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Originally posted by: nazrinkhan

diiiiiii!!!!! OMG!!!!mai kya kahu......tussi gr8 ho di 👏 👏 👏 haaye kya likkha hai apney.....ekdum dil ko chu gayi......that was sooo touching.....laazawab....uffff mujhe toh words hi nahii mil rahe hai..........bohot hi khubsurat tha diii 🤗 aur thank u sooooooo much di aapko woh font walii baat yaad thi 🤗 🤗 luv u.....mwwuuuaaahhh

Awww, Naz, behna tu bhi na!!!! Mere paas alfaaz nahin hai... shukriyada karne ke liye... Am so overwhelmed by the comments I have received... thank you.... I am all misty eyed! Thank you behna!! Thank you!

Love you too! Mwwwuaaaaaaaaah!!😊

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

Brilliant as usual, Sareeta Ji.

Thank you soooooooooo much!!! 😊

Originally posted by: queenkumar

Awesome as usual, u r great just realy great yaar!

Awww, Di, thank you soooooooooo much! So glad you liked it! 😊

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

My heart bleeds for Gauri if that was the state of the poor girl. u have a very creative mind if these just poped in ur mind without even thinking,ur the one they call;;; birhaan de sultan.

Aww, that so nice of you to say so! Thank you! By the way, my urdu aint good... infact quite nil... what is the meaning of "birhaan de sultan?"...😊

Originally posted by: metoubearscrazy

sareeta jiiiiiiiiiiii 😃

arre, ur soooooooo good ~ luvly luvly luvly poem, luved every word of it 👏 👏 👏

arre wen u av tym plz teach me some poetry, i cnt rite a line let alone a whole poem

fantastique and fantabulous 😳 👏 👏

🤗 🤗 🤗

luv metoubearscrazy 😊

Awww, thank you sooooooooo much!!!! Am so glad you liked it and enjoyed it so much! As for teachingpoetry, I dont know how to, coz I never learnt... I jus write what comes to my mind , as it comes... not particular format nothing... bas dil se....😊

But sure will be glad , if I can be of any help...

All I say is , agar dil se kuch mehsoos karo... tho bas likh dalo jo mehsoos karte ho....😊

sareeta dii just went thorugh ist stanza, will read the whole poem and comment on it in the evening. had to write an exam right now. 😳

Originally posted by: sareeta

Aww, that so nice of you to say so! Thank you! By the way, my urdu aint good... infact quite nil... what is the meaning of "birhaan de sultan?"...😊

Birha is (The emotive dimension that covers anxieties and pangs of separation (birha), and seemingly endless wait for re-union.) and Birhan de sultan would be someone known as a king of peotry who is able to put all these emotions of the pain of seperation and parting from their beloved, in a poem.

Originally posted by: yamulya1

sareeta dii just went thorugh ist stanza, will read the whole poem and comment on it in the evening. had to write an exam right now. 😳

Oh Amu, its awwrigt.... do well in your exam, I am sure you woulld have! Aaaram se padlena .. theek hai!😊

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

Birha is (The emotive dimension that covers anxieties and pangs of separation (birha), and seemingly endless wait for re-union.) and Birhan de sultan would be someone known as a king of peotry who is able to put all these emotions of the pain of seperation and parting from their beloved, in a poem.

Thank you sooooooo much for the kind words! I am floored! Such kind words! Gosh I dont know to react... King of poetry... nahin yaar... I jus write what I feel..... from the heart... baaki bas, aap sab, itna appreciate karte ho!

Thank you so much for even considering me good enough... thank you!😊

sareeta dii, to be frank the poem is scary. i read little in the morning and it was positive. now as i went through it just changed to such a pathetic. poor gauri, hope she never gets to know the truth. i wish her to die without knoing the truth. whenever i think of ocean i feel it a positive side.(pisceian 😆) but i way u penned it 👏 its like looking at totally different side. just hatsoff to ur imagination and ur talent to pen ur expression. 👏 ......(infinite)