SBKuch Pal(nxt part updtd-(starfan.shrk)P32 - Page 25

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey,im buzzy 2day so ill uupd8 2 morroow!! sorrry!!😔
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Posted: 16 years ago
no probz dear...jst do an updt!! lolz that too soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
NOTE!!!!:OK guyz, well as said above, heres anodr upd8 4rm me ready 2 b read n commentd on(gud or bad).although i no dat membrs arnt happy of kaa endin but id still like dis forum 2 run n keep it live as if kaa ws nevr goin 2 end n bearin dis thought in mind, ive decidd 2 con 4rm where it ws left of.a few changs r made but im sure u wont mind n will notice as u read on.plz 4give me 4 any mistakes made or if it dont make sense 2 u.a special thx 2 reeno who provided da link 4 me 2 con.well, here it is: (plz comment)
BEEEP!!BEEEPPPPPPPPPP!!!
CRACK.....................silence.
this is wot happnd 2day mornin in shivs room.while evry1 is downstaires decoratin da hall wid flowers, lights n deco, shiv ws sleepin in bed nt bderd bout nything as he dreams of............
SPRINKLE, SPRINKLE,......
"Oye"!
NISHA: shiv, ab toh ut gao,kab se mein tumhe utaanay ki kooshish kar rahy hoon.shiv......agar tum nahi utay toh main tumharay upar pura paani ka jug doordoon gi!"
n:1..............
silence
N:2.............
shiv:jao na
N:nahi!3..........
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n:4.....i mean it shiv,uth jao............
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n:and 5!!!
SPLASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
S:ARRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
S:NISHA KI BACHI...........
N:nisha ki bachi nahi, sirf nisha, abhi meri shaadi nahi hui!(laughin)
s: tumhay to main...
n:baad main, abhi tayaar ho gao, 11 baj gain hain.
s:kya! per mera alarm..
n:toordiya tumnay, bechara, beeep beeep kar tumhay utaanay ki kooshish kar raha tha or khudh hi toot gaya!(more laughing)
s:nish tum....
n:baad mein,(looki up at God) aiy bagwaan, yeh kaisa aadmi deydiya tumnay mujhay,apni mangani kay din 11 bajhay tak bistar pe hi leyta huwa hain(lookin at shiv) ab jao or jaldi se tayaar ho jao.
n wid dat she pushes shiv in 2 da lavetory n closes da door, smiin 2 hrself.
IN A JEWLRY SHOP
Sumit ws buzzy byin esha a diamond ring as a gift despite havin a glorius anarkali dress in red n black.while holdin da ring,
Sumit(2 himsself):esha,ajj ka din bohot hi acha din hain.ek isliyay kay ajj tumhara bday hain or doosra isliyay, kay ajjshiv or nish ki engagement bhi hain.hmmm,mein sooch raha hoon kay, humary bhi mangani ajjj hi hogain,shiv or nisha kay saat.mein jaanta hoo kay tum mujhsay bhi utna hi pyaar karti ho jitna kay mein tumse or isiliyay, jab mein sab kai saamne apna pyaar ka izhaar karoonga, toh tum peechay nahi huto gi or mera yeh chota sa tofa accept karlogi.(smiles broadly)
2:00 DOWNSTAIRES
da party ws now on swing as all da guests arrivd n evry1 ws enjoyin demselvs wen....
karan(grabbin da mike):ladies n gentlemen,ajj ki shaam bohot ki khushi ki shaam hain hum dono yani kay kapoors or malhotras kay liya.or iski waja hain kay ajj meri beti nisha or
mehen(takin anodr mike):mera beta shiv, ki mangani hai.
karan:or to or, ajj meri doosri beti esha,nisha ki behen, ki saal gira hain. ((((((((((((((cheeers!!!!!!!appluse))))))))))))))))
mehen:to chalain, sab se pehlay shiv or nisha ki sigai kar laitai hai...um... shiv, nisha, yaha ao.
shiv n nisha head 2wards da centre of da room 2 wherekaran n mehen were standin next 2 der 2 beautiful wives who were holdin out da thaali containin da 2 rings.
nikki:shiv,nisha
takin da ring 4rm nikki, da 2 lovrs exchangd rings as evry1 applaud around dem.
karan:or ab,esha,idar aao
mehen:bring in da cake!!!!~
disha enters wid a trolly and a huge, marvelouse strawberry n chocolate cake as she stopps it in front of esha n takes a step back next 2 nikki. esha is about 2 blow out da candles wen
Sumit:hang on!!!
evry1 shockd(includin esha)turns 2 look 2wards hm.
sumit:silence plzzzz...(silence is dropd)
sumit:arrey bhi, candles bujaanay se pehlay, make a wish!!!!!
laughingly,evry1 turns der attention 2wards esha as she completes hr wish n blows out da candles.cuttin a piece n feedin it 2 evry1 she lvs, she turns 2 feed it 2 sumit n sumit also feeds hr back.
mehen:arrey hay kya, koi hungama to ho!!
sumit:nahi dad, abhi nahi
pin drop silence falls as evry1 turns 2 look at hm wid a shockd expression.
sumit (lookin at esha in da eyes wid lots of lv):esha, ajj tumharailiyay ek bohot hi khushi or khoobsoorat ka din hain or tum is ko aur koobsoorat kar saktti ho agar tum meray preporsal ko accept karti ho.
den kneelin down on 1 foot,he takes out da diamond ring he bought 4 esha,holdin it up rite so she cud c it bttr n asks hr wid lv filld eyes and a pouring heart
sumit:mujhsay shaadi karoogi???
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so guyz, tht it 4 now bt ill con latr (or if u want u can con).i hope u all likd it bcuz i made dis all on da top of my brain as i typd it down.well,plz comment on how it wz..thx.!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...starfannn..that was adoraaaabllleeeeeee...im soooooooo glad you took the first step to start kuch pal back again...awwwww yaarrrr..the part was soo cute...i loved how you had both the couples in together....areeee yaarrrr...this was soo cute :D finalllyyyy...shiv aur nisha aur summit esha ki rishta age bad chuki hain...me too ya...i want the forums to stay lively...par kya kare...no time these days :( but i must say..your part definetly bought a smile :D that was soo adorable ya...and do continue..i think this part is well finished if you complete this part of the story :D i think you should go ahead and write the scene after this :D awwwwwwwwwwww :]
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy starfan i waz thinking about KP at hu will update well thnk god u updateddd yaaaarrrrrrr i just luved it so sagai tou gai now shaadi n all yaar ven i want diz forum active hmmmmm well u started sumit n esha luvstory too wowww acha kia tm ne well try 2 update asap 👏
saba
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Posted: 16 years ago
im glad tht u all liked my part n i will con if u want me 2.thx 4 commentin.😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
aw wow kool, update!! sorry for replying so late been abit busy but got to say thank you soo much for your update...was thinking about kuch pal..and reallly loved it to.. the sene with nisha and shiv..shiv sleeping aw that wasfab..liked gauris humour..gauri ki batchi! 😆 so cute and then the sagai...now getting married,, cant wait, really do like the way kuch pal is made up of various couples and there love stories.😳.really soo sweet. thank you for your update and pm..please to carry on with kuch pal..youe doing a fab job.... jagruti😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
aaww omg!!! even sumit n esha's story startd!!! wow thtz soo kool thnx a tonn aroosa! i luv uu!!1 hehe x muah x reenoo
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Posted: 16 years ago
can sum1 plzz updt dis LONGG FORGOTTEN story........??????? :S

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