#2 Manan- Unacceptable Relation(Chapter 104 on pg no.42)(23-8-2017) - Page 19

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Hi guys...

Guess what...

I am back...

Yaiyyyeee...

How many of you are happy with my comeback???

Raise your hand...

I present you with another chapter of this story.


CHAPTER -96

Manik and Nandini were in the car . Both of them were silent.

Nandini started the conversation .

Nandini - Manik ek baat puchu???

Manik just nodded looking at her.

Nandini - Mujhse koi galti Hui hai kya? I mean are you upset with me?

Manik - No Nandini... Why do you think so?

Nandini - Subah se apka behaviour Kuch badla badla sa lagraha hai. Agar mujhse koi galti hui hai to I am really sorry. Maine jaan boojh ke Kuch nahi Kia. Jo bhi galti Hui hai anjaane me Hui hogi. Mujhe nahi pata ki what have I done to upset you But fir bhi mai sorry bolti hoon.

Saying this Nandini held both her ears with her hands.

Nandini - I am so sorry Manik. Please forgive me for whatever I have done.

Nandini was on the verge of crying. Tears formed in her eyes.

Manik looked at Nandini and took a deep breath. He stopped the car by the side of the road and turned to Nandini.

Manik - Nandini tumne koi galti nahi ki. You don't have to be sorry for anything. Please don't cry.

Saying this Manik cupped Nandini's face and wiped the tears which had started to fall down her cheeks.

Manik - Nandini... Look at me.

Nandini nodded her head in a no in a childish manner.

Manik - Nandini please... I know that I have hurt you by my behaviour but trust me you are nowhere at fault. It's just that wo morning me...

Manik stopped midway as he didn't want to make Nandini more upset.

Nandini looked at Manik and said- Morning me kya??? Kya hua Manik???

Manik looked away and said - Kuch nahi. Let's go.

Manik started the car and drove to Malhotra Mansion.

Nandini could sense something wrong with Manik but she kept quiet as she didn't want to force Manik to tell her what's the matter.

Nandini- Manikkk... Hum kaha jarahe hai?

Manik - Mom ko Kuch important documents dene hai to we are going there.

Nandini just nodded her head and kept her head on Manik's shoulder and entwined their hands.

Manik gave a faint smile on Nandini's antics and continued the driving.

Malhotra Mansion -

Nyonika was setting the breakfast table and Raj was busy in his phonecalls.

Nyonika rolled her eyes and said- Raj... Kya kar rahe ho aap? Manik aata hi hoga. Yahan aaiye. Phone calls baad me kar Lena. Wo Kya sochega ki kaise Dad hai mere jinhe mere ghar aane ki koi Khushi hi nahi hai.

Raj disconnected the call and said- Offo Nyonika tum to aise bolrahi ho Jaise Manik foreign se aaraha hai. Tum aur tumhari philosophy... Manik aisa Kuch nahi sochega.

Nyonika - Haan Haan. Jaanti hoon. But fir bhi Acha thode hi na lagega. Ab zyada arguments mat kijiye aur chup chap yaha aaiye.

Raj sighed and went to Nyonika.

Raj- Haan batao Bhai kya kaam hai.

Nyonika was about to say something when Manik and Nandini entered the house.

Nyonika saw Manik and said to Raj- Lo aap bhi na... baaton me uljha dia mujhe. Manik aagaya.

Then Nyonika's eyes fell on Nandini.

Nyonika - Nandini Beta what a pleasant surprise... Acha hua tum bhi Manik ke sath aagayi. Mujhe Kuch baat karni thi tum dono se.

Nandini went and touched Nyonika and Raj's feet and took their blessings .

Nyonika - Manik tujhe kya hua itna chup kyu hai.

Manik - Nothing Mom... Bas thoda sa tired feel kar raha hoon. Nothing else.

Nyonika understood that Manik was lying.

Nyonika - Acha theek hai tum dono breakfast karlo fir baatein karenge.

Nandini - Mummyji maine breakfast kar lia hai already.

Nyonika - Koi baat nahi Beta. Zara sa khalo Hume company dene ke liye.

Nyonika and Raj along with Manik and Nandini sat at the breakfast table and had their breakfast.

All this while Nyonika observed that Manik was lost in his own world and he not for once looked at Nandini.

After the breakfast, Nyonika and Nandini went to the kitchen.

Nyonika - Nandini Beta tum dono ka jhagda hua hai kya? Manik ne tumse Kuch kaha kya?

Nandini - Nahi Mummyji aisa Kuch nahi hai...

Nyonika - Agar aise hai to batao mujhe. Mai daantunga Manik ko.

Nandini - Nahi Mummyji Manik ne Kuch nahi kaha mujhe.

Nyonika nodded and left.

Nandini - Manik ne Kuch kaha hi nahi. Yahi to problem hai. Pata nahi kya hogaya aisa ki Subah se wo itne khoye khoye lagrahe hai.

