ff shadows part8 page 7 completed!!!!!!! - Page 2

amazing fanfic !!!looks really interesting 👏 quite different ,plz continue soon

Originally posted by: sum2005

today is ur birthday ,many many returns of the day.

ur ff is different and nice please continue soon.

thanks. yeah it is different alright. i made her a cop and they ae not innnocent. well not to me anyway.

Originally posted by: just4coll

Hey Happy Bday... And its a lovely fanfic. Veyr different from the story, but lovely nonetheless...

thank you. and thanks for liking my ff

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

Wishing you a very Happy Birthday......and Happy Valentine's Day as well....Enjoy yur day.
The ff sounds really good, waiting for the next parts.

thanks jenna. hmmm wait till later. i think it will get boring like the last one i wrote.

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

Happy Birthday and Happy Valentines Day
awesome story...continue soon

thanks. i will

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

Hey Maria wonderful start, it most certainly is something new, Shiv seems polite, and she an ex-cop, what gives, phew, keep it comin girl, waitin, waitin, still waitin, hehe.

thanks yaar. i am glad you liked it. i donno everybody was on at shiv. badboy playboy mean. i thought change that. but he is not as nice as he looks in the first part wait for what is yet to come. and i willl update soon.

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

awesome story.. gotta continue soon..

happii birthdaii!!

thanks i will cont tonight after i reply back

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

hahahaha u know budhe hone ka eik yehi to faidaa hai door se pata nahi chalta. janab ki luch achi hai jis tarhan bhi sahi valentine to manay na. meri shakal dekh ke hi sab bhag jate hai. yaan i think attitude problem hai khane ko paoon gi to passs kon aye ga 😉 🤣

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

good work.....
liked it a lot......

waitin for more...... and belated birthday wishes!!!!!

thanks alot yaar

Originally posted by: pritig

wow that was gr8!!! plz cont!!!
Priti!!

thanks for liking it. sure i will

Originally posted by: kaira

amazing fanfic !!!looks really interesting & nbsp; quite different ,plz continue soon

thanks just wait and see.

part 2

from behind the bushes he watched her. he watched her come out with her father. smiling oh tha passing her smile to anyone. she hardly knows him and she started smiling at him. he did not know what was yet t smile was the one he had not seen in ages. then the guy who saved her came from behind. she exchanges a smile with him too. there was something in her eyes for that man, he noticed her eye lit up when she saw him. what does she think of herself a slut(pardon me guys for sayin that but this is a stalker we are talking about. they do have such language)to come. all he knew he had to get it over with before she gets too close with the guy. shiv kapoor thats what his name is. he is survivor just like her. he was the one to look out for. the one who could ruin his mission.(me tum logon ko batanay wali nahi hoon ke stalker ka nam kiya hai yeh baad me bataon gi but he surley hates seeing gauri with shiv) he had recoginzed him stright away when he saw shiv coming out of his car to look at gauri and he knew competition would be force to reckoned with.

they were going out side to sit in the car. shiv felt an urge to talk to her again to listen to her beautifull voice. he looked at her and wondered how it would feel like to kiss those lips( maaf karna bhaiyon or behnon me reh nahi sakii. iqu pe yeh sab suit hi bohot karta hai.us ki iss image ko chor nahi sakti me) god he was out of his mind he just met her last night and alresy he was thinking of touching her. she sure was one of a kind. no women before had and effect on him like that. shiv saw her reaching for the car but some how her foot slipped he quickly moved forward and saved her from falling again. "you are angel mr shiv. you saved my life twice" he was lost in his world for te first time he saw her eyes they were beautiful colour. a mix of blue and green.she was looking in his eyes. then he made her stand still making sure not to let her go until she stood evenly on the floor. once she stood properly he let her go. she sat in the car and they were away. shiv still looking in the direction the car went. nikhila notices this."shiv wo log gaye abb andar chale" niki was happy after such a long time she saw her son interested in women (hey guys do't take it otherwise. but one wonders if he was not interested in women then what else was he interested in.) shiv came to his room thinking about what happened last night and how beautifull she was he fantasized o her being with him. guess all he could do is to wait until they meet again.

