|MaNanBir Joint FF| - DREAMERS (Chap 10 by Prats Pg 34) , 24 August

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DREAMERS:phir ek kahani






Banner Credit Goes to : Fan-Fiction Creativity Clubby 'Taniroyal'


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Hello Guys,

This is again a Joint ff so enjoy it.

In this story each writer will try to mold the story according to his/her imagination without changing previous story parts ,
No one know what other writer think before her/his chapter, this is like a new update for other writers also like each readers because the thing we have in our hands is only his own chapter turn, we don't know with what twist and turn the other writer come in there chapter. so for that other writers have to careful before writing his chapter so that next writer can't shocked with his/her twist turns.

i hope u guys understand what i write above, if not then read the story u will automatically understand.

we know this is a crazy idea , but we r promising u guys are totally liking it.
so give a try.

Thank You.

i have updated Prologue in Next post, have a look and tell us did u like it or not.

( i will edit this section later)

INDEX

1. Prologue : Page 1------------->By : Mr_Singh

2. Chapter One : Page 1----------->By : Nirvisha

3. Banner Update :
Page 2 ------->By : Taaniroyal

4. Chapter Two : Page 5 ----------->By :
Tejamanaswini

5. Chapter Three : Page 10 -----------> By :
prathyushaeluri

6. Chapter Four : Page 13 --------> By : Kirti (wattpad writer)

7. Chapter Five : Page 15 --------->By : Softsakshi

8. Chapter Six : Page 19 ---------> By : Mr_Rahul

9. Chapter Seven : Page 21 ---------> By : Manancraze(Swarna)

10. Chapter Eight : Page 26 -----------> By : Nirvisha


11.Chapter Nine : Page 31 ---------> By : Kirti (
kirtimakhija11)

12. Chapter Ten : Page 34 ---------> By :
prathyushaeluri
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Phir ek Kahani, Sabki Jubani

Prologue

Time: 12:00 PM Noon (SUMMER)

"Ting Tong"

"Ting Tong"

Someone is ringing the doorbell but no one is opening the door.

"Ting tong"

"Ting Tong"

No response

At last that person gets tired and thinks something.

Person search something in jeans pocket and take out phone and go through contact list and stopped at contact no save as the name of "BROTHER (LOVE PUPPY)" and dials.

After 2 3 rings someone pickups the phone and says

Person on other side phone: SORRY SORRY SORRY, I m stuck traffic, I m on my way to airport so please don't shout.

1st Person: Puppy Bhai Relax and no need to go airport, I m standing in front of your house and your stupid BOYFRIEND is not opening the door from last half an hour.

Bhai: What? He is not my boyfriend till, so don't speak so loudly otherwise he will hear, and btw what r u doing at home? we already discuss na I will come to pick u.

1st person: relax bhai, your stupid boyfriend I mean future boyfriend is not answering my doorbell that mean he is still sleeping and he can't hear us so relax, and I want to give u surprise that's y I come I hour early flight but now I m standing outside at your house and no one is opening the door, and its noon of summer and if I will stay more that 5 min in this condition then I will surely die by these killing rays of sun.

Bhai: okay so if your drama is finish then no need of getting hyper, the door is already open, you have to do a simple work. PUSH THE DOOR and it will open.

1st Person: ohh, what?(shocked) I mean how can you leave your house open in this 21st century , what if someone come and steal things or raped your boyfriend (in sarcasm).

Bhai: agar drama khatam ho gya to aap ghar me pravesh loge, mai 5 min me ghar pahuchne wala hu.

1st person: JI PUPPY JI, aap aram se aaiye, ab mai hu na yaha pe to aapke boyfriend ki ijjat surakshit hai and start laughing.

Bhai: yeah yeah, now to I have to be careful from you, kya pata wo rapist tum hi nikle to (in sarcasm).

By hearing this 1st person stop laughing and said

1st person: Bye , I m going to rape your boyfriend, come soon and save him, by saying this cut the phone and push in back pocket of jeans.

Bhai: shit, I have to reach home soon before any drama start and take a U turn and left for home SWEET HOME.

On the other hand

1st person reach near gate and push it.

As puppy bhai said gate is already open so thinking something evil that person entered inside the house and put a bag in a corner and start searching all house for someone or something.

Suddenly notice there is one room from which loud music is coming so that person goes near that door and peep in but found nothing but a dirty bedroom with cloths everywhere.

Suddenly that person hears a cough sound from behind and turns, and in this process that person loss balance and fall on the person who is standing on behind.

By this sudden push both person fall on the ground with one above other looking in each other's eyes.

Suddenly a person come running from outside and saw a shocking scene in front of his eyes which dried blood in his vans.

The thing which he thought is completely opposite from what he is seeing now. But he is slightly feeling J.

So he coughs a little loudly to break their eye locks.

By this sound both come in their senses and get up feeling embarrassed.

Suddenly the 1st person said to change the environment

1st person: bhaiii in excitement and runs and give a hug.

That person also reciprocates because he is also happy by his baby sister's sudden decision of come back from New York and stay with her brother in Mumbai only.