Nyonika went to Manik.

Manik - Mom ye rahi aapki file.

Nyonika took the file and kept it aside. She held Manik's hand and took him to her room .

Manik - Mom kya kar rahe ho aap?

Nyonika closed the door of her room and said- Ab batao kya baat hai. Tum dono me kya baat Hui hai Jo dono upset nazar aarahe ho. Aur sach sach batana. Jhoot bolne ki sochna bhi mat. Tumne Nandini ko observe Kia hai??? It looks like she has cried. Aisi Kya baat hogayi ek raat me ki tum Nandini ko avoid kar rahe ho????

Manik - Ok fine... Aap Sunna chahte ho na to suno. Jab mai storeroom me apki ye file dhundhne gaya tha to aap jaanti ho waha mujhe kya Mila???

Nyonika - Kya???

Manik - Anita ka photoframe...

Nyonika - What???? So?

Manik - Mom you are asking me so???

Nyonika - Haan. Mai puch rahi hoon. Anita ka photo dekhkar Tum Nandini ko avoid kar rahe ho??? Are you out of your mind?

Manik sat on the couch and covered his face with both his hands.

Manik - Mom mujhe Kuch samajh nahi aaraha??? Mai kya karoon aap hi bataiye. I had made a promise to myself and Anita infront of her photoframe that I would never ever marry anyone. And now??? When all of a sudden I saw her photo, it feels that I have cheated her. This feeling is killing me from inside. I don't know what to do????

Nyonika for a moment didn't know what to say .

She sat beside Manik and put her hand on his shoulder.

Manik removed his hands from his face and hugged Nyonika tightly.

Nyonika kept patting Manik's back.



Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any...

STATUTORY WARNING: Agar lengthy comments and dher saare comments nahi mile is update me to mai fir se gayab hojaungi... Soch lo... Fir na kehna ki Sarah ne warn nahi Kia

Jackvijay thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
ausum manik and nyonika emotional talk super
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Posted: 8 years ago
Is MANIK out of his mind or what !!! How can he just do this injustice with Nandini !!!
He has completely lost his mind
I so wish MANIK to taste his own medicine & realize .
Hoping to read further
Waiting for ur next chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh noo!!! what will happen now!!! Manik still feels for Anita...yea kya baat huye!!! Anita is also comeing back..shit! that means manik will leave nandu..huh! Agar anita k liye still he have feelings then what was the need to marry with nandu??? Yeh mard log naaa...I tell u... [:P]
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Posted: 8 years ago
Toh yeh baat he should have think before falling in love with Nandu na,
he is so wrong,
isme Nandu ka kya fault hai,
abtak he was enjoying his married life and suddenly yeh realization!!
I so hate him...
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Posted: 8 years ago
update after so long
thank u for update
missed ur all stories

Manik is thinking weired.. I m already scared what will happen when Anita will return..

waiting for next update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
That's interesting. We've always seen Nandu's background stories, but this is a first.
Great update!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi guys...

I present you with another update of this story.


CHAPTER -97

Nandini looked for Manik and Nyonika as they had disappeared all of a sudden.

Nandini asked one of the servants - Kaka aapne Manik ko kahi Dekha hai???

Servant - Haan Beta shayad wo Malkin ke room me hai unke sath.

Nandini - Theek hai aap jaiye...

With this the servant left and Nandini walked towards Nyonika's room.

In Nyonika's room -
Nyonika broke the hug and kissed Manik's forehead.

Nyonika got a sudden idea of how to make Manik realize his love for Nandini.

Nyonika - Manik I think you are right...

Manik - Right about what???

Nyonika - Tumhe Lagta hai ki tum Anita ko cheat kar rahe ho. If this is the case then I think tumhe Nandini ko chod dena chahiye. I mean jab tum Nandini se pyar hi nahi karte to Uske saath rehne ka kya Matlab hai.

On hearing this Manik immediately looked at Nyonika and said-Mom... Aap kya bol rahi ho??? YOU are asking me to leave Nandini???

Nyonika - Haan. I am asking you to leave her.

Manik - But I can't leave her.

Nyonika - Why???

Manik - Because I...

Nyonika With a hope to hear Manik's love confession for Nandini said - Because what Manik... Bolo... I think you should just get rid of Nandini...

Manik - Mom please... Aise mat boliye... She is my wife... I can't just leave her like this. I mean...

Nyonika - Acha Ok fine... Atleast stay away from her. Aisa karne se tumhe Nandini ko chodna bhi nahi padega aur tumhara promise bhi nahi tootega Jo tumne Anita se Kia tha.

Manik got up and went to the window of Nyonika's room.

Manik - I don't know Mom. Kuch samajh nahi aaraha.

Nyonika - Isme sanajhne wali kya baat hai Manik? Just do as I say. Trust me. This is the only solution.

