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Payal

@Peepo

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

story continued.

That night .

Kapoor house. Mahen Nikhila's bedroom. Nikhila comes.

Mahen: Kya hua ? Bahut thake hue lag rahi ho.

Nikhila: Haan. Par function bahut acha hua. Abh to jald se jald main apne bahu ko ghar lana chahate hoon.

Mahen: Haan panditji se kehkar jald hi shaadi ka mahorat nikal loonga. Us ghar ke ek beti ko hum apne ghar lane wale hain. Unhe bhi to taiyaari karne hogi na.

Nikhila: To kyun na apne ghar ki beti wahah dey de.

Mahen: Kya matlab ?

Nikhila: Main Rohit aur Diya ki baat kar rahe hoon. Agar dono shaadiyan ek din ho saki to kaisa rahega.

Mahen: Arey wah. Main kal hi jaakar Karan aur Disha se baat karta hoon.

Next day in M House.

At the breakfast table. Karan is having breakfast and Disha is serving. Mahen and Nikhila come.

Karan: Arey Mahen tum achanak.

Mahen: To kya mujhe yahan aane ki liye appointment lene hogi.

Nikhila: Aap bhi na.

Disha: Aayeye baithiye.

Trisha comes from the kitchen with Parathas.

Trisha: Arey mom dad aap. Baithiye Main aur paratha sekker lati hoon.

Mahen: Haan Main apne bete ki haath ke paratha khana chahta hoon.

Trisha goes in , All of them sit.

Mahen: Bhai mazaak bahut ho gaya. Abh kuch serious batey ho jaae jo main karne aaya hoon.

Karan: Kya baat hain?

Mahen: Sagai to ho gaee hain , Abh shaadi se pehle DAHEG Len Den ki batey ho jaate to..

Karan , Disha are shocked.

Karan: Bahut ho gaya mazaak...

Mahen: Arey main mazaak nahi kar raha hoon. Kyun Nikhila ?

Nikhila: Haan hum mazaak nahi kar rahey hain.

Karan Disha are tensed.

Mahen: Well Humey Dahej main Rohit de do. Aur Humare Diya ko sweekar kar lo.

Karan: Tu bhi na yaar. Mujhe yeh rishta manzoor hain. Waise to pandit ji ne 2 hafte baad Samar aur Trisha ki shaadi ka mahorat bataya hain lekin agar yeh dono shaadiya ek hi din ho gayee to ...

Disha: Haan, Ek bete ghar se jaaege aur ek bete aaege, Esse jaada khusi ki baat kya hogi.

Trisha comes with parathas.

Nikhila: Trisha tumne suna.

Trisha: Haan mom , yeh to bahut khushi ke baat hain.

Next scene

K House.

Everyone is told the news. Everyone is happy.

Samar: Abh to ghar main do functions honge.

Shiv: Haan bahut maza aaega.

Shreya and Ria: Haan humey to shopping par jaan hoga.

Sumit: Lo tum dono ko shopping ke elawa bhi kuch aur nahi aata.

Nikhila ( looks at blushing Diya) Tere kya marzi hain bete,

Diya Blushes and runs inside.

Shiv: Eska matlab

Everyone ( not Samar) Haan.

M house.

Rohit is with Karan and Disha

Rohit: Dad yeh aapne kya kiya ? Bina mujhse poonchar aapne haan kaise keh diya.

Karan: Esmain poonchna kya hain ? Disha bahut achee ladki hain ? Kya kami hain usmain ?

Rohit : dad, Maine kab kahan ki Disha main koi kame hain. Lekin main use sirf ek dost samajhta hoon.

Disha: yeh tum kya keh rahe ho beta.

Rohit : Haan Ma, Main kissi aur se pyaar karta hoon aur ussese shaadi karonga.

Karan: Kaun hain woh ?

Rohit doesn't answer.

Karan: ( loudly and angrily ) Maine pooncha kaun hain woh.

Rohit : Catherin , mere saath London main padthi they.

Disha: Catherin ,Christain hain.

Rohit: Haan mom, woh wahah ki ladki hain. Half indian hain. Uske mom Indian they. Aur papa wahi ki. Abh woh dono nahi rahey. Main use bahut pyaar karta hoon.

Karan: Yeh har kis nahi ho sakta. Kissi keemat par main aisa hone nahi doonga. Us Firangi ladki ko ...

