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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

peepo gr8 job yaar!👏👍🏼

u r really makin sa dtory ROQ

bt wantd 2 remynd u gyz ke sirf ye do bhai behen nhi hain dere r others also...so jst 2 bring dem in da frame .... il ryt some......

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

scene shifts 2 house...(malhotras) esha....waking up frm her sleep....:Aaah..!aaj tho sone ka mazaa aagaya mom:ESHAAAA! tum ab uthi ho???paagal ho gayee ho kiya?mien tho samjhi tum college ja chuki ho!tum na....aj bhi college nhi gayee esha: mom yaar cmon mien college jaati hoon seekhne k dramaz nd moviez kaise direct karte hain...nd woh mjhe aata hai hafte mien 1 class is enough yaar! mom:tumhien tho rohit bhi kuch nhi bolta ,tumhare dad bhi nhi esha (makin an innocent face):aap bhi mat bolo naaaaaa mom (doing action as if cmin 2 beat her)😉 esha : acha acha uth gayee (kapoor mansion): diya: sumit...utho...mjhe apni frnd k ghar jaana hai sumit(whilst his eyz closd..): bhaiyya se boldo diya:woh gaye hue hain

sumit:shiv bhaiyya

diya: sumit utho na woh saath mien gaye hue hain bhaiyya k

sumit: arrey yaar tmhien bhi mien hi milta hoon di....shaadi karlo yaar tum!

diya:😡😡😡

( baq in da coffee house....)

*gyz..i mean peepo,,u 4got..nisha wz also shy..u kno sharmeeli typ lyk our prev gauri...so keepin dat in mynd):

nisha nd shiv try deir luck at bowling

shiv: u try frst

nisha: no u try frst

shiv: yaar inslt ho jaye gi..im nt gud at it

nisha: nd neither am i

both say :"uff" 2getha nd go on 2 reach da bowling ball 2getha

deir hands tuch *(typical drama)*😆

nisha immediately movz her hand nd shiv iz starin at her

she is embarassd😕....he has a cute luk....😳

den suddenly............samar nd trisha cum...

trisha: arey HELLO? in dono ko kiya hua?

samar:(whisprin 2 himself)lagta hai a luv story iz on da cards

trisha: jee?

samar: kuch nhi

nisha iz still embarassd bt she cant stop starin...wen a typically westrn mini skrt dressd grl cumz nd dashes in2 shiv nd he cmz in2 his senses

samar nd trisha: thnk god!

ronit cmz 2 mahenz house.....

ronit:pa...riya hai?

mahen:haan beta...tumhare saath jaana tha na usey..i think woh tayyar ho rahi hai

ronit: theek hai il wait hre!

riya cmz..shez lukin v pretty...bt deir story iz on shelvz ryt now...no LUV bloomin hre ryt now!

riya: ronit r u sure bout it?

ronit: yaar tumhien sirf assistant banna hoga...y r u so scard?u jst hav 2 b an assistant 4 da lyv show!

ab chaloooo...v r gttin l8

*(ronit iz the ownr nd manager of a muzic organization..i mean he organizes the show nd all..his sec. lft..so he appoints riya..who wz in srch of sum job b4 hr rsults 4 designing were out.........nd yh nisha iz also a fashion designer)*

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Trailblazer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

dese 2 families....kapoorz nd malhotras r v gud frnds

the children,rohit..ronit..shiv..samar..esha..nisha etc all kno each other frm childhood...da prob b/w sam nd trisha iz dat dey hvnt seen each other frm tht point of view

keepim dis in mynd plz carry on da story...im v happy 2 c how it iz all shapng up

peepo...saba...jagruti👍🏼👏 v well done plz cont...othrz join in yaar take part!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Payal di u rocked as alwayzzz so here i go

Nisha,Eisha n Trisha da 3 of dem were talking n discussing dat wht they will do in Trisha's weddin wht they will were n all when suddenly da phone rang n Eisha received

Eisha:Hello

Caller:Hi eisha kaisi ho i m samar

Eisha:mein theek ho jeeju app kaise hai

Samar:mein bhi theek ho kia mein trisha se baat kar sakta ho

Eisha:ofcourse jeeju ye lijiye hold on plz

Nisha:koun hai eisha

Eisha:samar jeeju jaiye trisha di baat kijiye

Trisha:Hello

Samar:Hi kaisi ho

Trisha:mein theek ho app kaise hai

Esha:dekho dekho kitna blush kar rahi hai

Nisha:chup kar n chal yahan se di ko baat karne de

Samar:mein tm se kuch zaroori baat karna chahta ho

Trisha:hmm kaho

Samar:wo actually mujhe tm se apne past k baare me kuch bat karni hai

Trisha got tensed

Trisha:ji boliye

Samar:wo jab mein london mein tha tab.....

