SBKuch Pal(nxt part updtd-(starfan.shrk)P32 - Page 15

hey..polly! im readin it yaar dont wry!

oh yh...nd about janet...or annet...i mean loveabletwinz.......yup da idea's gud nd it thoroughly wrks fr me...i jst wanna make u ppl interestd in dis nd wanna c dat whether u gyz really lyk it or not.....bcuz obviously everything cant b gud naa? if u dont lyk it...no probz lemme kno so tht v can improve...nd if any of u hve problmz wid da idea nd pattrn also do infrm me plz

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Originally posted by: loveabletwinz

hey guyss!

im quite a silent reader.but i have to say that u guys are doing a pretty darn good job..i know .i.ve told reeno that i would pitch in sometimes but im just not finding the time..i will try my best though..whenever the time is right,id like to add a lil :-D but before that i have a lil idea.. i know that reeno wants more people to participate..and a lot of people arnt signing up because they are worried about their writing skills.. i was just thinking that if anyone had an idea that they would like to see in "Kuch Pal", they could probably send their idea to reeno or anyone else who is writing in.. and they could probably write a short part for u.. they would obviously give credit to ur idea.. i dont know..maybe im making more work for reeno and saba and the others...but i was just thinking.. cos im sure a LOT of people have some amazing ideas for this..its just a little thought.. lets see how it goes..oh and yeah..im available too..u can send me ideas too and im plannin on writing in here real quick..so im open :-D

Originally posted by: luv_pavi

awesummm idea twinies😛

saba

Hey guyssss!

Kuch pal has been quite for a while!! Well, I think its time for me to live up to my promise..ive been wanting to write in here for SO long! So, here it comes :-D hope u guys like it..i know.. a lot of people have been saying that shiv and nisha have been left out a bit..so I thought id do a part on them:-D hope u guys enjoy :-D

Here goes :-D

It was a starless night and Shiv was up on his roof. Through the hustle and bustle of his daily life, Shiv had forgotten to take a break for himself. He had been so occupied with helping Samar bhaiya and making everything work that for a long time, surprisingly, he hadn't thought about Nisha. As he stood, by himself, on the roof, listening to the unheard conversation of the winds, he let his mind wander to Nisha. He had been wanting to tell her for so long, but he could never work up the nerve to do so. What was it about Nisha that was so mesmerizing? Why would he always stop dead in his track whenever he saw her? Shiv didn't have answers to these questions'and he was longing for the answers. As Shiv's mind drifted away from his surroundings, someone knocked on the door downstairs.

Downstairs *at the Kapoors' friends house *

Mahen walks to the door as he hears someone knock.

Mahen : Hi beta, yaha kaise ana hua?

Nisha: Hi pa, voh main, Shiv se milna chahti thi..main use kabse phone karne ki koshish kar rahi hoon. Lekin voh hain ki phone uta hi nahi raha hain.

Mahen: Are, Shiv phone nahi uta raha tho ham main se kisi ko phone kar diya hota na.. itni takleef uta ne ki kya zaroorat thi?

Nisha realizes that her excuse didn't suffice. Her Mahen pa was right. She could have easily rung up anyone of Shiv's brothers or sisters. If she had known the answer to Pa's question, she would have answered him. But she didn't know why. She didn't know why she thought it was necessary to come all the way down here, just to see shiv..for such a small matter.. So she thought up a quick lie.

Nisha : Woh pa, main yaha se gusar hi rahi thi.. tho socha..yaha thak aayi hoon tho Shiv se milkar jaati hoon.

Mahen : oh oye'aap tho sirf Shiv se milne aayi hain? Hamara kya? Are bhai, hamara bhi tho kabhi khyaal rakha karo?

Nisha drops her eyes and as Mahen sees this, he says,

Mahen: Are beta, main tho masaak kar raha tha'tum apni Pa ko jaanthi ho na.. hamari purani aadat hain.. doosro ki taang keechna and he smiles broadly.

Mahen lifts a finger and points upstairs : Shiv upar hain, chat pe..jaake mil lo use

Nisha: Ji, thanks Pa.

Mahen: you're always welcome beta.

Nisha walks towards the direction Pa pointed and climbs the stairs. As she took each step closer to Shiv, her heartbeat got faster. Why was she so nervous? She just had to meet Shiv for a few seconds and tell him about her class timing changes. God, it would only take her a few minutes..but why was she so nervous? Nisha was so entangled in her thoughts that she didn't realize when she reached the top of the stairs. She brushed off the uneasy feeling off her shoulders and slowly opened the door to the roof. Nisha walked in and looked around for Shiv. There he was. Standing under the moonlight and she had to catch her breath for a whole second. Shiv had never looked more at peace and so calm. He was wearing a white shirt and blue jeans. He looked more handsome today than she had ever seen him. The watch on his left hand shone in the darkness. His eyes looked distant- like they were thinking of something, of someone. Nisha wondered where Shiv's thought had drifted to. Or to WHOM they had drifted to. Nisha woke up from her day-dreaming slumber and coaxed herself for caring so much about what Shiv thought. Slowly, she walked over to Shiv and called out to him. When he didn't respond, Nisha lifted a shaking hand and put it on Shiv's shoulder and jerked him a little.

Shiv was startled out of his thoughts when he felt someone tug at his shoulder. He turned around and was amazed at the sight he saw in front of him. She looked gorgeous in the moonlight. Shiv looked straight into her eyes and all the questions that were running through his mind came back to him. God, what was it about this women? Shiv's trance was only broken when he heard someone say his name.

Nisha : Shiv! Shiv! Kaha kho gaye ho?