Rohit: Dad plzz aap aisa mat kaheyee.

Karan lifts hand but Disha comes in between

Disha: Shaant ho jaaeye.

She takes Karan away and Rohit is left ...

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Payal

@Peepo

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Next day

M House.

Everyone at breakfast table. Rohit comes.

Nisha: Kya baat hain bhaiya, Bahut der se uthey.

Esha: poori rat nahi soye honge.

Disha: tum dono chup chap nachta karo aur college ki liyee niklo.

Rahul: Mom abh kya dono shaadiyan ek hi din hogi.

Disha is thinking what to say ..

Karan: Haan. Dono shaadiyan ek hi din hogi . Esse mahenay.

Rohit looks at him, Karan leaves for office.

Rohit goes back to his room without breakfast. Disha takes breakfast to his room.

Disha: Beta Break fast kar lo. Tumne kal raat bhi kuch nahi khaya tha.

Rohit: Nahi Maa bhook nahi hain.

Disha: Lekin Beta , Catherin . Kya woh is parivaar main reh paaegee. Kay woh adjust kar paagee ?

Rohit: Pyaar sab ko jeet leta hain.

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sonia

@Mrs.soniayk6

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

wowwwwwwwww reeno,peepo ,jagruti n saba u guys r rocking.gud going my friends.will defintly try to use my writing skills here😆.reeno keep up the gud work yaar👏

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saba

@luv_pavi

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: soniayk6
wowwwwwwwww reeno,peepo ,jagruti n saba u guys r rocking.gud going my friends.will defintly try to use my writing skills here😆.reeno keep up the gud work yaar👏

thnkk u soo much di now i m waitin 4r u to writee....😛

saba

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saba

@luv_pavi

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

on da bed samar is thinking KIA MEIN YE SAHI KAR RAHA HO NAHI YE GALAT HAI MUJHE TRISHA KO SAB KUCH SACH SACH BATA DENA CHAHIYE AUR MEIN AOSE SAB KUCH BATAO GA then he dialled trisha's number

trisha:hello

samar:hello trisha mujhe abhi tm se kuch zaroori baat karni hai

trisha:magar kia

samar:wo mein tmhe aese nahi bata sakta mujhe tm se milna ho ga

trisha:theek hai

samar:mein tumh lene ah raha ho bye

trisha:ok bye

Trisha waz lost n she waz thinking SAMAR KO KIA BAAT KARNI HO GI KAHIN WO PAST KI TOU NAHI tishaaaa....................ronit shouted

Trisha:kia hai why u were shouting

ronit:wo mujhe plz juice de do

trisha:ok

trisha gave juice to ronit n went to get ready

Trisha:mom wo samar ka ph ayya tha n aonhe mujh se milna hai tou mein jao

disha:haan beta ja

Trisha:thnx mom

In da car

Trisha:samar app ko kia baat karni hai

Samar:trisha aos din mein tmhe apne past k baare mein kuch batta nahi payya tmhe itna khush dekh ke mein nahi chahta tha wo hansi tmhare chhre se gayab ho

Trisha:ji aesi kia baat hai

samar:dekho trisha mein nahi chahta k hamara rishta JHOOT se shuru ho is liye mein tmhe sab kuch batta dena chahta ho

Trisha:😲 ji

Samar:haan trisha jab mein london mein tha (n he told everything to trisha dat sonia got preganat n all)

Trsiha:😭😭😭

Samar:tm mera yakeen manno mein us sonia se naftrat karta hoon n tm se bohat pyaar karta ho I LUV U SOO MUCH

trisha:mujhe khushi huwi k app ne mujhe sab kuch sach sach bataya warna agar ye baat mujhe kissi aur se patta chalti tou mujhe ziada takleef pohochti n I LUV U TOO😭☺️

n then both hugged

emm done guyss so sorry for da mistakes i m in hurry😳

saba

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Payal

@Peepo

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

sorry accidentally posted will continue here.

Disha: Lekin beta zaara sochon. Diya ka kya hoga. Tumhe to pata hain na Mahen aur Nikhila se humare kaisa sambhand hain.

Rohit: Lekin ma.

Disha; Agar tu es shaadi se inkaar kar dega to ho sakta hain woh Trisha aur Samar ka ristaa bhi tod de. Kya tu yehi chahta hain. Bolo beta.