Rohit:trisha tumhe dad bula rahe hai

Trisha:wo samar i m really sorry actually dad is calling me tou mein app se baad mein baat karti ho

Samar:ok theek hai bye

Trisha:bye

Trisha:ji mom app ne mujhe bolaya

Mom:haan beta wo mujhe tuj se poochna tha k tu apni frnd se milne kab ja rahi hai actually tere frnd k ghar k pass mujhe kuch kaam hai tou mein bhi tre saath he chali aou

Trisha:Ji mom mein nxt week ja rahi ho

Mom:chal theek hai

In trisha's room she waz sittinb on da bed n thinking SMAR KO APNE PAST K BAARE MEIN MUJHE KIA BATANA HO GA when nisha came n asked

Nisha:di kia huwa

Trisha:nisha wo samar ka phone ayya tha n wo keh raha tha k aose apne past k baare mein kuch kehna hai n jab wo batane ja raha tha tou mom ne bola liya

Nisha:tou is mein tensu=ion ki kia baat hai ye lo phone aur jeeju se pooch lo k kia baat hai

Trisha:chal theek hai mein phon karti ho

trisha dialled samar's number n he received

Samar:hello

Trisha:wo app kuch bata rahe the

Samar:hmm wo aik kaam karo mein tumhe lene atta ho n hum bahhar chalte hai aur fir baat karte hai

Trisha:ok

Samar:tou tum tayaar raho i m cumin bye

Trisha:ok bye

Nisha:kia huwa di kia kaha jeeju ne

Trisha:onhoo ne kaha k mein tayyar raho wo ah rahe hai mujhe lene fir wo baat karte hai

Nisha:sab bahaane hai tm se milne k n tm fazool mein tension le rahi ho

Trisha:tu chup kar aur mom se ja kar keh k mein ja rahi ho samar se milne wo ah rahe hai mujhe lene

Nisha:hmm bolti ho tum tayyar ho jao

ok guyzz emm done now sum 1 plzz continueee

saba😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

oookk....actually cudnt wait yaar

story dimaag mien thi tho socha......he he

acha here it goes:

rahul: nishaaaa....nishaaaa

nisha: arrey kiya hai baba chila kyun rahe ho?

rahul: yaar tmhien pta nhi aaj mien 1st tym dad k saath business meeting attend karne jara hoon!(xcitd ho kar)😆😛

nisha: tho?

rahul: tho? tho meri TIE kahan hai?

nisha: mien tumhari behen kam nd biwi ziyada lagti hoon rahul...yaar GRO UP!

rahul: yaar..aggar tum meri real behen nhi hoti...tho mien tumhi se shaadi karta!😃

nd mien MANDAP SE BHAAG JAATI!!!!!!!-Nisha

rahul: NHIIIIII...AIsa mat karo warna...mien...mien..mien wat wz dat dialogue??...haan...apni jaan de doonga!!!🥺

nisha: tho dedo deri kis baat ki hai?

rahul: tum MANDAP se nhi bhaagi na sis

nisha:kbhi kabaar mjhe shak hota hai k mien u ki big sis hoon bhi k nhi!😡_________kbhi trish di se kaam kyun nhi karvaate aise?

rahul: kyun k wo trish DI hain...aur tum NISH sirf nish

*(rahul nd shiv nd rohit call nisha..alwayz nish)*

*(samar calls trisha ...trish)*

samar cmz 2 trishaz house nd asks trishz mom...

samar:mom,yeh ki k larne ki awaazien hain?

mom: beta abhi tak tho nish nd rahul lar rahe they lkin jab itni zor ki awaazien aarahi hain tho is ka yehi matlab hai k rahul nd esha larrahe hain

samar: haan woh tho bachpan hi se....

trisha cmz down da stairs...

samar : chalen?

trisha: ji...mom mien jaaoon?

mom: bye beta. Enjoy!

