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Posted: 16 years ago

HEY GYZ..... ALRYT, im startin it..hope it wrkz 4 all of uz The casting couch........ (1st family)...The Kapoorz: Samar Kapoor________ Yash Tonk Shiv Kapoor_______Iqbal Khan Diya Kapoor_______Sanjeeda Shiekh Sumit Kapoor_______Mohit Malik Shreya Kapoor_______Shilpa Anand Riya Kapoor_______Additi Gupta
Nikhila K apoor______Achint Kaur (mom)

Mahen K apoor______Salil Ankola(dad)

(2nd family)...The Malhotraz: Rohit Malhotra______Hussain Khuwajerwala Ronit Malhotra______Harshad Chopra Trisha Malhotra_____Anita Hassanandani Nisha Malhotra_____Pallavi Subhash Rahul Malhotra______Karan Singh Esha Malhotra______Mouni Roy
Disha Malhotra______Sweta Tiwary (mom)

Karan Malhotra______Hiten Tejwani (dad)

haan tho gyz dis iz our cast the story iz bout 2 families who r business partners nd bst frndz dey r frndz frm decades nd live lyk family members

couplz:

Yash----------Anita

Iqbal--------Pallavi

Hussain-------Sanjeeda

Harshad--------Additi

Karan--------Shilpa

Mohit---------Mouni

Yash nd anita r engaged nd r going 2 marry...itz an arrangd marriage so tht the dosti of deir dadas nd pardadas changes 2 a rishta

dey r a very cute cpl anita(trisha) is shy but pallavi(nisha) is shier

samar nd trisha r not actually in luv but eventually...will fall in luv

on the other hand talks of nisha nd shivz wedding r on nd da 2 dont hve a hint bout it........(dey will also get engaged after a while nd will fall in luv b4 marryin wen dey r engaged whereas trisha nd samar will fall in luv after dey marry....dey dont kno wat luv iz nd dey marry 4 deyre familiez

the other cpl'z stories will go on syd by syd

the brothers nd sisters bonding 2 getha iz v gud nd dere iz nuthin even close 2 sumthin lyk rivalries in both da families

Beginning:

the ep (hehe)😆 beginz wid nikhila nd diya wrking in da kitchen wen diya says: kiya ma mien kab tak aapki help karti rahoon gi kitchen mien...i mean aap kab tak kitchen mien rahen gi aapko 1 BAHU ki zaroorat hai"

Samar nd Shiv r dere only dey've jst cum frm deir office nd Shiv starts laughin a bit.....nd Samar iz confuzd😳

nikhila also starts laughin nd says 2 shiv tht dis goes 4 u 2 den samar smylz nd shiv iz lyk😕

in the nxt family....nisha iz preparin tea 4 her father wen mahen cumz der nd shez lyk::arey pa aap....(actually all da ppl call mahen pa nd nikhila ma nd megha mom nd karan dad)

haan beta tumhari chaaye peene k liye mien neeche se ooper aya hoon!

he sayz a bit kiddingly

nisha:abhi banati hoon

kapoorz nd malhotraz dont live in da same mansion bt dey r neighbours nd lve syd by syd

mahen cmz 2 karan nd says:mjhe tumse koi zaroori baat karni hai

karan:'haan bol yaar'

Mahen:"hum kaafi dino se trisha aur samar ki shaadi ki baat karrahe hain mjhe lagta hai humien in ki kamsekam sagaai tho kardeni chahiye"

karan (aftr thinkin 4 a wyl):'mien bhi kuch aisa hi sochra tha pichle kuch dino se'

nd deyre talkin wyl it iz shown dat trisha iz listenin 2 all dis

she duznt bcum sad bt iz lyk not sure bout sumthin nd silently goes 2 her room

nisha cumz in nd givz dem tea

mahen asks her 2 sit bsyd him as he wantd 2 talk 2 her bout her sis

my syd😃commnt on whether itz ok or not...if u dont lyk it u can change it nd if any1 of u dont kno any of the cast memberz u r open 2 ask tell me nd ill tell u who he or she is

plz jaldi se aage ki story complete karo sumbdy nd u can make changes!😳

luv

reeno

Edited by Reeno!!! - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

btw 4 got 2 tell........

dey r business men which iz obvious nd dey hve 1 of their join empire

nd each1 has 1 industry...nd plus dey hve 1 industry jo dono ki hai that meanz in total dey have 2 industries...2 4 kapoorz nd 2 4 the malhotras nd 1 empire...........(quite wealthy)huh?!!?😉😎

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Posted: 16 years ago

GYZ............................................

