#2 Manan- Unacceptable Relation(Chapter 104 on pg no.42)(23-8-2017)

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Sarahpeyton

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Posted: 8 years ago

#201

Hi guys...

I am back with another update of this story.

I just realised that this story has completed one year. Bilkul bhi pata nahi chala.

But I am happy...

Coming straight to the update .

CHAPTER -101

After the song got over, Padma left the hall and went to her room leaving the guests behind.

Nandini and Pia looked at each other.

The faces of both of them fell as they didn't expect Padma to just walk away from there.

Nandini and Pia were about to go to Padma's room when Vishnu stopped them and said - Nandu ,Pia tum log ruko. Let her go. She needs time. I will talk to her in the morning.

Nandini and Pia agreed .

Vishnu smiled and went to his room.

Manik and Nyonika inorder to handle the situation first made sure that the guests wouldn't know about all this.

Nyonika made an excuse that Padma's health was not good and declared that the Party was over .

The guests left one by one.

Manik saw that Nandini was too much worried for her parents so he went to her and kept his hand on her shoulder.

Manik - Nandini... Don't worry. Everything will be fine.

Nandini - But Manik... Amma aisa kyu karti hai? Akhir Appa ne aisa kya Kia jiski wajah se Amma itni naraaz hai?

Manik - Nandini... I can understand your worry but I think we should let Amma and Appa to sort out their differences themselves. It appears to be something serious. Warna jaha tak mai Amma ko jaanta hoon wo aise kabhi nahi react karengi.

Let's just give them some time.

Nandini nodded her head in a yes.

Pia was worried as well.

Seeing this Arjun said - Pia don't stress too much. It will affect your health and the baby's health as well.

[Guys I guess I haven't named Arjun's parents yet. So Here it is

Arjun's Mother Name - Anjali Singhania &

Arjun's Father - Piyush Singhania)

Anjali - Arjun theek keh raha hai Pia. Aisi baaton se tumhe dur rehna chahiye. Mujhe Lagta hai ki Ab Hume chalna chahiye.

Pia - But Mummyji... Mai ...

Anjali - Waise bhi mujhe aur Arjun ke Papa kal Subah out of town jaana hai.

Arjun came to her rescue and said- Mom I think Pia is needed here. Ek kaam karte hai mai yahan ruk jaata hu Pia ke saath. Aap aur Papa chale jaiye...

Piyush- Haan. Sahi keh rahe ho tum. Hum chalte hai. Khayal rakhna Beta . Bye.

Arjun - Ji Papa. Bye.

With this Piyush and Anjali took their leave and left to their house.

Meanwhile in Nepal -

Anita and Mukti's Room-

Anita is sleeping beside Mukti when she gets a nightmare.

She wakes up in the middle of the night taking Manik's name...

Mukti's sleep is distributed by this.

She gets up and asks Anita - Kya hua... Koi bura sapna Dekha kya?

Anita wiped her sweat and said- Mukti...

And she hugged Mukti tightly.

Mukti hugged Anita back and kept caressing her hair.

After sometime Anita got normal and broke the hug.

Mukti gave a glass of water to Anita which she drank in a go

Mukti looked at Anita and asked- R u Ok now???

Anita nodded her head and smiled weakly.

Mukti - Ok. Ab sojao...

Anita and Mukti again went back to sleep.

Meanwhile in Murthy Mansion -

All the family was asleep in their respective rooms.

Padma got up and went to Vishnu's room and knocked his door.

Vishnu opened the door with sleepy eyes.

On Seeing Padma, he widened his eyes and said- Padma ...Tum!!!

Padma came inside the room and closed the door behind.

She turned towards Vishnu and said- Akhir kya sabit karna chahte ho aap??? Sabke saamne aise kyu pretend karte ho Jaise aap kitne mahaan ho aur mai kitni galat hoon.

Vishnu - Padma tum aise kyu bolrahi ho. Maine kabhi tumhe galat nahi kaha na hi kabhi kisiko kehne doonga.

Padma let out a sarcastic chuckle and said- But apne mere sath galat kiya na!!!

Vishnu - Padma mai kitni baar bolu ki Maine Jo bhi Kia jaan boojh kar nahi Kia. Us waqt haalaat hi aise the ki mujhe two options me se ek ko chunna pada. But believe me i didn't betray you.

Padma - Itne saal mujhe Akela chodke chale gaye. Wo bhi us 2nd option ke liye. Ye betrayal nahi to Aur kya hai???

Vishnu - Padma please... I can never betray you. It was just that...

