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Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

samar goes out of dere nd starts walking...briskly...widout waitin 4 trisha...he is sad nd upset

TRISHA: arey samar aap itna jldi jaldi kahan jaa re hain? SAMAR: mien kiya karoon? im completely helpless nd depressd....mien,,, TRISHA: aap kiya samar?......ap har cheez ka ilzaam apne aap par kyun laga rey hain? SAMAR: tho kiya karoon? mjhe lagta hai sab meri wajah se hai sab meri wajah se hua hai...........ab tho tmhien bhi mjhse ghin aati hogi...frustrate hojati hogi....k mien.... TRISHA: samar ye kaisi baatien karre hain aap? sab ghalat hain iss ka yeh matlab nhi k aap bhi ghalat baatien krne lagen mien aap se bht pyaar krti hoon aur aap aise kaise kehsakte hain? meri zindagi mien aap hain tho sab haiwrna kuch nhi!😊 SAMAR:😳.............nd he hugz her.....dey cry a bit nxt scene: Shiv is talkin 2 sum1... SHIV: lkin kyun? unhon ne hmare baare mien nhi socha tho y uz?? SHIV: theek hai.........class k baahar..??... nxt scene: shiv nd nisha r standin outsyd da fashion designing class/insttute NISHA: haan haan theek hai shreya ko tho baahar nikal ne deejiye SHIV: arrey haan...woh tumhare saath nhi aayee? NISHA: nhi woh new hai na tho ussey kuch aur formalities poori krni thi tho ussne kaha mien chali jaaoon shell cm...she askd me 2 waiy 4 her here SHIV: ok shreya cmz SHREYA: hello! sorry der ho gayee SHIV: no probz darling....kaisa tha 1st day??😃 SHREYA:(wid a sad face)....😕 waisa nhi tha jaise miene expect kiya tha... SHIV:😕😲 SHREYA:.......USSEY bht acha THA!!!!! SHIV: hhooof !....thnk god nhi tho nisha se milne ka acha khaasa bahana tha behen ko chorne ka....nhi tho woh bhi chala jata NISHA: kuch kaha? SHIV (abruptly): nhi tho! NISH: oh...ok i thot i hrd sumfin.......chalen? SHIV: sheeru......me nd nish r havin an argumnt...v gotta talk tum bhi plz chalo coffee shop..... den thinkin*:plz say no...plz say no" NISHA: haan na shreya chal yaar coffee peelenge..........maza ayega SHREYA: chalo..ok! SHIV: makes a face (😆) dey r in da coffee shop nd havin sum serious talk.....about samar bhaiyya SHIV: nhi nish......phir btao...unhon ne hum sab k saath aisa kyun kiya...ek ek k saath NISHA: acha! ab tum btao....yeh sab milind bhayya k aane k baad hi kyun kiya unho ne? haan......jeeju kbhi aisa nhi krskte...aggar unhe aisa kuch krna hota na ....bhagwaan na kare...tho woh bht pehle kar chuke hote.....dekho yeh hai tho tum logon k ghar ka masla par is mien meri didi ki zindagi juri hai......mien poore yaqeen se keh sakti hoon k jeeju ne aisa kuch bhi nhi kiya....jab woh HUMIEN itna pyaar dete hain....tho tum log tho phir...unhi ka khoon ho! SHREYA: 😕.......par nisha...woh humare sage bhai nhi hain NISHA: haan...sage bhai nhi hain...hone bhi nhi chahiye....sage bhai se barkar hone chahiye....unhon ne tum sab k liye bht kiya hai....tum logo ko samajhna chahiye SHIV: par...phir woh sab kiya tha...woh itne saare chote chote suboot jo unn k khilaaf...arrey sumit ki khushi ko bhi..... NISHA: SHIV! yaad rakho...aap mano ya na mano...woh ab bhi aapke bare bhai hain! she stands 2 leave trns around.....nd sees milind milind givz a smyl....nisha partially smylz baq a bit nd leavez milind is feeling a bit bad bt suddenly he is lyk...........i hve 2 destroy dis parivaar he cmz 2 shiv nd shreya who r sittin dere blank shiv iz lyk....."kuch sahi nhi hora....samar bhaiyya bhi nhi hain mere paas...aur nish bhi nhi...dono hi mjhse naraz hain....kyun samar bhayya..kyun kiya aapne aisa"..he iz thinkin himself
SHIV ( stands 2 leave): chalta hoon bhayya....ghar par baat karenge
he isupset...nd his mood is off😭
SHREYA: mien bhi aati hoon bhayya aap k saath!
milind is lft alone sittin on da table....nd he is in sum sort of a deep thought
whoever reads plz reply....nd contribute plz!