Shiv: ha?!

Nisha : Shiv, main nisha..apne neend se jagoge bhi?

Shiv: *now completely awake* Nisha, tum! Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Kuch problem hain? Koi problem thi tho mujhe phone kar deti na..yaha tak aane ki kya zaroorat thi?

Nisha : Apna cell-phone sara dekhiye! Kitni baar phone kiya tha..lekin aap tho phone uta hi nahi rahe the.

Shiv takes his cellphone out of his jeans pocket and looks at it. SEVEN missed calls.

Shiv: SEVEN MISSED CALLS?!?! Sab tumhare hain?

Nisha: Nahi nahi..sirf paanch mere hain and smiles.

Shiv clicks his "received/missed calls" button and views it. Five calls from Nisha and two were business calls. Shiv wonders why he didn't pick up any of his calls. He reasons that he was so lost in his thoughts that because the phone was on silent and vibrate, he didn't notice. Shiv looks up at Nisha worried and asks her

Shiv : Kya hua? Kya baat hain? Itne saare calls? Sab teek tho hain na? *his worry clearly playing out in his tone*

Nisha: Ha sab teek hain.. voh..mere classes ki timings badal gayi thi..tho main bas aapko batana chahti thi. Aap mujhe aur Shreya ko classes ke liye pick aur drop karte hain to maine socha ki aapko bata do.

Shiv: bas, itni si baat..yeh tho mujhe Shreya ne already bata diya hain..Hai Bhagwan..itni si baat ke liye itne saare phone calls? Agar tum khud aa kar mujhe batati nahi, ki itni si hi baat hain.. tho main tho pareshani se paagal ho jaata.

Nisha blushes as she hears the worry in his tone but also decides that she should leave. Standing so close to him was making her heart beat even faster. She was worried that if she stood there any longer, Shiv would hear her fastening heart beat.

Nisha : Acha, Shreya ne aapko already bata diya hain? Tho teek hain, main chalthi hoon phir.. Bye

As she is about to leave, Shiv holds her hand and walks up to her. Nisha's already fast heart rate quickens even more. His touch made her shiver. Nisha wondered why Shiv stopped her and wondered what he had to say to her.

Shiv, not knowing what made him stop her, said : Thodi der rukh jao na.

Nisha : Kyun?

Shiv: Bas, yuhin.. apne dost ke saat itna bhi waqt nahi guzar sakthi?

Nisha: par ham karenge kya?

Shiv: Are, chaandani raat hain.. kuch kare ya na kare, chaand ko to dekh sakthe hain na..

Nisha laughs at the romantic, sly side of Shiv

Nisha :aap, aur chand ko dekhenge?

Shiv: Ha bhai, isme kya buraiyi hain?

Nisha : Nahi, kuch nahi..bas, aap us type ke nahi lagthe

Shiv: Kyun? Kisi ki tareef karna ya kisi ki khoobsurati ko dekhne ke liye, kisi type ka hona zaroori hain?

Nisha: nahi, voh,main..acha chalo teek hain..main rukh jaati hoon.

Shiv didn't know what it was but her agreeing to stay made his heart jump. He was happy that he could spend, even though only a little, time with her.

They both stood, silently, and watched the moonlight. The moon hadn't looked so beautiful in a long time. And something about them two standing there, watching the moon, made the night even more charming.

The silence, although calming, was killing Shiv. He was standing next to the most beautiful women he had seen and he had nothing to say to her. He let the silence sink in for a little while and when it got almost unbearable, he said the first thing that came to his mind.

Shiv : Do you know how to jive?

Nisha: Do I know to what?

Shiv: Jive..you know..dance..

Nisha: OHHHH!!! Jive'voh..aapne itni unexpectedly kaha tho main ek minute ke liye..i was lost and she lets out a little giggle. Ha, main jive karna jaanthi hoon. Kyun?

Shiv: nahi, voh..main soch raha tha.. would you like to jive with me?

Nisha: Ji? Jive? Abhi? Yaha?aap..par..

Shiv: yaar, itna socha mat karo.. he walks towards her, takes her left hand and puts it on his shoulder. He lays his right hand on her waist and takes her right hand and holds it in his left.

Nisha: Aap..yeh aap kya kar rahe hain..ham nach to lenge..lekin music..music kaha se aayega?

Shiv: thum behri ho kya? Suno.. gaur se.. tumhare aas paas..yeh hawayein? Yeh jho nadi ki lehre..door se baatein kar rahi hain.. in pedo ki pathe..unpe barish ki girti hui boondein..yeh panchiyan.. jho subah ki intizaar main ga rahi hain'.u don't hear music? Around you Nisha, har cheez ga rahi hain..kuch baatein kar rahi hain..aur gul milakar..yahi tho hain music.. Mandir ki ghantiya..jho hawa main dhol baja rahe hain..wohi tho hamari dhun hain'Now chin up, and DANCE!!!

Nisha, hypnotized by his smooth talk, couldn't help but follow his step. She was falling for him, or so she thought..and she loved the feeling.

Shiv : One, two , three'

And off they were, dancing.. in the darkness of the night.. the wind blowing.. the birds singing.. laughing..and dancing the night off !!

Hope u guys liked it :-D I know,it got a little long..but I thought ill give Shiv and Nisha a lil long part..just the two of them :-D

Alright..take care everyone..

-AnnJan!

OMG dear how do i eva thnk or atleast appericiate u?!!?!

awwww! thanks tons reeno!!!

yaar u were seriously bttr dan all of uz in hindi darlin!

awww! hehe! thanks tons..