Padma - Bas... Mujhe koi explanation nahi Sunna hai. Mujhe bas itna batado ki Ab wapas kyu aaye ho?

Vishnu - Tumhare liye... Hamari betiyon ke liye...

Padma laughed and said - Kitna Acha hota Agar aap bolte ki aap hamare liye wapas Aye ho. But nahi...

Vishnu was about to say something but Padma stopped him and said - Mujhe aapke ehsaan ki koi zarurat nahi hai. Mere dil me aapke liye koi jagah nahi hai aur na hi kabhi hogi.

Saying this Padma left the room.

Vishnu - Mai janta hoon ki tum Ab bhi mujhe pyaar karti ho. Aur rahi baat tumhari naraazgi ki to mai Bahut jald dur kar doonga.

Saying this he went to sleep.

Back to Nepal -

In the morning while Mukti and Anita were having breakfast,

Mukti to Anita- Ek baat puchu??

Anita while drinking juice said- Haan pucho na...

Mukti -Ye Manik kaun hai???

Anita - Huh!!! Manik????

Mukti - Haan... Raat ko yahi naam le kar to uthi thi tum...

Anita got lost in her thoughts.

Mukti - Acha Ok fine... Zyada stress mat lo.

Mera breakfast toh hogaya . Mai abhi aayi. Jab tak ye juice khatm

hojana chahiye.

Anita - Theek hai.

With this Mukti went away.

Anita selfthought - Kal raat Jo mujhe sapna aaya tha kahi wo mere past se related to nahi hai?? Mukti ne kaha ki Maine kal raat Manik ka naam liya tha . Is he someone related to me??? Kya Doctor Sahab se baat karu is baare me??? Nahi nahi... Pehle hi wo mujhe leke worried rehte hai. Ab is dream ke baare me bataungi toh aur worry karenge wo. Mujhe Mukti se bhi kehna hoga ki wo Doctor Sahab se Kuch na Kahe...

Anita went to Mukti's room and found her talking to someone on the phone.

Mukti - Haan Bhai... Mai manage karlungi. U don't worry.

Anita - Hey Bhagwaan... Ye to Doctor Sahab se hi baat kar rahi hai. Kahi isne mere nightmare ke baare me bata to nahi dia???

Anita Was lost in her thoughts when Mukti kept her hand on Anita's shoulder.

Mukti - Kaha khogayi tum???

Anita - Mukti tum kisse baat kar rahi thi?

Mukti - Bhai se... Kyu ???

Anita - Kahi tumne unhe kal raat ke baare me bata to nahi dia???

Mukti - Ohhh... To tum ye baat se Pareshan thi... Don't worry... Maine Bhai ko Kuch nahi bataya.

Anita gave a faint smile and said- Waise kya baat kar rahi thi tum apne Bhai se?

Mukti - Arey Haan... Mai to batana hi bhool gayi. Bhai keh rahe the ki unhe aane me do teen din aur lagjayenge toh unhone mujhe ye responsibility Di hai ki mai tumhara achche se dhyan rakhu.

Anita - Kuch aur din???

Mukti - Haan kyu kya hogaya???

Anita - Shayad tum bhool rahi ho ki Doctor Sahab ka birthday parso hai.

Mukti slapped her forehead and said- That's so stupid of me. Mai Bhai ka birthday kaise bhool sakti hoon. Ab??

Anita - Ab kya? Har saal tum apne Bhai ke birthday pe Uske saath hoti ho. To is baar bhi to tumhe unke sath hona chahiye...

Mukti thought for a while and said- Great Idea... So Let's give him a surprise. Hum kal hi India jayenge. Aur Haan plzzz Ab Bhai ko call mat karna aur na hi unka call receive karna. I am 100% sure tum Bhai se ye baat chupa nahi paogi.

Anita - Theek hai. As you say.

Mukti called Dhruv's assistant and asked him to make arrangements for them and warned him not to inform Dhruv.

Mukti to Anita- Ok then. Let's do the packing.

With this both of them started packing their stuff.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.

So sorry for the delay.

Next update will be a MaNan update.

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Jackvijay

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Posted: 8 years ago

#202

superb update last form mukti and anita to come form india so suspense eagerly waiting next update

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Rashmi2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Superb... Very excited for next part

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RainFlies

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Posted: 8 years ago

#204

so Anita is coming back

waiting for real twist to come

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Arunima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#205

Congratulations for the completion of one year of the story and Ii am so so so happy for it,
keep it up dear,
you are doing great,
love you,
keep it up and haan please continue soon.

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samreen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#206

Interesting
Waiting for the next update ..