wonderful update reeno luved it keep it up 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
ooooh chweet of u chaba... ;)hehehe
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WOW!!! tht ws so koooool!!!!!!!!!! rlly intrestin how u pple got evry1 2 no da truth of milind. hope all goes well. con soon!(iv got exams so i wont upd8 mins yet)👏👏

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Well Mahen and others move to some other house.

Samars house.

Trisha : Sabhi kahan gayee hain ?
Samar : Woh sabi dad ki dost ke ghar gayee hain. Kuch din wahi rahengee.
Trisha : Kyaa ,Yeh aap kyaa keh rahe hain.
Samar : Bas tum dekte jaao aage aage kyaa hota hain.
Trisha : Acha Naachta lagaoo.
Samar : Nahi Bhook nahi hain.
Trisha : Bhook nahi ??? Kal se kuch nahi khaya hain aur aap keh rehe hain Bhook nahi. Upar se Shave bhi nahi kiyaa apne.
Samar : Bas ek aur din nahi khana hain mujhe.
Trisha : Meri to kuch samajh nahi aa raha hain.
Samar: Aage aage dekho hota hain kyaa.

Next Scene :

Road. Mukul is going somewhere. We see someone waiting for the car. Suddenly that person comes before the car and faints.

Mukul : Driver. Gaadi kyun rok di.
Driver : Sir koi car ke samne koi gir gaya hain.
Mukul goes and sees its Samar.

Mukul : Samar , mere bete. Driver pani laao.
Sprinkles some water. Samar gets up.
Samar: Main kahan hoon.
Mukul : Bete tu apne papa ke paas hain, yeh kyaa haal bana rakha hain tumne apna.
Samar gets up and again faints.

Mukul takes him to doctor.

Next Scene:

Doctor comes out.

Mukul : Kyaa hua doctor ? Kaisa hain mera beta ?
Doctor : Bilkul theek hain.
Mukul : Lekin phir woh chakkar.
Doctor : Lagta hain pechle kuch dino se kuch khaya nahi hain esliyee ... AAp unse mil sakte hain.
Mukul : thank u doctor.

Mukul goes in. Sees Samar.

Mukul: Yeh sab kyaa hain beta. doc ne kahan ke tumne kuch khaya nahi hain, Aisa kyun .
Samar : Kyaa batao, etni dino se main naukari doond raha hoon lekin, jo kuch bhi thoda hain woh to main Trishna ko hi deta hoon. Maine jaaker jab Mahen papa se thodi maddat mange tab unhone.
Mukul : Unhone maddat nahi ki.
Samar : Nahi , Us Kapoor industries main maine bhi bahut mehnant ki hain lekin, papa ne , kaise papa abh to woh mere liyee kuch nahi hain. Achaa hua khud sadak par aa gayee.
Mukul : Tum mere paas kyun nahi aayee bete.
Samar : Kaise aata, kis muh se aata, jab Mahen Kapoor ne hi mana kar diya to aap, jiske maine etni baizati ki woh mere maddat kyun karega.
Mukul : Bete main tumhara baap hoon , tumehey bahut pehle hi mere paas aana chaheye thaa.
Samar tearful and hugs Mukul.

Samar : Papa.
Mukul : Beta.

Samar gives a grin and thinks " Yehi to main chahta tha, apke ghar aur office mein ghus jaao. Phir dekna kaise main aapko barbaad karta hoon , aapne mere parivaar ki saath jo kuch bhi kiyaa hain uske badla abh main looga. Aap mujhe nahi balki apne barbaadi ko ghar le jaa rahe hain ".

Next Scene :

Mukuls house. Trisha and Mukul make an entry .