Rohit : Nahi mom, lekin main Catherin se bahut pyaar karta hoon. Diya to sirf mere dost hain. Agar main use shaadi kar bhi leta hoon to kya use khus rakh paaoga.

Disha turns back and is shocked to see Diya standing there.

Disha: Diya bete tum. Aao na.

Diya goes off from there.'

Disha runs behind her but Diya goes off.

K House. Evening.

Karan and Disha come home. Mahen and Nikhila are sitting ( they don't know what happend.. they think diya is at M house )

Mahen: Arey Karan, yeh kaise soorat bana rakhe hain. Ab to tum sirf ladki wale nahi rahey , ladkey wale bhi ho na.

Karan still serious

Nikhila: Kya hua , Sab theek to hain. Diya kahan hain, Aapke saath nahi aaee.

Disha: Diya ghar main nahi hain. Lekin waha se to woh Subah hi nikal gayee.

Mahen: Kyaa matlab

Karan: Main batata hoon.

Tells everything. Its muted. All are shocked and worried,

Karan: Tujhe poora haq hain mujse root jaane ka. Kosne ka, Lekin pehle Diya ko doondna chaheyee.

Disha: Haan, kahi woh khudko kuch kar na de.

"Nahi ma Aisa kuch nahi hoga"

Its Diya at the door.

Karan: Diya , kahan gayee the tum.

Disha: Papa, kya main aapke bete nahi, aapne apne is bete ko itna kamzoor kaise samajh liya ? Agar Rohit kissi aur se pyaar karta hain to kya zabardasti shaadi ki baad woh mera saath khus reh paega. Kya main sukhi reh paeege. Teen zindagiyan barbad ho jaaege.

Mahen: Tum sahi keh rahe ho bete. Karan Rohit ki shaadi wahi kar do jahah woh chahta hain. Esse mein sab ki khusi hain.

Next scene in M House

Rohit is upset in his room. Karan goes to him. Rohit stands up and is surprised to see Karan.

Rohit: Pa aap yahan.

Karan : Main Catherin se milna chahta hoon.

Rohit is more surprised.

Karan: Taki jaldi tum dono ki shaadi bhi kara sakon.

Rohit smiles and so does Karan. They both hug each other.

Mahen has also come.

Mahen: Haan tum damad nahi bane to kya, bete to humesha rahoge, Ab to Samar aur Trisha ki shaadi ki taiyaari karne hain. Shaadi mein Catherin ko zarror le aana,

Next scene K House

Diya is seeing old photo of hers and Rohits.Nikhila comes. Diya has tears in her eyes but wipes them.

Diya: Arey mom aap yahan.

Nikhila: Bete tumne yeh kya kiya. Apne pyaar ko ..

Diya : Nahi mom main Rohit se pyaar nahi karte , woh to

Nikhila: Sab se jhoot bolo par mujhse nahi, main tumhare maa hoon.

Diya starts crying and Nikhila hugs her.

Next scene.

Rohit meets Diya someplace.

Rohit: thanks Diya.

Diya: Dosti main thanks nahi kehte. Waise Catherin se kab miloge.

Rohit: Arey aglay haftey shaadi mein aa rahe hain.

Diya: thats good.

Next scene. In the Kapoor office. Samar and Shiv are working. Shiv keeps looking at Samar and smiling.

Samar: Kya baat hain Shiv, aise kyun dekh rahey ho?

Shiv : bhaiya aapko dekhkar koi nahi keh sakta ki agley haftey aapki Shaadi hain, Aapne to koi taiyaari bhi nahi ki.

Samar: Taiyaari to Ma, papa, mom ,dad kar rahe hain to,

Shiv : Lekin shaadi ke baad ki taiyaari.

Samar: Shaadi ke bad ki kya taiyaari

Shiv: Bhaiya , yeh bateye bhabhi ko Honeymoon ke liye kahan le jaa rahe ho,

Samar: Maine sooch liya hain,

Shiv: Acha. kaha jaa rahe hain.

Samar: Masoori. 3 din i liye.

Shiv: makes faces Massori , 3 din. Honey moon par ja rahe ho ya business trip par. Waise yeh Mindblowing idea aapko aaya kahan se.

Samar: Arey esmain kya hain, us Travel Agent Se maine baat ki thee. Woh keh rahe they ki Masoori ki tickets 20 % off hain aur wahah ki Blue Moon hotel main bhi disciunts de rahe hain.

Shiv laughs and joins his hands.