( in da car....trisha nd samar)

trisha: aisi kiya baat hai apke past k baare mien jo aap mjhe baahar lekar aaye

samar..(lukin dat trish wz happy)..:umm nhi...woh actually..jst wants 2 spnd sum tym wid u

trisha blushes☺️: nhi aap kuch chupa rahe hain

suddnly fone bajta hai nd sam pix it up

(on da fone=pa)

sam:ji pa boliye

pa: mubarak ho beta!khushkhabri hai!

sam: khush khabri????🤔😕 meri tho abhi tak shaadi bhi nhi hui

pa: tho ho jaye gi

beta tum kaha ho?

sam:razi ki mithai ki dukaan k pas

pa:waah lagta hai kuch ziyada hi shubh mohrat hai!shaabash beta waheen lelo tum trisha k saath ho na apna bhi moon meetha karo aur uska bhi

sam: koi mjhe btaye ga kiya hora hai?

trish is confuzd

pa: teri sagaai hai 3 din baad

sam putz da break suddenly______trish nd sam ko s\dhakka lagta sam trish ko aage lagne se bacha ta hai

sam: KIYA?

pa: haan

bye beta teri maa ko bht saare logo ko fone krna hai...bht ghussa karri hai k itna kam tym mila hai tayyariyon k liye!

my parts over...gyz...ur trn!!!!he he

changs acn b dun if req!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

yaar i dont kno dere iz sum kinda error on ma comp as it is not uploadin images nd i cant even post da images so plz any 1 of u post da pix of our star cast

if u dont hve da pix nd if u r in need of da pic of any actr,...plz pm me

thnx

luv

reeno!

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Annet and Janet

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Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

I had some time on my hands so i thought id help out with the pictures :)

The Kapoors

Samar Kapoor - Yash Tonk

Shiv Kapoor- Iqbal Khan

Diya Kapoor - Sanjeeda Sheikh

Sumit Kapoor- Mohit Malik

Shreya Kapoor - Shilpa Anand

Riya Kapoor - Aditi Gupta

Nikhila Kapoor - Anchit Kaur

Mahen Kapoor - Salil Ankola

Mukul Kapoor - Mukul Dev

Milind Kapoor - Shabbir Ahluwalia

Edited by loveabletwinz - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

The Malhotras

Rohit Malhotra - Hussain Kuwajerwala

Ronit Malhotra - Harshad Chopra

Trisha Malhotra - Anita Hassanandani

Nisha Malhotra - Pallavi Subhash

Rahul Malhotra - Karan Singh Grover

Esha Malhotra - Mouni Roy

Disha Malhotra - Shweta Tiwari

Karan Malhotra - Hiten Tejwani

Oh and I forgot..Peepo had introduced Sonia...so here goes :)

Sonia-Urvashi Dholakia

Catherine - Sunaina Gulia

Edited by loveabletwinz - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

oh and you guys are doing a fantabulous job with the story :) mujhe to ek paragraph likhne mein itna waqt lagta hain :( hehehe..but i will definetly contribute to the story cos as usual im running low on time...but hopefully after this week is done with i can write a few lines too :) but great going u guysss :)

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

Ok my turn ....

Well its a day before the Engagement. Both the families are preparing for the same.

M House.

Disha : ( to servants ) Theek se kaam karo, yeh phool yahan lagao. Arey yeh kya . Yahah par safai kaun karega.

Karan: Disha , fikar mat karo. Sab theek hain. Tension mat lo.

Disha: Tension kaise na loo, Maa hu na.

Karan: Lagti to nahi ho, Aaj bhi naee naveli dulhan lag rahi ho.

Disha: Kuch to sharam kareyee, kal bete ki sagaai hain aur tum.

Rahul comes there.

Rahul: Mom , main ....

Karan and Disha feel embaressed.

Rahul: Main jwellery le aaya.