STORY COMPLETION PLZ!😭😔

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi reeno, here we are I gave it a go, I tried my but not to sure.😕😊.please feel free to alter the story line…… jagruti

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mehen invited nisha to come and sit down next to him and as she did so mehen noticed that nisha was lost in her thoughts and before he.

before mehen could start a conversation, nisha began...

nisha:"aapse kuch baat kar sakti hoon pa..agar aap ko itraas naa ho toe" mehen smiles at nisha..

Mehen: "is mein poochne ki kya baat hai beta, kaho", karan looks at nisha with a questioning exprestion whilst picking up his drink, wondering what is it she wanted to say and why was she hesitating ..???

Mehen: kaho nisha kya hai..? vaise mein tumse hein poochna chahta tha..tumari behen kush toe hai naa is rishte se??? mehen sat smiling, there was a provound sense of joy within him which could be clearly seen on his face...

Nisha: pa, woh actually mein...

Karan: nisha saaf saaf kaho naa kya kehna chahti ho beta

Nisha: muje nahi lagta ke trisha kush hai, mehen and karan look at nisha in shock....

karan: kya??? meine trisha se khud baat ki aur tab woh bohot kush thi...aur fir yey baat toe kab ki chal rahi hai, aur tum keh rahi ho ke woh kush nahi hai...

nisha: patanahi dad magar woh kuch dino se kafi udaas lag rahi hai, is leiye meine socha ke shaayad..

mehen: tum ne theek kiya beta, agar aisi kuch baat hai toe hame jaana chahiyey..mein khud use baat karonga..tum fikar maat karna beta. with that..the conversation is interuptted as nisha's mum calls for her...

"nisha tum kaha ho..ek minuite yaha ana!"

nisha responds "hah mom, coming" and with that she leaves..

leaving mehen and karan in a concered state of mind, what nisha had told them was that true... kya trisha vaiki hein is rishte se kush nahi hai...????

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sorry for any mistakes guys..please carry on..😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

kool yaar suprb.....uve got on wid da story as i had thought it should hve been

thnx itz gr8

luv

reeno

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Posted: 16 years ago

REENO awesummm workk👏👏👏 dear n JAGU superbbbbbb👏🤗👏 continuiation so here i go

Nisha:Ji mom hav u called me

Mom:yes beta ye mein kia sun rahi ho

Nisha waz like oh god lagta hai mom ne sab kuch sun liya then she said ji...wo.... mein kuch samjhi nahi

Mom:samjhi nahi matlab kia mujhe abhi abhi esha ne ah kar bataya k tu ne shiv se fir se jhagra kia ye kia hai beta itne bade ho gae ho shaadi ki umer ho gai hai but bachpana abhi tak nahi gaya

Nisha waz lyk thnkk god mom ne kuch suna nahi warna tou wo fir se tension lena shuru ho jaati

Nisha:oh mom aose choro is baar aos ki galti thi aos ne mujhe kahan k kal raat wo aye ga per wo nahi ayya mein ne aos ka kitna wait kia n he hav'nt informed me k i won't cum ye galat hai na mom

Mom:chal beta theek hai is baar maaf kar dena aose aos ka ph ayya tha aos ne mujhe tujhe manna ko kahan hai dekh tou zarra wo teri kiti parwa karta hai chal beta ja ye le aos ne ye tere liye card aur flowers diye hai n sorry kahan hai chal ab aose ph kar le

Nisha:ji mom

Nisha waz on her way when suddenly karan called her n she said abhi ayi pappa

Karan:Haan tou beta tm ne kia soocha

Nisha:pappa mein trisha se baat karo kia

Karan:nahi beta mahen ne kaha na k wo khud trisha se baat kare ga tou fir tu rehen de

Nisha:ok pappa as u say

guyzz really very sorry i dunno wht i hav written so sorry if i hav written sumthing wrongg or hav messed up 4rgiv my mistakes i hav written sumthin like diz first tym

saba😳😳😳

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Payal

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Posted: 16 years ago

Excellent guys let me continue ....( I will also introduce a new character Urvashi Dholakia as Sonia )

Scene 1.

