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Anamika

@ana13

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Posted: 18 years ago

#31

OMG u r awesum yaar..........wunderful 👏
yes i agree with ever1 else that gauri's miscarrige shud not b kept hidden from shiv for a long time.......n that stupid stalker...plzzz disclose him now i'll go n kill him...lol.....n i agree with prab_rokinn that sumhow he's only responsible for bringng ShivGauri 2gether once again... 😳
bbyeee for now
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Iqbaladdict

@Iqbaladdict

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Posted: 18 years ago

#32

what an interesting story maria, where do u think of these things from , I loved it, Shiv is so worried bout her nd the poor girl was bout to hve his baby at one time. hope they get together again. 👏 👏

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maria

@crystalclear

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

part 5

he took her to his apartment to his home. gauri silently went with him as she could not do anything he just held her in his arms. no matter what she said she knew he would not listen to her. she was his possesion. and shiv would never let her take it her way after what she had done to him. she knows she had lost his trust she almost destroyed him the last time worst she hid some facts from him. facts like she loveed him a lot but left him for her career which was not faithfull to her. the fact that she had his baby and had a miscarriage. and the fact that she never had told him about it. now she was scared, sacred to tell him wha she had done. scared to lose him again. she had to tell him she did not want to decieve him anymore. he took her to his room made her lie there. he then wen to the kitchen to make something ha hadn't had anything all day he wanted to take to dinner but couldn't as the incident. he took some stuff out of the fridge. gauri came over to help him. he saw her struggling. "gauri kya kar rahi ho tum. tumhare paaon me moch ayi hai. chalo gi to dard hoga." gauri smiles "hum kiya bana rahe hain" he looks at her then smiles. " well i haven't thought of that yet. the quickest would be noodles" "ok i get the veges you get the noodles." "hmmmm ok fine with me" she cuts the veges and he bolis the noodles. they talk while they cook she sat on the table. watching the site of him she never saw. in about fifteen minutes the noodles were made and he they sat on the on the dining table and had their dinner. shiv cleaned up while gauri helped him. her foot was killing her so he took her to his room again. she saw him talking out a balm from the drawer. he gently started massaging it on her foot. she could feel the pian going away at his touch. she wanted him to tell him everything here and now. beacuse i would have been better if she had done it. otherwise he will be heartbroken again. and she dd not want to loose him again. "gauri me tum se kuch poohen to kiya tum mujeh batao gi." she listend to him then nodded. "gauri wo kon si sachai hai joo tum ne mujhe se ab tak chupayi hai. jo mujhe se link karti hai" gauri was taken back by his question but knew she had to say it now or never. "shiv jab hum pehli bar mile the to tum mere liye sirf eik mission the. jab me tumhare saath rahi tumhe jana to mujeh laga ke tum bohot ache insan ho mere pass tumhare khilaf enough saboot the. lakin me janti thi ke agar me wo saboot police me de doon to tumhare saath na insafi hogi me tumhari buraiyonke liye tumhari achaiyon ko nazar andaz nahi kar sakti thi. is liye me ne unhe kuch nahi bataya lakin us waqt me tumhare liye apni job nahi chor sakti thi is liye me ne yeh sachayi tumhe bhi nahi batayi. shiv us waqt humare beejh jo rishta tha jo pal hum ne saath guzare the wo meri zindagi ke sab se haseen pal the. me apne saath tumhari eik nishani le gayi thi. lakin eik mission me tumhari wo nishani mujhe se kho gayi." shiv looks at her confused. she knew he did not understand. she had to make herself brave enough to tell him the truth and face th consquences. "shiv i was pregnent or jo me ne khoya tha wo tumhara bacha tha" she saw his face which showed one epression after the other. all wsa there hurt betrayel worried everything. hher heartached to see this site of him.

