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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks alot Iqbaladdict, ash9, sum2005, jiya imdad, kaira, ana13, prab_rockinn for your wonderfull comments i will surley try to update tonight in two hours i have to do a maths test. hopefully i'll pass. i am in a good mood i'll come back to post.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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best of luck for ur maths test,please prepare for ur exams ,afterwards only u update ur ff,studies first,we will wait no problem.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part6

shiv felt a warm hand on his chest, and he smiled and blinked awake. he held her tight in his arms. she rested on his chest now. he could feel her bresthing on his chest. "gauri did i tell you?. you are beautifull" he felt her smile. " only a thousand time" he let out a little laugh. he rolled over her and pinned her arms to the floor. "hmmm i think it was not enough. looks like you want more." he come close to her lips to kiss her. when she pushed him. making him trip. she quickly got up and almost ran to the bathroom. "you had enough of your share last night." he tried to follow her but she locked the door on him. he smiled at thinking about their night together. he took his clothes and went to the other bathroom in the other room. he took a shower. he came backk to his room only to find gauri abbsence. he heard noise coming from the kitchen. he grinned and went to the kicthen. he saw his two eggs with toast and juice on the table. "i see that you still remembered how i like my breakfast." he sat down noticing that she had not made anything for herself. "ur not havin breakfast" "no i don't eat breakfast." he pulled her into his lap. "well ur gonna start from today. he started to feed her "shiv no plzzz i don't eat breakfast. it makes me hungry" shiv presses her lips together tightly. "don worry darlin im ready to feed u all day" he tickled her so she opened her mouth he put food in her mouth. she made a puppy face and when saw his face she chewed and swallowed. he fed her and himself. she kept sayin no but shiv did not listen to her once. when finished " see it was not that hard. now from tomorrow u gonna start eatin otherwise il feed u like this everyday." she hugged him he hugged her back. he told her to wear somthing else as they were going to his friends place. she obeyed. she came out in this

shiv saw her in amazement he never saw her wearing short dresses. this was the first time he saw her. he wanted to change his plans he had somthing else in his mind but decided to control himself. he took her hand and they went outside the apartment.
gauri was surprised when shiv told her to ge off from the car. they were standing in frontof joey's tower. it was a work of art, an architectural phenomenon. a city within a city. not only the towers were a garnd hotel, but there were condominiums, offices, department stores,boutiques. an art museum, a health club, a grocery store, returants, lounges, movie theaters and a bank. gauri had never thought she's underestimated shiv. she never knew that he is part if this place. they went forty nine stories up, to joey's penthouse. the penthouse covered the entire floor of the joey's tower. she took a deep breath. she could never become as rich as the person she was about to meet. she never even knew that shiv was that rich as he was in partnership with the guy. "hi gates" "hello shiv sir. sir is expecting you." they went in. she saw four guy soming out of no where and hugging shiv. they seemed happy. even shiv was in a mood she never seen before. as if he felt he was home. they said hi to gauri in turn she was surprised they knew her. she knew that dan knows her could he not. he was with her when she lost her baby her heart ached. she went in with the guy then she saw a girl coming out from one of the rooms. she greeted shiv with her beautifull smile. shiv greeted her back ina cheery mood then she moved towrads gauri. "you must be gauri. i am rhea joey's wife. i must say its a pleasure to meet you. anyone who crcka a hole in these four stones would be special. i know i consider my self as one." gauri smiled and answered her. all the men smiled at their converstaion. i did not took long for gauri to become one of them she joked with them as they did it to her. she saw shiv being surprised by her answer so did the rest of the. "if i was still a cop i would have arrested you lot. what are u like man. have some respect for women. i just want to leave" gauri said jokingly. " we'll have you royalty gauri. ur stuck between a hard place and even harder men, darlin." gauri burst out laughing at shiv comments. "i see u four are very much proud of ur manhood." "we have a right to be. i earned it." she heard joey saying it. "hmmm what if it all comes down to you. what if someone challenge you." "you see sweety tht the thing no one can challenge us." "excuse me shiv i think you guys have forgotten both me and gauri have challenged you lot. and you had hard time" they laughed as the remember. rhea broke the secuity and joey went ad cause of not finding her and gauri challenged them as being a cop. they spent their time laughing.


he broke into gauri house. but she was not there he had not expected her to there either. he knew where she would be with shiv. he opened up her drawer only to find her things missing. shocked for second and checked her cupboard some of her stuff missing. he checked her suit case missing. meaning she moved out. where could she have gone. then it came back to him. where else she would have gone back to shiv. how he hated him. "i think i should meet her tomorrow to see if she still remembers me." he smiled to himself. knowing the answer already. he left her house. he came back to his place and started laying darts. he thrown the dart on the board to see it had hitted jackpot. shiv head.


ok that all from me for today. you don't like it then do tell bye bye
Edited by crystalclear - 18 years ago
sum2005 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
different story but very very nice,who is the guy who broke in to gauri s home and he want to kill shiv,omg please in this ff dont kill shiv as u did in ur last ff. 😉 .
by the bye how did u do ur maths paper 😳,i think as perfect as ur update 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice update, hopefully, we will find out who the stalker is in next episode......pls. continue.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sum2005

different story but very very nice,who is the guy who broke in to gauri s home and he want to kill shiv,omg please in this ff dont kill shiv as u did in ur last ff. 😉 .
by the bye how did u do ur maths paper 😳,i think as perfect as ur update 👏 👏 👏


thanks about the test i forgot everything the min i had the paper in front of me. the tutor told me i can do it another day. if was not feeling upto it. what more could i want i said ok. i hate maths anyways.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

nice update, hopefully, we will find out who the stalker is in next episode......pls. continue.


thanks no i don't think. i think i will make you wait
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
i dont mind waitin for the stalker to be revealed as long as there are sweet moments between shiv and gauri....
gauri wud have definitely looked mind blowin in dat dress......

good work!!!!! keep it up!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
hey maria, that was lovely, I would like to know who the freakoo tagging her. keep writing.
crystalclear thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

hey maria, that was lovely, I would like to know who the freakoo tagging her. keep writing.


thanks hmm you will know i am thinking about finishing the ff soon

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