Shiv : Bhaiya aap Gr8 hain, mahan hain, aapke pair kahan hain. Maine pehle baar ek aisa aadmi dekha jo apne honeymoon par bhi jaata hain tab bhi apne business interests, faiyda, discount nahi chodta.

Shiv: Waise Bhaiya aaj aap mujhe bahut khus lag rahey hain. Kya baat hain

Samar thinking "aaj dil par koi boj nahi hain esliyee main bahut khus hoon ki maine Trisha ko sab kuch bata diya"

Samar laughs and both of them start laughing.

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Thnx yaar gr8 peepo! gud wrk all of u gyz luvd it SABA,PAYAL,ND JAGRUTI

yaar y did trisha nd samarz luvstory start soo soon?
khair it wz gud anywayz......bringin catherine in2 da story lynz makin it really interesting!
.....introducing CATHERINE:"sunaina"...(anjali of dmg if uve seen dmg)

iz it ok?or do u want sum1 else cuz she will surely have 2 cum in2 da frame na?

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Payal

@Peepo

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

yeah even I felt that Sam- Trisha love story could have started later and also Sam could not tell Trisha about Sonia. But its ok. And sunaina as Catherin is absolutely fine with me.

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#29

same day....(in da office)contd..

shiv cumz 2 sum1z cabin nd he iz entering it as if entering widout permission nd (chup k se) nd he has sum fylz in his hands....the room is luxurious nd CLEAN

shiv(after seeing the xtraordinarily tidy room) : uff...yeh aise hi the nd aise hi rahenge...yaar kaun kahega yeh MARD HAAIN>?...I mean..a MAN who iz dis TIDY?...shoo....

he cumz outta da room nd closes da door..slowly as if nt 2 wake any 1 nd sees his father cmin...runz 2 his cabin

mahen cmz angrily...da door closes nd da label on da door iz "MAHEN KAPOOR"

MAHEN: shiv..?miene tmhien 1 fyl kal submit karwaane k liye kaha tha woh ab tak mere pas nhi hai

SHIV (actin as if nuthin jst hapnd)says" arrey pa...kisne kaha k mien ne fyl submit nhi ki?? kal raat ko der tak jaag k miene aap k liye fyl complete ki nd raat hi ko aap ki table par rakh di

mahen: kal raat ko tho whaan kuch nhi tha

SHIV(takin him 2wards his cabin): ARREY PA...AGE factor aap ko tho affect nhi karsakta...tho phir itni bari fyl kal raat aap ko kyun nhi nazar ayee???(sarcastic luk on his face)

samar is unable 2 control his laughter nd iz derefore smylin....

SHIV (entrin mahen'z room): dekhiye.....yeh rahi fyl!

MAHEN: haan yeh tho yahaan hai....🤓😕...par kal raat mien tho...

SHIV cuts him nd starrts speakin himself

SHIV: kiya pa aap bhi na bas ilzaam lagate hain saare office k saamne...ma ko pata chala na tho woh...

MAHEN nhi beta apni ma ko nhi btana warna pta nhi apni doston mien woh meri kiya baatien phelaaye gi!

Malhotraz:

trisha noks on rohit's door

trish: mien andar aajaoon?

ROHIT: haan aao trisha...bol kiya baat hai?

TRISHA : bhayya, aap mjh se bare hain...mjh se zyaada jaante hain par kiya aap ko sach mien lagta hai k caherine humare parivaar ko samajh k uss mienadjust ho paye gi?

ROHIT(aftr sum silence): dekho trisha....mien diya se shaadi karne k liye tayyar tha lkin sirf tumhare aur momdad ki wajah se...mjhe yaqeen hai k catherin humare saath adjst ho jaye gi aur issey tum dono ko(sam nd trish) ko koi dukh ya takleef nhi hogi

TRISHA: aur diya ko?

ROHIT: (abruptly speakin)diya ko............(den stops)

nd starts doin other things

TRISH: dekha aap khamosh ho gaye iss ka yehi matlab hai k at the baq of ur head sumwhere ap ko lagra hai k aap diya k saath kuch ghalat karre hain

ROHIT: par kiya ghalat karraha hoon? ussey bht se achae larke mil sakte hain ...mien ussey shaadi karoonga tho woh khush nhi reh paaye gi! uss ki bhalai ishi mien hai..

his fone rings...............catherine on the fone

trisha sees the name nd goes out of da room

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Payal

@Peepo

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#30

Next scene

Karan in some hotel with clients talking.