never before she felt this way about anyone. seeing shiv she did not what happened to her. she felt scared talking to men. the experience taught her not to trust anyone and stay on her guard. but since she met shiv kapoor things have changed she wants to trust like she not trusted anyone before. she wants to be with him. the more she thought about the stronger the feeling got. she wanted to be in his arm. she knew what kind of danger she is in. she did not want to put someone else's life in danger. he was the angel she was looking for. one galnce was al it took. but she could not forget the fact that someone was stalking her. she could not tell anyone that. she made her family worried sick the last she did not want to repeat that. eversince the incident they took soo much care of her like she was fragile she knew that they knew something which they are not telling her. but they had a reason her father loved her a lot when she got kidnapped he got into the hospital bed he could not take the news. it hit him hard. this was the reason she has not told her dad that someone was stalking her. and last night she felt him so near her. and then the angel saved her. thinking of him she went to sleep. it had been three days since the incident. it was her friends brithday she decided to go to the part her dad allowed her as he knew there will be crowd there less chance of anything happening. she got picked up by her friend as her car was still in the garage. they went to the part she enjoyed herself. she felt a hand on her shoulder. a very male hand. which shocked her as she did not know any of the males in the party she turned around and saw it was her angel. "hi angel you here"

he saw her coming in the bar resturant. she was looking stunning. her dress hid everthing but yet revealed everthing. he could see her as perfect. shiv sat at one side of the bar watching her laughing with her friend a laugh which did not reach her eyes. but the smile days ago did reach her eyes. he wanted to find out the reason for it. there was only one way to do it is to go talk to her. be friends with her. or maybe more. hell he knew it was more than that. he wantes her soo badly that his heart ached. he walked up to her and put his hand on her shoulder. she turned slowly. when she did he saw fear in her eyes but it disappeared when she saw him. " hi angel you here" she said in surprising voice. he loved the way she called him angel. "hmm its a bar anyone can come. leave that how come you here. and how are you feeling now. you knoe that day you gave me a heart attack. i thought i killed you" he did not talk this muc but he did not know why he wanted to talk to specially to the sexy personality staning in front of him. she smiled again her smile reached her eyes. he did not know how can someone d o that. "hmm well its a bar anayone can come here. just joking its my friends birthday and i came with her. and sorry about scaring you that night. i don't know what i was thinking. but again if that did not happen i would hve never met you angel. thanks" he smiled at that. she was right he never felt sorry for a moment after seeing her. "what if i say that i want a dance rather than a thanks" he looked at her questiongly. holding out his hand (how do you spell the damn thing it took one min of my time stupid question) she looked at him and slipped her fingers into his "i'd say perhapes even two dances" he smiled again and pulled her to her feet. even in heels she only came level with his chin. he knew she wanted him as much as he wanted her. "this is a night of stolen kisses." he trailed one down her temple. then he moved his lips to her. he kissed her soflty. she instantly responded. he hoped the dance would never end. they circle one tiny spot on the floor in what felt like a dream, and in the dark no one existed but the two of them. they dances for some more time and then went to the bar to get some drink. he noticed her friends eying them he could see them being a little bit jealous of gauri. he wondered why. slthough he knew the answer he was shiv kapoor the one who owns women but something told him that it was about to change. looked like that he was going to be owned by someone. that made swollowing the drink harder. it was late and everybody was leaving. he offered her a ride and she accepted.

she never thought she would trust any man with herself but now she did she accepted his lift. they stood outside near his car. everybody had already left. she was the only one standing there with him. the kiss inside had made her feel special it was soo gentle. as if he did not want to hurt her. "gauri kiya hoa" she found herself staring at him she smiled and shook her head. "kuch nahi i was just thinking of our dance inside" she thaought he new what she was thinking about. he came forward and kissed her again and this time with passion. they stood like that for ten minutes thier kiss broken by the falsh light of a camera. gauri got scared. it was not the first time it was happening to her. it happened before she was abducted. shiv ran towards that place but nothing all he saw was emptiness. "gauri mujeh lagta hai hume yahan se chalna chahiye. aise laga ke kissi ne humari tasveer kheenchi" he looked at her. her faciel expression said that she was digusted. "humari nahi meri" he looked at her in shock. "what" "yes you heard it right. its not the first time some one done that been happening to me for three years now." "gauri what are talking about" "look shiv i think we should go" she looked pissed. "no gauri i amnot going anywhere until you tell me whats happening" she saw concern in his voice in his eyes. she knew if she tell him he would leave her but sooner or later that had to happen so why not now. "someone is stalking me. i was a cop i got kicked put as i was kidnapped to years ago. i was return in a bad shape. they kicked me out of the service saying that i was not worth. ever since i feel as if i am being followed." he looked at her. "did you went to the police. did you tell them someone was stalking you" "no use shiv they need evidence one that i ahve not got" "do you realise that you are playing with your life" "i will see to it this time that the bas**** does not hurt me again." she looked at him and told him to take her home once arrived he told her that he is going to see her tomorrow. she could no believe it he did not left her instead he asked her to meet him again what could she say she agreed. she went to bed smiling and fell a deep sleep.

