|MaNanBir Joint FF| - DREAMERS (Chap 10 by Prats Pg 34) , 24 August

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#151

wow amazing update
well done loved it all
thanks for pm 😳

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nirvisha

@nirvisha

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#152

OMG.. ...
Cabir ko pata chal gaya about MANAN.. .

Ab kya hoga.. .???????
Well wo to muje hi pata hoga.. .haha.. .

Bt really nice update swarna.. .
You are a very good writer.. .
I like manan scene.. .
And about taking a leap of one month is good idea. ..
It'll make the story more realistic. ..

Lots of Love
NISHU

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rockstarlover

@rockstarlover

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#153

awesome update
loved manan moments
omg cabir now knows about manan
and he was so hurt & feeling betrayed
waiting for next
cont soon

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Heyy amazing update.. superb.. shukar hai they finally confessed... n cabir ko bbi pta chal gya... ohhh.. now his reaction is going to be somthing to look out for

N how manan react to there moment is another reason for already increased excitment

Loved the update.. uve writen it perfectly.. another twist in the tale.. n the story gets even more intresting

Thank u for the pm

N yes all the best to the next writer

Keep smiling

Stay blessed

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: Mr_Rahul
Thank You ji
Mujhe to Saram hi aane lagi etni badayiya sun k
Dil Baag Baag kr diya ji

yeah thats y it is intresting
i request
ask your other friends to give this is a Chance😆😆

Will definatly do that.. dont wry

😃

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Wohaa... That was so Amazing yr. I totally enjoyed it. itss damm fun yr ... Finally Manan Confessed. Wow... That Something very unexpected . I really really liked manan moment ... Ohhoo ab cabira ko bhi pata chal gya.. ab kyaa hoga.. Har bar ek nya twist. haha. Its so fun to read it ... Waiting for next Update ... All the best to next Writer.. m waiting .. Thanks for pm... Stay Blessed. Keep Smiling ..

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_MonsteR_Stuff_

@_MonsteR_Stuff_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Kya Baat hai

CHHOTA BOMB BADA DHAMAKA

Arre Donn Sahab bhot badiya update diya hai

really loved it

Awesome amazing superb fantastic update

aur bhi bolne ki jarurat hai kya

ya ye bhot h :P

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Swarna

@manancraze

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: Mr_Rahul
Kya Baat hai

CHHOTA BOMB BADA DHAMAKA

Arre Donn Sahab bhot badiya update diya hai

really loved it

Awesome amazing superb fantastic update

aur bhi bolne ki jarurat hai kya

ya ye bhot h :P

Ha...bohat hain bolne ko...😡...mujhe ek paragraph chahiye...😉...kanjoosss...🥱

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#159

superb update swarna

and rahul thum na chup raho

jab dekho kuch toh kuch bol do gi

aur nirvi tu kya bol rahi hey

only u would know haa

so give update fast

i dint expect this change in story yaar

and nirvi bhool na mat mey hu thum aur teju ki baad

and i will also turn it again

superb one dear

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: Mr_Rahul

Prats Prats Prtas
Tum to Kuch jyda hi Khush lag Rahi h
Chapter jyada hi pasand aa gaya kya
mujhe pata hai
mai hu hi etna acha writer
aur ye vese bhi 2 dimago ka kaam hai
tera brain bhi mere pass hi hai na tabhi to tujhe idea nhi aate dhang k

lol
btw thank you
bura mat maan
aaj friend ship day
😃