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Sarahpeyton

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Posted: 8 years ago

#207

Hi guys...

I will be giving slow updates and I promise to entertain You throughout.

This update is full of MANAN .

I don't know how it turned out to be.

Coming back to the chapter,

CHAPTER -102

Murthy Mansion -

Morning -

Manik and Nandini were sleeping in their room when Manik's phone started ringing.

Nandini's sleep was disturbed by the continuous ringing of the phone.

Nandini received the call with her eyes still closed.

Nandini - Hellooo...

The person on the other side - May I speak with Manik Malhotra?

Nandini looked at the mobile screen and saw that it was an unknown number.

Nandini - May I know who is this

Person on the other side - Hello Madam. I am Soha Khurana's personal assistant.

May I speak to Mr. Malhotra?

On hearing Soha's name, Nandini made a face and got up.

By then Manik was awake and found Nandini talking on his mobile.

Manik - Kaun hai Nandini???

Nandini handed over the phone to Manik and said- Khud hi baat karlo.

Saying this she went to the washroom without looking back.

Manik shook his head in disbelief and attended the call.

After he was done with the call, Manik got up from the bed and knocked the bathroom door where Nandini was already present.

Nandini from inside - Kya hai Manik??? Can't u see ... M having a bath...

Manik smirked and said- Comeon Nandini How can I see you? Haan Agar tum ye door khologi toh mai...

Nandini - Ha ha... Very funny.

Manik - Acha fine. Now open the door quickly. I need to have a bath. Mujhe ek urgent meeting ke liye office Jana hai.

Nandini - No. Mai abhi shower le rahi hoon . Mujhe time lagega.

Manik - Acha. Toh u are taking shower right now...

Nandini - Yes...

Manik - Nandini... That's the height of stupidity.

Shower on toh kardeti Pehle.

Tumne tap khula rakha hai.

Mujhe pata hai ki tum bas aise hi time pass kar rahi ho. Koi shower nahi lerahi ho.

Now open the door please.

Nandini bit her tongue.

Nandini selfthought - How stupid of you Nandini???

Manik - Come out yaar. M getting late.

Nandini slowly opened the door and came out and found Manik standing there with his hands folded across his chest.

Nandini looked at Manik and said- Haan Ab mai stupid Hi dikhungi na aapko. Smart to wo Soha hai. Haina???

Manik - Ab ye Soha beech me kaha se aagayi.

Nandini - Usi se to milne jarahe ho na aap...

Manik - No. Mai to Mr. Khurana se milne jaraha hoon. He will be there at my office any moment. I got to rush now.

Nandini selfthought- Par wo phone pe to Soha ka PA tha.

Manik - Ab tumhare questions khatm hogaye toh mai jau?

Nandini nodded.

Manik went to the washroom and took a quick shower and came out.

In the meantime, Nandini took out Manik's clothes from the wardrobe and handed it to him.

Manik got ready and looked at Nandini who was lost in her thoughts.

Manik held Nandini's hand and said- Nandini what's the matter? Is there anything that's bothering you?

Nandini -Nahi... Kuch nahi.

Manik - R u sure?

Nandini - Yes.

Manik - Then smile...

Nandini smiled and said - All the best for your meeting.

Manik pecked her forehead and said- That's better. Ab mera full day bahut hi acha hoga with this smile of yours.

Manik - Bye. See you in the evening. Take care. And don't stress too much about Amma Appa.

Nandini nodded.

Manik again kissed Nandini's forehead and left.

Nandini got ready and went down.

Pia and Arjun were already present there.

On seeing Nandini, Pia said - Nandu... Jiju kaha hai?

Nandini - Di unhe ek important meeting me Jana tha toh wo jaldi chale gaye.

Pia - Acha...

Nandini - Di Amma Appa kaha hai?

Pia - Wo dono toh apne room me hi hai. Mujhe samajh nahi aaraha ki hum undono ko kaise milayenge. Wo to ek dusre se theek se baat bhi nahi karte.

Arjun - Waise mere pass ek idea hai. Kyu na hum undono ko kahi akele bheje. Taaki they can spend some time with each other. In that manner they will sort out there differences.

Nandini - I think you are right Jiju. Yahan to wo apne apne rooms me bandh rehte hai. Kisi aur jagah to they won't be having such option. Unhe saath rehna hi hoga.

Pia - Brilliant idea. Aur mai ek aisi jagah bhi jaanti hoon where we can send them.

Nandini - Kaha???

Pia smiled and said - Tauji ke ghar.

Nandini - What are you saying Di? No way. Aapko pata hai na wo log...

