|MaNanBir Joint FF| - DREAMERS (Chap 10 by Prats Pg 34) , 24 August - Page 18

Originally posted by: yashikalily

wohooo...
what an update...
like...full of...suprise...
well i didnt expect the confession this early...
awesome...one...
cabir...is such a sweetheart...
poor him...
hope he...will...soon...face d reality...
d bitter truth...
nandu...uff...
kaha fas gayee...
continue...soon...

Originally posted by: yashikalily

awww...
such a sweet confession...manan...r so sweet n adorable...
such a simple...yet beautiful...confession...
poor cabir...this is the worst...condition...
he could face...
beautiful update...

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Wow awesome update...
Finally Manan confessed...
Cabira got to know everything...
He was soo hurt..
Waiting for next...
Luved it..
Thnx for pm...
Update soon...
Sorry for being late but was really stuck up...

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

wow amazing update
well done loved it all
thanks for pm 😳

Originally posted by: nirvisha

OMG.. ...
Cabir ko pata chal gaya about MANAN.. .

Ab kya hoga.. .???????
Well wo to muje hi pata hoga.. .haha.. .

Bt really nice update swarna.. .
You are a very good writer.. .
I like manan scene.. .
And about taking a leap of one month is good idea. ..
It'll make the story more realistic. ..



Lots of Love
NISHU

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

awesome update
loved manan moments
omg cabir now knows about manan
and he was so hurt & feeling betrayed
waiting for next
cont soon

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Heyy amazing update.. superb.. shukar hai they finally confessed... n cabir ko bbi pta chal gya... ohhh.. now his reaction is going to be somthing to look out for

N how manan react to there moment is another reason for already increased excitment

Loved the update.. uve writen it perfectly.. another twist in the tale.. n the story gets even more intresting

Thank u for the pm

N yes all the best to the next writer

Keep smiling

Stay blessed

:)

Originally posted by: ROOP0605

amazing

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

Wohaa... That was so Amazing yr. I totally enjoyed it. itss damm fun yr ... Finally Manan Confessed. Wow... That Something very unexpected . I really really liked manan moment ... Ohhoo ab cabira ko bhi pata chal gya.. ab kyaa hoga.. Har bar ek nya twist. haha. Its so fun to read it ... Waiting for next Update ... All the best to next Writer.. m waiting .. Thanks for pm... Stay Blessed. Keep Smiling ..

Originally posted by: shweta6767

Nice update..