Samar: Trisha , papa ke pair chuo.
Trisha touches his feet.
Mukul : Jeete raho bete . Aao aao andar aao. Aage se tum dono ko kissi cheez ki kami nahi hogi, Main hoon na.
Samar : Papa humara kamra kaunsa hain ?
Mukul : ( to servant ) Samar aur bahu ka samaan us room main le jaao.

Samar goes towards a room ( Milinds ).
Samar : Papa yeh room kiska hain. Wow kitna achaa hain, Yeha khidki se kitna achaa veiw hain. Yeh kiska kamra hain.
Mukul : Yeh to Milind ka kamra hain.

Samar dissappointed : Oh to main chaltaa hoon.
Mukul : Nahi bete agar tumhay yeh kamra pasand hain to tum dono yehi ruk jaao. Milind to London gaya hain.Hafte baad hi lautega. woh dosre kamre main chala gayeega.

Calls the servant.
Mukul : Dekho es kamre ka saara saaman us kamre main shift kar do.
Servant : Lekin yeh to Milind sir ka ...
Mukul stares at the servant.
Servant : Jee sir.

Samar thinks " Sorry Milind tumhey apne kamre se nikaala dheere dheere tumhey es gharse bhi ... ".

Next Scene :

Milind is back. Goes to his room.

Milind yells : Shamlal ( servant ) Shamlal.
servant : Jee sir.
Milind : Yeh kyaa hain ? Mere kamre ka kyaa haal bana diya hain ?
Servant : Jee woh yeh kamra..
Milind : Kyaa bataoo.
Servant : Jee Mukul sir ne yeh kamra Samar ko de diya.
Milind : Kyaa, Samar woh yaha kab aaya.
Servant : woh ek hafte se yahan par hain . Aur....
Milind : Oh Shut Up dad kahan hain.
Servant : Woh Office main. Aaj Board Meeting hain.

Next Scene :

Mukuls office. Board Meeting is going on. Milind barges in.

Mukul : Milind yeh sab kyaa hain ?
Milind : Yehi to main pooch raha hoon dad, yeh sab kyaa hain ? Woh Samar yahah kyaa kar raha hain.
Mukul : Bas sabke saamne tamashaa kyun kar rahe ho.

Everyone else leave. Samar too leaves.

Mukul : Samar bete tum yehi ruk jaao.
Milind : Kyun yeh kyun rukhega yaahah.
Mukul : Yeh bhi es ghar ka beta hain, samjhe.'
Milind : Aapne esey mere kamra aur yaahah mera cabin de diya.
Samar : ( inocently ) Main Kamra aur cabin khale kar doonga.
Mukul : Nahi nahi bete eski koi zaroorat nahi hain.
Milind : Lekin dad.
Mukul : Shut Up Milind , bahut ho gaya, Samar bhi abh yehi rahega humare saath samjhey ...

Mukul leaves. Milind bangs the table in anger , Samar grins....