shiv could not believe his ears. he sat there motioless looking at her face. how could she be soo cruel. how could she not tell him about his kid. why did she not tell him before why did he let her go. he felt her hand on his hand. she pushed it away and went to stand near the window. tears droped down from his eyes. for himself that he could not be a part of the happiness. grief of loosing his kid. tears to being selfish. he should have gone after her to get her back. but didn't he do that he had thought of it many times. he felt her in his feets crying. "i am so sorry shiv m bohot buri me ne tumhe bohot hurt kiya hai. i was so selfish i never thought about you i only ethought about myself. my career my choices. i did not know i was pregnent when i left you i only came to know about it after i left you. you wee my first love. i had loved you with my heart and soul. but i had dreams. which were yet to be fulfilled. i had made the biggest mistake by leaving you by not telling that i was pregnent. but i paid. i paid dearly. my kid was taken away from me. more like i killed it. i'm a murderer. i should never had went to that mission. knowing i was pregnent." shiv looked at her knowing what she went through. he could not see her in such a condition. "shiv i am sorry. but god has given me punishment by taking away my kid by getting me kidnapped. most off all not knowing what happened to me. i don't know if he raped me. i been told the state i came back in suggest that. my family does not know that i know this much they don't want to tel me anything they are punishing me is well. but plz you don't punish me. i will not be able to take it. i can't lose you again after soo much ia have found you. i can't lose you. just let me stay with you. i won't ask for anything. nothing at all. but plz dont separate me from you" shiv bent down held her by her shoulder made her stand until she was face to face. "gauri do you have any idea how hurt i am. you took away from me the biggest happiness. i was about to be a father and you just let it go. didn't you think about me. how could you not. but i sould not blame you i was part of it is well. i never tried to find you. u never tried to hold you back if i had alll this would not have happened. i forgive you gauri because it was my fault is well." gauri hugged him. he stoood there for a second then hugged her back. he kissed her trying to ease that pain. to make her forget what she had been through. he took her in his arms and made her lie on the bed. then asked her. "we have one chance again are you still upto it." sh blushed he got his answer. and then nighty night. they did not even think for a second that someone might be watching them goog thing no one was.

a feeling exhilaration filled him at the realistaion it would all be over soon. the patience he'd shown during months he'd spent stalking gauri was about to raep its reward. there was only one more thing in his way. one moreman who'd thought he could lay hands on what belonged to him. ut he was wrong! even in death, gauri was his. and always will be. he wanted to see if she would react the same if he kissed her that way she had he will make her. she attracted men like flies. sooner or latter he was going to swat some of them, particularly shiv. the bas***d treated her like a tawrdy sexual object. shiv could not see the qualities he saw in gauri. the was innocent. or was innocent he made sure the last time that he took her innocent away from. he wanted her to keep herself away from shiv save herself for him and only him. beacuse onl knew how valueable she is. what she is like inside out he had been keeping an eye on her for 5 years now all the small details he knew it. he wanted to make shiv pay for touching gauri and he wanted gauri to pay for looking atany other man. he remembered that gauri never saw his face this time he will make sure she does before he kills her.

ok that it for today. bye bye
p.s thanks to iqqbaladdict, jiya imdad, prab_rockinn, sum2005, lil_desi_godess, kaira and ana13 for your wonderful mindblowing comments.

Edited by crystalclear - 18 years ago

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Iqbaladdict

@Iqbaladdict

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Posted: 18 years ago

#34

wow, I just read, it was superb, btw who is this creep tagging her for five years, seems like hes obsessed with her, poor gal, shiv was upset but still sweet towards her. keep writing.

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mad

@*mad*

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#35

omg........that guy?? who is he??
she knws him right??? thats y he never showed his face
nw he is going to kill them both
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suni

@sum2005

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Posted: 18 years ago

#36

omg omg it was awsome episode.it is very interesting and u explored shiv and gauri's relation in different angle.they were so much in love even though they parted their ways for some personel reasons.
the stakler who is behind gauri for 5 yrs i think definetly he is a pysic only shiv have to save her from him.
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Edited by sum2005 - 18 years ago

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jiya imdad

@jiya imdad

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#37

that was amzing Maria 👏
it contained so many emotions pain,love,regret,concern,happiness,sorrow ............ omg i m short of words
so gauri knows the stalker very closely that's y he's not showing his face 😈
y m i getting the feeling that the stalker is Dan andrew 😕 bcuz it seems he feels most insecure of shiv. he knows everything about shiv-gauri relationship.
may be i m wrong !!
continue soon 😉