|MaNanBir Joint FF| - DREAMERS (Chap 10 by Prats Pg 34) , 24 August - Page 17

wow

Originally posted by: prathyushaeluri

superb update swarna

and rahul thum na chup raho

jab dekho kuch toh kuch bol do gi

aur nirvi tu kya bol rahi hey

only u would know haa

so give update fast

i dint expect this change in story yaar

and nirvi bhool na mat mey hu thum aur teju ki baad

and i will also turn it again

superb one dear

Prats tum to hamre piche hath per dho k pad gayi hai ree
kachhu galti ho gayi hai kya humse hai
tanik batai diyo, hum sudhar lenge
aap to gyaan ki devi hai hai', mafi kr dena choti moti galti😆😆

Originally posted by: prathyushaeluri

haa zyada pasand aya tha

because u made it change completely and now what are u going to do again

keep my brain safe aur mujhe parcel karo abhi

i need it

and self appreciation band karo

ha ha kyu nhi
tera dimag hai hi etna bekar usse jyada sefty ki jarurat nhi hai pahale se hi bigda hua hai to parcel krti rahti hai edhar udhar mujheek sach ye bhi bata de ye sachi me tera hi hai ya kisi se chhina hai jo tere pass rukta hi nhi
jb dekho mangti rahti hia

Rahul bhai sorry for commenting late.

Welcome manacraze.

wohooo...
what an update...
like...full of...suprise...
well i didnt expect the confession this early...
awesome...one...
cabir...is such a sweetheart...
poor him...
hope he...will...soon...face d reality...
d bitter truth...
nandu...uff...
kaha fas gayee...
continue...soon...

awww...
such a sweet confession...manan...r so sweet n adorable...
such a simple...yet beautiful...confession...
poor cabir...this is the worst...condition...
he could face...
beautiful update...

Wow awesome update...
Finally Manan confessed...
Cabira got to know everything...
He was soo hurt..
Waiting for next...
Luved it..
Thnx for pm...
Update soon...
Sorry for being late but was really stuck up...

Originally posted by: Tejamanaswini

Rahul bhai sorry for commenting late.

By the way u were amazing.

bhai phod diya na bomb.

Arey bagwan what is this.

Aab kya hoga?

but I really loved the update.

That was awesome.

Happy day😊

hey Teju

Chill doll

i have done my work

Thank You for liking it

now your turn and i want u to explode a bigger bomb then me😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Tejamanaswini

Welcome manacraze.

Its nice to have another writer contributing efforts for our story.

Loved the update.

Curiosity is killing me.

But an amazing write up.

Hope u will have wonderful time with us.

Happy day

😊

Regards,

Teja Manaswini

Thanks for this warm welcome...🤗