Khamoshiyon Ki Zubaan...ff part 28(p.150)

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Nishaat

@Nishaat Laila

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

Wonderful!!!........it was so brilliant.....u really have talent......such detail .........such fine description of emotions..... 👏 I felt like i was reading a novel...just that i couldnt turn the page and keep on reading! 😭 Plzz continue soon........How old r u btw?u have a unique flair with words.....extremely unique....... 😛

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91118

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

amazing part hun!!!

reminds me of the jai-bani bangle scene 😳 😉

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loveanime

@loveanime

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

Oh my gooooooooooooooooooooooood. what emotion and at what depth and detail you have expressed them. I liked reading these stories better than watching KAA. Gauri's frustration with the bangles ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh, that was just so sweeeeeeeeeeeeet. Please don't stop and continue. You should be a novel writer. 👏

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NaV

@SIKinLoVE

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Posted: 18 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: inavars
amazing part hun!!!

reminds me of the jai-bani bangle scene 😳 😉

i know right sravs.. damnnnn.. omggg that was so cute.. he likes her likes her now.. awwwwwwwwwwwww.. its so cool.. he feels d pain.. that was mind blowing 👏

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Charu

@cz13

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Posted: 18 years ago

#25

just 2 parts posted n u ve got me hooked, booked n cooked to ur story.....i just luv it....its just da way i wanted shiv n gauri story to move.....
lyk many others ve complimented u abt ur way wid words...i'll say da same...u ve got a rocking way wid words.......wonderful way in which u ve narrated da story

i hope u continue soon wid da nxt parts

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prishika

@prishika

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Posted: 18 years ago

#26

lol...i seriously love u and ur fan fic!!! im kinda addicted i think. i log in everytime just to see if u have posted part!!! love itttttt!!
aite..continue soon 😊

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dalvinder

@neetusekhon

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Posted: 18 years ago

#27

oh oh 👏
plz continue cont cont cont sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

love it, and alos love u for writing such a romantic