Manik was about to say something when he saw Nandini sit in the car and drive away.

Manik - Ye Nandini kaha jarahi hai is waqt?

Nyonika too came and saw the car leave the house.

Manik rushed out of the room and Nyonika followed him.

Manik was about to go out when Nyonika stopped him and said - Manik kaha jarahe ho??? Abhi Maine tumse kya kaha tha? Let her go .

Manik - But Mom yun achanak se kaha jasakti hai Nandini? Wo bhi Kisi ko bataye bina. I hope everything is ok.

The servant who had sent Nandini to Nyonika's room heard Manik and Nyonika and said- Malkin... Nandini bitiya to apke room ke ore hi aayi thi. Aur fir pata nahi kya hua achanak se bahar chalgayi. Bahut jaldi me lag rahi thi jaate samay.

Manik and Nyonika exchanged glances.

Manik - Oh Shit!!! Kahi Nandini ne hamari baatein to nahi sunli... I have to go.

Saying this Manik took his car keys and left the house in a hurry.

Nyonika - Hey Bhagwaan... I hope Nandini ne hamari baatein na suni ho. Mai to bas Manik ko ehsaas dilana chahti thi ki Anita is her past and Nandini is his present and future. Usey aisa na lage ki mai Manik aur Usko alag karne ki soch rahi hoon. Aisa to mai kabhi aapne me bhi nahi soch sakti.

While Nyonika was lost in her thoughts, Raj came from behind and said- Manik kaha hai?

Nyonika - Wo bahar gaya hai.

Raj - What??? Abhi to aaya tha... Abhi kaha chala gaya? Lagta hai aaj bhi mujhe hi akele jaana hoga office.

Nyonika - Raj... Just give him sometime. Abhi abhi shaadi Hui hai uski. Let him sort out his priorities first.

Raj - Pata nahi tum Maa Bete me kya khichdi pak rahi hai. Meri samajh ke bahar hai ye sab. Mai chalta hoon office.

Nyonika rolled her eyes and said- Aapko sab samjha doongi mai. But abhi to Jaise Chal raha hai chalne dijiye. Bye. Have a great day.

Raj bid Bye to Nyonika and left for office.

In the meantime -

In Dhruv's bungalow -
Dhruv was pacing to and fro in his room and constantly checking his mobile.

After almost one hour,

Dhruv dialled Mukti's number and said- Hello Mukti... Anu wapas aagayi kya?

Mukti - Haan Bhai kab ka aagayi. Wo hum log breakfast kar rahe the. But aapko kya hogaya. Itne restless kyu sound kar rahe ho?

Dhruv - Me... Restless?? No not at all. Mai to bas aise hi puch raha tha.

Mukti - Haan Haan mai samajgayi. Lo baat karo ANU se.

Saying this Mukti handed over the phone to Anita.

Anita - Hello Doctor Sahab... kaise ho aap? Aapki journey Kaisi thi?

Dhruv - Hi Anu. Mai theek hoon. But are you alright?

Anita - Haan mai to bilkul theek hoon. Mujhe kya hoga?

Dhruv - Ok. Have your breakfast and Mai baad me baat karta hoon. Mukti ko bol dena ki mai kal Shaam tak wapas aajaunga. Then we all can finally come to India.

Anita - Ji mai bata doongi.

Dhruv - Bye bye..

Anita - Bye...

Dhruv hung up the call and smiled looking at his mobile screen.

Meanwhile in Manik's car -

While driving the car, Manik dialled Nandini's number many times but there was no answer from her.

Manik - Nandini... Pick up the phone... Where are you???

On not being able to contact Nandini, Manik went to Murthy Mansion.

He felt that Nandini would be at Murthy Mansion but she was not present.

Manik didn't inform Padma and Vishnu about Nandini.

He just pretended as if he had come to meet his kids.

Aarav-Khushi were so happy to see Manik.

Aarav-Khushi - Dadoo letshh play...

Manik - Aarav-Khushi aap dono khelo mujhe Kuch zaruri kaam hai. Mai finish karke aata hoon. Then we will play together.

Aarav-Khushi didn't trouble Manik much and agreed with him.

Manik again took his mobile and tried Nandini's number but it was not reachable.

Manik -Where the hell are you Nandini? I hope she doesn't do anything stupid. Kaha dhoondhun mai Nandini ko...

Manik called Pia to know if Nandini was with her but Pia said that Nandini was not with her .

Manik went to his house and didn't find Nandini there too.

As Manik was about to sit in his car to go and search for Nandini, he got a call from an unknown number.


Phewww...

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.

Guess - Can anyone of you guess where did Nandini go? And whose call did Manik get???

I am sure none of you can answer it.

Whoever guesses it right will get a gift hamper of chocolates.





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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome dear,
and answers...
Tum hi dedo,
please update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update nyonika wants manik understanding her feelings super per that talk nandini should here so sad

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