he could not believe his ears she was kidnapped. someone has hurt her baldy. he just wanted to kill the guy who was hurting her. which meant that he had to be by her side which he will be. he was feeling sorry for whatever happened to her. he know the experience. he knew how had its is to have such a past. to have shadows of the past haunting you. only that his had been different. he saperated himself from his family 5 years ago. he doesgo to the house now and then but does not live there. he rent an apartment for himself and opened up a serurity business. his life changed because of one incident that took place in his life. then his mind came bacj to where it started gauri. how he felt when he touched her today kissed her. all that led to even more desire to hold her to have her by his side never to let he get hurt again. he went to sleep thinking of her.

through the telephoto lens gauri apeared close enough to touch.he watched her laugh, eyes crinkling with pleasure as she looked up to the man, shiv. on the computer he cut the guy out of the picture. this new wspect was unforeseen; he'd thought she was afraid of men. it would make things more things more difficult yet untimately more interesting. he smiled at the thought of stealing gauri from under shiv's nose. he looked at more pictures of her taken at different places different moment. he was always amzed the way she turned him on. the only thing which made him mad was her being close to shiv. she kissed him tonight. looked like that she will do anything with him in public. he was angry.


thats all for tonight guys. tell me how it was. hope to make it the best. withsome help from a friend. cause i don't know much about the stalking part but she helps me through it.

omg omg what a amazing story,i hold my breath untill the episode ended ,it is very very nice and differnt. 👏
it sounds like darr shahrukh darr

👏
wonderful......
and omg he kissed her so soon..... 😳 😳
waitin for more.....

"Love at first sight"... For SG and me too... well, I mean I'm in love with your ff...

Very interesting and unique!! Wow, Gauri was a cop... And some dude abducted her... Let me guess... Oh that pig-head... Uski toh mein 😡. This might sound like a stupid question, but did the stalker rape Gauri? Like I mean she was unconscious and has no recollection whatsoever and you said that her family knew something she didn't so 😕. Or am I overworking my brain? 😳 If he did, oh that **** 😡... Shiv's gonna kill him...

Awesome work jaan!! Cont soon!

Cheers,
dc

superb part 👏 👏 !!shiv-gauri coming closer !!! 😳 but ths stalker thing sounds scary!!!nice update continue soon

Originally posted by: sum2005

omg omg what a amazing story,i hold my breath untill the episode ended ,it is very very nice and differnt.
it sounds like darr shahrukh darr

thanks dear. hmm saans itna roko gi to problem ho jaye gi. hmm darrr hmmmm u know i always wanted to watch that movie. but never got a chance. if the story is like the one i am writing then i guess i don't need to watch it.

Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

awesome story!

thanks girl

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

wonderful......
and omg he kissed her so soon.....
waitin for more.....

well u know he can't stay away from her. ans thanks for such a wonderful comment. i will cont tonight

Originally posted by: desi chic

"Love at first sight"... For SG and me too... well, I mean I'm in love with your ff...

Very interesting and unique!! Wow, Gauri was a cop... And some dude abducted her... Let me guess... Oh that pig-head... Uski toh mein . This might sound like a stupid question, but did the stalker rape Gauri? Like I mean she was unconscious and has no recollection whatsoever and you said that her family knew something she didn't so . Or am I overworking my brain? If he did, oh that **** ... Shiv's gonna kill him...

Awesome work jaan!! Cont soon!

