Reth...

Reth...

Gungunaati ...
Lehraathi...
Hawaayen thi..
Jahaan....

Muskuraati ..
Fizaaayen thi..
Jahaaan.....

Aashaaon ki lehar...
Mein behjaate...
Ehsaas dil ke...
Jahaan ...

Maana tha..
Is khoobsoorat...
Ehsaaas ko
Hamne ...Zindagi...

Chubti hai ab hamein
Hawaaayen wahi...

Nichodti hai hamein..
Ehsaasein wahi...

Gungunaati..
Khaamoshiyaan thi..
Jahaaan..
Viraani si chaayi hai...
Ab wahaaan....

Mehekthi fizaayein thi...
Jahaaan....
Door door tak phaili
Bejaan si reth hai ...
Ab wahaan...

Jiye jaa rahe hai..
Ab maan kar is akelepan..
Ko.. apni.. kismat..
Apni Zindagi....

-Sareeta

- Penned these lines as they came to mind, for no specific reason, but felt they were apt for Gauri , once she gets to know abt Shiv and Ipshi , and she leaves them....

awesome,awesome, awesome 👏 👏 👏 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very well-written 👏 , the lines touched my heart deeply 😳 , sareeta ur mindblowing sweety!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃

diiiiiii!!!!! OMG!!!!mai kya kahu......tussi gr8 ho di 👏 👏 👏 haaye kya likkha hai apney.....ekdum dil ko chu gayi......that was sooo touching.....laazawab....uffff mujhe toh words hi nahii mil rahe hai..........bohot hi khubsurat tha diii 🤗 aur thank u sooooooo much di aapko woh font walii baat yaad thi 🤗 🤗 luv u.....mwwuuuaaahhh

Brilliant as usual, Sareeta Ji.

Awesome as usual, u r great just realy great yaar!

My heart bleeds for Gauri if that was the state of the poor girl. u have a very creative mind if these just poped in ur mind without even thinking,ur the one they call;;; birhaan de sultan.

Originally posted by: chicaneesa

👏 👏 👏 welll ritten

Thank you so much!!! So glad you liked it! 😊 Thank you!

Originally posted by: rimli_remix rox

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Gosh thank you soooooooooo much! So glad you enjoyed the verse /lines so much! Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: vcool

awesome,awesome, awesome 👏 👏 👏 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very well-written 👏 , the lines touched my heart deeply 😳 , sareeta ur mindblowing sweety!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃

Awwww, Reem ! Thank you so much! Its been a while since we got in touch aint it? Good to see ya .. and see your comments as well.. they make my day!!! Thanks a lot yaar! Am so glad you liked them... maine tho aise hi likhe the... bas khayaaal aaya aur likh daale... aur phir socha.. they wud be apt for Gauri if the situation turned out that she walked out of Kapoor house....😊