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awesumm update as alwayzz di u rokk yaarr
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okz....ill cont nxt scene samar is sittin in the room nd thinkin sumfin....nd smilin trisha enters TRISHA: arey samar kiya hua aap ko? kaafi khush nazar aare hain SAMAR: haan tho khush hone ki baat bhi tho hai! TRISHA:(smylz):acha..?? aisa kiya hua? samar iz in a gud mood he gtz hold of trisha nd makes her sit on his lap....he is sittin on the bed TRISHA: samar... SAMAR: haan aaj humari kaamyaabi ka pehla step poora ho gaya! TRISHA: kiya matlab? SAMAR: aaj miene kisi na kisis tarah milind ko yeh ehsaas dila diya k mukul kapoor k liye ab bhi unn ka real beta milind se zyaada imp. hai aur kahin na khin iss cheez ka ehsaas nilind ko hua hai.....humara kamyaabi ki taraf yeh pehla khadam hai TRISHA: wow! yeh shiv ko bta dijiye....ussne kaha tha...kuch bhi ho ussey zaroor btana SAMAR: theek hai...hum unn k pas chale jaaen ge aaj raat samar nd trisha r gigglin...laughin nd talkin....milind is seeing dem
MILIND..( 2himself)": tum log mera sab kuch cheen k bht hans rahe ho na...yeh samar tho mjh se bhi bara game khel gaya...mien apna sab kuch waapis haasil karoonga...
nxt scene
mahen 2 nikhila: bus 1 baar humien humara sab kuch waapis mil jaye...sab theek ho jaye phir rohit aur diya ki shaadi kardenge...aur soch raha hoon itne dino se jo nisha aur shiv ki baat dil mien hai...woh bhi kar hi len
NIKHILA: haan take no tension,,,v have samar ,,woh huamre liye kuch na kuch karlega
milind is standin bhind
MILIND: aap ka beta kuch nhi karega
mahen nd nikhila stand up
MILIND: woh tho mere ghar mien meri jaga kiye hue hai....apni biwi aur khud apna hi khayal rakhta hai...ussne dad ko bhi apne bas mien kiya hua hai...ap log usski taraf se madad expect mat kariye....(wikd) ...dhoka ho jaye ga
NIKHILA ND MAHEN:😲😲
milind leavz.....
dere iz a pause
frm bhind...trisha nd samar cm out
all of dem cm out...shiv..diya...ria...sumit etc
all of dem luk at each other.................
den......all of dem brst in2 laughter😆
all laughghghhhhh,.....😆😆😃
seeing dis...shiv nd samar r very happy nd dey glance at each other nd smyl😊
dey both cm 2 each other nd give a gr8 big warm brotherly hug!!!!!!😳😃
my part plz cmnt...nd suggestions req...
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesumm reeno luved it now shiv n nisha's turnn eagerly waitin 4r moreee
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all r sittin nd talkin 2 each other laughin nd all MAHEN: sab ko aise ek saath dekh kar bht acha lag raha hai SAMAR: ji pa MAHEN: beti trisha, apne dad ko bhi call krlo woh log bhi aajaenge tho acha get2gether ho jaye ga...tum bacche bhi kaafi dino baad mil kar baat kar pao ge...kyun saurav?*(saurav is da frnd in whose house dey r stayin fr da meantym) SAURAV: haan kyun nhi...iss hi tarahh tumhare baaqi k parivaar se bhi milloonga trisha calls rohit pix da fone up TRISHA: hello? ROHIT : hi trisha...kaisi ho? TRISHA: mien theek hoon bhayya...aap log sunaiyye ROHIT: hum sab theek hain..samar kaisa hai?
TRISHA: woh bhi bilkul theek hain....bhayya...hum sab yahaan pa k dost k ghar hi aye hue hain...pa aur sab keh rahe they k aap sab bhi yheen aajayen
ROHIT: haan par...lagta hai hum nhi aa painge
TRISHA: kyun?
ROHIT: woh mjhe thora kaam tha...par mien baaqi sab ko drop kr deta hoon theek hai?
TRISHA: jaise app ki marzi
diya is standin bhind
she asks
DIya: KIA hua?
TRISHA: woh...rohit bhayya nhi aarahe par woh doosron ko drop krdenge
trisha goes
diya is a bit sad
diya callz rohit
ROHIT: hello?
DIYA: rohit...mien diya...aap yhaan nhi aarahe?
ROHIT: arrey diya!😊 kaisi ho?
DIYA: mien theek hoon btaaye na...aap yhaan nhi aarahe?
ROHIT: yaar...im sorry..kaam hai...(smylz)..par aggar tum thore pyaar se kaho gi....tho shayad......
DIYA: arey aap ki behen aap ko itne pyaar se bolrahi thi...suna kyun nhi?
ROHIT: arrey ussne tho mjhe kuch bola hi nhi...nisha waghaira hi aa jayen ge tho woh khish ho jaye gi!
DIYA: aap bhi aajaiyye na!
ROHIT: oye hoye....ab tho hum zaroor aayen ge!
DIYA BLUSHES😳😳
every1 reaches da place
dey all enjoy A LOTTTT
nisha nd diya cum out in2 da lawn
dey c the swings...nd off dey go 2 sit on those
both of dem r swinging..shiv nd rohit r respectfully watchin deir grlz..frm 2 different windows...nt knowing dat da other is watchin hers nd vice versa
diya sees rohit
rohit cals her by doin an action
diya stops
nisha asks her as 2 y she stopd
diya sayz..shes gotta go
she leavz
aftr seeing dat nish is alone nd dat diya went frm dere...shiv iz very happy
he cmz put himself in2 da lawn
nisha is in2 her dreams...closd her eyez nd swingin..smylin
her hair were covering half her face
shiv came nd sat on the swing bsyd her widout swinging...jst watching her
nisha feelz sumthing...nd so open her eyez
she sees shiv sitting ryt bsyd her
NISHA: shiivv...aap?
SHIv: ...haan mien..kyun?
NISHA: shying a bit...nhi...woh kuch nhi...mien chalti hoon😳
she gtz up nd is goin frm dere
she is leavin nd shiv holds her hand frm da bhind
suddenly she feels chills go thru her spine
she closes her eyz...opens den nd lux bhind
NISHA: (in alow voice): kiya hhua?
SHIV: kuch nhi...kyun kuch hua kiya??😛
NISH:nhi...woh aap ne mjhe...roka kyun?
SHIV: taake tumhare saath thora aur waqt bita paaoon
shiv is thinkin in himself...dat how r dese wrds cmin out of his mouth..wen he is nt really menting 2 say dem??😉
NISHA: ji..?? kiya matlab?
shiv...cmz bak 2 nnormal...in his senses nd says
SHIV: arrey...nish..tum kiy😉a apni di se hi baatein kti rehti ho?? hum se bhi baatien kiya karo
samar cmz
SANAR: haan haan...shiv sahi kehraha hai...yhaan tmhare jeeju bhi hain...unn se bhi baatien kiya karo...haina shiv??
shiv makes a face..😕...ji haan!😆
nxt scene
riya nd ronit r talkin eye 2 eye wid eye contacts nd diffrnt actions
both....tryin 2 lower each other nd jealous each other
ROhit cmz in syd wid diya where all r sittin nd says'
ROHIT: kaafi raat ho gayee hai ab chalna chahiye...aap log bhi so jaiye
every1 gtz up nd all leave
plz cmnt asap
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awesummmm reeno as alwayss now my turn hmmm
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here i go