Cheers,
dc

heyyyyy thanks. wow where did that came from. are u in my head or something. you in ma story gauri will be asking the same question to herself. oops i shouldnot go there. all i can say is wait and watch. thanks again

Originally posted by: kaira

superb part !!shiv-gauri coming closer !!! but ths stalker thing sounds scary!!!nice update continue soon

thanks yaar. well you know how it is they are always coming closer no matter what the circumstances are.

part3

shiv was getting ready to for work and he had to meet gauri in he evening. he was actually quite excited about seeing her. never thought a girl could have such an effect on him. usually it was the other way around but knowing last night he knew that they both felt the same way. which helped him put his ego at ease. he gave her his number last night so if any problem occur he will be only a phone call away. he set up a different ring tone for her number in his cell.(the one been used in all the soaps now a days) he smiled as he remebered her calling him an angel. FLASHBACK "i never had an guardian angel before" she said feeding in her number in his cell. "are you lookin' at me" hepointed a finger at his tough lookin unshaven chin. "don't get me wrong, but does this look like the face of an angel" (no honey not by a long chance. you wil always stay a devil to me. who knows how to get to the hearts) her smile said it all she wasn't taking any excuses. "okay well maybe on a bad day" "thanks for seeing it my way" she slipped her mobile inside her purse that matched her dress and lightweight sandals. FLASHBACK ENDS he kept smiling which was unusuall for him he never done that before. he picked up his wallet and jacket and went out of the aparment putting the security code in. he new he was never safe so he puts on as much security as he can. he had loads of meeting today. which he managed. he was in middle of a meeting when his cell rang. his heart beat went fastened like it was going to break a record. he hopes she was ok. he picked up the phone. "gauri are you alright" silence "i am fine shiv. i hope you are not busy. i just called to say that i won't be able to make it tonight. i did not go to work either." felt relieved that she was alright but why didn't she want to come. "why is there any problem" "no no problem its just that i was not feeling very well so i took a day off. i hope thats ok with you" "thats good cause u are going to give me ur address now and i am going to come to your house" "hmm why do you want to come to my house. ohh never mind you got a pen and paper handy." she gave his the address and he quickly jotted it down. put his cell back on the table. "lucky did you look at the joey's tower file" lucky:-"yes i did. i think we can handle it bro. we have to train the gurads on duty there." "good cause i don't want any mistakes. joey was really angry the last time i don't want it to happen this time. i would be angry to. did joey tell anything about the nelsons." lucke:-"yes he did. he said that i have to tell you not to worry. he said that he is goung to deal with them. he dod not like the way he talked to you. he also said that there are too many people after nelson that he wil not bother anyone again. he did a big mistake by messing with joey's girl. you know how much he loves ria. they tried to lay a hand on her and his son. her ex kidnapped her. found out that nelson was behind it. he is nailed. i think that joey might kill him. he hasn't learn to forgive anyone who tries to harm his family." lucky takes out a gun(sorry don't know much about guns. by the way shiv is connected to underworld. if you haven't got it till now.) "joey told me o show you the new model. its pretty isn't it." shiv took it in his hand aimed it on a picture on the wall. then put it down again. "yeah it really nice peace of work. but i don't want it f you remeber i am not connect to them anymore. i am only in contact with joey now." " so shiv who is gauri. i never saw you this worried before." shiv smiled hearing gauri name then came back to reality. "she is someone i know" "ahan man i haven't seen that smile on your face in ages. whats up you fell for her didn't you." "wait till you meet her lucky she is one of kind. but one thing she is my girl. so when you meet her make sure your hands are off her" lucky grinned and went away "whatever big guy" shiv smiled and left for guari's house he did not get any trouble finding the house. he rangthe bell and waited for someone to open the door. the door opened he entered but saw no one there. "hello anyone there" someone held him from behind and put him to the floor. and put blue ink all over his face. "what the hell"

