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oh now i get it!!! 😳

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PLEASE cont sooooooooooooooon!

😆 😳 😆 Shivs going to fall for her

Thanx Guy's! For the comments.......I've no word to describe my feelings....Thanx again....I hope I can give some pleasure to you all.
Part:14

Gauri comes out from bathroom dressed in black sari. She was very uncomfortable cuz of her blouse.She goes near the mirror & started drying her hair. Shiv who was trying to light the fire suddenly look at gaury in the mirror. He just keep looking at her. Gaury didn't realize that shiv was looking at her. She was doing her own work. When she was drying her hair the drops of water was falling on shivs face....But shiv didn't realize it....he just keep looking gaury......suddenly gaury saw in mirror that shiv is looking at her without falling his eyerish. she stopped her work & she turned to shiv. suddenly shiv said,"aouch" Gaury run to him...sit in the carpet & said,"Kya hua?"....Shiv was catching his hand....he said,"Jaal gaya".....gaury took his hand in her hand & put his finger in her mouth.....Shiv keep looking at her.....gaury said,"aapko dhaan rakhna cahiye tha. Kuch ho jata to".......shiv said,"Mere dhan rakhne ke liye tum jo ho. Aur yeh bhi to tumhare wajese hi hua".....Gaury said,"Kya?"........shiv said,"maine tumhe dekha....tum baal sukharehi thi.....tumhe dekha aur dekhta hi gaya......aur haat jaal gaya".....gaury didn't say anything but she felt shy. Then she saw that shivs face is wet....so she said,"itni thaad me aapko basine aa rahe hai" Shiv keep his hand in his face & touch the drops of water......then he said,"yeh basine nahin hai.....tum baal sukharehi thi....yeh uski pani hai" Gaury was shocked she said," I'm sorry...aapne mujhe kuch kaha kyuon nahin....mai..woh..." Shiv said,"it's ok! tumhari galti nahin hai....Mai tumhe dekha to kuch realize hi nehi kiya" by hearing this gaury makes her eye down......she smiled a little....shiv said,"tum aaj is sari me bohot achi lagrahi ho" gaury looked at shiv & thair eye locked.
Guy's I need ur another help. Do you think that they should consumate their marriage in this cottage? If you all agree then i'll make it. So, come on guy's & leave ur comments.

Luv
Raisa 😉

Originally posted by: Jai & Bani

Guy's I need ur another help. Do you think that they should consumate their marriage in this cottage? If you all agree then i'll make it. So, come on guy's & leave ur comments.

Luv
Raisa 😉

suree y not....i been waiting for tht since its not gonna happen in the show...😆but make it a lil longer.....i mean they shouldnt talk so muchh u kno wt i mean...show some feelings....

Originally posted by: racho8

suree y not....i been waiting for tht since its not gonna happen in the show...😆but make it a lil longer.....i mean they shouldnt talk so muchh u kno wt i mean...show some feelings....

Thanx for ur comment. I'm not very good in writting & also my hindi is bad. But i'll try by level best to satisfy u with more feeling.

yeha i think it could be a turning point either he regrets it or he doesnt so yeah!

yaa why not i think it will be a good idea 😳 😳

Originally posted by: racho8

suree y not....i been waiting for tht since its not gonna happen in the show...😆but make it a lil longer.....i mean they shouldnt talk so muchh u kno wt i mean...show some feelings....

i agree with racho
y nt....go a head....n its abt time they get this done 😆
do write long 1.....

continue with ur work but pls make it longerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr 👏

they shud consummate
go ahead 👏