nxt day

shiv waz thinking:aso din restuarant mein main ne nisha ko kia kuch nhi kahan tha bhai k baare mein n shreya ne bhabhi k baare mein well it waz all just a missunderstanding but agr NISHA ko ye baat abhi bhi yaad huwi n agar .....😕🤢 i think shud talk wit her

shiv calls nisha
nisha:hello
shiv:hi nisha
nisha:haan shiv bolo
shiv:wo tm thodi der baad class mein jao gi na
nisha:haan tou
shiv:tou kuch nhi class k baad i will pick u n shreya actually mujhe tm se kuch baat karni hai
nisha:ohk tou mein shreya ko bhi batta deti ho
shiv:ohk bye
NXT SCENE
trisha:samar app ja rahe hai tou plz mujhe saurav k ghar chod de mujhe ma aur pa se milne jaana hai
samar:mein bohat jaldi mein ho ermm 1 kaam karta ho shiv ko phone kr deta ho he will pick u
trisha:theek hai
samar calls shiv
shiv:yesh bhaiya
samar:shiv trisha ko ma n pa se milna hai mejhe kuch kaam hai i m in rush tou will u pick her plzz
shiv:ermm bhaiya wo mujhe nish..a ko ermm kuch nhi i will pick bhaiya
samar:nhi nhi kahin aur bohatttt imp kaam k liye jaana hai tou i shud'nt disturb u
shiv:nhi bhaiya i will pick
samar:ohk bbyee...
shiv:bye bhaiya
samar:trisha ye na daal mein kuch kaala lag raha hai mujhe
trisha:kyun samar kia huwa
samar:wo mein ne jab shiv ko phone kiya tou pehle aos ne kaha k bhaiya wo mujhe nisha actually wo nisha k baare mein kuch kehna chah raha tha n fir rok gaya
trisha:baat tou app ki sahi hai samar i m damn sure kuch tou hai v hav to find out
samar:kia hum in donno se baat kare ermm mein shiv se n tm nisha se
trisha:hmm theek hai abhi shiv mujhe lene atta hai tou mein aos se bhi kuch pooch loongi
samar:hmm ye theek haii fir kaam khatam karne k baad mein tm donno ko milta hoon ohk chalo i hav to go now bye
trisha:bye
so sorry if it's boring🤢
saba😳
Edited by luv_pavi - 17 years ago

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