Bhai: hey baby sister I miss you so much, and I m so happy you come back, from now onwards you have to stay with me in this apartment.

Sister: I m also happy bhai, and I also missed u so much that's y I come back, but I can't stay here.

Bhai: y can't you? Are you planning to leave me again in a sad tone?

Sister: because I notice this apartment is 2BHK, so 1 room is your and 2nd is your BOYFREIII looking towards the 3rd person in the hall and her bhai cover her mouth because the other person also standing there and listening there convo.

3rd Person: its okay cabir, now your sister is return so you both can take one one room each and I will go and search for new apartment for me.

Both brother sisters in union: NO and looks at each other with shocked face.

Cabir: no u r not going anywhere, we will think something but from now onwards we three will live together and that's final and that's final.

Sister: no u r not going anywhere because u r already living here and the person who come later is only going to stay in new apartment.

Cabir: no u r also not going anywhere and that's final no more argument in a angry tone, now keep silent and let me think something.

All three start thinking what should they do and suddenly all three together said.

All 3: BOYS in 1st ROOM, GIRL in 2nd ROOM.

And then all start look at each other face and start laughing.

Then suddenly cabirs sister said,

Sister: so now it is decided that we all are living less than one roof, so we have to know each other better na

Cabir: means? And the 3rd person also looking towards her confused

Sister: bhai I have given u right name LOVE PUPPY because u didn't use your mind and heart other than thinking about your LOVE.

Now this is a thing to get a shock of life by 3rd person who also hear what she said

3rd person: WHAT? CABIRRR? in an angry tone and looks towards cabir.

Now cabir got afraid by this angry tone of his love and start some excuse but his sister come with a topic divert point.

Sister: bhai, I think you can tell your love story later but can u first introduce us, now it is decided that we are going to stay in a single house and we are still strangers in a mocking tone

And by this sudden topic change demand of her both stop looking at each other and thinking that she is saying right

Cabir: yes baby sister, y not,

And he take his sister near 3rd persona and now both strangers are standing in front of each other and looking in each other's eyes and remembering previous event when they fall on ground.

Cabir notice there eye lock and didn't like it so he coughs loudly to break their eye lock.

Both come out from dreamland and again feel embarrass and then cabirs sister said.

Sister: hey, I M NANDINI MURTY, SISTER OF CABIR DHAWAN and forwarded her hand for hand shack.

3rd person: MANIK, MANIK MALHOTRA with attitude and a smirk on face. And take her hand in his for a formal hand shack, but nandini didn't like it at all by the way of he is behaving with her hand.

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Please leave your reviews after reading the prologue

Edited by Mr_Rahul - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I m shocked...!!!
Cabir is gay but it's a love triangle between nandu and cabir over Manik...🤣
I love this concept.
Pl cont soon.
And WELCOME BACK...🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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kabeer dhavan n nandini murthy bro n sis

love triangle with manik




wow
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Originally posted by: manancraze

I m shocked...!!!

Cabir is gay but it's a love triangle between nandu and cabir over Manik...🤣
I love this concept.
Pl cont soon.
And WELCOME BACK...🤗



Thank You😛😛
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Originally posted by: thamannamanan1

kabeer dhavan n nandini murthy bro n sis

love triangle with manik




wow

😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello everyone...
And rahul... prologe is superb and here i'm with the first chapter of the story...
it's a different than usual stuff...
so give us your precious comments after reading it...

Happy reading...



CHAPTER 1

After deciding about their rooms cabir and nandini were sitting on couches of living area and manik shifting his luggage in cabir's room with a super grumpy face.

Living room.

Nandini : cabir...yar I'm tired and also hungry. Can you please make something delicious for lunch till then I'll go and freshen up?

Cabir: sure sissy... let me make your favorite pasta.

Then he said in louder voice... manik will you be okay with pasta for lunch?

Manik from inside the room : yes it's fine.

Then cabir went in kitchen to prepare lunch and nandini went to freshen up in her room which was fully empty by now from manik's luggage.

In other room manik placed his cloths and other things then moved towards balcony. Then he opened his phone and dialed a number named Mukti Vardhan'.

Phone conversation

Mukti in sleepy voice: hello... kya hei manik? Let me sleep man.

Manik replied in super annoyed tone: Mukti ki bachchi... tu meri nind uda ke khud kese so sakti hei... I'm telling you that you won't be able to see the sun rising of next day as I'll soon going to kill you.

Mukti laughed listening his words and then said : yar manik... in do months me tu muje doso bar mar chukka hei. So there is nothing new for me... now tell me... what's the thing?

Manik : han kyuki in do months se mei ek gay ladke ke sath reh raha hoon and the worst thing is I'm acting like I'm interesting in him. Like how man? I'm manik Malhotra yar. Every damm girl just droll over me and here I'm living with a gay guy just because of you. And you know from today I'll going to share a room with him.

But to manik's dismay, mukti laughed out loud listening his words and then said after composing herself.

Mukti : hahaha... yar manik kahi gay ki acting karte karte sachem tera interest to change nahi ho gaya na?

