Khamoshiyon Ki Zubaan ff...END p.86 - Page 7

Originally posted by: kaira

great part 👏

Thanks jaan!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: apapap

aaaaaaaaaaa calm down yaar, kya hua??....this was so much better than wht i suggested. It was?😕.hehehe.....awesome awesome awesome....how do u write all this....im envious LOL... what for? You're so talented yourself!...shiv is soo sooo sooo awesome *gushes* You're telling me!😳...bas..now i want a guy like this..mil gaya toh bol dena... yaar, agar mila toh mein tujhe kyun bataoon, khud na rakhloon!😆 waise I want the real one, so you can have all imitations😳 what am I talking about "want"... HE's MINE😳

my fav part....
Taking her hand in his, he brings it to his heart… "Sun rahi ho na… Sab tumhaari wajase… mein pagal hoye ja raha hoon…Tum mere saath aisa nahin kar sakti, mein tumhe karne nahin doonga." Honestly speaking, I have no idea where that came from. I wrote that at a point in which I was starting to drag and didn't know what to write and then I just wrote whatever. Nice to know it fell into place😉


dil ko chooh gaya.Hai Rabba... really? teri ye baatein mere dil ko chooh gayi😳 Thanks Pri!!...it gave me goose pimples Lolz... "pimples"? Yikes, that sounds... interesting😆....shivers down my spine. oye hoye... here, catch my blanket, its nice and warm😳...aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. ab kya hua?...th ts me shouting btw....cos im not in my senses Hain? what happened to your senses?! Hurry call the doc!!... RDi!! um... if you lose your senses, meri update ka kya hoga dammit! (Sana Di style😉😆)....damn i sound pathetic....agar im in a state to write somethin better...i;ll come back and edit my post...hehehe....great job Priya my jaanu, I'm touched by anything you say. The fact that u read and appreciate is the best reward for me!!

🤗

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

hai.. dii... hai meri sweetheart, kaisi hai tu?

amazing part, i loved it all... and onli iqbal and pallavi's chemistry did
justice to your part......!! darn kuriye, you are too cute for words!! *mwuaah!!*

i loved especially the part where he says to her lifeless body... because of
you, i am becoming insane!! haha, glad u liked it. It was and "in the spur of the moment" thing.😕

wow!! even though i am absolutely speechless at the fact you can always
out do yourself... and still prewarn us that the part was awful..!! well, its usually cause I loose my thinking abilities soon... and u guys are just too sweet to even say anything critical!😳

dii.. please do continue soon..! will do hun... gimme a few hours ok?
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Thanks Aakriti!!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: queenkumar

Wow another mindblowing part, this is awesome dear!

Thanks Di!😉

Btw, you're daughter is a genius just like u!! Kya pic thi!!👏 Too bad you couldn't get your hands on it😕😆

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

Btw, where it has the "***", type in "to****.***"

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dc

Originally posted by: racho8

neetuuuuuuuuu wt is this???? hai meri maa, ab meine kya kardiya?😆making the fonts bigger and bold dont mean tht ur update is longgg....u cant fool us 😉 😆 😆 *ROLF* Lmao!!... haha... Craziness... I'm such a fool for even trying eh?!😆 But it was for my Amu's sake... woh kya hai na, comp bar beteh beteh uski nigah (eyesight) kamzor hogayi hai, and she was complaining that I'm gonna make her get glasses so!😆

k bak to my comment.. ok...😆

OMG!!!!!!!!..tht was sooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....damn he loves her...he loves herr...he loves herrrrrrr.... 😳 k k i'll calm down now 😆 ... LMAO!!! You're way more confident than Him or me!!😆 Calm down girl...😆 You're hillarious!😆

neetuuuuuuuuuuuu aau kya danda leke??? WHAT?!!!!!! meine kya kiya? Bhaag le Neetu... teri khair nahin......u wanna separate my shivgauri... 😡 meine kab aisa kiya? I didn't do no such thing... aur ush doctor ko to main dekhlungi haha, yes, tum us doc ko dekho, sab uski wajase!! me didn't do nothing!....uski himmat kese hui shiv kapoor ko chune ki???... 😳 no kidding eh?!!!!! how DARE he touch the great SHIV KAPOOR?!😡

awwwwwwwww gauri omgggg....tht last words "shivv" jus took my breath away.... sweetheart, she breathed his name, tumhaari breathing ko kya hogaya?!

kya baat hai neetu...ish baar no suspense...im so proud of u.. 😉 😆 😆 lol, I thought I'd be nice to you guys this time😉 thanks jaan.😆

tht was a mind-blowing update... merci darling!😉 love ur comments, they crack me up!😆

continue soon.. 😳 haan, karti hoon!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: racho8

ohhh thanks jaannnnnnnnn cant waitttttt till u update....therez nothing to do here....haha lol, I know... where is everyone?

and yea this link is not working....u fix the whole link and then give me...😉😆😆 look below.

http://www.to****.***/KAA/13decKAA.html

http://www.to****.***/KAA/13decKAA.html (if u can't get it to work, just copy and paste this link)

so when the window opens, it may not work right away. that's because of the "**". so where there are "**" in the link, type in "to****.***" samajh gayi?😆

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: smartc

Oh God, Neetu.. Marwa Ditta yaara.. I'm speechless.. Di, tussi sach vich great ho!! You always make me smile!! Thank you so much, I'm really not as great as you make me!! I felt like watching this part right in front of my eyes.. Oh gosh, if that were ever to happen with Iqbal and Pallavi, I'd probably fainted!!! Lol... yeah... *sniffles* I miss him too... I just watched an old epi.. and I was smiling and crying...😭 My feeble heart how much we are alike😳... It aches for Iqbal to come back as Shiv I know... my constant dua... Rab kare... ke ohh wapas aajaaye.. And your fanfic makes it all the more anxious and helpless..Di, tussi sad na ho plz (Sanju style -- Ek Aur Ek Gyara)... I'm sad too... *sniffles* Heres a jaddu ki jhappi for u... 🤗 But amazing job done, gudiya.. U make a sistah proud!! Sweetness... I'm officially diabetic Di. Thanks to you!😳

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Sana Di~

Thanks so much Di, love your comments!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: yamulya1

aapko kuch update karne ka irada hi ki nahi 😈

Good Lord... I pressed post and first thing I see is that evil smile!😆

Tu bhi mujhe dhamki dene ayi hai kya... Karti hoon, karti hoon... Tohra time to de... Humesha danda le kar ghoomti rehti hai mere peeche!

Cheers,

dc