gauri entered the room she saw shiv on teh floor his face covered with ink. she barely managed to keep herself from laughing. "adi get off him" "i told you dii i will take revenge. you make the mistake he wil have to pay which he did. so know one thing not to mess with me again" she thrown the cusion his way which missed. no wonder they did not let her be a cop.she went toards shiv "i am so sorry shiv." "oh its alright. mind if i know why have i been punished." she smiled sheepishly. "i done something to my brother. on which he told me that he wil get his revenge. you were ma friend he thought my bf so he took revenge." she showed him the bathroom. and made her way to the kitchen. she was cooking when she felt someone behind her she turned around to find shiv standing at the doorway. "hmmm that something i never had thought i would see. you in the kitchen, nice view very pleasent." she blushed for the first (agar me ne pehe kahin kaha ho ke is ne blush kiya to my mistake. me bhool gayi) she asked him what he would like to have. he said coffee. "you like your coffee black or white" "white plz" she turned around making teh coffee. thinking about the kiss last night. she took him to her room. they sat on the bed. (un ka dil nahi kar raha tha sofa pe bethne ko) they talked about stuff. gauri went away to get something from kitchen. for the first time he looked around in the room. everything was neat and tidy. perfect with everything in skin. his eyes set on the picture on the wall. she seemed young there was certain inocennce about her. she looked really pretty the photo told him that it had been taken by surprise. she was laughing. her eyes watery. he felt someone behind him. "gauri tumhari yeh tasveer bohot khubsurat hai" "thanks the bas***d took it and sent it posted it to me. i put it there so it wil remind me of all i have been through. al i've lost because of him. yeh yahan hai takey mujhe yaad rahe ke is ne mere saath kya kiya hai. by the way this is not the only one he took there are more. he likes to send them now and then. too bad there is no clue where it comes from. i tried to find out by going on to every photo store in the city. took me days but no one knows. looks like a house job. well forget about it so how was your day. i hope i did not disturbed you when i called." shiv bitter at the thought of the guy. "no don't be silly you didn't disturb me. i was having a meeting with my friend.he knows about you. he wants to meet you is well. he wants to know which women is crazy enough to hang about with me. you know i am dangerous stuff gauri. if you were a cop i would never have came near you. you would have arrested me instantly." he never talked about this with anyone but he did not know why he was telling gauri about it." gauri surprised. "why would i do that. wait a minute you know the first time i heard your name i knew i'd known you. now its coming back to me. you are the one they call chief.(deemagh me nahi a raha tha kiya likhon) no wonder i thought i have seen you before. you have changed." shiv went near her. held her by her waist. "yes you know me gauri. how could you not. what we did before was something you did not want to do but had to for your job. i loved you then but not sure sbout now. i am not sure i love you now you changed my life you changed me. i recoginzed you the moment i saw you. i knew you will recognize me. shen i kissed you. you instantly reacted. i sensed that you were trying to figure out who touched you like this before. You remember, don't you, gauri? If you remember how I like my coffee, you sure as hell remember the rest. i understood the minute you asked me about coffe that you have recoginzed me took you long enough." she looked at him with tears in her eyes knew she was in trouble. " yes i remembered you. i thought i knew you the frist time ive seen. but i was not sure. been a long time since we met last. i was studying and working for gonverment when they sent me on a mission. it was to seduce you. but i fell in love with you. thats why i thought it was you the first time i saw you. you have changed a lot mu angel. where did that bad boy go to" "you killed him pari. you killed him long time ago. i found out that you were with the gonrerment. i had you removed that very day. but could not change the fact that i loved you. than you came back to my life with all the feelling i thought i left back. i didn't want to see your face again but i couldn't just do that after all you were my fisrt love." she looked at him then hugged him tight. she did not report him back then she told her seniors that she did not get a chance to find out as they already came to know about her secret. she told them that they had a leek someone from gonverment was telling them about us. she managed to close down the case back then and maked sure it remained closed. love make you do all sorts of things. shiv bent down and kissed her hard on her lips making her remember all those moments they spent together they had gone further a head then this before. crossed all the limits. she never got a chance to tell him the she carried his baby. never got a chnce to tell him that she lost it. because of her job. now that she thought about it she had lost everything because fo her job and what had she got from the job nothing instead they kicked her out. she let him kiss her. he touched her everywhere she did not stop him. she knew her angel was angry with her. and she had to win him back.


look at her flaunting her ardor like a slut for anyone to see. for him to see. did she know he was out here watching? was this her way of tauntig him? the view from where he hidden was perfect, almost too perfect, he decided to watch them but the scene turned shiv's back was on him. as if he knew he was there and did not want him to see. he knew the way to cool shiv's or better still gauri's ardor. with the tp of his knife. gauri knew his skills his precision work. the weight of the weapon at his hip never bothered him. comforted more like.he patted it. he told himself to wait and see who gets the last laugh and moved.

wow that was hell of a long part i am exhausted. been putting too much pressure onmy little brain it needs rest now.

fentasctic ,this time i dint hold my breath ok.it was very nice very different ,they knew eachother from before and were in love,hey! what is shiv's past why did they send gauri to seduce him and who was the guy who is following gauri .
it is completely different from darr