Manik replied with super annoyance : seriously mukti? Wo actually cabir ki sister yaha rehne a gayi hei so she is living in another room and me and cabir in other one. And now please find some good flat for me. And ya when I say good that means not like last time. Do months se mei already tere is gay friend ke sath reh raha hoon. So isbar please I want a better house.

Mukti : cabir is not that bad yar...

Manik : I know... he is a good guy and that is why I'm living here and acting like him but this room sharing thing is really weird yar. So please... and moreover his sister... she is very beautiful yar and she also thinks that I'm interested in his gay brother.

He said last words dreamily and listening him mukti said teasingly : aye haye... manik Malhotra is praising a girl... that's something interesting...

Manik: stop it mukti...

Mukti: Achcha ok fine... mei dekhti hu kuchch tere liye... and wese bhi mei kal aungi nandini se milne... she is my old friend so ham kal milenge... till than bye...

Manik : ok bye...

(Mukti vardhan: A common friend of manik Malhotra and cabir dhawan. Manik wanted an apartment to live after he had left his home for some personal issues two months ago. So mukti offered him to live with his gay friend cabir but the twist is cabir wanted a gay boy only for his roommate and manik had to acting like one to live with cabir.)

Dining area.

Cabir arranged the food on dining table and then sat on his regular place and call manik and nandini. nandini came and sit beside cabir. Then manik came and saw her sitting on his regular place besides cabir so he said...

Manik with attitude: excuse me... This is my place.

Nandini looked at him and sarcastically replied: oh really... there is not your name written over the chair.

Manik again said in little anger filled tone: no there is no name written anywhere but I have been sitting here besides cabir from two months and so this is my place.

Listening his words cabir was looking at manik dreamily with silly smile on his face but his trance was broken by a loud voice of nandini...

Nandini loudly: no... I'll sit beside my brother cabir...

Manik in same loud tone: no ways... I'll sit here beside cabir...

Nandini more loudly: no... I'll...

Manik more loudly: no... I'll...

By now they were so close angrily looking at each other's eyes... their noses were slightly touching and their both eyes were red with anger and was going for each other's neck but before that cabir spatted loudly...

Cabir: shut up... both of you... why you are fighting like kids over the small sitting thing...

Then he look at both and said: I'll sit on middle and you both will sit either sides of mine. Then finally manik and nanidni parted after giving a super angry glare to each other and then take their respective sits. The lunch was silent and after having lunch nandini went to her room for some rest and cabir left for his work.

At Night.

Nandini was turning and tossing over her bed as she was not feeling sleepy due to jet-lag. Then finally giving up on sleep she stepped out of her room and found manik was watching TV while cabir had already slept in his room.

When manik saw her coming out of the room in her cute minion night dress, he just couldn't take his eyes off her. He was bowled over her cuteness while she was also looking at his charming handsome face on the little light of TV. He was looking like a Greek god in his shorts and west.


Their trance was broken by the sound of TV and Manik finally said with a little smirk on his face to avoid the awkwardness

Manik: you awake at this hour of night?

Nandini made a face and then said sitting on opposite couch: So are you... btw I was having jet-lag so problems in sleep timing. But what about you?

Manik: I'm a late night man. So watching TV shows to kill the time.

He said last words watching towards TV but his eyes were wanted to see the cute creature sitting opposite to him than any TV shows.

There was complete silence for few minutes as they both were thinking something and then suddenly both said together...

Mnaik and Nandini: Sorry...

They both then look at each other and smiled while manik continue further...

Manik: Sorry for the fight over the lunch... I was just habitant to keep my things to myself only and then you said that...

Nandini smiled and replied: It's totally alright... but I was with cabir after so long and that is why I was seeking his full attention towards me so...

But manik said cutting her in between: oh ya... I totally get it... and I seriously don't have any problem with it... he is totally yours for the days you wants...

Manik in mind: thank god. Now for few days cabir will be busy with nandini so I also don't need to act as if I'm interested in him.

Nandini: so if now everything is sorted and there is no differences between us. Can I have remote please? Actually this is time for my favorite show.

Manik handing her remote saying: ohh ya sure...

Then nandini was watching her favorite show on TV while manik was just watching her expression which were continuously changing with the scene being played on TV.

Manik's POV

God. She is so cute. She is looking like a cutest thing of the world in her short minion pj's. And then her pout is just adding the chary on top of the cake. Her lips just molded like rose petals. I feel like kissing them here only...

One second...

What am I thinking? Ohh god... this girl will drive me crazy if I stay here for another second also... yes I need to sleep.

He then stood up from couch and said: Annn... I'm feeling sleepy... Good night...

Nandini also smiled at him and said in her sugary voice: Good Night...

And he went to sleep while after sometime nandini also slept in her room...

To Be Continue...

Lots of Love

NISHU

Edited by nirvisha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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seriously nirvi,
you really changed my plot, now i have to think something else
but this is really good chapter,
lets see what next writer have in her store

awesome work partner
you rocked it

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow awesome update...
Haha bira is gay and Manik acting like one oh god..
Mananbir under same roof...
Waiting for next..
Luved it...
Thnx for pm..
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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the story is getting interesting
muktis entry


manik s acting as a gay he s falling for nandini




whos gonna write next part ??/

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