Disha: Thankx beta. Ab jaakar aaram kar lo. Kal jaldi utna hain.

Rahul: Ok mom Good Nite.

K House.

Samar is trying to call Trisha. Trisha has Mehindi on her hands. So her sisters have picked the phone.

Samar: Hello.

Nisha: Hello , jeeju.

Samar: Hi . kya main Trisha se baat.....

Nisha: Sorry aaj to jeejee bahut busy hain, aaj to es aadi gharwali se hi kaam chalana hoga.

Esha pulls the phone from her.

Esha: kyun jeeju ek raat bhi sabar nahi hota aapse: jeejee to ab aap ki saath hi hogi khoob batey kar lena. Aaj to use humare saath rehne do.

Trisha comes with Mehindi. Nisha keeps the phone on her ear and she balances it with her neck without using hands. She is feeling odd as her sisters are staring her.

Trisha: hhhello.

Samar: Hello , busy thee kya ?

Trisha: nahi woh main mehindi laga rahi they.

Samar: Woh main.

Nisha and Esha : Theek hain theek hain hum jaa rahe hain.

And they leave.

Trisha: Appko kuch kehna tha.

Samar: Nahi bas aise hi tumhare aavaj sunaa chahta tha.

Trisha: Blushes

Samar: Ok Bye.

Trisha : Bye.

Samar keeps the phone down and sees Shiv , Sumit, Riya, Diya and Shreya standing at the door. He is surprised. All laugh and Sam feels embaressed.

Samar: Kya hua ? Aise Kya dekh rahe ho mujhe ? Tum sabh yaahan kabh aaee.

Riya: Hum yahan tab aaee jab aap bhabhi ke aavaj sun rahe they.

Diya: Haan bhaiya, waise yeh aawaz to aap zindagi bhar sunege.

Shreya: Humare aawaz bhi to sun sakte hain.

Sumit : Arey kyaa keh rehe ho tum log. Ab bhabhi ke awaaz ke samne humare awaaz bhiaya ko achee kaise lagege.

Samar blushes.

Shiv : Waise bhaiya , aapse milne koi aaya hain.

Samar : Kaun ?

Shiv moves aside and someone comes. Samars friend ( who was with him while doing MBA )

Samar: Yug Tu

Yug: Hi

Samar: Tu bhi na , etna late kyun .

Yug : Sorry kaam hi itna hain ki .....

Nikhila comes

Nikhila: Arrey Yug tum. Tumhare mom dad nahi aaye. Nahi woh nani ke tabhiyat theek nahi to mom nahi aa sakte, aur dad to Germony main hin, lekin shaadi main zaroor aeege.

Shiv: haan, aur shaadi bhi jald hi honi wali hain, warna PHONE ka BILL bahut bad jaaega. Jaise jaise waqt nikalta waise aawaaz sunee ka man jada karega na ....

Sisters and brothers laugh. Sam is embarsed.

Nikhila: Acha acha bahut ho ga , chalo abh jaakar so jaao.

Next Scene :

Sam is siting deep in thoughts, Yug comes to his room.

Yug : Kya baat hain Samar need nahi aa rahi hain kya.

Samar: Main Trisha ko apne zindagi ki us haqeeqat ke bare main bata dena chahta hoon.

Yug: Kaise haqeeqat Samar, woh tumhare past mein hue ek galtee hain. Use apne aaj ko barbaad mat karne do.

Samar: Lekin

Yug : Dekh ghar main sab kitney khus hain... Sonia ko ek bura sapna samajhkar bhool jaao. Main tumhara dost hoon esliyee keh raha hoon. Abh Sonia tumhare zindagi main waapas nahi aa sakti to use yaad karke kyaa faida. Khamka tum Trisha bhabhi ko tension doge.

Samar: Shayad tum thek keh rahey ho.

Next day.

Kapoors have come to Malhotra's for the sagai. Samar and Trisha exchange the rings and everyone clapps and they all are happy. Everyone is dancing, enjoying. Samar and Trisha, Karan and Disha and Mahen and Nikhila are pulled on the dancing floor and they too start dancing.

Diya and Rohit are dancing togethere. Nikhila sees them togethere and smiles and starts thinking. ( we all know what )