|MaNanBir Joint FF| - DREAMERS (Chap 10 by Prats Pg 34) , 24 August

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nirvisha

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: thamannamanan1
rahul
dude i am reading this story from starting n i love it

you all r in competition to make each update a special one

coming back to nishuuu

yaar story kaha tha yeh tum kaha leke gayi

kyaa effect hai yaar
cant believe ki story yeh turn bhi legi ...

manik s parents entry ...then manik s words to kabeer n nandini ...

next who s gonna write ???????????

pls dont give me a heart attack 😉

😃
Ab ye huyi na badiya wali baat.. .Haha.. .
Thank you so much.. . 😊

NISHU

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nirvisha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: ROOP0605
awsm update

Thank you roop.. . 😊

NISHU

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Thanks for he pm
N omg his was so unexpected
Caus it seemed like manik really loved her
Felt so bad for the siblings
Specially Caus in the earlier updates it was shown that manik in his thoughts really used to care for the siblings

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kashish makhija

@kirtimakhija11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Nirvi ... uh just chnged the equation babe... i just loved the chapter coz this times the turned uh gave to story is,uncommendable baby
.. i thorughly enjoyed,,, i,alwys wanted to write manik as a dark,person... but this tym i,regret my decision.,, but koi nahi... i loved the part.,, and yeah rahul make it more dark in,your part ... waiting for teju to write next.,,,, 😊

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devilkhushi

@devilkhushi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Awesome update loved it

So manik played with nandini's is it so or truth is something less that he did said just to stop the fight between siblings

If manik did just to play around then he is highly mistaken because he is actual in love with nandini n now after this he won't be able to get his ladylove back

Nandini will hate him n that manik malohtra definitely deserve n regarding Cabir let get his true love in r

Let manik get pain n hurt by staying away from nandini let nandini leave everything n go do well in life become rich then let nandini ignore n hate n jealous manik to the core when he actually will be in hopelessly in love with nandini

Continue soon

Rahul can it will be possible for u to pm me always whenever u guys get a update in this story

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Omggg.. Yeh Kya kr diya .. Me Abhi bhi shock me hu sachiii..

Kya mind blowing twist hai Yaar... I'm like shocked .. Ni.. Ni.. Super shocked more than shocked..

But Sachi it was just too good.. Poori k poori story hi palat k rakh Di...

Next writer ki toh band bjne wali hai..heheh...

This story now after ur update has become my favt sachiii...

Thank u for this update

N sabke biggg wala thank u for actually starting this concept

This twist was epic .. Girl I've become a fan❤️

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Tejamanaswini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

Di I want to kill you

no I want to kill myself.

Kya bana diya storyline.

Oh gosh.

Anyways it was awesome update.

I so loved manan moments.

I loved everything about this.

Sorry for late comment.

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_MonsteR_Stuff_

@_MonsteR_Stuff_

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: nirvisha

Aye haye.. .khush kar ditta tune to.. . 😛
Bahot hi achcha comment diya rahul.. .
Thank you so much for appreciation...

Nd ya

GREAT MINDS THINK ALIKE
EVIL MIND THINK ALIKE

😉 😆

Pata nai yar ajkal mera mind evil hi chal raha hei.. .hehe.. .

NISHU

Evil Mind is good for make story more interesting because we already have many writer who is die heart fan of manan aur wo unko ek karne ki puri puri kosis krenge ab humhe bus esha kuch krna hi ki wo apne mission me success na hp paye😆😆

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_MonsteR_Stuff_

@_MonsteR_Stuff_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: thamannamanan1
rahul
dude i am reading this story from starting n i love it

you all r in competition to make each update a special one

coming back to nishuuu

yaar story kaha tha yeh tum kaha leke gayi

kyaa effect hai yaar
cant believe ki story yeh turn bhi legi ...

manik s parents entry ...then manik s words to kabeer n nandini ...

next who s gonna write ???????????

pls dont give me a heart attack 😉

thank You dear😃😃

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_MonsteR_Stuff_

@_MonsteR_Stuff_

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: kirtimakhija11
Nirvi ... uh just chnged the equation babe... i just loved the chapter coz this times the turned uh gave to story is,uncommendable baby
.. i thorughly enjoyed,,, i,alwys wanted to write manik as a dark,person... but this tym i,regret my decision.,, but koi nahi... i loved the part.,, and yeah rahul make it more dark in,your part ... waiting for teju to write next.,,,, 😊

Sure Kirti😉

Neki aur puch puch😛😛

Me ache kaam k liye kabhi mana nhi krta 😆😆