Trisha standing looking out of the window. Mahen comes.

Mahen: Trisha , Kya main andar aa sakta hoon ?

Trisha: Papa aap aaeye na.

Mahen: Tumhe pata hain maine aaj tumhare dad se tumhe apne bade bete ke liyee maang liya hain.

Trisha looks down.

Mahen : Kya tumhe yeh Ristaa Manzoor Nahi hain.

Trisha : Woh Main ....

Mahen: Kya tum kissi aur ko pasand karti ho.

Trisha : Nahi nahi aise baat nahi hain.

Mahen : To kya Samar tumhe pasand nahi

Trisha: Nahi papa .

Mahen : Bete maine aur Nikhila ne tumhe hamesha se hi apne bete hi samjha hain.

Trisha : Main Samar ko jaante hi nahi hoon. Mera matlab hain ki ...

Mahen starts laughing.

Mahen: To es baat ki chinta hain tujhe.

Next Scene :

Outside Karan and Disha are standing. ( Karan has told Disha about the propsal). Mahen comes down.

Karan: kya hua ?

Mahen looks tensed : Karan kya bataao.

Disha: Kya baat hain ?

Mahen : Abh main apne DOST ke ghar kabhi nahi aaoga.

Karan: Yeh tum kya keh rehey ho.

Mahen: Theek keh raha hoon.Kyunki agle baar main apne SAMDHI ke ghar aane wala hoon.

Karan and Disha laugh and hug each other.

Disha : Main abhi sabka muh meeta karti hoon.

Next Scene.

Mahen and Nikila are siting there and Nikhila is looking at the jwellery.

Nikhila: Yeh main Trisha ko doongi, Uspar bahut acha lagega. Aur shaadi main to.

Mahen: Of O . tum bhi na.Abhi Samar se baat bhi nahi ki hain aur ...

Nikhila: Samar mana kyun karenga. Hum uske liyee galat faisla nahio lenge .

Mahen: Lekin pehle Sagai to hone do tum to shaadi tak pahonch gayee.

Nikhila: Mujhse abh intezaar nahi hota. Tum jald hi sagai aur shaadi ka mahurat nikal do.

Mahen: Mujhe bhi shaadi ki bade jalde hain.

Shiv comes in.

Shiv: Kya baat hain mom. kiski shaadi ki baat chal rahe hain.

Mahen: Samar ki.

Shiv surprised : Samar, Samar Bhaiya, Matlab mere Samar bhaiya,

Nikhila: haan aur kitne Samar ko jaante ho tum.

All laugh.

Shiv : Lekin maa mere bhabhi kaun hain.

Nikhila: Woh Karan Uncle ki bade bete Trisha.

Samar comes in with a file.

Samar: Papa, es deal ke bare main aapse kuch rae lene the.

Nikhila pulls the file

Nikhila: Bas bahut ho gaya kaam kaam, abh ghar mein dyaan do.

Samar: Kya matlab.

Shiv: Bhaiya aapke band bajane ka itezaam mom dad ne kar diya hain.

Nikhila: Tu chup kar.

Mahen: Samar maine humare bahu chun lee hain.

Samar is surprised.

Nikhila . Haan bahut achi ladki hain. Karan uncle ki bete. Tumhare liye aur es ghar ke liyee woh bahut sahi hain. tumhare kya raie hain beta.

All look at him.

Samar: Jaise aap theek samjhe.

and he goes from there.

Nikhila: Ab aap jald se jald mahurat nikal ligeyee.

Mahen: Main kal hi Panditji se baat kar leta hoon.

Next Scene:

Samar in the room and Shiv is also there. Samar is reading a book.

Shiv looking at him.

