and share a friendly conversation. "my question is still not answered." "we are talking about gauri aka diya." dan looked ta shiv. "gauri now here have i heard that name before. what her full name shiv." "gauri chattergee" dan sat up straight as if knowing who it was. "gauri chattergee kidnapped two years back found in a bad condition near a church. bleeding all over. a cop. got fired right after that incident. the cuplrit never got caught. she had been in a hospital for a month. not knowing what happened to her. sorry i don't want to give you half of the information as you will not be able to take it." shiv hurt allover thinking about what might have happened to gauri. someone had hurt her badly. "you know about her dan. you know all this. you chould have told me before and what is the other half you are not telling me about" "hmm look shiv i told you that i cannot tell you about the other half. that lady had it hard on herself alll those years its better if you ask her about it." "i would if she remembers anything about the incident she gets dreams but does not remember anything." "don't worry big guy she will one day and the other half only she can tell you as its private and i cannot let it out to you. its connected to you. she will tell you when the time comes" shiv furious "fine but joey i need your help. someone is stalking gauri and i have to know who it is. will you help me find out." "hang on a minute shiv whats al this about nothing came my way about her getting stalked." said dan "i started few months back she thinks someone is folllowing her. but the thing is its the same person who kidnapped her 2 years ago." "hmmm means the photography. i am just wondering why would a crimnal return to a place of crime." "to finish what he started" sugeested shiv. "hmmm i willl have a look at it. but the thing we can do is ask joey for help" "hey you don't need to ask me you need to tell me what to do. i am always here for you" "thanks man" they sat there making a plan to catch the stalker. after that shiv went home.

gauri stayed up all night thinking about his time with shiv. she ha been sent on a mission but fell in love. after she left him she came to know that she was pregenent. she could not tell anyone as she might get kicked of the job. she held it a secret. she had been sent ona mission again. her partner tried to save her from a gun shot but end up lying on her stomach hard. well actually fell on her. she lost her baby then she was sad she cried but could not tell anyone except her partner. dan andrew only he knew about it they kept it a secret she never informed shiv abou it but now decided to tell him. it was morning she went to work her family left for holidays. she done her usuall work. she did not like talking to people at work as most of them were men. she waited for her meeting with shiv this evening shiv came to pick her up from work which wasa surprise. he took her home. dont know why but she felt as if he was worried for her and did not want her to go home alone. they went home they sat around in the lounge for a while then shiv carried her to her bedroom as she tripeed in the kitchen and her foot was swallon. he opened the door and got the shook of their life. there were picture of them everywhere. pictures of them kissing everyone. her room was a mess. her bedroom window open. she knew that instant that someone came in. she looked at shiv who was angry and worried sick about her. she took hold of her again "i can't let you stay here" she looked at him in surprise "pack your things you are going with me" "i wonder if we have nails somewhere that would fiz those windows" "you are coming home with me. i can't leave you here" "i heard" she goes over to her cupboard and get her stuff out her foot hurting like hell. she conrtol her pain packs her bag shiv helps her. shen he was about to pick up the bag she spoke. "i have muscles i could have managed it." "don't need to tel me that pari. i know every inch of you" she blushed at the comment. he took her into his arm and held her bag at the same time. made her sit in the car an took her home. not knowing someone was watching them both with anger. making his plan to get what is his.



that was a boring part. but haha you have to read it i don't i'll go now i am sleepy.
P.S. thanks everybody for your wonderful wonderful comments keep them comin
Edited by crystalclear - 18 years ago
jiya imdad thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
well it wasn't boring at all it was quite interesting instead as it enclosed all the suspense of the story 😃 except that stalker 😕
man!! i want shiv to know the other half of the tragic story ........ 😭
then 4 sure he won't let her leave him again 😳 😳
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
jus read parts 3 and 4...
omg such a deep connection between the two......
i'm overjoyed..........

and let him know about her miscarriage pretty soon cuz
it shouldn cause any misunderstandings between them......
Instead it should deepen their feelings for each other....

is stalker ka kuch to karna padega..... But for now i can only thank him as he is responsible for bringin them closer.....

thank you soooooooooooooo much.....
brilliant updates.....


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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
wow nice episode ,very very nice 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
very interesting story!!! please do continue!!

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