Pia - Haan baba mujhe sab pata hai. And trust me. This is the only solution.

Nandini - Solution nahi hai Di. Problem hai ye. Bahut bada problem. I think we shouldn't do this. Things will get even worse.

Pia - Arey Kuch nahi hoga. Maine sab soch liya hai. Aur Haan ye baat kisiko mat batana. I will manage everything on my own. Tum jao jaake Amma Appa ko breakfast ke liye lekar aao.

Nandini - Di...

Pia didn't listen to Nandini and left from there to her room with Arjun to talk with her Tauji.

Nandini - Pata nahi Di ke mind me kya khichdi Pak rahi hai.

Saying this Nandini went to get her parents for breakfast.

All of them had a quiet breakfast and Arjun and Nandini left for their respective works on Padma's insistence.

Arjun dropped Nandini to Dhruv's bungalow and left for his office.

Nandini was busy in her work as it was the final day and she had to finish the work ASAP.

Nobody was at Dhruv's bungalow except Nandini and few workers.

Dhruv had gone to his work and the caretaker didn't show up that day.

While Nandini was going through the designs, she felt a tap on her shoulder.

Nandini turned back to see Soha standing there with a smirk.

Nandini - Soha tum... Yahan kya kar rahi ho???

Soha - Yes... Mai... Mai tumse milne aayi hoon Nandini.

Nandini - Mujhse???? Kyu ???

Soha - That's a silly question you know...

Meri ek keemti cheez tumhare paas reh gayi hai. Wahi lene aayi hoon.

Nandini - Tumhari cheez??? I don't have any such thing.

Soha - Ofcourse you do. You have Manik with you. He is mine. So just back off.

Nandini - R u out of your mind??? Manik koi cheez nahi hai. He is my husband. And Wo tumhara kaise hua????

Soha let out a sarcastic chuckle- Husband??? This marriage of yours is a lie. Zabardasti ki shadi hai ye. Mai nahi maanti is shaadi ko.

Nandini - Tumhare maanne na maanne se kya hota hai. Mai maanti hu is shaadi ko. Aur Manik bhi maante hai. That is more than enough. We don't need your approval.

Tum Manik ki business partner ho. Bas that's it. You don't own him.

Aur Haan mujhe tumse baat nahi karni. So you can leave now.

Soha - Business partner se life partner banne me zyada time nahi lagega mujhe. Just wait and watch.

Saying this Soha left from there.

Nandini - Agar ye harkat tum mere ghar me aakar karti to mai batati tumhe. But it's not my home, isiliye tum Bach gayi.Aur rahi baat Manik ki toh u won't be able to do anything as he loves me more than anything else.

Tum Manik ko mujhse cheen nahi paogi.

Nandini thought to talk it out with Manik and continued with her work.

Her work was completed by evening and she left after informing Dhruv over the phone.

When Dhruv returned ,he was Highly impressed with her work.

Dhruv dialled Nandini's number and said - Mrs. Malhotra... This is simply awesome. You have done a very good job. Apka check kal tak miljayega aapko.

Nandini - Thank you Mr. Dhruv. I am glad that you liked it. Btw apki family nahi hai aapke sath.

Dhruv - Actually wo log Nepal me hi hai. Mai bas Kuch hi din me unhe jakar le aaunga. They would be so happy to meet you.

Nandini - I would love to meet them. Waise kaun kaun hai apki family me?

Dhruv - Ek choti behen hai aur...

Dhruv was about to say about Anita when someone Closed his eyes from behind.

Dhruv kept the phone aside without disconnecting and removed the hands from his eyes.

He turned back and saw Mukti and Anita standing there with a huge smile.

Dhruv - Mukti tum... What a pleasant surprise!!!!

Nandini heard this and thought that maybe it was his sister who had given him a surprise visit.

She smiled and disconnected the call.

In the meantime,Manik had come back from his office and went straight to their room after having dinner with the family.

Nandini and Pia were in the kitchen when Nandini was lost in her thoughts about the encounter with Soha.

Pia - Nandini sab arrangements hochuke hai. Ab bas Amma Appa ko maana hai to go to Tauji's place.

Nandini - Hmm...

Pia - Nandu... Tu sun bhi rahi hai.

Nandini - Haan Di... I mean...Wo sorry. Mai Kuch aur soch rahi thi.

Pia - Ok fine tu jaa apne room me. I will take care of everything.

Nandini nodded and left.

Nandini entered the room and found Manik sitting on the couch buried in his laptop.

Nandini tried to gain his attention by standing infront of him.

Nandini- Manik kya kar rahe ho aap?

