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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
great work 👏
please continue as soon as possible
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
dat wz rli awesumm!! 👏 👏
cont. soon!!! 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
😳 too cute 👏 👏 please continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part: 13
It was the same man whom they were following. He said,"Aap log yahan kya kar rahe hai?? Mai to aap log ko dhun raha hoon kab se. Is barish me yaahan maat rukiye thand lag jayegi" Shiv replied," Hamari chata tut gayi issiliye....aur aap bhi gayeb ho gaye" The man riplied that he will be back in a moment with another umbrella.
After some moment he came back with an umbrella & they reached in a house.They knocked in the door & a old man open the door. They told the man to help them to pass a night there. But the man said that, He is not the owner of the house & he've no right to give permission to stay them here.But shiv argued with the man & understad him that they are in big trouble. At last the man agreed.He showed them a room. The room was beautifully decorated & furnished. The man ask them if they need anything. But when they said no he left the place.As they were compleatly wet they looked for some cloth in the room & got some clothes. Some shirts & sari. Shiv called the man ask him if they can use this or not. The man replied that it is masters cloth but as they are compleately wet they can use it.When the man left shiv close the door & tell gaury to change.Gaury went to the wardrobe & take out some sari's. But she noticed that all the sari's blouse have a boarded back which she didn't wear. So, she became upset & close the cupbord. Shiv came after changing & saw that gaury was stading in wet cloth & she is shivering in cold. Shiv said," Gaury, Tum abhi tak kapre nehi badli. Tumhe to thand lag jayegi. Jao aur abhi kapre badlo" Gaury said,"Woh........mai issime thik hoon" Shiv said,"Kya? Tum thik ho. Lekin tum to thand se kaap rahi ho"...Gaury said,"lekin mai woh kapre nehi pehen sakti.......usme ek problem hai" shiv said,"kya problem hai?" gaury felt hesiteted. how can she told shiv what the problem was. but shiv said,"Tum chup kyuon ho?" Gaury goes near the cupbord....take out some sari ...& showed shiv the sari. Shiv looked & said,"What is the problem?" Gauri said," woh....mai...aisi..blouse.." Now shiv understad what the matter was. He told her,"Yahan to aur koi nehi hai aur ek raat ki to baat hai tum yehi pehen lo. Varna tumhe thaand lag jayegi" Now gauri have no option without changing. So she took a blck sari & goes for change.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
yay im first!!!!!!!!!

by the way i love ur fan fic 😳 😳 😳

I wonder what will happen next??????????????? 😉

PLEASE CONT SOON !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Sunju

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Posted: 18 years ago
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What's a block sari????????????????????????? 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: basket

What's a block sari????????????????????????? 😕

I mean it's almost backless. & the word is Boarded back.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
yaar continue soon...its getting really excited and i wait a single sec 😆

amna
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
cont soon ur ff is too good 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont...............
sagari 👏 😊

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