Karan: do din baad mere beti ki shaadi hain . AAp sab ko parivaar ki saath aana hain.
Client 1 : haan haan zarror aaege.
Cleint 2 : Main to nahi aa sakta, Kal London jaana hain lekin meri biwi aur bache zaroor aaege,
Karan: Ok thank u. Acha main chalta hoon bahut kaam pade hain.

As he is leaving he sees a girl dressed in a short skirt and backless blouse smoking and dancing ,a young boy is touching her in wrong places and is trying to kiss her.
Karan goes and slaps that boy.
Karan : Tumhey sharam aane chaheyee. Es umar main aise harqatey. Tumhare ma baap ne tumhe yehi sikhaya hain kya.
Girl : Aapki kya problem hain.
Karan surprised.
Girl : Aapko kyaa.
Karam smells whiskey and drugs from her mouth. And goes off from there.
Girl : Comon guys , lets have fun.

they start dancing again.

Karan reaches home. Disha comes.
Disha: AA gayee. Kya aap bhi kal Mehindi ka function hain aur aap hain ki. Sab kaam mujhe hi dekna padta hain.
Karan is upset.
Disha : Kya hua ? Aap bahut upset lag rahe hain ?
Karan tells her about the girl.
Disha : Hum bahut khus kismat hain ki humare ghar se aise log door hain. Aap fikar mat kareye.

Next day.

Sangeet is going on. Everyone is dancing. Rohit is also dancing. Disha calls him aside.
Disha: Bete catherin kab aeege, tumne use bulaya hain na.
Rohit: haa ma, aati hogi. Maine phone kiya tha. Woh aa rahe hain.

A car stops , some girl in Indian clothes gets down and comes towards the hall. Rohit sees her and goes towards her.
Rohit : Darling kitni der kar de.
Girl: sorry dear traffic jam main phas gayee ( she talks in a foreign accent)
Rohit: Koi baat nahi aao tumhe sabse milata hoon.
He brings her and introduces to everyone dancing. Diya feels bad but hides it and meets her.
Rohit: Yeh Diya hain, mere BEST FRIEND.

By the way the face of this girl is not yet shown to us still.
Rohit : Aao main tumhe mom, dad se milata hoon. Mom , Dad.

Karan and Disha were talking to some guests come.
Rohit: Yeh hain Catherin.
Karan is shocked to see her.

She is indeed the same girl in the hotel whom Karan had seen earlier.
Catherin : Namastey ji ( F accent)
Disha: Namastey beta. AAo tum bhi jaaker bachon ki saath bait jaao. Esha ese jara le
jaao.

Esha comes and takes her with her. Karan wants to tell but doesn't want to spoil the function so decides to wait for the correct opportunity to tell anyone.

Next day. Wedding day.

Samar's baarat is coming. Everyone dancing.Baraties swagat has been done. Now Esha and Nisha are planning to get the shoes of Samar.
Samar removes his shoes and Shiv takes the shoe and hides it under the carpet. Girls take the shoe from there.
Wedding rituals begin and Kanyadaan also is over. And everyone is happy.

Now girls go to jeeju.
Nisha: chaleye jeeju panch hazaar rupyee nikaliyee.
Samar: Paanch hazaar.
Esha: Es Ek Paisa bhi kam nahi.
Samar: Arey yeh to bahut jyaada hain.
Nisha: jeeju, ya to paise varna baiteye nange pair.
Samar: Theek hain
Girls: yeeah.

Shiv comes.

Shiv: Ek min bhaiya, lekin ense kaheyee pehle joote le aao.
Girls bring the joote.
Samar: Arey yeh joote to bahut ache hain par yeh kiski hain
Girls surprised.

Esha: Kya matlab , yeh aapke joote nahi hain.
Samar: Nahi to, Mere joote to ..
Shiv brings them from somewhere else.
Girls Oh no....
Boys start laughing.
Shiv: Waise woh joote mere they,. aap chaho to aap hi rakh lo.
Girls look disappointed.
Samar: Main tum longon to paach hazaar nahi doonga, balki Paach hazaar ek donga, Acha Shagun hota hain.
And he gives them the money. All are happy.

the Bidai takes place, everyone is emotional. While leaving Shiv goes to Nisha and says " sorry if i have hurt u unknowingly ".