Manik- Kal ke presentation ki tayyari kar raha hu Nandini

Nandini- Baad me karlijiye na ye preparation . Mujhe aapse kuch zaruri baat karni hai.

Manik- Kya baat hai nandini?

Nandini-Pehle aap kaam bandh kijiye and look at me tabhi to mai baat karpaungi na.

Manik still looking at the laptop screen - OK just give me half an hour so that i can finish this and then we can talk aaram se.

Nandini made a bad face and sat on the bed with her legs crossed and placed her hands beneath her chin.

As she looked at manik still busy in his work , nandini hurled a number of abuses on soha.

Nandini self talk - Stupid Soha . idiot Soha. us Soha ko to mai... ek baar dobara mere saamne aajaye to us soha ki mai chutni banadoongi.

Mere manik ko mujhse cheenna chahti hai.

Mujhe open challenge derahi hai. How dare she?

Mai aisa bilkul bhi nahi hone doongi.

An hour passed by but manik was still busy in his work and didn't move an inch from his place.

On being ignored by Manik for so long, Nandini thought of ways to distract Manik and suddenly an idea popped up in her mind.

Nandini looked at manik and smirked. Then she got up and went to execute her plan.

After 15 minutes, Nandini came back to the room and placed few candles at different spots in the room.

Manik didnt notice all this as he was finishing his presentation.

Nandini walked to the cupboard and took out an outfit and went to the washroom to get changed.

She came out and switched off the lights of the room .

Manik looked around and said- Nandini... are you there??? ye lights off kaise hogayi achanak.

Nandini lighted the candles one by one and came infront of Manik holding a candle in her hand.

Nandini- ye light maine bandh ki hai.

Manik- tumne... but why?

Nandini- because you were not paying attention to me and mujhe aur koi tarika nahi soojha aapka dhyan meri ore lane ka .

Saying this Nandini took the laptop from maniks hands and kept it aside.

She the held his hand and took him to the middle of the room and made him sit on a chair.

Manik sat on the chair and it is then that he looked at the outfit which Nandini was wearing.

Nandini was wearing Manik's black shirt and trousers along with a tie in her neck.

Nandinis hair was tied in a messy bun and she had a naughty glint in her eyes.

Manik at first was confused as to what nandini was upto but when Nandini played the music, he understood her true intentions.

Nandini stood at about 6 feet in front of manik and started swaying her lips slowly to the music.

she slinked towards Manik and when close enough, placed her one foot on the floor between Manik's feet and the other on the arm of the chair and removed the tie from her neck.

All this while Nandini made a sexy eye contact with Manik.

Nandini had her lips parted and a slight smile playing on her lips.

Nandini then casually strut around the chair, continuing to work her hips up and down.

Nandini caressed Manik's shoulders and reached for his hands from behind and tied his hand with the tie.

Nandini came in front of Manik and slowly lowered herself onto his lap. She slowly wrapped one leg around the back of the chair for support and then the other leg.

Manik smirked seeing this bold side of Nandini.

Nandini wrapped her arms around Manik's neck while continuing to move her body up and down.

She bent back while keeping one hand on Manik's shoulder and swept the other hand freely till it touched the ground.

Nandini slowly got down Manik's lap and went behind him .

She gently lowered herself and caressed Manik's back with her upper body for a few seconds. This was driving him crazy.

Manik wanted to touch her but couldn't as his hands were tied.

Nandini gently bit his earlobe and opened Manik's hands.

She came infront of him and showed few dance moves swaying her hips and formed an 8 with her hips .

Manik tried to get up but Nandini pushed him back on the chair and again sat on his lap.

Manik held Nandini by her waist for support.

Nandini came dangerously close to Manik's lips and pecked his lips 2-3 times so as to tease him and before Manik could react, she backed off.

Nandini gently massaged Manik's shoulders and before she could realise, Manik captured her lips with his lips for a passionate never ending kiss .

Manik got up from the chair and without breaking the kiss carried Nandini to bed and gently placed her on the bed. He came over her and what followed was another passionate love making night where Nandini's efforts to talk with Manik about Soha were put on back burner and both the lovebirds got lost in each other.

Phewww...

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.

I don't know when I will be able to update the next chapter. So please don't ask me to update soon. And I want very very very long comments.

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Arunima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#208

Was missing it a lot,
love the update and
please dear, try to update next part soon, will be
waiting...

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Jackvijay

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Posted: 8 years ago

#209

nice update and finally anita come form india and twist be come in manan life what the hell soha doing nandini just superb reply and last form manan romance just amazing