Khamoshiyon Ki Zubaan...ff part 28(p.150)

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sania

@kyahoganimmoka

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Posted: 18 years ago

#41

i must say in shilpa from jdj style superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

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loveanime

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Posted: 18 years ago

#42

Amazing writing, love the detail in the emotion. You don't have much dialogue, I absolutely looooooooooooooooooooove the fact that there was not much dialogue. 😃 It is just what the heart thinks, in sometimes watching the soaps audience has to guess what kind of emotion the actor is trying to convey. But I love the way we can read what they could be feeling, it creates so much drama and feeling that you feel what they feel. 👏 . Please continue to write until Shiv and Gauri fall in love and have many kids. 😆

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jop

@cuty_k

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Posted: 18 years ago

#43

ur absolutely BRILLIANT!!
has anyone gt ektas email or number...cus she should read these!!
they are brilliant!!
are you looking to go into writing??
what do u wanna do??
ur sooo good!!
plz continue....i cant wait....when ever i read it...i can imagine the scenes so
clearly!! i adore ur style of writing!!

i wish i could write like u!! 😳

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 18 years ago

#44

Thank you!!!
Thanks for your wonderful support guys... much appreciated!... I will try and update tomorrow!
Cheers,
dc

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bhumi

@bhumishah

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Posted: 18 years ago

#45

Omg i just raed the 3 parts n i must say u r an awesome writer
awesome parts
continue soon

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Abhita

@abhita

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Posted: 18 years ago

#46

Hey dc...
Don't leave us in so much suspense yaar...
please continue...
Could you please... if possible that is... post two parts at a time...

Thanks,
Abhita

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rinita

@rinita

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Posted: 18 years ago

#47

Awesome 👏
Pls do continue 😃

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boomerang123

@boomerang123

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Posted: 18 years ago

#48

amazing! how could u pen down so neat ? plz continue ...apart from watching the show ..reading this is a wonderful experience ...plz do not stop here ..every word is perfectly written. 👏 👏