Samar: Kya baat hain Shiv, Tum mujhe aise kyun dekh rahey ho.

Shiv: Bhaiya aap bhi na. Appna aise kaise shaadi ki liye haan keh diya. Aap to use jaante bhi nahi hain aur.

Samar: Janne ke liye to ...

Shiv and Samar say together : Poori Zindagi padi hain.

Shiv : Mujhe pata tha aap yehi kahengi lekin bhaiya aap usese pyaar nahi karte.

Samar: Pyaar to shaadi ki badi bhi kiya jaa sakta hain.

Shiv: Yeh aapke sooch hain. Main to shaadi usse karonga jise main pyaar karta hoon.

Ok bhaiya Good Nite and he leaves.

Samar alone thinking about what Shiv said. Tells in his mind : :Main bhi tumhare tarah hi soochta tha lekin abh mera pyaar par se vishwaas hi kho gaya. Zindagi mein hue kuch haadson ne mujhe ,,, closes the book and a photo of Urvashi falls down, Sam picks it up and stares at it.

END for now.

I want to write little more about Urvashi . Who she is ? Where she is ?What happend to her? Will write but after some time ......

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Payal

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Posted: 16 years ago

Lets continue the story further ......

Scene starts with Samar staring at the pic. And thinks about his PAST. 5 years back when he was doing his MBA in London.

Scene in library. Samar in jeans ( look young ) and is coming down and dashes with a girl Urvashi.

Samar: Sorry sorry maine aapko dekha nahi.

Sonia: Its ok. Maine bhi nahi dekha.

He gives her the books and pickjs his books and leaves. On reaching his hostel he sees he accidentally got her books. So goes to the library to find her address to return her books. Finds her there.

Samar: App yahan.

Sonia: Haan main yahan, Jis tarah aapke paas mere kitabey they. Mere paas bhi ... takes out his book,

Sam laughs.

Next scene. In resturant

Samar: Sonia hume miley 2 haftey ho gaye. Lekin hum ek doosre ke bare main kuch nahi jante hain.

Sonia: Jitna jante hain , utna kafi hain, Main jaante hoon ki tum Samar Kapoor ho, Mahen Kapoor ke bade bete, MBA karke apne papa ko business mein join karne wale ho aur ......

Samar: Bas, lekin main tumhare bare main kuch nahi jaante.

Sonia: Mere bare main jaankar kyaa karoge. Main es duniya main akele hu. Kamayab hona chahte hoon , Modeling karna chahatey hoon. Esliye maine Ek Modeling Agency main apply bhi kiya hain.

Samar: Thats good. Kaunse Agence New Talant hunt Agency main to nahi.

Sonia: Haan Tumhe kaise pata.

Samar: Wah ke MD mere papa ke bahu achey dost hain. Main tumhare madat kar sakta hoon.

Sonia : Nahi nahi Samar eski koi jaroorat nahi hain.

Next day Sam is sleeping. Phone rings

Samar picks up.

Samar: Hello.

Sonia: Samar Agency ne mujhe chun liya.

Samar: Congrtulations.

Sonia: Yeh sab tumne kiya na. Oh darling I love u soo much.

Then they show her becoming a model and sucessful. Also going out with Samar.

Then one day.

Samar comes to meet Sonia. Sonia is talking on the phone.

Sonia: Doctor mujhe yeh bacha nahi chaheya. Abortion karana hain. Mujhe kal ka apointment chaheyee.

Puts the receiver down and turns back , Is shocked to see Samar.

Samar: Yeh tum kyaa keh rahe ho. tum ...

Sonia: Haan Samar mein Maa bane wale hoon,

Samar is happy.

Sonia: fikar mat karo. Main kal ka appointment le liya hain, Abortion kara loongi.

Samar: Nahi nahi Sonia, yeh humara bacha hain, Hum Shaadi kar lenge.

Sonia: Shaadi ki kyaa jaldi hain. Kar lenge. Ab to mera carrer hi important hain. Aur yeh bacha mere carrer ke sabse bade rukavat hain.

Samar: Aur main tumharey liye koi ahemayat nahi rakhta. Humara pyaar.

Sonia: No no darling I love u , Love u soo much.

