ff shadows part8 page 7 completed!!!!!!!

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hi guys this is my second ff. i don't know how it will be. but i am gonna give it ma best. here it goes. it is inspired from a story i read. i forgot the name of it.

part1

he dug his fingers into her flesh of her upper arm, relishing the lack of resistence beneath his grip. "you are hurting me" gauri's words were nothing more than a whimper. she should have fought him she was a cop after all but he was too strong for her. weak so weak. she felt the man's other hand on her face trying to shut her up. fearing someone would hear and come for her rescue. then he covered her mouth with tape and tied her up with the rope. he gave her some drug so she would not be awake till 3 hours enough for him to take her out of the city. when she opened her eyes she found herself in a room. it stinked of strong chemicels. she new this case was tyouble but she had taken it to prove herself to the world. she was regretting the moment she fought with her boss for that case, worse refused to have a partner. she could feel pain risisng from everypart of her body. as if someone has crushed her badly. her head was spinning. then she saw a face barely 2 inches away from her. she raclled that face nothing came. he was not the one she was after who was he. why had he abducted her. she had done nothing to him. his hands were everywhere on her body. she wanted to kill the man. she kicked him hard on his leg realising that she was not tied anymore but she was exhuasted. one kick took the only energy she had. that guy cried with pain then slapped her hard on the face. she hit the floor like a lifless thing he then took hold of her hair and made her look upto him he kissed her hard. she tired to protest but could feel everything going dark in front of her eyes. she heard him say "no one gets in my way you tried you will pay." she felt a sharp pain in her stomach. AHHH she woke up screaming. her father came running to her. "gauri beta tum theek to ho" she pulled herself together quickly. "ji me theek hoon baba me ne bas eik bura sapna dekh liya tha." her father hands her some water and tells her to sleep and then leaves. "app ko kiya bataon baba ke yeh eik khuwab nahi nightmare tha jis se mera peecha shayad khabhi nahi chootey" she could not sleep after that. she tried to recall everything that she saw in her dream but nothing came back to her. all she knew that she woke up in the hospital. she had cuts of a knife on upper parts of her body. some left scars. which she hid from people. she got kicked out of her job as they thought she could not handle it. it made her angry but she had to leave the job anyway beacuse of her baba. he loved her and hell she loved him a lot. she didn't know what she was going to do if he was not around. that incident made her scared. it was 7 n the morning she was too lost in her past. she got a shower got ready for her office. she worked in a security company. she had her breakfast then left for work but first dropped her sister to college. how she wished she could be as carefree as her. she lost all her innocence 2 years ago. what was left of it anyway. she worked as usuall i the office. she had to do overtime today as her work was not finished and it needed to be handed in the next day. once finished her work. she picked up her bag and left the building for car park. she opened her car and tried starting it. the damn thing would not start making her angry. her dada told her to get ot fixed but did she listen nooooo. "well that means i have to walk until i get a cab or maybe walk home. chalo gauri ajj tumhe bohot maza anay wala hai." she was busy locking the car when she felt that someone was near her watching her. she turned to look but no one was there. she knew it was not her imagination. she walked u of the car park still the same feeling she had no idea that she was standing in middle of the road until a car came and hit hershe fell on the read. losing her senses. the next thing she saw that she was in a room. she got scared but it went away as soon as she saw a lady. she sat up. looking at everyone. she thanked them and saw her dad whe had been infromed. she wnet home.


thankgodness he was driving slowly. unlike everyday he drove really slowly last night maybe beacuse he had been drinking more than usuall. he did not like drinking but done it cause of a friend. he saw a girl standing on the road he hit her but not badly. he rememered shouting " are you bilnd what is point of walking in middle of the road. if you really wished to die you could have jumped off a building." he went near her. she was down on the floor. he rolled her over and mesmerized by the beauty. he forgot all his anger. he just looked at the beautifull face in heis hands. he thought he had hit her badly but he was wrong she was alright she only fainted. he took her in his arms and made her lie on the back seat. he started driving. he drinking had gone somewhere. he felt as if he had not drank in a long time. maybe he was just hypnotised by the beauty lying at the back seat of his car. he took her home telling his mom about what happened. he called her home informed her father. he came as soon as he heard the news. she woke up in the morning. he felt as if she was scared but eased seeing people in the room. "beta abb kaisi ho app raat ko app ka accident ho gaya tha mere bete ki car ke saath yeh shiv hai." "hi gauri". she was beautifull but her voice made his heart miss a beat. it was musical.


i hope u like it. and happy valentine to everybody.
yaar me eik saal or bhudi ho gayi. mere to subha se ronay nikal rahe hain. hum ajj 19 ke ho gaye. or door door tak hum valentine banane ke tayar nahi.

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part2 page2
part3 page 3
part4 page4
part5 page5
part6 page6
part7 page8 last part.....
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sum2005 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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today is ur birthday ,many many returns of the day. 🥳

ur ff is different and nice please continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Happy Bday... And its a lovely fanfic. Veyr different from the story, but lovely nonetheless...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wishing you a very Happy Birthday......and Happy Valentine's Day as well....Enjoy yur day.
The ff sounds really good, waiting for the next parts.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Happy Birthday and Happy Valentines Day
awesome story...continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Maria wonderful start, it most certainly is something new, Shiv seems polite, and she an ex-cop, what gives, phew, keep it comin girl, waitin, waitin, still waitin, hehe. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome story.. gotta continue soon..

happii birthdaii!! 🥳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: crystalclear

i hope u like it. ofcourse i do and happy valentine to everybody same to u😳
yaar me eik saal or bhudi ho gayi. o really !! but i can't see any change mere to subha se ronay nikal rahe hain. kyun? hum ajj 19 ke ho gaye congratz !! aur haan main tumse ek saal kam budhi hoon😆 or door door tak hum valentine banane ke tayar nahi. woh kyun? khair i made my valentine on my computer bcuz my valentine was 3000 miles away from me 😭. the computer was the only way to celebrate 😆


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Posted: 18 years ago
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good work.....
liked it a lot......

waitin for more...... and belated birthday wishes!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow that was gr8!!! 👏 plz cont!!! 😊
Priti!! 😊

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