Reth... - Page 3

Sareeta dahlinn... 👏. Simply fabulous hun!! Gosh, itni gahri sochain.. itna ehsaas, itni depth..Kidher se soch ker laati hain aap? Dammit, if I could even have half the cognitive skills that u've got, life would be a blessing *hehehe*.

Mashallah Se.. Keep 'em coming sweetie 😳.

xoxo, Sana~

Sareeta Di...

Lemme recover first and then I'll be back as I am completely speechless and utterly awed by your perception of the real and the unreal[/I}... Sensational....

Cheers,
dc

Originally posted by: yamulya1

sareeta dii, to be frank the poem is scary. i read little in the morning and it was positive. now as i went through it just changed to such a pathetic. poor gauri, hope she never gets to know the truth. i wish her to die without knoing the truth. whenever i think of ocean i feel it a positive side.(pisceian 😆) but i way u penned it 👏 its like looking at totally different side. just hatsoff to ur imagination and ur talent to pen ur expression. 👏 ......(infinite)

Awww, Amu , first of all thanks for revisiting the post again and reading it again completely. Very sweet of you....😊

Umm.. I am sorry you felt it scary, but well, its jus another phase of life when one feels this way and the lines jus came to my mind... imagining if it were to happen that way!!! Thank you so much for liking and also finding it scary, for had you not related to it, it wouldnt have affected you at all.... what say dahling? !! ? 😉

Thanks a lot!

Originally posted by: smartc

Sareeta dahlinn... 👏. Simply fabulous hun!! Gosh, itni gahri sochain.. itna ehsaas, itni depth..Kidher se soch ker laati hain aap? Dammit, if I could even have half the cognitive skills that u've got, life would be a blessing *hehehe*.

Mashallah Se.. Keep 'em coming sweetie 😳.

xoxo, Sana~

Sana , yaar aap bhi na!!!! Yaar aap jaante ho, main soch soch kar nahin likh paati yaar.. bas aise zehen mein khayaal aate hain tho likh daal thi hoon... and these thoughts jus pop in the head , anytime , anywhere... and then I jus pen them down....😊

Zaroor Sana , I will pen them down and share them here, jahaan sab itne open mind se padkar kar, relate karne ki koshish karte hai...😊

"Tareef ki kise chaah hai, chaah hai tho bas itna ki hamare soch ki kadar tho ho..." *okay, now I penned it now... jus now...and I cant believe I wrote it damn it!! Ha Ha!*😊

Thanks a lot buddy!! *mwwuuuaaaaaaaaaaaaaah*

Originally posted by: desi chic

Sareeta Di...

Lemme recover first and then I'll be back as I am completely speechless and utterly awed by your perception of the real and the unreal[/I}... Sensational....

Cheers,
dc

Awww, Neetu, you are sooooooooo sweet!!! Thanks a lot for the kind words! Btw, its goes without saying , that you yourself are such a good poet and have sucha flair for penning down thoughts so beautifully.... I loved both the poems you penned....so well penned down, although the thought is not uncommon, the way they have been penned are .... and kudos to you girlie!! 😊

And you leave me speechless with your kind words!! 😊as always!!

I realize that the subject of the poem reflects upon shattered moments, but despite that, I smile... Smile at the perfection by which you penned the lines... *bows*... You're talent sees no bounds and may that always be the way.

You're amazing Di, seriously amazing. True to the word.

What else can I say? Meh, what am I to know of anything!

Continue showering us with your words!

Cheers,
dc

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

wah! kya baat hai 👏

Awww, thank you soooooo much for reading and appreciating it! So glad you liked it!! 😊

Originally posted by: desi chic

I realize that the subject of the poem reflects upon shattered moments, but despite that, I smile... Smile at the perfection by which you penned the lines... *bows*... You're talent sees no bounds and may that always be the way.

You're amazing Di, seriously amazing. True to the word.

What else can I say? Meh, what am I to know of anything!

Continue showering us with your words!

Cheers,
dc

Neetu dahling, you leave me speechless, I cant believe, meri is choti si kavitha , ne tumpe itna asar kiya hai... yeh thoughts tho mere zehen main bas aise hi aa gaye... aur tere liye, aur sirf tere, I am gonna post the other lil kavitha I penned down along with reth , but never posted yday, will do so now, jus for you.....😊

sareeta another great and wonderful thought... 😊

after the one you penned down about "life" this one too really touched my heart....

it has so much depth and really amazing...

sareeta keep writing so wonderful thoughts and i will always appreciate them..

sareeta you deserve these applause and i bow to your superb talent and keep it up.... 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: 3 angels

sareeta another great and wonderful thought... 😊

after the one you penned down about "life" this one too really touched my heart....

it has so much depth and really amazing...

sareeta keep writing so wonderful thoughts and i will always appreciate them..

sareeta you deserve these applause and i bow to your superb talent and keep it up.... 👏 👏 👏

Oh Khyaatee, thank you soooooooo much, jus as the one about "Life" that you had requrested during MOTW, this one also , came flowed into my mind and so did it from there on to the paper.. I am so glad you enjoyed and related to it so well... thank you.. I am very humbled, that my thoughts are so appreciated, it is indeed very humbling! 😊

* Bows down *