Samar: Ab samjha. tumne mujhe use kiya,. Pehle us Agency main select hone ki lye. Phir Bade bade parties mein mere jarey tum bade longons se miley aur apna career banaya. Main bhi tumhare liye sirf ek seede tha. Mera pyaar tumahre liye business.

Sonia: Samar u are over reacting., Aur yeh mat samjhna ki mein kamyab tumhare wajah se hue hoon, Main yahan tak apna dam par pahoche hoon.

Samar: Good bye Sonia. Tumhey mubarak ho yeh zindagi .Lekin jo mere saath kiya woh kissise mat kehna, varna duniya main koi pyaar nahi karega...

Flash back ends. Samar tears the picture and thinks : Maine Sonia ke bare main ghar main kissi ko nahi bataya. Lekin kyaa main Trisha yeh baat chepakar thek kar raha hoon. Kya mujhe use batana chaheyee.

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Posted: 16 years ago

this wamp Sonia is like a extra character. Who can be brought anytime when Samar and Trisha are happily married for the next twist in the story.

Sorry guys cannot stop. Little more plzzz bear with me .

Scene in Kapoor house. Its a sunday afternoon. Samar is again reading some file. Shiv comes there and pulls the file.

Samar : Yeh kya kar rahey hoon.

Shiv: Bas bhaiya. sunday ko koi kaam karta hain kya.

Similar scene in the Malhotra house. Trisha is cooking. Nisha come.

Nisha: didi yeh kyaa kar rahe ho, Ghar main naukar hain phir bhi.

Trisha: Sab kaam naukaron se nahi karatey.

Kapoor House

Shiv : Bhaiya. Kaam to chalta raheygaa. Kuch waqt parivaar ke saath betaiye. Apne es chote bhai ke saath, phir bhabhi aaeyege aur

Samar smiles: acha to mera chota bhai kya chahata hain.

Malhotra house

Nisha: Ab tum shaadi karke chale jaaoge to hume ab jaada se jaada waqt saath hi hona chaheyee.

K House.

Shiv: Chaleye bhaiya. Coffee House mein chalte hain.

M house

Trisha: Coffe House.

Nisha : Haan esmein kya hain. Bahut achee jagah hain. Acha lagega.

K House

Samar: Lekin Shiv.

Shiv: Bhaiya plzzz

M house

Nisha: didi plzz

Trisha: Theek hain

Next Scene in the returant. Nisha is wearing jeans, Trisha in salwaars. They see Samar and Shiv. Both the couples meet.

Shiv : Arey aap yahan. Ajeeb etefak hain. Bhaiya ka man kar raha tha yaha aane ke liyee. Aaj mujhe bhi saath le aayee utakar.

Samar surprised. : Kyaa.

Nisha: Arey haan didi bhi yahan mujhe zabardasti.

Triha also surprised. : Lekin.

Shiv : Acha acha ab bait jaate hain saath mein.

Samar stares at Shiv and sits along with them.

Samar: ( to Tisha ) aap es dress main bahut achee lag rahe hain.

Trisha ( blushes) Thank u.

Nisha: Didi, to indian dress he pehntee hain, - salwaar aur saadi.

Shiv: Yehi to Samar bhaiya ko pasand hain. Indian . aur Samar bhaiya ko padne ka shaouk hain. Hamesha padthey rehtey hain. Waise bhaiya painting aur sports main bhi kafi achey rehey hain. Aur .......

Samar is trying to make him quite by slowly stamping is leg under the table. But he is actually stamping Trisha's leg.

Suddenly.

Trisha : AAAhh

Everyone surprised.

Samar: Kya hua ?

Trisha: Waise main kafi der se bardaasht kar raha tha lekin es baar joorse lagi.

Samar bends down and sees that he was stamping her leg, so blushes and says Oh I am sorry.

Everyone laugh.

Shiv: Arey yaha Bowling Alley hain, chalo main bowling karke aata hoon. Tum chalogi Nisha,

Nisha: Nahi main yehi theek hoon.

Shiv stares angrily at Nisha.

Nisha: Achanak bowling karne ka man kar raha hain. Chalo Shiv.